I've been out of the fandom for a year or so, and I'm starting to have major withdrawals, so please bare with me as I ease myself back in and attempt to finish the sequel to the story I started almost 5 years ago. . . .
the greatest thing you'll ever learn is just to love, and be loved in return
This story is so original, major kudos to you! The only question I have is doesn't Todd recognize her as the Hermione from the films he's in?? Since he resembles Draco so....shouldn't the real Hermione resemble the actress that Todd knows as well?? Anyways, I really enjoyed it!!
Great Chapter, and I'm glad my question was answered! On to the next chapter:D
This story is enthralling! Oh and sorry about ff.net. I have never and will never post anything there. fictionalley and MNFF is it for me. Sorry that they're giving you a hard time, just forget them, fa and MNFF are way better anyways!!
So for some reason I thought that Hermione and Todd would be hooking up...dunno why but I am much more excited if it's really Hermione and Draco! Woot! Great job again!!
This was a great chapter, I'm glad you let Draco see the picture!! Hurry and update, you're doing a fantabulous job so far!
Great chapter!! This story is awesome, I am so pleased that you updated! Thank you, and keep 'em coming!!!
Wonderful story!! It is absolutely captivating! It's definitely keeping me on the edge of my seat, hurry and update please!
This story is absolutely enrapturing! I love the POV it is written from. Not many people can pull stories like this off. Excellent work!
Alrighty then. I'm not sure where to start. One thing I think that this story is lacking is DETAIL. JKR is famous for her elaboration, and all of us as authors HAVE to do her justcie by at least trying to elaborate. "Harry was the most ugliest guy alive right now," has no emotion in it. To me, it just feels too blunt considering Harry just declared that he hated her. Another thing, more of an FYI, authors notes embedded in the story are very distracting. They are there mainly so that you can remind us of something. By reminding us that Ron was in the hospital...okay. But reminding us that Harry is hot? not so much. (Trust me, we all know he's hot;)) So I don't mean to flame at all, and I'm just trying to help, but think about those things, and I'm sure that your stories will improve.