I am currently finishing my B.A. in Political Science at Rutgers University. I have only been a true Potter fan for the past year. (Originally, I was only interested in the movies.) However, I am still very much caught up in the "magic" of it all. I am fascinated by the story, and I absolutely fell in love with these characters.
I love this story so far. But when are you going to update? I want to know what happens next!
A look into Ron and Hermione's fifth-year minds to experience the spazzness and crazyism in first person.
Disclaimer: Sadly, I am not J. K. Rowling. I'm not even famous. Heck, I only have one story up on Mugglenet. But I'm still glad I can walk into J. K.'s world. And tap-dance back out again.
Additional warnings: May contain fluff, excessive randomness (AU), and minor plot twists!
I would also appreciate if NikkiSue/Nicole could mod this for me :]
Okay, so, I am LOVING that we get to see Ginny's concern for Harry in this too. Can we see more of that?
While Ron and Hermione have problems with words and akwardness, Harry and Ginny have the rather large I-like-you-I-like-you-too-but-wait-I'm-supposed-to-save-the-wizarding-world problem. It's complicated for these four friends.
Just as a suggestion, could we see Harry threaten Ron if he were to hurt Hermione? It would be cute.
Also, not that it's a big deal, but in the previous chapter you said that either Ron or Hermione were on the ninth floor. I thought Hogwarts only had seven regular floors and the dungeons down below. Like I said, not a big deal, but just something I noticed...
Author's Response: Thanks! As for your suggestion, I'm not sure I'll be able to get that in, considering I finished the story already. Sorry on the updates btw. There's only 1 more chapter but RL is crazy. Maybe I'll update over Thanksgiving break. Remind me lol. Also, I loooove the bond between R/H/Her/G! The best. And as for the 9th floor thing. Um. Okay. So Hogwarts has what....142 staircases? I always get confused between staircases and floor. I hoped no one would notice. Just like how I made a mistake with the days a while back and the chapter really should be on Saturday, but according to *me* its Friday. I'm not the best proofreader hahaa(: Anyway I enjoyed your review and keep checking back for more. --Maddy(:
Nice touch with them bumping noses! Very Ron!
Yes, please post the epilogue!
Author's Response: Thanks! I thought so too! I'll post it as soon as I get some free time.
The story is get so far! I am really enjoying all the little twists you are throwing in. I like how you develop these characters using the different points fo view. I'm loving it!
I'll make you a deal. You keep writing, I'll keep reading.
Author's Response: Works for me! I think I just sent a record time update(:. Most twists to come! --Maddy(:
I have thoroughly enjoyed this story.
Another great twist bringing Avril back in their lives at this later date!
Please keep writing! Also, I have a few things I have been working on that I plan to post soon, so keep an eye out for me.
Thanks for the story.
Author's Response: Thank you! I'm so sad it's over, I'll miss this whole experience a TON. And I promise I'll keep writing, even if it takes me forever. And I will definitely keep an eye out for you. PM me at the beta boards any time. Your welcome --Maddy(:
Excellent Story. It is abundantly clear that you understand the complexity of these characters, especially Ron, who I think isn't given enough credit for how much he grew up in the last two books.
I think everyone has always suspected that *something* transpired between Ron and Hermione while they stayed at Shell Cottage, but I must say that this exposition very much exceeded my expectations.
I do hope you keep writing! May I suggest a follow-up to this that finds Ron and Hermione together after the last Battle?
Author's Response: Thanks so much; I'm thrilled you enjoyed it. Obviously I'm the queen of wonderers when it comes to Shell Cottage. Someday maybe Jo will tell us what really went on in the house while Harry was dealing with Dobby. Until then, my imagination did what it did. :) Thanks for taking time to leave a review... I appreciate it.
I'm lovigng this story but when are you going to update? I'm extremely interested to know what happens next!