Summary: What if there were more to Remus Lupin's bite than a badly timed stroll in the woods? The arrival of a feral invokes secrets of the past and terror for the present...
My faith in your writing having been justified I freely admit that you have been perfect once again. Obviously the part of you doing the writing subconciously knew Polyjuce Potion would not have the normal effect with a half-giant. You were just pretending you didn't realize what you did.
A more perfect ending chapter could not have been written. You've more than outdone yourself once again. Look forward to reading more of your stuff.
You're still doing it. Writing awesome stuff. How could you not write the newspaper article? It would not be the same story without Rita's making a total arse of herself. The student's would probably willingly step on her beetle form with great glee. The student's are praising Remus ingenuity in getting the Reversal Spell to Hermione, for helping them to save Snape, for fighting for them.
Think we're about to get answers to a lot of questions. Not sure we're going to like all the answers, or even all the questions, but it should be interesting.
Enjoying the story.
Knew he'd find out. Figuring it out didn't necessarily occur to me. Very much like the way you wrote the sequence of his realization.
Interesting beginning. Like the premise so far.
Like finding out that Isaacs/Kane was outsmarted because his potential victums had been taught by a werewolf how to effectively slow down and/or stop one if you can find the right tools.
Snape is a slimey git. Potentionaly a good slimey git, but a slimey git nonetheless.
Very intriguiging plot/storyline. Like the characters.
Definitely makes me want to keep reading. Nice story.
Ooooohhh this is really good. The dream/memory was so real, you can see and feel everything as Remus does. This is an awesome story.
Fantastic! This is so fun to read. Easy to visualize, characters are right on as real people. I like your stuff. At least so far.lol
Because he's Isaacs, silly. At least that is the feeling I'm getting from the story. Another great chapter. Can't wait to read more.
Kane is up to something and I know I'm not going to like it.
Interesting beginning to a relationship. Be fun to see how it progesses.
So real. Great story. New dimensions.
I was right about one thing. He is an Isaac's, just didn't realize (but should have suspected) the baby had not died. "Kane's" age was not clear. I thought the original Isaac's had faked his death because from reading I believed the baby had died. This is awesome.
Awesomeness seems to run in your chapters. Especially when you're putting one over on your reader's while leaving broad hints.
