Hey, I'm Alexi, and I go to Scotts Valley Middle School. I would be what I call a "one shot wonder" because that's all I write. My style mostly revolves around the inspiration from true emotions and meaningful lyrics of songs. Most of my fics are inspired by songs from a band called The Fray, which is really all I listen to. I love to write dark, as you can see from my current fic. I tend to express the darker sides of love and life in a very powerful way. And really all I write in is second person POV because it's the easiest way to express the emotions and words I try to portray.
DO NOT MAKE ME KILL YOU!!!!!
DO NOT MAKE ME KILL YOU!!!!! I CANNOT BELIEVE YOU WOULD DO THAT!!!!! Sorry. As you can probably tell, I am very pissed. And you may also see that I have left 24 comments precisely. I loved the rest of the story and I hope it rekindles!!!!!
Author's Response: Thanks so much for all of your reviews, they mean a lot to me!
Good. I like the writing and I can't wait to read more!
Awesome! Even better than the first chapter! You're good at building a story that can keep someone up at 12:17 a.m. on a Saturday night!!
The title is the thing that hooked me actually. I like the story alot and I found a song that describes the first few chapters...
You are an awesome writer......I could have a fic writing contest with you...that would be fun as hell!
Getting much better. I noticed your writing gets better as the romance comes in more. That's where your talent truly shines. Such a surprising pairing. I still love it though!
Yep, certainly hanging. I really should stop reading this. It's like an addiction. I want to finish the fanfic......I have to!
OMG! I am madly in love with this fanfic. I cannot stop reading it! Help me rehab!
YES!!!! I was waiting for something like that to happen. Very, very, very well written. I love this chapter!!!
You've kept me going for eight chapters and I'm not going to stop now!!!!!!
I love how you continue to emphasize that both are falling for each other but the relationship seems a little bit too lustic.
Awwwwww! Short but sweet. Still can't wait to read more.
Your writing was a bit shaky in the beginning but when you began to fill out the story a bit, your writing just came...alive
Definitely addicted. This fanfic is probably the best I've read on this site.
So cute! This is the farthest I've ever read into a fanfic. You'd better feel special. Normally I'll read one-shots just because I'm bored.
A bit longer than the other chapters but I held onto every moment of it! I find myself addicted to reading the intimate scenes because they are just so well written!
I'm really impressed. I didn't like the way the relationship unfolded at first but the way you describe feelings and *ahem* scenes have me hooked!!!!!
I forgot to comment on this for the last chapter but it can also apply to this one too. I love Pansy's feelings toward the realtionship and how sneaky she's being about it. Too me it just seems so....Pansy.
Out of the 16 chapters I've read, this one is the best. I've never stuck so closely to a fanfic before.