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'Yes' by nat089
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 113]

Summary: James Potter usually accepts dares without batting an eyelash. However, this time, while he’s on a dare, he's also on a personal mission. But first, he’s anxiously waiting for Lily to turn up. What does Lily have to do with this dare? And what will she say when she finds out?

(One shot)


[Author's Note]
Before you start commenting that the dare was unromantic, please please read the 2nd sentence of the 4th paragraph. I clearly state that "James was steeling himself to do SOMETHING HE WANTED TO DO VERY MUCH EVEN WITHOUT BEING DARED TO". In other words, the dare was the catalyst, not the cause. It only served to spur him into action; it didn't give him the intention of doing what he did (I'm trying not to give out spoilers here, so read to find out what - though you can probably guess ;)).

Categories: James/Lily Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 1608 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
10/01/05 Updated: 10/01/05


Reviewer: potterstar Signed
Date: 05/05/09 Title: Chapter 1: 'Yes'

awesome!! i loved how it builded up the tension, then, what we had all been waiting for- yes!!

 

Summary: Lucius Malfoy is most infamous for being excessively proud of his ancestry and for his disdain for Muggle-borns. But what if he received a letter that changed everything? Takes place during OotP, and it's AU.

Contains snippets of humour.

For the "Dreams" challenge in the fanfiction beta boards... I am Schmerg_The_Impaler of Hufflepuff House.

Categories: Alternate Universe Genre: Warnings: Alternate Universe

Word count: 3623 Chapters: 2 Completed: Yes
Published:
01/23/07 Updated: 02/16/07


Reviewer: potterstar Signed
Date: 08/26/09 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: In Which Owls Become Lucius's Hair Accessories

So ironic! Loove it. :)

Author's Response: WHOOOOA, it's been forever since I got a review for this! Thank ya!

 

"I love you, too!" by Afifa
Rated: 3rd-5th Years [Reviews - 19]

Summary: He had been lying down for a couple of minutes, not strong enough to get up just yet. When he had felt the spider’s icky eight legs on his skin, however, he sprang to his feet.

He regretted this action at once, as it had made him dizzy. His vision was hazy because he didn’t have his glasses on. James looked around the grass field and found his spectacles. They were cracked and needed to be fixed. For that, he needed his wand. Automatically, his hand went in his pocket. He fumbled around his pocket, but in vain; the wand was nowhere to be found. James was in the middle of nowhere and he didn’t have a wand. Perfect!
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James has to prove his love for Lily. For that, he has to pass a few tests. Read on what he has to do to win over Lily's heart.

I am Afifa of Hufflepuff participating for the Gauntlet Challenge- Round 5.


Categories: James/Lily Genre: Warnings: Sexual Situations

Word count: 3365 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
02/21/08 Updated: 02/21/08


Reviewer: potterstar Signed
Date: 06/23/09 Title: Chapter 1: I love you, too!

wonderful

Author's Response: Thank you! Glad you liked it. :D

 

Summary: A companion piece to the Potter's Pentagon trilogy... it's better if you've read the Potter's Pentagon trilogy, but you don't necessarily have to.

It's five years after Emma Weasley and her chums graduated from Hogwarts. Ted and Ivy are married, Haley is working at Madame Puddifoot's while trying desperately to break into show business, Jordan's doing whatever it is he does, and Emma is an Auror trainee working as a guard at the Chudley Cannons' stadium. The Cannons have actually been doing much better lately, due to their new star Beater, Tyrone Thomas. Unfortunately, Tyrone is Emma's ex-boyfriend. OH, THE AWKWARDNESS.

Follow Emma through her awkward adventures told in her usual insane way, as she experiences angst, hilarity, obnoxiously strange people, misadventures involving a deceptively dashing cad, Haley's wedding, the birth of Ted and Ivy's baby, and her own eventual descent into LURRRVE.

Written for the marvellous Vindictus Viridian's Pride and Prejudice NEWTs class on the Fanfiction Beta Boards, based on Jane Austen's fantastic novel, "Pride and Prejudice.".

Nominated in the 2008 Quicksilver Quills Awards for Best Non-Canon Romance Story! And its lovely (haha) heroine, Emma Weasley, received two nominations for Best Female Original Character, while Haley Potter and Ivy Potter each received one! Thanks so much, guys!

Categories: Other Pairing Genre: Warnings: Book 7 Disregarded

Word count: 122124 Chapters: 17 Completed: Yes
Published:
03/30/08 Updated: 06/04/11


Reviewer: potterstar Signed
Date: 05/24/09 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7: Lawn Gnomes and Trowel Trolls

Nice chapter! i liked this one the best. please update soon!!

Author's Response: Thanks! Summer's coming up, so updates shouldn't be TOO far away! My summer will be nice and free to do as much fanfic as I please.

 

Summary:

His fears? Flying...his own wand...fitting in...sticking out! His best friends? A passionate fire-breathing cousin, and a cool, aloof Death Eater's son. His destiny? Anything but ordinary!

Join Albus as he experiances his first year at Hogwarts and begins the journey out from under his father's collosal shadow, if he can survive it of course!

Meet the new Tenacious Trio, Albus Potter, Scorpius Malfoy, and Rose Weasley



Categories: Post-Hogwarts Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 61027 Chapters: 19 Completed: No
Published:
05/23/08 Updated: 09/08/09


Reviewer: potterstar Signed
Date: 08/07/09 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 A Sorted Problems

i'm basically screaming! fanfic stories i have read have putten Al and Scorpius in other houses, but THE ROSE WEASLEY in HUFFLEPUFF!!! nicely played.

Author's Response:

Glad you like it.

I mean...why not? LOL!

SLy

 

Wrong by Crystallic Rain
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 4]

Summary: He wanted her so badly and he hated it. He knew she was all wrong, that they were all wrong, but something still pulled painfully inside his brain every time he saw her. Rose/Scorpius

Categories: Other Pairing Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 1094 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
06/29/08 Updated: 07/03/08


Reviewer: potterstar Signed
Date: 10/13/09 Title: Chapter 1: Wrong

Really, really good description!

 

Summary: The final installment in the Potter’s Pentagon Trilogy. Read “The Five” and “The Truth” first, myess? Okay!

WARNING! Contains Muggle adventures in Diagon Alley, unusual eyebrows, cheesy clichés galore, psycho Ted, the not-so-lost years of Merlin, a school-wide singalong, the old potato joke, Tyrone’s Princess Bride obsession, Emma’s stubborn denial of the existence of Tyrone’s mustache, a graphic death, a joke shop product as a major plot device, hobo Jordan, Jordan hugging, Jordan pulling pranks, time travel, the Love Shack, angst, and worst of all, Professor Zabini.

It’s the sixth year for Potter’s Pentagon and company, and our heroes learn that in the wizarding world, coming of age has a somewhat weightier significance. Students are busy with an Inter-House Unity Project, Jordan is having weird dreams, Pansy and Ophidias Malfoy have been released from Azkaban, Professor Zabini has a mysterious project of his own, and almost everyone is acting strangely. Meanwhile, at the Ministry of Magic, a man with a vendetta against Ron Weasley is trying his hardest to get him in the biggest trouble possible. Is the only way to save him to travel into the past?

New talents are discovered, new friendships form and old ones change, pasts are dredged up, and, of course, there’s lots of good old-fashioned snogging. And one of the five kills for the first time… while another becomes a casualty of war.

Starring 2008 Quicksilver Quills Best Male Original Character runner-up Jordan Potter, Best Female Original Character nominees Ivy Potter, Haley Potter, Emma Weasley, and Giorgi Anderson, and Best Male Original Character nominee Ted Lupin! Nominated for 2008 Quicksilver Quills Best Post-Hogwarts Story.

Categories: Next Generation Genre: Warnings: Book 7 Disregarded

Word count: 183223 Chapters: 28 Completed: Yes
Published:
07/09/08 Updated: 03/15/10


Reviewer: potterstar Signed
Date: 01/18/09 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12: In Which Charybdis Is Nott Happy

cant wait till next chapter! the suspense is killing me

Author's Response: Oooh! Well, I'm submitting the next chapter tomorrow, so let's hope the mods like it!

 
Reviewer: potterstar Signed
Date: 09/12/09 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22: In Which Our Heroes Suffer Boo-Boos

Oh my god!!! But what happened to Tyrone? Is he still fighting Draco Malfoy? Please update SOON!!!!!

Author's Response: I'll give this much away to you-- the next chapter begins with him knocking out Draco. So yeah, at this point he's still fighting, but he wins and moves on.

 
Reviewer: potterstar Signed
Date: 08/23/09 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20: In Which Things Start To Heat Up

Oooh!! It's been a while since you've updated. You didn't like this chapter? It was AWESOME!!! Aaaww...a cliffie! What's going to happen next? :D

Author's Response: Thank you so much! The reason I didn't like this chapter is because I felt like I couldn't express Telemency the way I wanted, and I revised it a million times, to no avail! But I'm so glad you liked it. And from here... things get a lot more exciting!

 
Reviewer: potterstar Signed
Date: 05/24/09 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: In Which Jordan Has A Bad Experience With A Hobo

this chapter ROCKED!!!!!! if only emma had kissed tyrone!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! jordans a seer...cool. but he's acting a lil strange...guess it comes with the seer part. UPDATE SOON!!!!! CANNOT WAIT

Author's Response: Thank you! I loved writing this chapter. And yeah, Jordan's just a little weird, heh. Yeah, I wanted to smack Emma when she ran away, even though technically I made her not kiss Tyrone...

 

A Different View On Love by helz_belz
Rated: 3rd-5th Years [Reviews - 364]

Summary: James would do anything to get inside Lily’s head. Lily would do anything to get away from James. Lily was brewing a banned potion. James went to find her. Lily made a mistake and the potion exploded. James got his wish, but is it much more than he bargained for?

Now Complete!



After a year the Epilouge is now up! Come read for a bit of fun!!

Runner up QSQ - Best Chaptered Canon Romance


Reason for Nomination:
This is the most unique take on how James and Lily really got to know each other. The story is hilarious and keeps you laughing throughout, but it never lets you forget the serious stuff. Plus, she somehow manages to end each chapter with a nice cliffhanger.

~~hestiajones

Categories: James/Lily Genre: Warnings: Sexual Situations

Word count: 51560 Chapters: 15 Completed: Yes
Published:
07/23/08 Updated: 04/08/11


Reviewer: potterstar Signed
Date: 06/23/09 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter Eleven: The Head's Dormitory

aaaw!!!!!! that is so sweet. and cool. harry...

Author's Response: :)

 
Reviewer: potterstar Signed
Date: 06/23/09 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter Twelve: Objection!

i liked it!!! please update soon!!!! can't wait for the next chapters.

Author's Response: Thanks for the review :) Update details are now on my authors page.

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