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My Troubled Tyrant by Belledeg
Rated: Professors [Reviews - 516]

Summary: Past Featured StoryKeedie Dante has experienced many amazing things during her time at Hogwarts, including the hushed up drama that was the Chamber of Secrets. However, with two overachieving friends and a headmaster who does not even know she exists, Keedie feels that perhaps her seventh year will not be too spectacular. However, Dumbeldore sees her potential as a writer and enrols her in a simple writing course. Here, she meets the mysterious and terrifying Tom Riddle and they instantly get under one another's skin. She is drawn to his dark determination towards some unknown goal and he is fascinated by her, in every way. However, Tom's friends do not approve of Keedie and her unconventional ways and Keedie has many people trying to keep her away from the dark young man as well. Something inside tells Keedie that she can make him better, but even he assures her that this is an impossible task. But she's not one to give up easily...

"He is a dark one, Keedie. Try not to let him consume you entirely."

This story has the characters Albus Dumbledore, Armando Dippet, Moaning Myrtle, Rubeus Hagrid, Aaron Dante, Harry Potter, Ebony Abbott, Minerva McGonagall, Melena Creevey, Ollivander, Gregor Holmwood, Horace Slughorn and, of course, Tom Riddle and Keedie Dante...enjoy!

Winner of "Best Romance Between Other Characters" and nominated for "Best Female OC" in the 2009 Quicksilver Quill Awards

Categories: Other Pairing Genre: Warnings: Character Death, Sexual Situations, Strong Profanity, Violence

Word count: 152689 Chapters: 28 Completed: Yes
Published:
03/08/09 Updated: 09/06/09


Reviewer: bellatrix-black-lestrange Signed
Date: 07/28/09 Title: Chapter 22: Learn To Be Lonely

i have been waiting for this chapter for two days but it felt like two years !
i felt like a user waiting for my next drug !
As always brilliant please update soon i swear i am addicted ! ( and a little exclamation mark happy)

Author's Response: Glad you're hooked! :-)

 
Reviewer: bellatrix-black-lestrange Signed
Date: 07/25/09 Title: Chapter 12: Bring Him Home

ohhh very intamite ! love it as usual

Author's Response: So glad you like this chapter, it was a challenge to write. Keep up the R&R ing :-)

 
Reviewer: bellatrix-black-lestrange Signed
Date: 09/03/09 Title: Chapter 26: Bring Me to Life

the next chapter is the last *crying very much* i cant believe it i want keedie to survive and i want her and tom to live on forever. This was brilliant i must say and i know how tom has to end up but it would be great if we could just forget that. I cant wait for the chapter please update soon otherwise i feel afraid that the story might start to slip from my mind.

Author's Response: There's two more chapters, if you count the epilogue as one. Next chapter soon, I hope! :-)

 
Reviewer: bellatrix-black-lestrange Signed
Date: 09/03/09 Title: Chapter 26: Bring Me to Life

oh of course i had promised that i would tell you how i thought the story would end and seeing as it is pretty close i might as well tell you whilst i remember.

First of all i did think Keedie was going to die eventually , and still do. Reason- because i believe that you have made a character that means so much to tom that this is the only way i see it possible for him to become like we know later in furture. Also by doing so it is as if your excusing tom because of his loss from keedie he can punish the world. Well that's how i like to see it anyway.

But i am still unsure how she dies and i am not convinced that Tom will leave her to die now so i dont think that the tramp kills her.

I guess my biggest thing was that i did actually believe she would be dead by the end because i could not see them living as separate people right ?

Well i'll have to wait and see if i am right at all probably not loool

Author's Response: I should probably stress at this point to everyone that this stab wound is pretty deep. And loss of blood, and a fragile disposition, can kill you pretty quickly....but you're right; the next few chapters will cover everything. Thanks for the nominations by the way :D

 
Reviewer: bellatrix-black-lestrange Signed
Date: 09/03/09 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue--Big Bright Beautiful World

more than welcome but i should be thanking you for this brilliant story i mean i'd be mad not to nominate it !

Author's Response: Aw, thank you. I hope you feel the same when it ends! :-)

 
Reviewer: bellatrix-black-lestrange Signed
Date: 07/26/09 Title: Chapter 16: All the Things She Said

NOOOOOOOOOOO ! please don't let this be the end of tom and keedie i am starting to actually like tom riddle!

oh i almost forgot i have a question it is not of great importance just something i wanted to ask. Keedie's surname is it pronounced dan-te or dant with a silent e ?

Author's Response: It's pronounced like Dant-ay. Keep reviewing :-)

 
Reviewer: bellatrix-black-lestrange Signed
Date: 07/26/09 Title: Chapter 17: Song to Say Goodbye

i am actually crying ! how stupid ! but i am so upset that they broke up

Author's Response: Aw! Don't worry, things can only get better. Keep R&R ing! :)

 
Reviewer: bellatrix-black-lestrange Signed
Date: 08/10/09 Title: Chapter 23: Thanks For the Memories

yeaaaa i loveee it when i saw that you had updated i almost fell over.
It is just as brilliant as all the chapters but now we have foreseen keedie's future ! i'm glad though because in my mind i can see how it is going to pan out but if i'm right ? Well we'll just have to wait and see update soon please !!!!!!!!

Author's Response: Next chapter's in the queue. You'll have to let me know one day if your plan works out. ;-)

 
Reviewer: bellatrix-black-lestrange Signed
Date: 07/26/09 Title: Chapter 19: You Belong to Me

yay tom to the rescue ! this is just to much i am addicted to this story !

Author's Response: Glad to hear it! I'm pretty proud of that cliffhanger! :)

 
Reviewer: bellatrix-black-lestrange Signed
Date: 07/26/09 Title: Chapter 20: If I Can't Love Her

oh dear god kill him tom please just kill him !

Author's Response: Hahaha! It would be justafiable homicide, but Keeds wouldn't like it. :-)

 
Reviewer: bellatrix-black-lestrange Signed
Date: 07/26/09 Title: Chapter 21: A Guy Like You

oh no i've reached the end please update this is going to drive me insane ! i love this story i love tom and keedie ! and i hate having to wait lol

Author's Response: The next chapter is in the queue and should be up tomorrow or soon. So glad you like Tom and Keeds. Stay tuned :-)

 

Seeking a Reason by mzap
Rated: 6th-7th Years [Reviews - 32]

Summary: Five Reasons to Hate James Potter II:
1. He's arrogant (thinks he's the best thing to come into Quidditch... ha! Being a five time winner of Witch Weekly's most charming smile does not make you a Quidditch star)
2. He's a womanizer (there's only so many fans you can please, James)
3. He calls me a bad Seeker (oh, I'm sorry, I must have gotten the wrong impression when I caught the Snitch in front of your face twenty times)
4. On a broader note, he insults me in his interviews (honestly, my jabs aren't nearly as horrible)
5. He has this nagging little thing where he criticizes everything I do (next he's going to be telling me that I shouldn't start dating Felix Lupin)

If you ever ask Libby MacFarlan about James Potter II, prepare yourself for a long speech. She hates him. End of story. But when Quidditch rivalries get personal, egos start clashing and they soon find themselves in the midst of a scandal, involving nosy paparazzi, insulting news articles, obsessive fans, and one very jealous Felix Lupin. This could get complicated....

Excerpt from Chapter 7: The Kiss:

There had been the after party with her friends. Her parents had decided not to attend, Hamish feeling that he was too old for such parties. Nevertheless, the rest of the Montrose Magpies attended… and there had been drinks. Oh, Merlin. She must have gotten drunk again. That explained the hangover. And where in the world was her shirt?

Libby pulled herself up in a seated position, rubbing her temples. She found her shirt lying on a vase on the coffee table, carelessly thrown aside. She shivered and covered herself with a blanket. Felix suddenly jumped awake and averted his eyes when he saw Libby.

“Oh, you’re awake,” he said. Slowly, he got up and walked across the room, headed towards the kitchen area. “Would you like some juice?” he asked, turning to look at her.

She turned around. “Y-y-y-yes,” she yawned. “Felix, what happened last night?”



Categories: Other Pairing Genre: Warnings: Mild Profanity, Sexual Situations, Substance Abuse

Word count: 13963 Chapters: 7 Completed: No
Published:
04/09/09 Updated: 07/25/10


Reviewer: bellatrix-black-lestrange Signed
Date: 04/12/09 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

no no no why is james potter evil ?

Author's Response: Um, he's not. That's just Libby's view of him. He's not an evil character; he just has several bad qualities, like all the other characters. Thanks for reading.

 
Reviewer: bellatrix-black-lestrange Signed
Date: 04/26/09 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1: The Interview

ohhh okai i get it now
yea i liked this chapter i cant wait to see james' relpy

Author's Response: Thanks for the reply and I'm glad you liked the chapter. :)

 

Brothers & Sisters by ringobeatlesfan4
Rated: 3rd-5th Years [Reviews - 17]

Summary:

They fight. They argue. They threaten never to speak again. But in the end, it’s all alright. Because they’re brothers and sisters, or at least that’s what it feels like. James, Albus, and Lily Potter are the closest siblings you’d ever find. Rose and Hugo Weasley have their differences, but in the end, they would die for each other. And as for Scorpius Malfoy… he’s unlike anything the others have seen before. But he’s okay… because he saved them on countless occasions.

This is the story of the bonds between siblings, cousins, and friends. It’s the story of forgetting the past to create a brighter future. And it’s the story of learning to let go of the old, and holding on to the new.



Categories: Post-Hogwarts Genre: Warnings: Character Death, Substance Abuse, Violence

Word count: 4300 Chapters: 2 Completed: No
Published:
04/12/09 Updated: 05/17/09


Reviewer: bellatrix-black-lestrange Signed
Date: 05/18/09 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2: Surprises

aww poor hugo :(

love the idea about the chair and the trio on it great !

Author's Response: Hi, BBL! I know whatcha mean, poor Hugo! But a woman my mother used to work with has MS, and it's captivated me. And the chair with the Trio on it was just a random idea I came up with. It would be pretty dang cool I think! Thanks for R&Ring. {BeccA}

 
Reviewer: bellatrix-black-lestrange Signed
Date: 04/22/09 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

omg quick submit another chapter i'm hanging on the edge here !!!!!!!!!!

very good i liked it but i need to get a couple of things clear James is in his seventh year , rose,albus and Scorpius are in the sixth year, and hugo and lily are in the third year right ?

Author's Response: hiya, bellatrix! I'm in the fifth day of the chapter two editing process, and then I'll have it submitted. I know, the years are a bit confusing! But actually, James is (in fact) in his seventh year (when he comes into the story, it says "James, the eldest of the cousins (being in his seventh year and all)", and Hugo and Lily are in third, but Rose, Scorpius, and Albus are in their fifth. The way you can tell that is because when Rose, Albus, and Scorpius are starting their first year in the epilogue of DH, Lily complains about starting Hogwarts "in two years". So she's two years below them. Thanks again, {BeccA}

 

The Last Sunset by eternalangel
Rated: 6th-7th Years [Reviews - 3]

Summary: Narcissa Malfoy lived the charmed life. She had it all: beauty, wealth, affluence and a son she adored, but when Narcissa Malfoy finds out she has a devasting Muggle disease that can not be cured by wizard medicine, she quickly learns what is truly important in her life. For ahead of Narcissa lies a turbulent journey to acceptance and understanding, if only she has the courage to face it.


Dedicated to Elizabeth "Toni" Vouaux-Stinecipher R.I.P.


This was written for Vindictus Viridian’s Written Word Term Challenge

Categories: Dark/Angsty Fics Genre: Warnings: Character Death, Mild Profanity, Substance Abuse, Violence

Word count: 1020 Chapters: 1 Completed: No
Published:
04/15/09 Updated: 04/27/09


Reviewer: bellatrix-black-lestrange Signed
Date: 04/27/09 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue: In the End There is a Beginning

this is truly touching i am almost crying in fact i think i am !

never have i read anything like this it is truly a wonderful view on the pain that cancer causes

and seeing as it runs through my family i can relate to this

Author's Response: Thank you very much for my first review. I really appreciate it since this story was really close to me as well. Someone I love recently passed from cancer and this story is in tribute to her. It was a difficult story to write, but it was worth it in the end.

 

Apollo by MorganRay
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 3]

Summary:

For Narcissa, the common and mundane has never been good enough. She will settle for nothing less than a god, for she is nothing less than a goddess.


Categories: General Fics Genre: Warnings: Mild Profanity

Word count: 4564 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
07/11/09 Updated: 07/17/09


Reviewer: bellatrix-black-lestrange Signed
Date: 07/17/09 Title: Chapter 1: Apollo

this is really nice. I love this Adam character he is intriguing, i dont usually read short stories but i enjoyed this one.

Author's Response: Thanks!

 

Becoming My Sisters' Enemy by AngelEyez3954
Rated: 3rd-5th Years [Reviews - 4]

Summary: Andromeda Black had it all; great sisters, a name that was respected (and feared), and wealth beyond belief, but she gave it all up for love. This is a coming of age story about a Pureblood, who wasn't concerned with a person's blood status. Follow Andromeda as she struggles to break free from the Noble and Most Ancient House of Black, and becomes an enemy to her sisters. Formally known as "A Raven In A Family Of Snakes" - re-written and revised!

Categories: General Fics Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 7701 Chapters: 3 Completed: No
Published:
08/15/09 Updated: 12/17/09


Reviewer: bellatrix-black-lestrange Signed
Date: 08/17/09 Title: Chapter 1: The Sisters Black

this is a wonderful story of the black sisters i hope you update soon so i can keep on reading

Author's Response: Thanks so much! Chapter 2 should be up soon :)

 
Reviewer: bellatrix-black-lestrange Signed
Date: 09/07/09 Title: Chapter 2: Dark Arts and Diagon Alley

brilliant i love the way it is written, i mean some stories i find it really hard to flow along with but i love the way you write. I guess it helps that the Black sisters are among my favourite characters in HP please update soon :)

Author's Response: Thank you so much! So sorry for the long delay in responding! I'll have more up soon :) ~LJ

 

What Winning Won by grangergirl35
Rated: 3rd-5th Years [Reviews - 12]

Summary: Victoire, Louis, and Dominique Weasley. James, Albus, and Lily Potter. Hugo and Rose Weasley. Fred and Roxanne Weasley. Molly and Lucy Weasley. Darcy Brown. Georgie Wood. Yvonne and Willy Fletcher. Theodore Lupin. Charles Finnigan. Paul and Gina MacMillan. Horace Maclaggen. Ursula Thomas. Rodney Patil. Scorpius Malfoy. Patricia and Dennis Longbottom.
This is the Next Generation. This is what victory meant to the world.

Categories: Next Generation Genre: Warnings: Violence

Word count: 3868 Chapters: 3 Completed: No
Published:
06/27/11 Updated: 11/26/11


Reviewer: bellatrix-black-lestrange Signed
Date: 07/07/11 Title: Chapter 1: Victoire

Haha, Victorie's fiesty challenge at the end- very nice.
I really like the idea of having each chapter in a different p.o.v, it makes it easier to get to know the characters and keeps it interesting!

Update soon, I'm intrigued to see what your take is on the next character.

Author's Response: I'm eager to update soon - and I want to introduce other Next-gen characters, not just the usual Scorpius Malfoy, the Potter kids, and the Weasley kids.

 
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