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"Love is unexplainable. There are no words for it. You can’t express why you feel so. It just happens," James said. "“Don’t you think that if I had the choice I would have chosen to love someone who didn’t hate me in return?”

“No,” Sirius said simply.

“You’re right.” James said, sighing. “I’m so screwed up, Padfoot.”

The drama-filled romantic tale of Lily and James's mysterious but unfortunate tale. It started with love and ended with death. It makes you wonder about the things they tried to live for. Pre-HBP



Categories: James/Lily Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 94269 Chapters: 60 Completed: Yes
Published:
11/06/04 Updated: 12/15/06


Reviewer: tonks654 Signed
Date: 08/26/08 Title: Chapter 30: Mistakes

30 chapters left.......i didn't pertuculy like the last few chapters...i cant wait to hear about Lupin's transformation though!

 
Reviewer: tonks654 Signed
Date: 09/03/08 Title: Chapter 47: A Night To Remember

MAKE UP YOUR MIND LILY!!!!!!!!!! WHATS WRONG WITH U?

 
Reviewer: tonks654 Signed
Date: 09/03/08 Title: Chapter 48: I Need You

i wish i could ahve been here to read every chapter the second it came out...now no one will read my reviews probably..i like this chapter

 
Reviewer: tonks654 Signed
Date: 09/03/08 Title: Chapter 49: Cockiness

i still wish i had found out about fan fic earlier so I could experience waiting for every chapter...i still didnt love this chapter, although it was well written and suspensful, and some of my burning questions were answered..but i still have a couple like what happened to Peter? but o well....

 
Reviewer: tonks654 Signed
Date: 09/03/08 Title: Chapter 50: A Smoky Haze

cliffhanger sort of.........the bad thing is we know he doesnt die because he dies later in life with Voldemort...although it is fan fic so anything can happen...nice chapter

 
Reviewer: tonks654 Signed
Date: 09/03/08 Title: Chapter 51: A New Friend

i hope u see this review even though the book is done! I LOVE THIS BOOK!

 
Reviewer: tonks654 Signed
Date: 09/03/08 Title: Chapter 51: A New Friend

oh something i forgot to add...i wish u said how they got out of the fire....i still loved this chapter!

 
Reviewer: tonks654 Signed
Date: 09/03/08 Title: Chapter 52: Trust

um i have to ignore the top part...i loved this emotionalness of the chapter..did that make sense?

 
Reviewer: tonks654 Signed
Date: 09/03/08 Title: Chapter 53: The Tutor

welll ummm a not so pleasent suprise and how could we not forget Adams with her evil firecracker nails and her ugly squached up face (at least how I imagine her)??? Grace Adams......i could get used to that name......maybe

 
Reviewer: tonks654 Signed
Date: 09/03/08 Title: Chapter 54: She Speaks

YES I DO HATE COLE! KILL HIM! DROWN HIM! BOIL HIM IN HOT WATER! THROW HIM IN THE LAKE WITH MUGGLE HANDCUFFS ON! FEED HIM TO BUCKEBEAK! I DONT CARE HOW U DO IT JUST KILL HIM!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! oh my god...got a bit carried away there...but i do hate Cole at the moment.. and Lily make up ur mind!!!!!!! do u like him or not? This is James Potter were talking about!!!! sorry i can sometimes get a little to passionate

 
Reviewer: tonks654 Signed
Date: 08/24/08 Title: Chapter 4: Getting Serious With Sirius

So far I think this story is fabulous and really well-written! I can't wait to read more!!

 
Reviewer: tonks654 Signed
Date: 08/24/08 Title: Chapter 5: He Loves Ya Lil

still so awesome!

 
Reviewer: tonks654 Signed
Date: 08/24/08 Title: Chapter 8: Lakeside Drama

i am in love with this story!

 
Reviewer: tonks654 Signed
Date: 08/24/08 Title: Chapter 10: Truce With The Enemy

I LOVE THIS STORY!!!!!!

 
Reviewer: tonks654 Signed
Date: 08/24/08 Title: Chapter 11: Memories Not Forgotten

no!!! i have to go eat dinner but i want to read more!!!!!!!!!!!!!!1!!!!!

 
Reviewer: tonks654 Signed
Date: 08/24/08 Title: Chapter 12: Flower and Prongs

back!!! and its still AMAZING!

 
Reviewer: tonks654 Signed
Date: 09/06/08 Title: Chapter 60: Moving On

alright the questions:
Im not goiong to answer the first one because I don't have a lot of time...sorry!! but i deffinetly will.
Sirius was my favorite Jo created charcter.
I loved to hate Cole, he was my favorite OC
Um...Cole again
I will answer later when Ive got more time
I wish to see....the same amount of enthusiam as this one...there was absouletley nothing wrong with this book! welll except....
I didnt like how Sybll could go back in time and REmus could make a Portkey..but its fan fic so anything can happen. Im going to go read Catch My Fall right now! bye! thank u for the amazing ride

 
Reviewer: tonks654 Signed
Date: 08/24/08 Title: Chapter 14: Arrival of Fear

Being completley honest, this wasn't my FAVORITE chapter....something just didn't click with it..idk srry

 
Reviewer: tonks654 Signed
Date: 08/24/08 Title: Chapter 15: Wisdom of Dumbledore

yes, but good fluff!

 
Reviewer: tonks654 Signed
Date: 08/29/08 Title: Chapter 34: Fall To Pieces

Well, that's two marriges, but they are in 7th year...right? A lot has happened and I have so many questions that I am going back to look for because I think they have answers....What happened to Voldemort? Who was that crow? What about the dream? And WHAT ABOUT PETER AND THE DEATH EATER CLUB?!!? This chapter had suspense, grimaces, tears (not really) and sighs of relief this is one of the best Fan Fics I've ever read...although thats not saying much because I've only read 2! LOL!!! Still, it's supercalafragileisticexpealadocious!

 
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