Very interesting. Don't know if I'm going to like what I hear, but I really wanted Remus to have this "talk" with Kane.And I really want it to be safe for Remus.
Awesome. So very real.
Perfect. You've written an outstanding story here. It is all so real I can see, hear and feel everything that is happening. Thanks for writing.
Your characters reacted exactly as I would have pictured them. Considering the love, the normalcy, the caring way in which his parents raised him, there was no other way for Remus to react. This is truly an amazing story.
I think we're in for some more fun. I just knew you'd have a way out. And I like it.
Absolutely within reason. Exactly what Tonks would do. Just keeps getting better.
Still going strong. This is going to be a very interesting, uh, conversation between the three.
Another great chapter. :) You have a wonderful talent and you use it well. I'm not big on romance stories. As a side issue in a story it's okay. Action, adventure, and mystery are better.
Great scene. Well written. A recalcitrant Remus is not a bad thing. He does tend to go it alone more than necessary.
Sort of like Dead Man Walking.
More than awesome. More than perfect. I cannot conceive of any other way Remus would have or could have handled the meeting with Kane. Pure Remus. Not a word came out of his mouth that did not sound perfectly natural for him. Love your stuff.
Forgot to ask about this in my first comment.Charlie left school the year before Harry and Ron started. Doesn't that mean he's only three or four years older than Percy and eight or nine years older than Harry and Ron.
And another, Oh shit!
Good chapter. Very interesting.
Excellent. Very intense. I do believe Remus just, met his maker so to speak. Kane had to be the one who bit him at 3. This is getting very interesting.
Fantastic! Absolutely fantastic!
You've outdone yourself again.
I will read the rest of the story. Commenting is something else again.