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Summary:

All's fair in love and war

Lily thinks herself too clever to fall for James Potters charm. Yet, as the two of them are appointed Head Boy and Girl, will Lily regret her negative feelings towards James? Pre-HBP



Categories: James/Lily Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 93408 Chapters: 50 Completed: Yes
Published:
11/18/04 Updated: 04/26/05


Reviewer: captburke Signed
Date: 01/26/09 Title: Chapter 4: The Noble Fight

I am most curious as to why they mentioned James by name. Obviously there is something going on we'll find out about sometime soon.

 
Reviewer: captburke Signed
Date: 01/26/09 Title: Chapter 5: The Feast

And why were the Death Eaters looking for James? Did I ask this already? Sirius hasn't started growing up yet.

 
Reviewer: captburke Signed
Date: 01/26/09 Title: Chapter 6: Oleander

Being a prefect might not be so bad.

 
Reviewer: captburke Signed
Date: 01/26/09 Title: Chapter 7: You Think You Know Me

She just doesn't ever want to admit he might have been right about Snape.

 
Reviewer: captburke Signed
Date: 01/26/09 Title: Chapter 8: Are You Happy Now?

And all because male and female think and react differently to the same stuff. Just say what you mean and to h.... with what other people think. It would make life much simpler.

 
Reviewer: captburke Signed
Date: 01/26/09 Title: Chapter 9: She Will Be Loved

Teenagers are not real people

 
Reviewer: captburke Signed
Date: 01/26/09 Title: Chapter 10: Forgotten

I repeat, teenagers are not real people.

 

Reign O'er Me by cts
Rated: 6th-7th Years [Reviews - 267]

Summary: A sixth year fic that explores what might happen if Harry moves past the angst and starts to put his life together and has a few things break his way for a change.

Categories: General Fics Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 322473 Chapters: 35 Completed: No
Published:
12/05/04 Updated: 11/24/05


Reviewer: captburke Signed
Date: 01/28/09 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 10: Join Together

More than fascinating. I'm loving this more with every chapter.

 
Reviewer: captburke Signed
Date: 01/28/09 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 11: Another Tricky Day

Another winning chapter. The twists and turns in this story are wonderful. And what the h.... was Dudley thinking going bac to Privet Drive?

 
Reviewer: captburke Signed
Date: 01/28/09 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 12: Smash The Mirror

Yes!!!!

 
Reviewer: captburke Signed
Date: 01/28/09 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 13: Here For More

Okay, Dudley not ranting and raving about magic being done in front of him is hard enough to come to terms with, lol. But, Dudley actually doing magic? That may take some serious drinking(I'm way over 21)to understand.

 
Reviewer: captburke Signed
Date: 01/28/09 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 15: Girl's Eyes

Can't wait to see what Sirius has up his sleeve. I do know it won't be boring. And just who is this girl? Do the green eyes mean anything?

 
Reviewer: captburke Signed
Date: 01/28/09 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 16: Bargain

Excellent chapter. Dudley is finally getting lessons in being a real person. It's too bad the four have to grow up faster than should be necessary, but war is not a good thing. Looks like Wormy is in part at least paying his life debt to Harry be telling Sirius about the Horcruxes. If that's not what he was passing on, I'm totally lost.

 
Reviewer: captburke Signed
Date: 01/29/09 Title: Chapter 18: Chapter 17: I Don't Even Know Myself

Well, at least we know she's alive. This is the greatest twist I can imagine. I may not get any sleep for the next 24 hrs trying to find out if she's found by the good guys first.

 
Reviewer: captburke Signed
Date: 01/29/09 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 18: It's Your Turn

Just keeps getting better

 
Reviewer: captburke Signed
Date: 01/29/09 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 19: Sister Disco

Repeating myself again. This just keeps getting better and better

 
Reviewer: captburke Signed
Date: 01/29/09 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 20: Goin' Mobile

I don't think the USA is ready for Sirius and the FOUR!. It should be an interesting visit, and I can't wait until Harry meets his sister. I'm betting her scar is from whatever spell was used to remove her from Lily when she was killed. And I can just see Sirius becoming Padfoot on the streets of Atlanta!

 
Reviewer: captburke Signed
Date: 01/29/09 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 21: Let's See Action

This is really great. My only problem, I hate going through all the side problems getting to finding Jamie. Why can't writer's just stop with all these little side problems? Unfortunately I have no patience. I want them to find her now and forget all the other stuff, LOL

 
Reviewer: captburke Signed
Date: 01/29/09 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 22: Eminence Front (Part 1)

This is a really good story. But again, why the h... do writer's think it's necessary to add so many little side stories and mysteries? Get on with the story. LOL

 
Reviewer: captburke Signed
Date: 01/29/09 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 22: Eminence Front (Part 2)

Okay, I was a little hasty in saying writer's needlessly keep things going. This is still a great story and well told. I'm hoping you still check the reviews here at MNFF. Patience is not a virtue I have in any quantity. I want it all, and want it now! LOL

Author's Response: Indeed, I do check reviews, and thank you. I've enjoyed yours.

 
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