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Harry Potter and the Unspeakable Power by mrsgeorgeweasley

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: After the trauma of his sixth year Harry and his friends enter into their last year of magical education at Hogwarts School of Witchcraft and Wizardry. The trio try to balance passing their exams with fighting Voldemort and planning their futures. Despite all that, romance will fill the air with wedding bells ringing out. This year Harry is in more danger than ever when his enemy finds new ways to try and get the Boy Who Lived. Voldemort’s presence will be felt more than ever as he steals more lives; can Harry find himself before its too late? And what adventures will he have along the way?

If you haven’t read Harry Potter and The Girl Who Lived then I would strongly urge you to do so because if you don’t then this story probably won’t make any sense to you. Be helpful to writers by Reading and Reviewing!

The very last chapter of this fic has been reworked. Please re-read there's more about the kids in there! Also my author's notes on the final chapter have also been added. Ten part fic related to this going up shortly!!
Reviewer: sabradan Signed
Date: 01/23/09 Title: Chapter 37: When We Grew Up

I'd be interested in a 10-chapter fic about the major parts of their lives! Do it!

Author's Response: I'm pleased to say that I managed to find the fic I spoke about just the other day, I'm fine tuning it now, but expect to see it going up within the next week!! Also, I've reworked the last chapter a little bit if you want to give it a re-read. I've added a bit more about the kids into it. Thank you very much for taking the time to review! Nat x

Reviewer: sabradan Signed
Date: 01/21/09 Title: Chapter 3: Return to Godric's Hollow

Okay, I really enjoy these stories. The first one was great. The one little nit-pick I'm finding, and its with this installment in particular, really, is that often times Ellie is seeming more of an almost motherly type character than a cousin/almost sister. I understand she is *technically* his guardian and she needs to be responsible for him. But firstly, he does still have Remus, and not to mention Molly and Arthur to be the "parental" type figures. She can still be responsible and loving (which is what I'm sure you were aiming for) with out being particularly...maternal, necessarily. I rather assumed she would act more along the lines of an older sister. Quite friendly and such (which she does, of course) and look out for him, but less in a maternal way, and more of a "lets go have some fun and bond together, but I'll still watch your back" sort of way, if that makes any sense.
Also, since it was revealed that they were, originally, meant to be more like brother and sister than cousins, I would think that there would be more of a bonding (although there was already plenty) but more along the lines of making up for all those years of lost time sort of thing going on, and less of her acting all "responsible" and "motherly". Or maybe I'm just reading too much into your diction. I dunno. I hope she acts more like the sister she was supposed to be than a surrogate mum.

Adventures in Courtship by SunDevil05

Rated: 6th-7th Years •
Summary: The war is over. Harry Potter and Ginny Weasley finally have the chance for the happiness they've been craving. But, with Harry recovering from the war and Ginny back in school, can they finally have the relationship they've always wanted?

******Higher rating just to be safe.

Reviewer: sabradan Signed
Date: 07/31/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter One - Starting Over

This is a really good one. I'm relatively new to fanfics (I generally used to think they were only written by overly emotional preteen girls) but after reading this, I realize that they can, in fact be very well written, indeed. I really liked it because while it is technically a "romance" story, it was not overly sappy (at least not inmost places) and in fact it does seem to flow and work logically and naturally, and I especially like that Harry and Ginny seem to be REAL, just like JKR would want. (In case you couldn't guess, I'm a guy and don't normally do the "romance" story thing, but I find the end of DH just so anticlimactic, I need to get my fill elsewhere. and while I may be an incurably hopeless romantic, I like that its not so horribly outdone to be a typical romance novel/story, also known as "dirty girl book". But I digress and rant). Great job, really well written and I enjoyed it immensley. It even choked me up a couple of times. My few criticisms is that it doesnt line upwith DH enough for my liking (although you deal with that well enough) and that it needs more. But of course, thats where the sequel comes in, does it not? Where is the sequel? I must read it! And please tell me the sequel will be (at least somewhat) chronological to this one.

When Darkness Did Surround Us by MagEd

Rated: 6th-7th Years •
Summary: 2007 QSQ Awards Runner-up for Best Post-Hogwarts

Petunia Dursley is enjoying dinner with her family when someone starts pounding on the door. Ready to tell them off for being so rude and refusing to leave when they didn't answer at first, Petunia opens the door to have a baby shoved into her arms and told she is his only family. Years after the great Harry Potter defeated Voldemort, Death Eaters have risen to power and taken over Hogsmeade, Hogwarts, and even the Ministry of Magic. Their marriages announced invalid, their children in danger and their lives hanging by a thread, the heroes of the war with Voldemort must once again take a stand against evil.

H/G and R/Hr

(pre-Deathly Hallows)


*Quote from The Epilogue*

Suddenly Harry was kissing her as if he couldn’t resist the temptation. There was a kind of frenzy to the kiss at first, a kind of desperate need, but it melted into something soft and sweet and gentle, a promise of a future when kisses would never be limited. When they broke apart he rested his forehead on hers, sprinkling a few affectionate butterfly kisses across her face. “I love you,” he murmured.
Reviewer: sabradan Signed
Date: 01/24/09 Title: Chapter 19: The Essence of Time

Will there be an update anytime in the near future?

Author's Response: The next chapter is already in the queue and I'm already half way though writing the chapter after that!

Meet the - Children? by Winged Artemis

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: Lily Evans is a cheeky, brainy, hopeless romantic seventeen-year-old Head Girl with a sour temper. James Potter is an arrogant, hilarious, prank-pulling seventeen-year-old Head Boy with an immature head on his shoulders. Lily loathes James and James loves Lily. Blahblahblah.

However, when a mysterious locket and a very wacked Headmaster inform the two of them that their son is in grave danger, James, Lily, and of course, Sirius, are magically transported to the future to meet James and Lily's son and the state that the magical world is in.

A twist of mystery, fun, romance and some Sirius humor! And with a wee bit of J/L, H/G, and R/Hr!

WARNING: Tree climbing Dumbledores, valuable pieces of jewelry, and an ecess of sugar are contained inside - oh, and HBP is disregarded.

See profile for update information.
Reviewer: sabradan Signed
Date: 09/16/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter One - Early Morning

Why: This is a really fun, unique twist and I quite enjoy it. Bravo!
Where: Umm....places?
What: I dunno
Who: Lupin, tonks, maybe Molly and Arthur.
How: ?

All I really know is that I want to see the "old gang" back together, if only for a short bit, and I want Harry and his parents to find out the truth about each other, and actually get to know each other, and mayhaps be a "family" for the first, and only, time--Harry deserves it, really. Well, at least as much a family as one can be at Hogwarts, anyway. It might be kind of fun to have some H/G romance going on after they all know who each other are, and well, have good ol' Mummy dearest be all like "I approve, kay? Make me some grandkids...even though I'll never meet them for real" (although, preferably not in those words, haha)

Anyway, I really enjoyed this, and would like to see the rest of it. Soon. Update faster!

Author's Response: wow! thanks so much, that's really helpful!!

Reviewer: sabradan Signed
Date: 09/16/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter One - Early Morning

Oh! And another thing--maybe (though I have no idea how this would work) have Lily confront Petunia and Vernon about how horribly they treated Harry?

Author's Response: Hahah, that's a great idea! thanks for all these awesome ideas, i'll definitely try to incoroporate them in!!

To Find the Truth by hopelesslyhopeful

Rated: 3rd-5th Years •
Summary: Harry and Ginny have led a happy life together that now includes their four children. But when Lily discovers a new 'talent' and old enemies combine with new, can the children of Order members and their parents unite and prevail?

To Rekindle the Flame sequel, although it's not necessary for you to read that story first to understand
Reviewer: sabradan Signed
Date: 10/07/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 The Potter's Return to Hogwarts

This is really great. At first, I wasn't a fan of the first-person POV, but its kind of grown on me, and its started to pan out and make it seem very appropriate to show how much Lily is going through, and maturing.

Please, update soon.

Broken Souls by kingbobrules

Rated: 6th-7th Years •
Summary: As the wizarding world rejoices, Harry’s never come so close to just giving up. But as he tries to walk away from Voldemort’s crumpled body, something stops him. Someone. Ginny.

But Harry’s a broken man. He’s in no state to deal with his feelings for Ginny or to give her the relationship she deserves and he tries to tell her that. But Ginny’s got something of her own to tell. Something that might just make Harry face up to his demons and stick around.

However, Harry’s not the only one struggling to cope. Ginny is on the verge of breaking down and fleeing herself, but will anyone notice in time? And what on earth is Ron going to say when he learns of his seventeen year old sister’s situation?

Extract: Truth to be told he didn’t really know how exactly you would classify things between him and Ginny at the moment, but he did know the lie of land. They were having a baby together.

This fic is finally back!!!
Reviewer: sabradan Signed
Date: 07/31/08 Title: Chapter 1: Just the Two of Us?

Okay, first off, this story is so deliciously dark, I love it. Granted, your whole premise is skewed to make the main characters (Harry and Ginny, duh) seem a little out of character (the fact that they are pregnant before marriage and such) but you make up for that well. The major problem I see is that for 4 months no one looked for Ginny. I find that extrememly hard to believe. But other than that, its great! Keep up the good work, and update soon! We need Chapter 11!

Holly by A_Pink_lady

Rated: 3rd-5th Years •
Summary: Voldemort's gone....but the Death Eaters aren’t. Ron, Hermione, Harry and Ginny’s lives are completely changed when a mysterious girl appears, claiming to be from the future. But is she really who she says she is? And what has happened in the future that so desperately needs to be changed?

6 years post HBP

H/G and R/Hr

(DH spoilers are very minimal, just in terms of a use of a name- it doesnt follow canon storyline wise)
Reviewer: sabradan Signed
Date: 10/07/08 Title: Chapter 1: Holly

Ok, I just read this straight through, and I love the story. Good stuff. But let me just say that Harry and Ginny need to stop beating around the bush and do something about it. They NEED to be together, period. End of story.

As to Holly, I have two theories: either, a. she is Harry and Ginny's daughter (though it seems rather obvious), or she is Remus and Tonks' daughter (seems to be so due to the fact she's a metamorphagus and all, and how nervous she gets around Remus)
Personally, I think both theories are valid. You NEED to update asap, so I can find out what happens.

Lily's Neverending Wait by rupertgrintlover13

Rated: 3rd-5th Years •
Summary: Lily Potter is a small sweet eight-year old girl who is living with her Aunt and Uncle because her father is never home. Her mother is dead and her family can't do anything for her most of the time with her father gone. All she wants is to meet her father. Will her wait never end?

The only reason I marked this for violence is because of some minor smacking and otherwise mean things. Nothing too terrible here!

Reviewer: sabradan Signed
Date: 09/17/08 Title: Chapter 1: Trouble in the Classroom

So...where's the next chapters? I can't have this end like this with a Hermione so unlike herself, and Harry gone, and Ginny dead? So sad. Update soon!

Author's Response: I'm so sorry about the wait! Updates will be coming soon I promise!

Dursleys, Meet The Wizarding World by Ghoul In Pajamas

Rated: 3rd-5th Years •
Summary: The Dursleys have left Privet Drive and are in hiding with Hestia Jones and Dedalus Diggle. Hestia and Mr. Dursley are constantly fighting, Petunia is avoiding the wizards at all costs, and Dedalus is trying to make them all the best of friends. Meanwhile, Dudley discovers he has an interest in Harry's world, but his parents are less than pleased when they find out.
Reviewer: sabradan Signed
Date: 10/09/08 Title: Chapter 1: Septum Aperio

So, is there an update coming any time soon?

As Happily Ever After As They're Gonna Get by cjbaggins

Rated: 3rd-5th Years •
Summary: My take on the first of those 'nineteen years' between the 36th chapter of DH and the epilogue.

Warnings: contains an unusually-shaped ring, a nosy neighbour, a rude shop assistant, shaving mishaps, thoughtful gestures, threatening goblins, and, unexplained appearances of Romantic!Ron and Romantic!Harry. You have been warned.

Rating is for *mild* innuendo and *mostly* innocent interactions but I wouldn't let my 9 year old read it.
Reviewer: sabradan Signed
Date: 10/29/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - Summer That Year

I really like this story and love your style. Can I hope for an update in the near future?

Author's Response: Thanks very much on both counts. Update? I was actually expecting my emails today would include a reply regarding the next chapter submission. Alas, they did not include an acceptance of chapter 11, so we're still waiting! Hopefully, it won't be much longer. cj

Changing the Future by PEMDAS

Rated: 3rd-5th Years •
Summary: This is the sequel to “Changing the Past”, so I advise that you read that first.

Harry tries so hard to do the right thing, but only ends up making things worse. His addiction to changing the past has only changed the future...for the worst. He has seen the error of his ways, and must find a way to set things right. There are no more second chances.

Harry is determined not to be dependent on his friends any longer. Leaving Ron and Hermione in the future, he travels back to try to fix everything he’s done. Join him as he attempts to do the impossible: change the future.

Reviewer: sabradan Signed
Date: 10/10/08 Title: Chapter 1: Hit List

You really need to update this soon! Its so weird, and kind of scary reading a story where Harry has screwed things up so royally. I need to see him fix it, and asap.

Reviewer: sabradan Signed
Date: 10/10/08 Title: Chapter 1: Hit List

You really need to update this soon! Its so weird, and kind of scary reading a story where Harry has screwed things up so royally. I need to see him fix it, and asap.

Hogwarts Houses Divided by Inverarity

Rated: 3rd-5th Years • Past Featured Story

Teddy Lupin's first year at Hogwarts. Canon-compliant. Nominated for a 2008 QSQ for best Post-Hogwarts story.

The war is over, and all is well, they say, but the wounds remain unhealed. Bitterness divides the Houses of Hogwarts. Can the first children born since the war's end begin a new era, or will the enmities of their parents be their permanent legacy?

Reviewer: sabradan Signed
Date: 08/22/08 Title: Chapter 1: Platform Nine and Three-Quarters

I absolutely love the stpry and characters/relationships you're developing here, it is all so unbelieveably realistic, and for the most part in character, and canon-compliant, while at the same time being a completely new take. I really like how Violet and Teddy are cousins, and good friends as well, and both seemingly care about each other despite the house they were sorted in. Its really quite sweet--and makes for great story advancement, as well. I hope you get the rest up and validated as soon as possible. Consider this favorited, and I want to thank you for helping me get my mind off my own rough patch (where i happen to be stuck on) in my own story. You rock!

Reviewer: sabradan Signed
Date: 09/29/08 Title: Chapter 1: Platform Nine and Three-Quarters

I absolutely love this story, love the way you've developed all your characters, especially Teddy and Violet! So great. I also really like Ophilia for some reason.
I really like how this story has become so action-packed and very much more than just what seemed to be on the surface at the beginning, very well done.
Update soon, as now I can't wait for more. I know I may be the only one who thinks this, but I think Ophilia and Teddy would make a cut couple. Who cares about age; its only a number, after all. hint hint. ;)

Harry Potter and the Skat-Hatokha Reaction by OliveOil_Med

Rated: 3rd-5th Years •
Summary: Nominated for the 2009 QSQ award for Best Male OC.

Harry's life is quiet now. He has a loving wife, a beautiful son, a career along side his best friend, and everything else he could ever want and never imagine having. But now, his career as an Auror will lead both him and Ron halfway around the world to investigate a mysterious school known only as the Skat-Hatokha Academy of Magic.

But from the beginning, something seems off. No one in the wizarding world has heard of this school, the board of directors can contact you, but you can't contact them, and the accepted students have all been in some trouble with the law and take their right to remain silent very seriously. Not to mention Lucius Malfoy's near obsessive interest in this case and his close involvement with the Ministry.

But as more time passes, the more the case begins to take on a life of its own, and not just for Harry.

Reviewer: sabradan Signed
Date: 08/20/08 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5 The Macalister Girls

This is an awesome story. You've got to continue it!

Author's Response: Wow, I was beginning to wonder when my story was going to get another review. I glad you like it so much, and they you hope for it to continue (which it will, don't worry) *cough*points in the direction of QSQ Best Male OC thread*cough* Just kidding! But I hope you'll read and review some more.

Challah and Pumpkin Juice by Calico

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: Tzipporah Stein, a Jew living in Vienna, Austria on the eve of WWII, is shocked when she gets a letter telling her she is a witch. The volatile state of Europe as it waits for both a muggle and a wizarding war to begin has prompted Hogwarts to take in students from many countries. How will Tzipporah handle magic, mischief, and even a little romance while trying to be true to her religion and culture at the same time?
Reviewer: sabradan Signed
Date: 08/27/08 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter One: The Letter

Very nice, and amazing concept! although, if they were in Vienna in the 1930s, I'm sure they'd be orthodox, which means Tzipporah would have to sit in the womens section behind the MECHITZA without her dad. Just a nitpick!

Reviewer: sabradan Signed
Date: 08/27/08 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

Also, in March 1938 Hitler invaded Austria. Which is south of Germany, by the way :)

Yelling Yourself Yellow With Yetis by Tim the Enchanter

Rated: 6th-7th Years •
Summary: What happens when you mix the Chinese military, Magizoologists, militant animal rights activists, Tibetan nationalists, wizarding bureaucrats, and a mad escaped yeti (besides chaos)?

You yell yourself yellow of course! Whatever that means

But seriously, this is the alternately sober and stupid story of a yeti’s bid for freedom and the madness that ensues. Rated 6-7th Years for substance abuse (Magic Pixie Dust, anyone?), colourful swearing in four different languages (English, German, Spanish, and Mandarin!), and MAD YETI VIOLENCE!

Reviewer: sabradan Signed
Date: 09/30/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter I: A Flash of Silver

This is great. Absolutely brilliant. I had no intention of reading this, well, ever, because it just seemed so...absurd. BUT! I saw you're little schpiel about it on Schmergo's site (though I'm not registered, just a ghostie) and saw the art related to it and had to check it out, and I'm glad I did. Absolutely absurd, yet in so many ways, brilliant. I understand you don't like canon cameos, and I respect that (and rather like all the OC love) but I still think it might be fun to stick a cameo in there. Maybe not the trio or anything, but maybe like Luna (after all she's into the freaky creatures just like Hagrid), but undertandably, I can respect if you choose to ignore this.
Just a quick nitpick, you have Erick's boss being Hispanic/Spanish/Latino (in someway decended from Spaniards/Spanish-speaking), yet you call him a "dago", which at least here, is a slur for an Italian, not Hispanic.
Anyway, update soon and happy writing.

p.s. good to see another male fan fic writer, we are such the minority, here, after all.

Author's Response:

Ahh, yes… male fanfic writers. We’re a dying breed, aren’t we? Well, we Y chromosomes have never been very numerous to begin with, but I digress.

Thank you for reviewing this story of mine, sabradan – I am especially glad that you even understand it! The humour is much more subtle, being a sort of absurd, politically incorrect satire of environmentalism, terrorism, bureaucracy, governments, and even video games, among other things. Though I do mention some canon characters in passing (like Rita Skeeter), there probably won’t be any actual cameos. However, that doesn’t mean you won’t see any, as I haven’t finished writing the story yet. I would update quicker (Chapter Three is ready to go), but this is one of two humour stories that I’m writing and I can only submit one at a time, unfortunately.

Concerning the word “dago,” I’ve only heard it used while referring to Spaniards – it is, after all, derived from the Spanish name “Diego.” However, I’ll take your word for it that it’s a pejorative term for Italians, too.

Anyway, thanks for reviewing. Stay tuned for the next exciting chapter!

Tim the Enchanter