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Hey, just another random Harry Potter fan.... not very good at writing, but would love to help by reviewing. Hope to become an editor some day.

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Delightful Pain by Queen of Serpents

Rated: Professors •
Hermione gets a visitor at night that delights in her pain. Before she used to dread the nights but lately... she has begun to look forward to meet her nocturnal vistor... and rapist?

Don't read if you are offended with rape and abuse. Contains events that will be quite offensive and possibly "disgusting". You have been warned.

Runner Up in the Dangerous Liaisons Awards and He Had It Coming Awards.

~The story is now Complete!~
Thanks for reading!

Reviewer: Ava Marie Signed
Date: 08/08/09 Title: Chapter 13: Epilogue

All in all, I loved it! The grammar errors were a bit of a turn off, and in a place or two (maybe) I thought that you might have been laying it on a bit thick, but the storyline and depth was amazing.

Thanks for writing, and whatever you do, don't stop!

Casualties of Heart by Perselus

Rated: Professors •
Summary: A passion one can't control, an addictive affair... to what lengths desire and love can take a person?
Reviewer: Ava Marie Signed
Date: 08/09/09 Title: Chapter 1: One-shot

About halfway into it, when I could see how short it was, I was about to just toss it to the dungheap, seeing it as a mindless sex fling thing with no value whatsoever. Then I caught then ending and read it again... that was brilliant! times ten! And some more!

NO one saw that coming. XD

Reviewer: Ava Marie Signed
Date: 08/09/09 Title: Chapter 1: One-shot

About halfway into it, when I could see how short it was, I was about to just toss it to the dungheap, seeing it as a mindless sex fling thing with no value whatsoever. Then I caught then ending and read it again... that was brilliant! times ten! And some more!

NO one saw that coming. XD

Before Dawn by Mary

Rated: Professors •
Summary: He pretends not to care that she’s using him. Adult!HG/SS, Complete. Angsty
Reviewer: Ava Marie Signed
Date: 08/09/09 Title: Chapter 1: Before Dawn

Good job... I was pleased with what little I saw. You could tell the characters were well evolved in and of themselves, and it seemed very realistic.

That being said, I would like to see more depth sometime soon. I'll be looking into you!

Silver-grey meeting chocolate brown by tetris

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: Just a little poem I wrote for fun..... :) Please read and review! ^ ^,
Reviewer: Ava Marie Signed
Date: 09/04/09 Title: Chapter 1: One-shot

Oh... I like.

Part I of Romance Slytherin Style - Somewhere Only We Know by SeaIsleWitch

Rated: Professors •
Summary: Near the end of sixth year, an overdue confrontation between Pansy Parkinson and Draco Malfoy leads to an emotionally charged evening, that neither will forget. This story depicts a missing scene from HBP and includes a humorous cameo of our favourite Potions Master. (Complete - 3 Chapters)
Part I of Romance, Slytherin Style - A Trilogy
* Let me change your mind about the Slytherins you love to hate. *
Reviewer: Ava Marie Signed
Date: 08/20/10 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter One

Meeshes, I liked this a lot! I've always loved Draco, but Pansy has always turned me off a little. Glad to see her in a different light.

Journey On Water by SK witch

Rated: 3rd-5th Years •
Summary: After the downfall of Voldemort, Hermione decides to take a break and return to the Muggle world. Deciding to go on a Muggle cruise, Hermione realizes that it was the biggest mistake of her life. Now, she's stuck on a boat with her worst enemy. Fights and bickering continue to take place between them and maybe a little something else too...
Hermione makes new friends and meets up with an old friend, Jessie: an arrogant girl who treats Hermione like dirt and desperately tries to seek Draco's attention. (Slightly AU)

Thanks to some of my awesome readers, this story has been translated into Chinese and Vietnamese. For information on how you can see the translated version, please check my profile!

Status: Working on chapter 26. In the meantime, you can have a look at my new one-shot, Kiss Kiss, Bang Bang!

Please note that the date of my last update is incorrect. Apparently there are some glitches in the system regarding to this. Chapter 25 was updated on the 7/09/09!

Nominated for a Quicksilver Quill award in the Non-Canon Romance category

Please leave a review before you leave! It means a lot! You can check out the banner of this story on my author's page!
Reviewer: Ava Marie Signed
Date: 11/08/08 Title: Chapter 1: The Cruise

I swear, you are PERFECT. I love your stories SOOOO much, and I wish you to keep on writing forever and ever and I'll make sure to read them forever and ever. And ever.

Please never change, and know that no matter what ANYONE else says, you have a beautiful soul. Ha ha, can I have it?

Sorry for the dramatics, but I'm so.... amazed at you. KEEP UP THE GOOD WORK!

Author's Response: Hey, there! Wow i've got to say i'm thouroughly flattered! =D It's a real pleasure knowing how much you're liking the story and my overall writing style - thank you! I will keep on writing, because I really do enjoy doing it and I hope you continue reading my work! Thank you ever so much!

An Aversion to Change by Misdemeanor1331

Rated: Professors •
Summary: After his failed attempt on Dumbledore's life, Draco seeks refuge at the Order of the Phoenix. Sent back to Hogwarts with suspicious title of Head Boy, he is forced to share a dormitory with none other than Hermione Granger. But with war looming on the horizon and another danger even closer to home, their seventh year of Hogwarts is anything but ordinary.

A story of compelling intrigue, hidden motives, dangerous secrets, and obvious passion. Animagi, Quidditch, the Order of the Phoenix. Masquerades and riddles. Hate and love. Pleasure and pain. A blend of contradictions that, for two people, makes a truly unforgettable final year. Slow moving D/Hr with plenty of plot.
Reviewer: Ava Marie Signed
Date: 03/23/09 Title: Chapter 38: Transformations

Hmmmm.... I liked it, but you can't run from your troubles forever. I can sense the danger lurking behind the next corridor.

Author's Response: Very intuitive. ;) Thanks for the review!

I'm Not Looking! by Soap

Rated: Professors •
Summary: A one shot.

Number Twelve Grimmauld Place is full this summer, between Arthur, Molly, Remus, Bill, Fleur, Fred, George, Charlie, Ron, Ginny, Harry, Hermione, and none other than Draco Malfoy.

Reviewer: Ava Marie Signed
Date: 08/08/09 Title: Chapter 1: I'm Not Looking!

Bahaha... that sounds so like Malfoy! Nice job, overall.

However, I'm a bit confused as to why it's rated professor. I would've put it as a sixth-seventh year tops. And (don't hate me for saying this, I'm just saying what I think) I've seen this storyline many times before. It must've been fun to write and you probably weren't looking for a gold medal in a one-shotter, but I would like to see you get more creative and show some more of that personality of yours I know is in there!

Keep on writing, I enjoyed reading this. :)

Lost Souls by A Cappella

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: Those sent to Azkaban are condemned to a place that is worse than death.
Reviewer: Ava Marie Signed
Date: 09/04/09 Title: Chapter 1: Lost Souls

Funniest thing EVER when I saw Love Letter's comment. I thought she was speaking another language. That was mean. But I do like your poem a lot. This gets the point across very sharply.

To Draco, With Love by Hutchinson

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: Draco somehow managed to get his very own advice column in Hogwarts' school paper, where he gives his sage opinion to those who dare to ask for it. Feel free to write in for advice about love, life, school, family, anything you can think of! But remember... with Draco, you tend not to get the answer you expected!
Reviewer: Ava Marie Signed
Date: 11/08/08 Title: Chapter 4: Issue the Fourth

Ha, I love you soooo much. Keep writing, if only for my sake. You have a quiet wit about you, which I love. Please let a teacher send in a letter.... it would make my day! ILY!

Author's Response: Thanks for the sweet note! I love you, too! I've just updated a chapter in my other Humour story (Luna's Truth or Dare), but I'm working on the next issue for this to hopefully be posted soon. You gave me a great idea for a letter from a professor, by the way! *wink*

The Absurd Fanfic Revolution by Tim the Enchanter

Rated: 3rd-5th Years •
HEY! Hey you! Psssstttt! You have to help us!

It’s Tim the Enchanter, our fanfiction writer – HE’S GONE MAD! We’re just trying to live normal lives at Hogwarts, but CRAZY things keep happening to us because he’s bored!

Please! Read our story and hear our plight! We need to bludgeon some sanity into our author – Oh no! HE’S AT HIS COMPUTER NOW!

NO! NOOO-aaahhhh! Must resist! Resist… Gibber narg turnip turnip wibble antidisestablishmentarianism blubber gibber wop wop bbluubbaaarrrggghhh!

Nominated for QSQ 2009, Best Humour.

Reviewer: Ava Marie Signed
Date: 11/08/08 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter B: Absurdity Who’s Who

I'm sorry, but I just really don't like this much at all. Don't take this too harshly, but it sounds like you're very young and immature. Not saying that's a bad thing, but please take this to heart. I have no intention to hurt you feelings, and I'm sorry if I have. You have some potential talent, though! Don't give up!

Author's Response:

Well, if the story sounds young and immature, there’s a reason for it – after all, the story is called “The Absurd Fanfic Revolution.” I had an awful lot of fun writing this, largely because I threw all of the rules of writing fiction into the rubbish bin! The story is intended to be completely nonsensical and unrefined, which is exactly why my main characters have decided to rise up in rebellion against the author in order to live in peace as characters in a “normal” fanfic. Note that as the revolution progresses, things get much more serious, and the quality of the writing improves… a bit.

Anyway, sorry that this story is not really your cup of tea (or coffee, if you prefer), but believe it or not, I have written other stories that do take matters seriously and do not break the conventions of fiction writing or of sanity, if you’d be interested in reading them.

Tim the Enchanter

Reviewer: Ava Marie Signed
Date: 11/10/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter I: HAGGIS ATTACK!

Please note that I said that I thought it sounded like you were immature, not the story. Although you'll probably take that as a compliment :).

And I will look into your other writings, thank you.

Also, please disregard everything I say, because I am one of those people that didn't like Charlie and the Unicorn. It takes no brain to do that.

Author's Response:

Why, thank you! Everyone has their own inner ten year old, I suppose, and what appears in this story is mine! You can never take life too seriously… well, I can’t…

Tim the Enchanter

Drool by mutualunderstanding

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: Sirius, the expert on getting ladies, gives baby Harry a chat on how to be a proper gentleman. Harry, however, has other ideas.
Reviewer: Ava Marie Signed
Date: 11/24/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Wow, you are amazing. That was sooo cute, i was practically in tears. Well, not really, but I sincerely liked it. Keep writing, and know that you have at least one devoted fan!

Author's Response: You're too kind; thank you for reading and reviewing!

Love at First Strike by Equinox Chick

Rated: 6th-7th Years •
Summary: When Cupid and his trainee, Godfrey, arrive at Hogwarts, their plan is to bring some love into Angelina Johnson’s life. Cupid knows exactly who she should be with. Unfortunately, when Godfrey panics the second arrow ends up in a totally different place.

This is Equinox Chick of Hufflepuff and this is my entry in the Cupid Gone Crazy challenge.

I am not JK Rowling; I doubt you're surprised by that.
Reviewer: Ava Marie Signed
Date: 02/07/09 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Heh heh... these stories do me good, you know that?
You're story may have been one of the cheesiest, silliest, weirdest stories ever... which of course, I was immediately attracted to and made it so darn awesome.
I would be interested to see you try more dramatic stories, though. To get well rounded, I suppose. If you already have, then be sure that I'll be reading that one too.
You have talents, my friend. This was a great one-shot, keep it up!

Author's Response: I have a few fics on the archives and they're more dramatic. Check out my Author page if you're interested. There's some Marauder things, a Tonks fic or two, a one shot (about George Weasley) and um...um... Oh yes, a song about my true love. Yes, this fic was cheesy, partly because it was written for a Valentine's Day Challenge but also because occasionally I do like the odd bit of chedder.

Thanks so much for the review - I do appreciate it.

Carole xxx

The Snake Amongst the Flowers by eternalangel

Rated: 3rd-5th Years •
Summary: When Cupid's wayward arrow is shot into a crowd of Slytherins, Gryffindors and Muggles, Lily Evans' life gets very complicated.

This is eternalangel from Ravenclaw that is submitting this to the Cupid Gone Crazy challenge.
Reviewer: Ava Marie Signed
Date: 03/23/09 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

The Author,
So, this is pretty much an awesome story. It had a good balance, and I like how it didn't make leaps and bounds just to make it interesting. It takes a lot of talent to write a one-shot and make it as lovely as a big twenty chapter saga. Keep up the good work, I'm very proud of you!
-The Reader

Author's Response: Wow. Thank you very much for the compliments. I'm really glad you liked it. I had a hard time choosing which pair (Lily/Regulus or Petunia/Lucius) I wanted to write for this challenge, so I'm really glad it came off well for writing them both in. Thanks!