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My Troubled Tyrant by Belledeg
Rated: Professors [Reviews - 517]

Summary: Past Featured StoryKeedie Dante has experienced many amazing things during her time at Hogwarts, including the hushed up drama that was the Chamber of Secrets. However, with two overachieving friends and a headmaster who does not even know she exists, Keedie feels that perhaps her seventh year will not be too spectacular. However, Dumbeldore sees her potential as a writer and enrols her in a simple writing course. Here, she meets the mysterious and terrifying Tom Riddle and they instantly get under one another's skin. She is drawn to his dark determination towards some unknown goal and he is fascinated by her, in every way. However, Tom's friends do not approve of Keedie and her unconventional ways and Keedie has many people trying to keep her away from the dark young man as well. Something inside tells Keedie that she can make him better, but even he assures her that this is an impossible task. But she's not one to give up easily...

"He is a dark one, Keedie. Try not to let him consume you entirely."

This story has the characters Albus Dumbledore, Armando Dippet, Moaning Myrtle, Rubeus Hagrid, Aaron Dante, Harry Potter, Ebony Abbott, Minerva McGonagall, Melena Creevey, Ollivander, Gregor Holmwood, Horace Slughorn and, of course, Tom Riddle and Keedie Dante...enjoy!

Winner of "Best Romance Between Other Characters" and nominated for "Best Female OC" in the 2009 Quicksilver Quill Awards

Categories: Other Pairing Genre: Warnings: Character Death, Sexual Situations, Strong Profanity, Violence

Word count: 152689 Chapters: 28 Completed: Yes
Published:
03/08/09 Updated: 09/06/09


Reviewer: LuNaLoVeGoOdLoVer Signed
Date: 09/12/09 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue--Big Bright Beautiful World

Omg, i just started this fic (duh, I'm on th first chapter :P). I didn't fore now, because it didn't look like my type of thing, you know? I mean, it looked good but not like something I would read, but then I was looking at your 'finding her voice' fic, which looks amazing, and i wanted to read it, and I went to your profile, and hi! I'm also a Griff, btw, so anyway, your Andromeda fic looks amazing, you should continue it!! So I felt like something... different so I just started this and OMG I'm hoooooked. It's great! I'll go read thge next chappie....
And what's her name/ Meralda? Well, the creevey girl... I was jjust wondering if she was the creevey brothers mother, which doesn't make sence, as they're muggle-born...........
well, bb!
/babbles

Author's Response: Hello fellow Gryff! *waves* Melena's distantly related to the Creevey brothers. I figured they had to have a witch or wizard in their family somewhere, if they both had magical powers. Please keep reviewing and telling me what you think of the story! :D

 
Reviewer: LuNaLoVeGoOdLoVer Signed
Date: 09/12/09 Title: Chapter 2: Walk Away

uh, he was late... i thought ge was alwasys a top student... i likd it a lot!!!! haha he looks like edward in a way..... :P

Author's Response: Edward? And he think he's trying to spite Dumbledore. Keep up the R&R ing :)

 
Reviewer: LuNaLoVeGoOdLoVer Signed
Date: 09/12/09 Title: Chapter 3: Warrior

LOVED IT! how vlody/ tome ridle (what should i call him???) thinks he is invincalbe... how Dumbly thinks it's great how keedie reacted-uh, adn Keedie!!! YAY!!!

Author's Response: Hahaha! Yep, Keedie's gonna give him a good kick up the arse. :o)

 
Reviewer: LuNaLoVeGoOdLoVer Signed
Date: 09/12/09 Title: Chapter 4: Shake It

haha. i loved it! I like how he doesn't know what to think of her-and I just realized-the DIARY, the WRITING. it accually fits! NICE.
And Sluggy's characterization was really good.
As always, I liked Keedie a lot. How do you pronounce her name?
And in my earlier review I ment Edward Cullen from Twikight... I mean, skin like marbel....
Btw, I saw your drabble for the Gryff Challenge-it was great!

Author's Response: Aw, thank you. You pronounce her name like Kee dee dan tay. And I always liked Slughorn. Keep r&r ing. :D

 
Reviewer: LuNaLoVeGoOdLoVer Signed
Date: 09/12/09 Title: Chapter 5: Growing On Me

uh, nicely done how he always calls her 'the girl' and not Keedie
Hm, I noticed that in this chapter you said he was much taller than her, but when they first met, you said he as only a little bit taller.
I admit, I did not quite understand the voice part....
I like how you switch the POV, it's very nicely done.
I liked this chapter!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! (hehe, don't exclimation marks loo funny if there are a kot of them? :P)

Author's Response: lol! The voice becomes clear in time. As for height issues, I dunno, maybe he suddenly sprouted. ;-D

 
Reviewer: LuNaLoVeGoOdLoVer Signed
Date: 09/12/09 Title: Chapter 6: Outside Looking In

awwww, how cute. They are so good for each other..... *sniffle*
And I have decided this story is very similar to twilight... but different, as Tom really is evil... or should I say Voldemort???
I like the beginnings of the chapters, the lyrics and stuff fit so well.

Author's Response: I'm glad you're reading the lyrics and not skipping. They are quite important. I think I'll have to read Twilight, as people often mention it in reviews :D

 

Summary: Past Featured StoryWhen Lavender Brown returns to Hogwarts for her seventh year, she knows things will be hard. Professor Dumbledore’s death has scared everybody, and with her Muggle-born mother in hiding, she makes a promise to her father to stay safe.

But to stay safe she must ignore her instincts and turn her back on her friends.

This is a Lavender Brown/Blaise Zabini story, but also concerns that last year at Hogwarts when the Trio were a'hunting Horcruxes.

Thank you to Laura (bookofsecrets) and Terri (mudbloodproud) for beta'ing the first chapter, Alyssa (Harry4lif) for the second and Emma (Amortentia x) for taking over the reins. And Natalie for the last chapter.

Disclaimer: I am not JK Rowling. I doubt that surprises anyone.

This story won the 2010 QSQ for Best Chaptered Non-Canon Romance. Thank you to everyone who nominated, appreciated and judged.

ATTENTION: Because of prissy glitch on the archive, stories with a rating about 3rd-5th cannot be read. I have lowered the rating to enable access, but the content remains the same. This is a PROFESSORS rated fic. Read at your own discretion - the sexual situations warning is there for a reason.

Categories: General Fics Genre: Warnings: Mild Profanity, Sexual Situations, Strong Profanity, Substance Abuse, Violence

Word count: 47427 Chapters: 9 Completed: Yes
Published:
03/23/09 Updated: 05/25/10


Reviewer: LuNaLoVeGoOdLoVer Signed
Date: 09/20/09 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 - Between the Woods and the Frozen Lake

OMG, I Loooooooooved it. I liked Blaise, and I liked you portraying lavender's friendships... update!

Author's Response: Thank you, Andrea. I'm glad you're enjoying this. There's more to come. ~Carole~

 
Reviewer: LuNaLoVeGoOdLoVer Signed
Date: 09/20/09 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 - Between the Woods and the Frozen Lake

OMG, I Loooooooooved it. I liked Blaise, and I liked you portraying lavender's friendships... update!

Author's Response: Thank you for the review. There's another chapter coming soon ...

 
Reviewer: LuNaLoVeGoOdLoVer Signed
Date: 11/07/09 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6 - Restrictions

AAAAAAAAAh. I am scared and off to read the next chapter-although I SHOULD be doing NaNo. And do we know who Lavender marries? In canon? And because your fics are so inspiring I checked the lexicon and it doesn't say. huh. Do you think in canon she WOULD marry Seamus?

Author's Response: We don't know who Lavender marries ... we actually don't even know if she survives the battle. There's a line about her 'faintly stirring' ... but that's it. Hmmm, Lavender/Seamus - possibly in canon ... but ... This is my version - LOL. Thanks for reviewing. ~Carole~

 
Reviewer: LuNaLoVeGoOdLoVer Signed
Date: 11/07/09 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 - What if?

hm. i am leaving a review because I am just nice like that, but you must already know your chapter and the whole story is amazing. I especially love Seamus and the way they are all... hm, what did you say? As if their sorting seven years ago never happened? Wonderful. But OMG SHE"S PREGNANT! BUT... hm. COULD still change. COULD. Well, I'll just have to read the next chapters, so you must write the next chapters so they can be added. Perfectly right logic. And are you going to have students from other grades go into hiding? Because I think it wasn't only seventh years.

Author's Response: THank you, Andi. I'm glad you're enjoying the story.Are you a bit fond of Seamus? You seem to mention him in every review - LOL. Okay pupils in the RoR. The only ones Harry mentions are the ones he recognises (Seamus, Neville, Lavender, Pavarti, Padma - three Claw boys, Ernie) I've added another four so that's 13. Harry mentions about 20. It's possible there were kids from other years there... but I don't know any names. Basically I've made it seventh years because they're now of age, and thus more of a threat to the Carrows regime. Anyway ... it's very near May 1st ... hmmm, what happens then - hee hee. Thanks again ~Carole~

 
Reviewer: LuNaLoVeGoOdLoVer Signed
Date: 09/13/09 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 - Stopping by Woods

Oh, boy. what a cliffie.
I like that you updated so fast-keep it up!!!
And yes, I did like that insight into Blaise's mind, althpigh I like Lavender...

Author's Response: Ahh, glad you're enjoying this. The next chapter is up as from today, so I hope you like that too. I've actually written all of this, so you should get updates pretty quickly. Thanks for reviewing ~Carole~

 
Reviewer: LuNaLoVeGoOdLoVer Signed
Date: 02/14/10 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8 - Miles To Go

Aw. *wipes away tears*

I *loved loved loved* when Blaise described her as So proud, so determined, so reckless

And the scary/sad atmosphere when they were fighting.

I wonder though - did he just leave Fluer laying on the ground? :( I think the beginning was too fast. One minute Harry and Neville are arguing, the next he is coming back with McGonagall. She might not have been paying attention, but that part kind of confused me.... And some typos:

...herded the pupils to their tables As Lavender ... (missing the dot)

"What else can we do?”Blaise asked distantly. ( missing a space)

And when Pomfrey says marks,not bites (missing a space again)

Fabulous (sad) chapter - update soon!

Author's Response: oops, to the typos, thank you. I shall fix post haste. Well the beginning is delibeartely fast because I didn't want to write canon events from Lavender's POV. So things were occurring in a blur for her. I mean, it would, wouldn't it? She's been under a repressivce regime for a year, stuck in the RoR for two weeks, and suddenly hot on the heels of Tery turning up, Harry et al appear. So, I take your point - but it was deliberate. Thank you very much for the review though, and I'm glad you enjoyed the chapter. ~Carole~

 

Summary: What if Harry Potter had been a girl? This is the story of Alyssa Potter, the girl who lived. Join Alyssa as she encounters tragedy, romance, danger, and hidden family secrets. (It starts at the beginning of December of her fifth year at Hogwarts.) Please read and review!

Categories: General Fics, Alternate Universe, Severus/Lily, Draco/Other Character Genre: Warnings: Sexual Situations

Word count: 1765 Chapters: 1 Completed: No
Published:
04/07/09 Updated: 04/10/09


Reviewer: LuNaLoVeGoOdLoVer Signed
Date: 04/10/09 Title: Chapter 1: Haunted

well, i really like the idea but i don't think that there's not such a big difference in this chapter than when harry was , well, a boy.
and snape?pretty?
but stii, i'm looking forward for the next chapter!

 

Brothers & Sisters by ringobeatlesfan4
Rated: 3rd-5th Years [Reviews - 17]

Summary:

They fight. They argue. They threaten never to speak again. But in the end, it’s all alright. Because they’re brothers and sisters, or at least that’s what it feels like. James, Albus, and Lily Potter are the closest siblings you’d ever find. Rose and Hugo Weasley have their differences, but in the end, they would die for each other. And as for Scorpius Malfoy… he’s unlike anything the others have seen before. But he’s okay… because he saved them on countless occasions.

This is the story of the bonds between siblings, cousins, and friends. It’s the story of forgetting the past to create a brighter future. And it’s the story of learning to let go of the old, and holding on to the new.



Categories: Post-Hogwarts Genre: Warnings: Character Death, Substance Abuse, Violence

Word count: 4300 Chapters: 2 Completed: No
Published:
04/12/09 Updated: 05/17/09


Reviewer: LuNaLoVeGoOdLoVer Signed
Date: 05/19/09 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2: Surprises

wow i loved the chair

Author's Response: Was that a good wow? but thanks! the chair just seemed like something McGonagall would have made. Thanks for R&R-ing! {BeccA}

 
Reviewer: LuNaLoVeGoOdLoVer Signed
Date: 05/20/09 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2: Surprises

yeah it was a good wow like in WOW i loved it!!!

Author's Response: thank you! :D

 

Summary: It's the morning of the first match of season: Gryffindor versus Slytherin. As usual, Ron is nervous. He takes a walk by the lake and encounters some Doodle Shadowed Knooks - at least, according to Luna.
Luna always was good at making peole see things they'd never noticed before...

Please review :D


Categories: Ron/Other Character Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 2376 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
04/15/09 Updated: 05/03/09


Reviewer: LuNaLoVeGoOdLoVer Signed
Date: 05/29/09 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I really liked it, it had something special about it- and as Ari said, Ron's characterization was amazing!
But the part where Luns says "Don't, Ron," she said calmly."He's not worth it."
i think is not so good, because that's always what Hermione says, so...

Author's Response: Aw wow; thank you :) The fact that people like my characterisation means the world to me - it's something I really work at! Oh, I never thought about that... Thanks for pointing it out, I'll see what I can do!

 

True Story by grimlysirius
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 3]

Summary: Lily has always heard stories about her father's participation in the Triwizard Tournament. Now he's gone, the Tournament is back, and Scorpius needs facts.

Categories: Next Generation Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 871 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
05/02/09 Updated: 05/03/09


Reviewer: LuNaLoVeGoOdLoVer Signed
Date: 07/25/09 Title: Chapter 1: Teh Chapter One and Only

uuhkay, well I don't really have much to say as we were talking over AIM but I'm reviewing 'couse I am nice and I want my treats. (:
So.... I like it a lot although I'm wondering WHY Harry kept that stuff, as he doesn't seem the kind of person who keeps everything......... but it works and i really like it, and for like only having an hour to write it and no beta (as if YOU needed one :P ) it was truly amazing! Hope you write more!
Now give me my cupcake and my butterbeer! I did review and got the 400 read!!!!!!!!!!! YAY!!!!!!!!!!
And I have nothing against Scorpius/Lily.

 

Dark Blood by fruitandextranutcase
Rated: 3rd-5th Years [Reviews - 6]

Summary: It's 1935, and when Ysabelle Rosier's brother is the victim of a grisly murder, she vows to get her revenge. As her sixth year at Hogwarts dawns, she encounters not only muddled clues and the whims of her N.E.W.T. level teachers but also the unwanted affections of Hyperion Malfoy - not to mention the more intriguing ones of Muggle-born Will Roberts. Unwittingly sucked into the world of pureblood, Mudblood and murder, Ysabelle finds herself sinking helplessly out of her depth…

Categories: Historical Genre: Warnings: Mild Profanity, Violence

Word count: 7448 Chapters: 3 Completed: No
Published:
05/14/09 Updated: 07/15/09


Reviewer: LuNaLoVeGoOdLoVer Signed
Date: 05/28/09 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter One - Sermons and Secrets

your a very good intensive writer (:

Author's Response: Thanks for the compliment! I think that intensity may be my writing forte, whereas romantic scenes I could probably improve on. If there are any criticisms, let me know!

 

Only A Memory by RTTLupin
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 5]

Summary: The only things Teddy Lupin knows about his parents come from the memories of others. On his seventeenth birthday he will finally have a memory of his own.

Categories: Post-Hogwarts Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 4242 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
05/14/09 Updated: 05/24/09


Reviewer: LuNaLoVeGoOdLoVer Signed
Date: 05/24/09 Title: Chapter 1: Only A Memory

Awww!

Author's Response: Thank you :)

 

Tarot by DeadManSeven
Rated: 3rd-5th Years [Reviews - 12]

Summary:

A reading that consists of only cards from the Major Arcana indicates the destiny of the querant lies outside their own control - possibly within the hands of Fate itself.

Nineteen years pass between the final chapter and the epilogue. Here are two days inside those nineteen years.



Categories: Post-Hogwarts Genre: Warnings: Sexual Situations, Strong Profanity

Word count: 15136 Chapters: 7 Completed: Yes
Published:
05/24/09 Updated: 10/11/09


Reviewer: LuNaLoVeGoOdLoVer Signed
Date: 09/11/09 Title: Chapter 2: (I) - 'The Magician'

uh, I relly liked it. i love you r writing style, adn the story. But what happnede to Harry's old wand??? Don't tell me it broke.

Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing, good to know people like my work. About Harry's first wand, I've had different answers for that question every time someone's spotted it (he has it in a drawer at home and uses his other wand at work, he donated it to some manner of magical museum, it never worked quite the same after the last Horcrux was destroyed, etc.), but I've never settled on a reason I really liked. It's not broken or anything, anyway - it's just not as big a part of Harry's life as it was.

 
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