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Tarot by DeadManSeven
Rated: 3rd-5th Years [Reviews - 12]

Summary:

A reading that consists of only cards from the Major Arcana indicates the destiny of the querant lies outside their own control - possibly within the hands of Fate itself.

Nineteen years pass between the final chapter and the epilogue. Here are two days inside those nineteen years.



Categories: Post-Hogwarts Genre: Warnings: Sexual Situations, Strong Profanity

Word count: 15136 Chapters: 7 Completed: Yes
Published:
05/24/09 Updated: 10/11/09


Reviewer: LuNaLoVeGoOdLoVer Signed
Date: 08/02/09 Title: Chapter 1: (III) - 'The Empress'

the first chapter was really good! i agree with what everyone else said- the connection between the two, the detail,..... i don't want to bore everone, so i won't write it out again, but i was simply.......
...amazing.

Author's Response: I'm quite fine with boring everyone by going over what's already been said, but perhaps that's just my ego talking. Thanks for reading, and thanks for leaving a review.

 

Bludgers and Meteors by lucilla_pauie
Rated: 3rd-5th Years [Reviews - 14]

Summary: No candlelit dinner, no getting down on one knee.

This was how it happened instead. During Sunday brunch.

Surrounded by Weasleys and babies, instead of violin notes and posies.

With sniping and bellowing, along with the embraces and kissing.

But it was no less perfect.

Categories: Harry/Ginny Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 3863 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
06/11/09 Updated: 06/11/09


Reviewer: LuNaLoVeGoOdLoVer Signed
Date: 06/11/09 Title: Chapter 1: Bludgers and Meteors

very nice, although i was a little confuswed at the beginning.

 

But I'm A Gryffindor by KASK
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 14]

Summary: James always put being a Gryffindor above all else...

Categories: James/Lily Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 5923 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
06/20/09 Updated: 06/25/09


Reviewer: LuNaLoVeGoOdLoVer Signed
Date: 06/26/09 Title: Chapter 1: But I'm A Gryffindor

Uhhhh, it was really good!!! James was perfect!!! I was getting annoyed with all of the cliches in L/J fics, but this one made me realize why I love them so much!! It was great! Amazing! I loved it!!!!! LOVED IT!!!

bujt therer are a few things that are a llittle unclear to me....
Like which years it always was...I get that they were differern, but if I remember correctly, a part of 7th grade came at the beginning - and then it jumps back???

And the note.
The note.

Well, obviously it's from Lily (IS IT??? *hopes*).
But there isn't more?
Althoughit's kind of neet leaving it open for readers to imagine their own endings....

-Andrea

 

Finding Her Voice by Belledeg
Rated: 6th-7th Years [Reviews - 205]

Summary: Harper Riley is one of the most gifted young witches of her generation. However, since the traumatic events of the Battle of Hogwarts, she has not spoken a single word. Her Muggle parents were killed, along with her two wizarding brothers, and she is on the run from her squib guardian, a sinful and harsh man with a strong hatred of magic.

Harry Potter is recently married and settled, however, his life seems to take on another dramatic turn when he and Ginny find Harper. Her refusal to speak makes things a lot harder for them to discover how to help her. Luckily, Harry knows someone who owes him a favour. Someone who he and Ginny may not like, but they trust. Someone whose profession is to help those who suffer from the Battle of Hogwarts, no matter their story…

If anyone can get her talking again, it’s Blaise.

"I don't want to forget that night...but I don't want to remember it either."

A Blaise Zabini/Original Character romance

This story has the characters: Blaise Zabini, Harper Riley, Jimmy Peakes, Harry Potter, Ginny Potter, Ron Weasley, Hermione Weasley, Isabella Zabini, Draco Malfoy, Dennis Creevey, Leonard Wilkes, Theodore Nott and Minerva McGonagall plus many more.

Categories: Post-Hogwarts Genre: Warnings: Sexual Situations, Strong Profanity, Violence

Word count: 87463 Chapters: 21 Completed: Yes
Published:
06/21/09 Updated: 01/16/10


Reviewer: LuNaLoVeGoOdLoVer Signed
Date: 09/12/09 Title: Chapter 1: Harper Riley

U, i just checked this out, and now I can't decide which one to read. MTT or FHV... arg, life is so hard.... great story so far!

Author's Response: It doesn't really matter which one you read first, there are no spoilers of one in the other. Though MTT is complete. :D

 

Summary: The night Sirius leaves for good, nothing is thrown, nothing breaks, and the front door doesn’t slam shut like you’ve always imagined it would. Regulus remembers the night his brother ran away.

Categories: General Fics Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 1078 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
06/22/09 Updated: 06/22/09


Reviewer: LuNaLoVeGoOdLoVer Signed
Date: 06/22/09 Title: Chapter 1: Leaving

uh, that was beautifully written!!!!!!!!

Author's Response: Thanks!

 

Dead and Gone by Karaley Dargen, padfootsgirl1981
Rated: 3rd-5th Years [Reviews - 10]

Summary: After the First War, wizards and witches everywhere were celebrating. But there were still losses, and deaths to be mourned; and in the end, there were more similarities between the good and the bad guys than one might like to think.

Molly Weasley had two brothers, who fought Voldemort and paid with their lives. She always thought that all what happened was horrible, but she never thought it would happen to her own family. And now, people everywhere are celebrating, and hardly anyone thinks of all the heroes that died anymore.

Avery was a Death Eater. He watched many people suffer and die, and never cared - until his friends die for Voldemort’s cause. And now, people everywhere are celebrating, and no one thinks of all the brave and good men the other side had lost.

This is padfootsgirl1981 of Hufflepuff and Karaley Dargen of Gryffindor submitting for the Interhouse Co-Op Challenge in the Great Hall.

Categories: General Fics Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 1894 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
06/28/09 Updated: 06/28/09


Reviewer: LuNaLoVeGoOdLoVer Signed
Date: 11/26/09 Title: Chapter 1: Dead and Gone

`hey I was wondering if I could make a banner for this story for the Beta Boards November challenge over in Deans Corner? I wanted to ask, so... yeah, if I am not allowed to, just give me a holler :D

Author's Response: Hey Andi, ooooh awesome, yeah, just go ahead :D have fun, I'm looking forward to seeing what you draw!

 
Reviewer: LuNaLoVeGoOdLoVer Signed
Date: 09/23/09 Title: Chapter 1: Dead and Gone

uh, I loved it! It was really really good (:

 

Snowflakes by The_Dream_Team
Rated: 3rd-5th Years [Reviews - 251]

Summary: And there he was. The one boy she could not stand. His messy, jet black hair was ruffled and untidy and his glasses were sitting crooked on his nose. James Potter was here. With Lily. And all her Muggle friends. At a Muggle ski resort. Could things possibly be worse? Oh yeah, Sirius Black is there, too.

Categories: James/Lily Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 47505 Chapters: 21 Completed: No
Published:
07/08/09 Updated: 04/12/12


Reviewer: LuNaLoVeGoOdLoVer Signed
Date: 12/21/09 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7: The Man in the Mask

Uh, you updated! Yay! Right on time, too. I am going skiing in a few days so this was very fitting :D

hah. I was surprised at first, that Lily agreed with James, but they had it planned, ... lol.

I have a few nit picks, though.

The other, was the cloak

The man who was steadily getting closer to the trio, was definitely a Death Eater.

In these sentences the comma shouldn't=t be there.

Great job! I love this fic, and this story. I hope you update soon!

Author's Response: im glad your liking the story! yes... those tricky commas always get me... but have fun skiing and maybe you could play the "when to jump off the chairlift game" when your there! ;) thanks for the review and ill try to update as soon as i can!

 
Reviewer: LuNaLoVeGoOdLoVer Signed
Date: 08/01/09 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3: The Buffet

Uh, this was soooo good! and funny :p
i liked it and am waiting for the next chappie!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Author's Response: Thanks 4 another fabulous review! I will try 2 update soon!

 
Reviewer: LuNaLoVeGoOdLoVer Signed
Date: 07/11/09 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 The Hot Tub

haha hilarius!! very nice (:
i think once you wrote 'Lily' with a small l.
And I don't thinkSirius was james' sidekick- they were more like a 'double-act', always together and equal....
I loved it and can't waitfor the next chapter!

Author's Response: thanks for reviewing! oopsie! i think there is something wrong with my shift key... but thanks for catching that! and ur rite about the double act thing. thanks again and i will try to update soon!

 
Reviewer: LuNaLoVeGoOdLoVer Signed
Date: 11/13/09 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6: The Warming Hut

UH, yay! And wow! And CLIFFIE! And update!
*takes calming breaths* Okay, I love this chappie (duh) but here:
She found herself staring into his hazel eyes and she could pull her gaze away.
Shouldn't it be she COULDN'T pull her gaze away? Or REALIZED she could NOT... well, something like that?

Author's Response: Thank you for the lovely review! oopsies... i make a few errors... but thanks for reading and im glad you enjoyed this chapter! it kept getting rejected so it took a while to get up. hopefully the next one wont take as long! =D

 
Reviewer: LuNaLoVeGoOdLoVer Signed
Date: 07/11/09 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1:The Christophe Brazier Lodge

Oh, i had another question. Are you planning on having this story follow them back to Hogwarts or is it just during their vacation?

Author's Response: hmmm... thats a good question! i think its just gonna be the vacation, but maybe ill change it!

 
Reviewer: LuNaLoVeGoOdLoVer Signed
Date: 12/30/09 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8: The Diner

Uh! You updated! Hurrah! Overall I enjoyed and liked this chapter a lot. I love how you have Sirius be oblivious to the mistakes he makes, and the humour you tie into the James/Lily relationship.

Here is a nitpick, though.
"James, Sirius, and Lily were ...
There is no speech here, so delete the "

And how does James signal the owl to go to their room?

Again, I thought this was amazing. I hope you update soon! And maybe we can see some more skiing? Although how that fits in the story I don't know...

Author's Response: thanks for reviewing! yours are always so helpful! i think james just pointed to where the owl should go and theyre smart birds (and magical!) so i think it would know where to go. somethng like that! well, im glad you liked the chapter and hopefully ill be able to update soon! im not sure when the skiing will pick up again... i think the chapter after next. thanks again!

 
Reviewer: LuNaLoVeGoOdLoVer Signed
Date: 07/08/09 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1:The Christophe Brazier Lodge

HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA!!! I love it!!!!
(and not to be annoying, but...:
'her usual bright blue eyes'
this might (probably) is just because I'm dumb, but her USUAL blue eyes? Like in they're a usual color??? Or they are usually blue??? (that doesn't make scense)
Also,
'...at Lily horrified expression...'
shouldn't it be Liliy'S horrified expression???
And
'...her two least favorite people...'
Of course they are her least favourite people- except for Voldemort and the Death Eaters, I hope!! :P
Anyway, good job! And keep it up! Can't wait for the next chapter!!!!!
~Andrea

Author's Response: Thaks for the review!!! and no you are not dumb cuz u totally caught that and i think ur rite... ill go and edit it! im gonna try to update soon! thanks again!!! :D

 
Reviewer: LuNaLoVeGoOdLoVer Signed
Date: 09/06/09 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4:The Ski Lift

uh, i loved this chapter! actually, i love this story. a lot. i somehow didn't catch this chapter had been possted, so i wanted to read the new one and the i was like 'wait a minuete...' lol. maybe it got posted while i didn't have a compy... well, whatever.
so, yeah, great chapter! and i love the when would u jump off game, it sounds fun! i am so goin to play it wh==next time i go skiing.

Author's Response: Thank you very much 4 the lovely review!! :D im glad you like the story so far! ya me and my cousin play that game when we go skiing and it really passes the time! thanks again for the review!!!

 
Reviewer: LuNaLoVeGoOdLoVer Signed
Date: 09/06/09 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5: The Hot Chocolate Social

uh, niiice!
the giant squid, i like it :P
and the kiss... uh la la...lol
uh, and since when is 8 Am early????
I am waiting for the next chapter, so update soon!

Author's Response: haha 2 reviews in a row! im overwhelmed! thanks for reviewing! and ya 8 am is actually not so early... just 4 me! i will try 2 update soon! thanks again for the review! =-)

 

I Never... by Russia Snow
Rated: 3rd-5th Years [Reviews - 14]

Summary: It was only a kiss, how did it end up like this? It was only a kiss… It was only a kiss…

Draco Malfoy has been released from Azkaban. He is free to start a fresh. The only problem is, he doesn’t want a new start, he still wants one thing from his old life. He wants that one thing more than anything in the entire world. But she does not want him back. And he cannot accept that.

Nominated for 2009 QSQ's in " Best Dark/Angst"

Songfic: Mr Brightside by The Killers

Dedicated to an amazing beta, and awesome friend, Gabby. BeautyInTheBreakdown. Thankyou so much :)

Categories: Dark/Angsty Fics Genre: Warnings: Alternate Universe

Word count: 2496 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
07/08/09 Updated: 07/09/09


Reviewer: LuNaLoVeGoOdLoVer Signed
Date: 07/10/09 Title: Chapter 1: I Never...

wow, Russia! That was AMAING wrting!!! really. And poor Draco ): Even though I like Harry/Ginny... Good work with the song, two! Even if they completely acted like muggles... which isn't nessesarily bad... just unlikely... but it works perfectly! Bah, they smoke ):
itwas really, really, really good, hun! Defianetly deserved to be accepted :P
You portrayed draco's feelings really well.
hope my review made sense!
~Andrea

Author's Response: Yes Andrea your reveiw did make sense... :-p Yeah, that was the one part of ther song that didnt fit so well :-( but I am glad you think it worked :-D Thankyou for your reveiw! Russia xxxxx

 

Frames of Existence by cassie123
Rated: 3rd-5th Years [Reviews - 22]

Summary:

‘Go on,’ she says, ‘paint me. You want to do things right.’

They meet in an art class, brought together by the talent and passion they share.

A Lily/Scorpius one shot.


Categories: Other Pairing Genre: Warnings: Sexual Situations

Word count: 1756 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
07/10/09 Updated: 07/14/09


Reviewer: LuNaLoVeGoOdLoVer Signed
Date: 07/15/09 Title: Chapter 1: Frames of Existence

uh, i loved it! it's defianetly is unique and has something special about it (: magical :P it's really really nice.

Author's Response: Thank you very much!

 
Reviewer: LuNaLoVeGoOdLoVer Signed
Date: 07/15/09 Title: Chapter 1: Frames of Existence

uh, i loved it! it's defianetly is unique and has something special about it (: magical :P it's really really nice.

 

Renaissance by Wolf By Night
Rated: 6th-7th Years [Reviews - 16]

Summary: Harry never expected to find out that Remus had a twin sister; nor did he expect the appearance of his mother's best friend. And he certainly didn't expect the history they, and Sirius, all shared. But perhaps these four links to Harry's parents can help him in his ever-lasting war with Voldemort - and in the process, give him the family he never had. AU OotP, with some canon left intact. NOT a Mary Sue fic.

Categories: General Fics Genre: Warnings: Alternate Universe, Book 7 Disregarded, Mild Profanity, Violence

Word count: 19335 Chapters: 4 Completed: No
Published:
07/11/09 Updated: 07/22/09


Reviewer: LuNaLoVeGoOdLoVer Signed
Date: 07/24/09 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue: Fallacious Continuance

lol haha, sorry and thanks :P
and as i don't have an account over at the other site, i'll rebiew the chapters as sooen as they get posted here, i promise!!!!!!!!!!!!!

Author's Response: lol you don't actually need an account. but whatever you're more comfortable with is awesome with me! ^_^

 
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