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Oblivious by Pallas
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Summary: What if there were more to Remus Lupin's bite than a badly timed stroll in the woods? The arrival of a feral invokes secrets of the past and terror for the present...

Categories: General Fics Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 162508 Chapters: 42 Completed: Yes
Published:
11/09/04 Updated: 08/27/05


Reviewer: captburke Signed
Date: 07/16/09 Title: Chapter 39: Acceptance

Very interesting. Don't know if I'm going to like what I hear, but I really wanted Remus to have this "talk" with Kane.And I really want it to be safe for Remus.

 
Reviewer: captburke Signed
Date: 07/12/09 Title: Chapter 16: By Moonlight

Awesome. So very real.

 
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Date: 07/12/09 Title: Chapter 17: The Wall

Perfect. You've written an outstanding story here. It is all so real I can see, hear and feel everything that is happening. Thanks for writing.

 
Reviewer: captburke Signed
Date: 07/12/09 Title: Chapter 18: Waiting

Priceless

 
Reviewer: captburke Signed
Date: 07/12/09 Title: Chapter 19: A Matter of Blame

Your characters reacted exactly as I would have pictured them. Considering the love, the normalcy, the caring way in which his parents raised him, there was no other way for Remus to react. This is truly an amazing story.

 
Reviewer: captburke Signed
Date: 07/12/09 Title: Chapter 20: The Howling Once More

Oh shit!

 
Reviewer: captburke Signed
Date: 07/12/09 Title: Chapter 21: Caught Out

I think we're in for some more fun. I just knew you'd have a way out. And I like it.

 
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Date: 07/12/09 Title: Chapter 22: The Great Escape

Absolutely within reason. Exactly what Tonks would do. Just keeps getting better.

 
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Date: 07/12/09 Title: Chapter 23: A Night in a Cage

Still going strong. This is going to be a very interesting, uh, conversation between the three.

 
Reviewer: captburke Signed
Date: 07/12/09 Title: Chapter 24: Facing the Music

Another great chapter. :) You have a wonderful talent and you use it well. I'm not big on romance stories. As a side issue in a story it's okay. Action, adventure, and mystery are better.

 
Reviewer: captburke Signed
Date: 07/12/09 Title: Chapter 25: The Aconite Maelstrom

Great scene. Well written. A recalcitrant Remus is not a bad thing. He does tend to go it alone more than necessary.

 
Reviewer: captburke Signed
Date: 07/16/09 Title: Chapter 40: Ready or Not

Sort of like Dead Man Walking.

 
Reviewer: captburke Signed
Date: 07/16/09 Title: Chapter 41: A Quiet Word

More than awesome. More than perfect. I cannot conceive of any other way Remus would have or could have handled the meeting with Kane. Pure Remus. Not a word came out of his mouth that did not sound perfectly natural for him. Love your stuff.

 
Reviewer: captburke Signed
Date: 07/09/09 Title: Chapter 4: The Marauder

Forgot to ask about this in my first comment.Charlie left school the year before Harry and Ron started. Doesn't that mean he's only three or four years older than Percy and eight or nine years older than Harry and Ron.

 
Reviewer: captburke Signed
Date: 07/12/09 Title: Chapter 26: The Draw of the Moon

And another, Oh shit!

 
Reviewer: captburke Signed
Date: 07/09/09 Title: Chapter 6: The Werewolf Lesson

Good chapter. Very interesting.

 
Reviewer: captburke Signed
Date: 07/09/09 Title: Chapter 7: A Walk in Hogsmeade

Excellent. Very intense. I do believe Remus just, met his maker so to speak. Kane had to be the one who bit him at 3. This is getting very interesting.

 
Reviewer: captburke Signed
Date: 07/12/09 Title: Chapter 27: Too Close to Home

Fantastic! Absolutely fantastic!

 
Reviewer: captburke Signed
Date: 07/12/09 Title: Chapter 28: Liber Emitto

You've outdone yourself again.

 
Reviewer: captburke Signed
Date: 07/12/09 Title: Chapter 29: The Alpha of Hogwarts

I will read the rest of the story. Commenting is something else again.

 
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