Trick or Treat!
3. She clicks on her mouse and swipes her wand;
Some stories go up, and some stories are gone.
Stories of her own? Why, she has plenty!
Fewer than one-hundred, but far more than twenty.
i knew it ! bloody snape when it comes to Lily and James i am totally good. In the HP books however, i am drawn to the dark side !
Another great chapter i just hope you update before i finish the chapters
Author's Response: I never responded to your review (I'm catching up now *slaps wrist*) Chapter 15 should be up fairly soon if you're still reading.
Oh dear i sense bad things with Phyllida oh yea i've been meaning to ask how do you pronounce that ?
Author's Response: Hmmm, you'll know now about Phyllida (pronounced Fill ida) Thanks for the review, I'm glad you're enjoying the story.) Carole xxx
i knew it but what is up with Sonia she is a character that i am beginning not to like another fantastic chapter
Author's Response: Oh Sonia's not really mean - just a bit superficial. She gets a bit more than she bargained for in later chapters. *winks*
I wonder if Remus smells tonks ?
Author's Response: Ahhhh. well it's changeable and she is a Metamorphmagus ... so who knows? Thank you for taking the time to read and review - I do appreciate it. Carole xxx
oh dear ! please update i can't wait to read the next chapter
Author's Response: Ahhhh! Trying hard. I've been distracted by holidays and other fics - poor Lions they have to wait a bit. Carole xxx
* giggles profoundly * This is great !
The imagery and flow is great :)
I can see that you must truly want a certain Mr.Black lol.
My mum loves this song, it's by Eartha Kitt isn't it? Well that's the version my mum loves, I'll have to show her this.
Great Job :)
Author's Response: Eartha Kitt's is def the best version, although Kylie and Madonna did versions too. Ha ha - Sirius Black - YUM!
well I'm not going to lie this is strange ! and that is why i wanted to read it because not many show Harry's son in this light
i like the way that you've cut out all the fairytale and made it realistic i'll keep looking for updates
Author's Response: Thank you for reviewing! I hope you continue to like the story. ~Sayla
ha ha i loved it i love this song by miley cyrus and this was just sooo funnny please do another one
Author's Response: Next one's in the queue!
wow he actually showed her his memories ! and Mel and Holmwood :S i never saw that happening.
Another satisfying chapter i am really scared that it will come to an end i am actually in love with this couple
please update soon :D
Author's Response: Will do. Mel and Grego deserve each other. :)
Honestly at first i thought that you should have left it at the last chapter but now reading this one i can see why you didn't, it was amazing. But i'm sad that it's now ended i feel as if i have been apart of this journey with tom and keedie and the story rocks !!!
It is so sad but the ending makes it feel complete, and you have 100% convinced me that tom riddle is not what he seems
Author's Response: Yay! That was my mission. Thanks for reading and reviewing this story, it truly means a lot. :D
wow this chapter is mind blowing ! i have cried almost the whole way through it and i to feel empty but satisfied. I know keedie had to die to make the story fit with J.K. Rowling's but still it doesn't make me feel any happier, at least i can rely on the thought that if keedie would have lived tom would have been different.
Honestly i thought this could have been the last chapter but obviously epilogue is kinda different.
Much praise to the story :D and both hands in the air i miss Keedie.
Author's Response: Aw, thanks. I'm sorry I had to kill her. I do feel bad. So glad you approve of the chapter and the epilogue should be soon. :D
okai i admit i have looked at this fic several times and just carried on looking (it is not the usual catagory i would choose) but something told me to start reading it and i am soo glad i did. I have no read five chapters without break and i love this story !
Author's Response: Aw, thank you. I'm so glad you like it and you kept reading. Please keep R&R ing :D
wow this is good finally some connection between the two i cant wait to find out what goes wrong !
Author's Response: Oh dear, many many things! Please keep reviewing! :-)
woooowwww loved it omg i can't even describe it i just know that it blew my mind reading it
Author's Response: *blushes* Thank you. Please keep telling me what you think, I love to know. :-)
i actually love this couple but why can't they just not be interupted for once!
Author's Response: Because then there would be no story ;-)
i have been waiting for this chapter for two days but it felt like two years !
i felt like a user waiting for my next drug !
As always brilliant please update soon i swear i am addicted ! ( and a little exclamation mark happy)
Author's Response: Glad you're hooked! :-)
ohhh very intamite ! love it as usual
Author's Response: So glad you like this chapter, it was a challenge to write. Keep up the R&R ing :-)
the next chapter is the last *crying very much* i cant believe it i want keedie to survive and i want her and tom to live on forever. This was brilliant i must say and i know how tom has to end up but it would be great if we could just forget that. I cant wait for the chapter please update soon otherwise i feel afraid that the story might start to slip from my mind.
Author's Response: There's two more chapters, if you count the epilogue as one. Next chapter soon, I hope! :-)
oh of course i had promised that i would tell you how i thought the story would end and seeing as it is pretty close i might as well tell you whilst i remember.
First of all i did think Keedie was going to die eventually , and still do. Reason- because i believe that you have made a character that means so much to tom that this is the only way i see it possible for him to become like we know later in furture. Also by doing so it is as if your excusing tom because of his loss from keedie he can punish the world. Well that's how i like to see it anyway.
But i am still unsure how she dies and i am not convinced that Tom will leave her to die now so i dont think that the tramp kills her.
I guess my biggest thing was that i did actually believe she would be dead by the end because i could not see them living as separate people right ?
Well i'll have to wait and see if i am right at all probably not loool
Author's Response: I should probably stress at this point to everyone that this stab wound is pretty deep. And loss of blood, and a fragile disposition, can kill you pretty quickly....but you're right; the next few chapters will cover everything. Thanks for the nominations by the way :D
more than welcome but i should be thanking you for this brilliant story i mean i'd be mad not to nominate it !
Author's Response: Aw, thank you. I hope you feel the same when it ends! :-)