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Summary: James Potter: Marauder. Lily Evans: Prefect. They're both seventh years at Hogwarts. They're also about to have a pretty interesting year--complete with a few detentions, pranks, confusion, and laughter--in which they get through school, make some trouble and maybe, just maybe, sort out their feelings for each other.

Thanks to all you who have made it possible for this story to be in the Top Tens. It was a very happy moment when I first saw my story on the list, and I love being able to go back and see it there now. Still. Yay!

Throughout the latter half of 2010, and the first half of 2011, I re-edited this story. The changes were mostly to fix stray (and annoying) grammar and spelling errors, but also to rework some plot points in an effort to stay truer to canon. I also updated the style; having written this story so long ago, my writing has definitely developed (and I would say gotten better), so I edited to reflect that. (I apologize for the errors that were in the story before all this editing. I found them immensely distressing when I reread my chapters. Heartbreaking, really.)


Big “thank yous” go to the three people who helped edit/nitpick the first edition of this novel: violagirl, fairiesandcream, and Omagus.
And yes, this story is up on Fanficition.net under the penname: Io.Sono.Emilia.
Of course, as a disclaimer, I’m not JK Rowling. The Potterverse does not belong to me, but I am in it and love it.

Categories: James/Lily Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 158315 Chapters: 50 Completed: Yes
Published:
10/28/05 Updated: 07/23/07


Reviewer: bellatrix-black-lestrange Signed
Date: 08/22/08 Title: Chapter 50: The End

wonderful story i really enjoyed reading it you should consider writing more

 

Love Can't Be Stopped by ambush
Rated: 6th-7th Years [Reviews - 146]

Summary: New year, new start, new feelings. Has James' newly deflated ego and mature attitude finally won over the heart of Lily Evans? With a mixture of embarrassing situations, falling out of bed, and roaming hands, this year could be an interesting one.


My first fanfic everybody, so any criticism is very welcome! enjoy!



Categories: James/Lily Genre: Warnings: Sexual Situations

Word count: 22333 Chapters: 10 Completed: No
Published:
12/09/05 Updated: 08/24/08


Reviewer: bellatrix-black-lestrange Signed
Date: 08/25/08 Title: Chapter 10: An Eventful Holiday Season (part 2)

this is really good please add some more chapters soon

Author's Response: Thank you, and more chapters are being written :)

 

Beneath The Shell by Sly Severus
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 27]

Summary: Andromeda takes a young Tonks to the beach. She quickly finds herself exhausted and falls asleep. Tonks decides to explore on her own. She meets someone her mother never expected her to meet.

Categories: General Fics Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 2045 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
06/17/06 Updated: 06/18/06


Reviewer: bellatrix-black-lestrange Signed
Date: 09/10/09 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

this is wonderful i love the fact that it is just the too of them no one watching

Author's Response: Thanks so much. This is one of my personal favs.

 

My Deliverance by TwinSuns
Rated: Professors [Reviews - 426]

Summary: Past Featured StoryVoldemort's rising reign of terror, NEWTs, death attempts, a Headship, a tangled affair with James Potter, hilarity, grief, love, secrecy, maddness... it's almost hard to believe that I've survived to graduate. I am Lily Evans, and this is my 7th year.

Categories: James/Lily Genre: Warnings: Sexual Situations, Violence

Word count: 93594 Chapters: 20 Completed: No
Published:
07/09/06 Updated: 10/29/09


Reviewer: bellatrix-black-lestrange Signed
Date: 08/12/08 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter Eight: Sacrifice, Part I

i hope another chapter is coming soon as i am eager to find out what happens next !!!!!

 

Summary:

2009 QSQs: Runner-up: Best Romance - Other Character Story


Add together one ladies' man, one Quidditch player, one werewolf, and one soon-to-be traitor. Then, mix in one imaginative idiot, one fiery redhead, one clever Ravenclaw, and one blonde artist. Stir counterclockwise until trouble occurs, and you are dealing with one of the best-loved group of friends in Hogwarts history. Follow the story of the four Marauders and four equally troublesome girls. See them deal with their first encounters of love, sorrow, heartache… and Death Eaters. How will these future Order members cope with the ordeals that life throws at them? Will love blossom in what was once thought a highly unlikely place? What do you do when the person you care about most in the world doesn’t seem to notice you at all? Will a well-kept secret shatter the foundations of a seven-year friendship? Follow the lives of these friends through their last year at school to the dramatic final battle with Lord Voldemort two decades later.

Warnings are for later chapters, and any sexual situations are very minor.

Chapter Twenty Two: "The Snakes Strike" is in the queue. Excerpt:

Perfume filled his nostrils as Emma walked passed and Rosier’s gaze lingered on her bare, pale legs as the group headed outdoors. “Don’t you just love summer?” he inquired of Regulus, a hungry sneer lighting his face.

“This is ridiculous,” Regulus announced in a furious whisper, “we’re never going to get them alone!”

“Have faith, Black,” commanded Rosier smoothly. “Girls are well renowned for their desire for girly chats. I’m sure they’ll slip off the shackles of their chaperones soon enough.”


Categories: Marauder Era Genre: Warnings: Character Death, Sexual Situations, Substance Abuse, Violence

Word count: 175402 Chapters: 28 Completed: No
Published:
02/03/07 Updated: 01/16/10


Reviewer: bellatrix-black-lestrange Signed
Date: 01/16/10 Title: Chapter 28: Chapter 22 - The Snakes Strike

Amazing! *She says, with an open mouth and boggling eyes.*

It sooo lived up to the expectations, the Kirsty and Regulus scene was mind-blowing. At first, I thought you was going to let her give up! So I was practically dancing when her Kirtsy-ness came through.

I absolutely love the Regulus characterization, his jealously of his brother and rivalry with him. But also him being very evil now :)

Great job, I mean I'm finding hard to say how great it was. As always, you leave me longing for the next part. Yes, I am wondering if they tell the Marauders, and Sirius' reaction !

Lauren

 
Reviewer: bellatrix-black-lestrange Signed
Date: 09/03/09 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 21 - Who Said that Beauty and the Beast was just a Fairytale?

YOUR BACK *squeals of delight* and for the record the chapter rocks !!!!!! I love the fact that you decided to get Hayley and Remus back together because that was torture so now we just have to work on Sirius and Kirsty yay !!!!!!!! oh yea please update quicker this time because my hopes are high : D

 
Reviewer: bellatrix-black-lestrange Signed
Date: 04/26/09 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 20 - The Curious Incident of Two Wet Gryffindors in a Dormitory

i hate debbie swain too
Sirius really needs to get over her quick soo Kirsty doesn't move on

another great chapter i cant wait for the next :-)

 

Love Conquers by dumbly_dorr
Rated: 3rd-5th Years [Reviews - 321]

Summary: If you're looking for the usual James-loves-Lily-but-Lily-hates-James storyline, then this isn't it. The thing is, Lily doesn't hate James at all, he can just be annoying at the best of times. As she comes to realise why she doesn't hate him, it leads to the famous love we all know about. Set against the backdrop of a warring magical world where nothing is certain, can James and Lily hold onto each other and fight?

UPDATE August 08: It's FINISHED! Thank you so much to all those who have read and reviewed this story, I have loved your support. i hope there are still people out there who are willing to read it. Keep an eye out for more stories by me! UPDATE February '08: I have changed the chapter names of some of the 'Defied' chapters, to make this fit and to make it more plausible, as I see the 'thrice defying' of Voldemort as happening when James and Lily are part of the Order of the Phoenix.

UPDATE 20th September: I have altered my facts in the chapter 'Once Defied' as I made mistakes in the ages of James and Lily. It didn't matter so much in this chapter but had annoying repercusions for future chapters. It should all now be correct.


Categories: James/Lily Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 70122 Chapters: 33 Completed: Yes
Published:
02/20/07 Updated: 07/21/08


Reviewer: bellatrix-black-lestrange Signed
Date: 08/09/08 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33: Love Conquers

This made me cry this is how it should be this how the lily and james story should have been you are an amazing writer

 

You Want To Make A Memory? by Potter
Rated: 3rd-5th Years [Reviews - 1183]

Summary: Past Featured StoryChapter Ninety Six is posted!

This is the story of four boys. This is the story of a boy from a family he wants to escape from. This is the story of a boy who is from a family he loves deeply, but lacks the gift of a best friend. This is the story of a boy who has been living with a curse his entire life, fighting to overcome it. This is the story of a boy who wishes to show people what he can do. This is the story of how these four boys came to know each other, of how they became friends. This is the story of their unbreakable bond, of a bond that could survive any test, any trial. This is a story that will ultimately end in tragedy.

Nominated for a 2007 and 2009 Quicksilver Quill Award - Best Marauder's Era Featured Mugglenet Fanfiction, October 2011

Categories: Marauder Era Genre: Warnings: Character Death, Strong Profanity, Violence

Word count: 401906 Chapters: 96 Completed: Yes
Published:
04/15/07 Updated: 09/02/09


Reviewer: bellatrix-black-lestrange Signed
Date: 08/16/09 Title: Chapter 75: Into the Woods

very good i like the sirius on snape ! but i thought that lily and James would fight Voldemort in all honesty.

However, the writing flowed nicely and loved the fact it was in the forest of dean brilliant ! keep updating :)

Author's Response: Don't worry, there'll be fighting Voldemort sometime, probably during their next defiance. This was their first time ever seeing him, James's first instinct was to get out alive. Thanks for reading!

 

Vertigo by Lioness06
Rated: 3rd-5th Years [Reviews - 149]

Summary: Lily liked stability and security in her life. As Lily enters into her seventh year at Hogwarts, shes eager to be surrounded once again by the same friends, students, classes, professors, and rules. Instead she finds her thoughts in disorder and feelings toward a particular Gryffindor student whirling dizzyingly around in her mind. It all started, and where this story begins, at the end of Lilys sixth year where an unexpected conversation brings to light new information.

Categories: James/Lily Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 38894 Chapters: 7 Completed: Yes
Published:
06/20/07 Updated: 10/17/07


Reviewer: bellatrix-black-lestrange Signed
Date: 08/18/08 Title: Chapter 7: Sic erat in fatis

wonderful story

Author's Response: Thanks so much!

 

Kickin' It at the Top by Soap
Rated: 6th-7th Years [Reviews - 820]

Summary: A Marauder-era fic - this story takes a look at all the characters we've come to love (and hate), as well as an OC or two thrown in for good measure. Follow the Marauders through seven years at Hogwart's, with appearances from the infamous Black sisters, Lucius Malfoy, Regulus Black, and of course the one and only Severus Snape.


There are a bunch of pairings in this story (although romance is not necessarily the central theme) to include James/Lily, Lucius/Narcissa, a splash of Lucius/Bella and unrequited Snape/Lily, and finally, plenty of Sirius/OC. Enjoy!

Over 120,000 reads! Wow! Thanks everyone!

Categories: Marauder Era Genre: Warnings: Book 7 Disregarded, Sexual Situations

Word count: 67630 Chapters: 55 Completed: Yes
Published:
09/10/07 Updated: 06/15/08


Reviewer: bellatrix-black-lestrange Signed
Date: 03/30/09 Title: Chapter 55: Epilogue

this is the most heart wrenching story i have read so far i started crying 15 minutes ago and now i cant stop i guess next time i wont get brave and read to the end

great story i have loved reading it

 

Amphibious Lizards by Apollonious
Rated: 6th-7th Years [Reviews - 117]

Summary: They are all talented, some more than others. Some play Quidditch. Others are known for their brilliance in academics. They are the Marauders and a group that has lain in the shadows up to now, called the Lady Firebrands, known for their hot tempers and rather subdued practical jokes.

Romance will bloom.

Rivalries will blossom.

The author will try to stop using so many bad plant puns.

The story of Moony, Wormtail, Padfoot, and Prongs' NEWT years will be told.

These are the Amphibious Lizards.


Categories: James/Lily Genre: Warnings: Alternate Universe, Character Death, Mild Profanity, Sexual Situations, Violence

Word count: 70066 Chapters: 24 Completed: No
Published:
12/01/07 Updated: 05/25/12


Reviewer: bellatrix-black-lestrange Signed
Date: 07/17/09 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14: Sprained Ankles

wow i have been reading this from the start but i dont think i have given many reviews ? well i'm not sure ? but anyways this chapter does deserve one as it is really good i hope you keep updating

Author's Response: Thank you so much for the review. I'm really glad you enjoyed the chapter.

 

Great Expectations by Cassandras Cross
Rated: 6th-7th Years [Reviews - 505]

Summary: A weekend trip to the mysterious Rose Cottage leads to Ginny's second pregnancy and Hermione's first. The Potters and Weasleys take on “The Next Great Adventure” as they anticipate the births of Albus Potter and Rose Weasley.

NOW COMPLETE!


Categories: General Fics Genre: Warnings: Sexual Situations

Word count: 107864 Chapters: 26 Completed: Yes
Published:
01/13/08 Updated: 07/25/08


Reviewer: bellatrix-black-lestrange Signed
Date: 08/11/08 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15: Puzzles, Plans, and Portents

amazing story i can't stop reading

Author's Response: Thanks!

 
Reviewer: bellatrix-black-lestrange Signed
Date: 08/11/08 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 26: Seven Years Later

fantasic story it's obvious your a natural writer

Author's Response: I don't know about 'natural' as I struggle a lot with my writing, but I'm glad I make it look easy. Thanks.

 

Summary: Victoire Weasley can hardly believe it herself. How is it that she's suddenly developed feelings for her best friend, Teddy Lupin, and in his last year of Hogwarts too? Now she must spend her sixth year not only adjusting her long-held sensibilities of how their relationship should work, but his as well.

There's not always a reason for everything that happens, and sometimes the reward for action looks more like a consequence. But that's just how life goes sometimes.

Categories: Other Pairing Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 13854 Chapters: 5 Completed: Yes
Published:
01/18/08 Updated: 07/28/08


Reviewer: bellatrix-black-lestrange Signed
Date: 08/09/08 Title: Chapter 5: Epilogue

if J.K.Rowling ever wrote a book about the future of harry potter this should be included it was fantastic to read.

 

Summary: If a rose is called by any other name, does it smell as sweet? To Scarlet never realized how much fear a name could provoke. Throughout her life, the name Tonks had become as familiar as her right arm. She is estatic when she receives her letter inviting her to Hogwarts School of Witchcraft and Wizardry. Despite her happiness, she is confused at the name on the letter. How could one name transform friends into enemies? Who is Scarlet Black? But more importantly, who is she?


This is what she wants to know.

Categories: Alternate Universe Genre: Warnings: Abuse, Alternate Universe, Character Death, Sexual Situations, Violence

Word count: 50077 Chapters: 31 Completed: Yes
Published:
01/21/08 Updated: 04/12/10


Reviewer: bellatrix-black-lestrange Signed
Date: 04/05/09 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

this story great but I'm confused with the whole last name situation is black or lestrange ????

Author's Response: I apoligize for not being clear. Scarlet's real last name is Black, although the name on her letter was Lestrange. This will all be explained in following chapters.

 
Reviewer: bellatrix-black-lestrange Signed
Date: 07/13/09 Title: Chapter 8: Unappreciated Genius

all this talk about regulus black makes me think that he is scarlet's dad but then that whole thing with the lestrange as a last name makes me think different hmmm.... please update so i can read on and find out more

Author's Response: Will do!

 
Reviewer: bellatrix-black-lestrange Signed
Date: 09/03/09 Title: Chapter 9: One By One

hmmm well Regulus Black i am surprised but the mother is what grips me the most who could be her mother update soon :D

Author's Response: Will do.

 

Daughter of the Dark Side by Lyra Lestrange
Rated: 3rd-5th Years [Reviews - 305]

Summary: Past Featured Story

Lindsey Tonks appears to be a normal, almost invisible Hogwarts student, but underneath her is someone far from normal. What the world doesn't know is that Lindsey is the daughter of two well-known imprisoned Death Eaters, and has an identity she must hide from the world. Underneath Lindsey is a girl named Lyra Lestrange, a girl who is meant to be a secret forever. But will it last forever?

*Begins in GoF and follows the series through DH.

**Will appeal to fans of the Black family! Prominent characters are Bellatrix, Tonks, Andromeda, Sirius, and (to an extent) Narcissa.

Part Four Synopsis:

It's the summer after Albus Dumbledore's death, and the whole world is falling to Voldemort and the Death Eaters. Broken-hearted Lyra, unable to return to Hogwarts, must go into hiding with her family. It doesn't last long, and eventually Lyra is faced with a choice: join or die. Lyra's decision comes with many surprises, including a new ally who follows her to the final battle of good versus evil. While Lyra's path may seem clear, she finds herself torn between two sides for the final time, and in the end, despite tragedy and loss, Lyra accomplishes the impossible...which defies all of the agreements she and her family ever made.

Three years later, the fic has been completely finished! Enjoy reading it without having to wait for new chapters. Thanks to those who patiently waited and faithfully reviewed!



Categories: Alternate Universe Genre: Warnings: Alternate Universe, Character Death

Word count: 156762 Chapters: 57 Completed: Yes
Published:
04/25/08 Updated: 03/05/11


Reviewer: bellatrix-black-lestrange Signed
Date: 07/17/09 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 24- Aftermath

awww this is wonderful i am really happy her secret is out because it will make the story interesting.
Sirius dying is sad even though i knew he would it still upsets me.
I LOVE this chapter please keep updating

Author's Response: Thank you! When I started this, I don't think I was going to let her secret out until the very end, but that didn't seem to make sense and this works so much better! You're right, the story will become more interesting. I hated having to kill off Sirius, but it has to happen :( He's one of my favorite characters and I wish Lyra had known him longer so there would have been more scenes with him. Anyway, glad you liked this one!

 
Reviewer: bellatrix-black-lestrange Signed
Date: 07/24/09 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 25- Going Back

i like the fact that she is so much like bellatrix and constantly uses bellatrix's signiture curse when she is angry. And i am sensing that she is going to try and find out as much about her mother as she can but i still can not figure out what may happen in the end i have been thinking about it but i am completely stuck! I guess that i will just have to wait for another update. Fantastic writing by the way you always amaze me with each update.

- lauren

Author's Response:

She is going to find out as much about her mother as she can--that's actually the main focus of part three :) When I started this story even I wasn't exactly sure where it would go and how the end would be, but it worked out--however, it's quite a long way off and a lot of things will unfold between now and then! Thanks for continuing to read this and thanks for the review!

 
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