Summary: James and Lily-their seventh year. We all know what happens in the end, but what about the beginning? In their last year at Hogwarts, mysteries unravel, friends are betrayed, and, of course, couples destined to be fall in love.
very good so far (:
and sorry if i'm being annoying, but shouldn't htere only be one of the line things ( - ) here: But---”
i don't know, this chappie seemed ind of cliche...i've read similar ones in other fics, although maybe they were also based on this one, like with the beginning...
i still love it, though!
uhh, you portraided the marouders perfetly!!!! NICE!!!
Mr. and Mrs. Potter- or, as they prefer to be called, Lily and James- are two well-respected and talented top field operatives for the Order of the Phoenix. But they have sacrificed having a home of their own and the careers of their choice to fight bravely against Lord Voldemort. Now, at barely twenty years of age, life has thrown them another curve . . . Lily is pregnant. How can you face starting a family when all you've ever known of adult life is war? In this tale, everybody's favorite couple is forced to grow up once again.
They were the couple that made single people jealous and older people shake their heads fondly, lost in thought.
oyoyoyoy great first chappie. My friend told me to read this fic, so I hope it lives up to my expectations! :P
uh, i love how james and lily are together. it's so... perfect (:
hehe. the eye thing is kinda like moody's :P i noticed that.
and good job on the research, haha
and ouch. this is a great story, i can't wait to see what happens next!
haha, funny chappie, although ... well james being responceable is also funny, although it makes sence; he IS married... and the mission... lily wont like this..... oh boy..... *scared*
at the very beginning, you dsaid two pregnant women in a house was one tooo many. this is not strictly true. And a few chapters back you had alsice an lily be in a house together and it was good, wasn't it? But it does have a ring to it, and of course w/ lily and petunia it's completly true.
And a nit-picky thing. wizards can't conjure food.
poor lily. i wonder what james is up to.... well, i'll read and find out!
uh, ouc. do you think tho, if reg hadnt been there that they couldn't have beeten the muggles?
cliffie, you meany! good chappie tho. i'll be waiting for the next!
oh and to the earlier chapters, i also like how the marauder's bond.... and de je vou (is that how u spell it? with that accent thing?) w/ marge. haha....
Summary: Sirius was killed by Bellatrix. When he lands headlong at his dead best friend’s feet, he is a little perplexed. All is soon explained, however. He has reached Heaven, and James is here to welcome him. Before he can begin to get used to life in Heaven, he must first “watch his life” on the large screen in front of him, because it will help him understand things better. And so, that’s what he does. From the very beginning, to the very end. You too, can follow him through the ups and downs. Follow him through the highs and the lows. Follow him through the laughter, the pain, and the romance. Follow him through the story of his life. This fic is a tribute to Sirius Black. It is not all marauder-era, although a bulk of it is, and that is why it’s in this category.
Ohh!! i just found this fic and the first chapter was hilariua! i loved it! Sirius; characterization was like perfect!
But i could make it the size of Scotland? No offence, but Scotland isn't that big. :P But you saud even bigger...oh, just ignore what I just wrote.
I love this story and it is great! :P (well the first chappie was) How long ago did you write this?
Author's Response: Ick. YEARS. It feels kind of cringy just thinking about it, but never mind, I'm still glad you like it anyway. And, yeah, I know there are bigger countries than Scotland, but if you think about it in comparison to other rooms, a Scotland-sized room would still be pretty mega. Anyway, thanks for reviewing, and if you read the rest, I will apologise in advance for any of the horribly written stuff you might find. =)
Ouch. So cruel. ):
I though bellatrix was older than Andromenda....
Author's Response: =D Yeah, it's best not to think about all that. I was a little confused ...
Summary: The war is over. Harry Potter and Ginny Weasley finally have the chance for the happiness they've been craving. But, with Harry recovering from the war and Ginny back in school, can they finally have the relationship they've always wanted?
******Higher rating just to be safe.
haha. i didn't have time to even finish this chappie, but i'm defianetly planning to. :p i just wanted to say it was funny how ginny complained 'bout her mother mothering them and then she was sorta mothering harry too, in a way. like w/ his medicine :P
haha, i lov ed it! I liked how mrs weasley is like , matchmaking, lol. at first i expected her to be angry or somet.... but she does love harry,....
And I think you accidentaly put two 'was' in here:
Ginny was just was happy to be kissing him again.
-goes to read the next-
u didnthave teddy over at christmass..... and when is hermione gonna come?
i liked how ron 'approves' to a point :P poor hary, though. and the homework-growns- lol
Summary: Hi, I’m Lily Evans. You know, there are a lot of fics about me out there. I’m flattered that you spend time thinking about me, but sometimes sickened. How could these fics not mention my
bonkers beautiful cat, Missy? And what about my evil and malicious extremely helpful conscience? Or the fact that I make a fool out of myself at every opportunity am unique?
Well, this fic has all of these things. It also has L.O.V.E (I’m the ‘L’), the elite group of
cliquey lovely girls that I am part of. And our rival, the sarcastic cynic also unique Iola Potter (cousin and partner in crime to James). But does it have an actual plot? Of course not Absolutely! And it starts with me getting a detention with Iola (through no fault of my own, of course). And we kind of ... almost ... well, we get on alright. A friendship sparks, shall we say. I have no idea how it happens It is meant to be. But it’s going to take some fighting for if we want to keep it. It would be a lot easier to just stick to what we know, really. We were perfectly happy hating each other. But ... well. I guess you’ll have to find out!
Read this or I’ll curse you Read this and I’ll love you!
Uh, I like Iola.
Author's Response: I'm glad. =)
uh, i like it! but you portray the marauders as blunedering idiot, like, really shallow, you know? This isn't really a Lily/marauders fic, so I'm wondering what you'll do with that... and hwo is she gonna chooooooooooooose???
Author's Response: Who indeed ...? Yeah, the Marauders are a little blundering, but you find out later that they're not quite as shallow as they might seem (unfortunately the same can't be said for som of the other characters!)
uh, good. i'm only scared she will fall for them again....
Author's Response: =) We shall see ...
Uh, I loved it! *squeels*
Author's Response: Yay!
Summary: 2009 QSQ Awards Winner for Best Chaptered Canon Romance
Before the chosen one was ever born, his parents had to meet, fall in love, and defy Voldemort three times. Easier said than done. Things were never easy for Harry Potter's parents, but it gets a whole lot harder when Death Eaters kidnap Lily. This is the story of Lily and James, the trials they face, and how James finally wins Lily's heart. (pre-Deathly Hallows)
“I’ll always protect you.”
hm, like it, but I would think she would like to have Emma with her.