War does not determine who is right, it determines who is left.
~I'm a 17-year-old living in the USA. I have 2 little sisters who annoy me to no end but I still love anyways. (Even though a certain younger sibling is TALLER than I am... *grumble*)
~I am a Huffleclaw and I'm darn proud of it!
~I love listening to classic rock and movie soundtracks. I can't stand rap or latin music.
~I'm a huge arachnaphobe. I'm also nervous around heights, large bodies of water (swimming in them and the THINGS in them! *shudder*), and blood.
You are a Toad - croak! Meaning you are a
fairly, normal person (well,if you can all
anyone normal - that is.) You are mostly a
happy person, getting on with your life with
only a few croaks and moans along the way. You
are also a very, practical person and probably
quite a hard worker. You enjoy the simple
things in life like the company of your
friends, going shopping or to the cinema,
reading a good book and being with your family
or loved one.
Your good points are that you
are even tempered, fairly happy go lucky and a
good friend to have around. Your bad points are
that you sometimes lack the drive to succeed,
being happy with what you already have. Which,
really isn't such a bad point at all.
content with your life, you are a happy,
Wow, that was tear worthy. And though all of that stuff was just in his head, he's still terribly changed from that.
I'm guessing the boy in the other car was Neville? It would seem appropriate, considering the prophecy.
Car crash ... flashbacks to PS when the Dursleys had Harry convinced his parents died in a car crash.
I very much enjoyed this story. It was a little confusing int he middle, around the time that Charlie read the article about her murder, but you cleared it all up in the end and, in fact, made the story more interesting. The only critisism that I really have, is that I don't think Rosa would get over Tim that fast. Maybe you should extend the time frame, because I don't think she'd want to make out with Charlie just yet. Of course, you know your characters better than I do, so I could be wrong. It just seems a bit odd and fast pace around there, considering how she went from seeing red if Charlie so much as raised his hand, to making out with him, and to being terrified of Tim. Other than those bits, I really enjoyed this story. It was very suspensful and intruiging. :D 10/10
Awwww... :( This feels like such a regular occurance. The confusion, the struggle, the realization, the oblivion... So sad. Great job at capturing it.
Author's Response: Thanks! I always thought there was something so touching about Alice and Neville's relationship, so I decided to see what I could do with it :) Thanks again for reading & reviewing!