SORRY about not posting frequently. It's hard to post in the summer when I'm away and stuff, and also now my computer is broken (honestly...!! Haha) so...but I'm working on it! :) Meaning "Magic of Romance."
(in the photo, l-r: Imogen Poots as Lily, Ben Barnes as Sirius, Hayden Christiansen as Remus, Tasmin Egerton as Madeline, Gaspard Ulliel as James, and Dakota Fanning as Ellen.)
>"Magic of Romance" is my first MNFF!! :) Thanks to everyone who commented and read and favorited! :)
Good. Kind of...babbum babbum babbum, though. Like, I think the transitions could have been a bit stonger, but otherwise good. I do think that you did a good job for something like this - you know, taking a scene directly in the novel and re-creating it. Good!
Author's Response: Thanks.... wow, finally, some, how do you say it, constructive criticism? I think... Glad you thought that I did the scene recreation good. :D
I LURVE IT!
Author's Response: Thanks so much! Glad you enjoy it!
Ooooohh, so cute. (And yucky! :P ROACHES YUCK! Have you seen "Mouse Trap"? It totally reminds me of that movie.)
Author's Response: Thanks! No, I haven't seen Mouse Trap... maybe I should watch it....
Wow, it's been a long time! I got so busy I forgot to update this. I'm working on Chapter Four. Hopefully you all haven't lost interest. : )
Thank you both! I do love writing Lily/James fics and such, but I think that I kind of want to focus this more on Sirius and Lupin's experiences with romance pre-HP series (and pre-Tonks!), so I decided, what the heck! It will focus a lot on Lily/James, though, but not so much as Sirius/Madeline and Lupin/Ellen.