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Summary: WARNING! This story contains a jingle-bell antler headband, a shower of potatoes, boy/girl mushiness, underwear karaoke, family trouble, an excessively adorable werewolf, death, the song "Werewolves of London," betrayal, and the word 'Jordan' five times in a row near the beginning of chapter seven.


Twenty-one years after Voldemort's defeat, five fourth-years are faced with a new threat. Will all of the five stay true to the light side? Will they all emerge whole in the end? Will Jordan Potter ever get a life? You'll laugh, you'll cry, you'll gasp, you'll sigh! Part one in a trilogy!


Well, after much deliberation and consideration, I've decided to submit my future-gen trilogy! This particular installment is three years old, so it's definitely different from my current writing style, but I'm quite fond of the characters.


DH is disregarded. It's a total coincidence that one of the main characters is named Ted Lupin.


Starring Quicksilver Quills 2008 Best Male Original Character runner-up Jordan Potter, Best Female Original Character nominees Ivy Potter, Haley Potter, and Emma Weasley, and Best Male Original Character nominee Ted Lupin!

Five times nominated (once for each member of Potter's Pentagon!) for the Best Post-Hogwarts story in the 2007 Quicksilver Quills Awards, and nominated for Best Post-Hogwarts story in the 2008 Quicksilver Quill Awards...


Categories: Next Generation Genre: Warnings: Book 7 Disregarded

Word count: 45143 Chapters: 10 Completed: Yes
Published:
06/18/07 Updated: 10/03/07


Reviewer: lunalestrange Signed
Date: 09/11/08 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8: In Which Havoc Is Wreaked

I noticed in Chapter 1 you said Jordan was about two minutes youunger than Haley. Then, you said they were over three minutes different. Which one is it?

Author's Response: It should be three minutes and thirty three seconds, I think. If it says two minutes in the first chapter, that's wrong. But really, it doesn't matter either way, no matter what Haley thinks to the contrary.

 
Reviewer: lunalestrange Signed
Date: 09/11/08 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 8: In Which Havoc Is Wreaked

who is the mysterious person omg

Author's Response: Which mysterious person?

 
Reviewer: lunalestrange Signed
Date: 09/11/08 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 9: In Which Fate Is Sealed With A Kiss

I loved it. I laughed, I screamed, I almot cried. You told somebody i know you'd kill Jordan on book three. Please, please don't. jordan's wicked sweet.

Author's Response: Oh my gosh, thank you so much! I love Jordan as well-- he's my f avourite. But as for who dies, I'm afraid my lips are sealed.

 
Reviewer: lunalestrange Signed
Date: 09/11/08 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10: In Which Our Heroes Are Called Just That

i like tyrone cause hes wicked sweet. also, you may or may not know this, but hoos on first is from a book called the westing game

Author's Response: I like Tyrone, too! He's fun. And I DEFINITELY know Hoo's on First-- that was a homage to "Westing Game," which is one of my very favourite books ever. I'm so glad I'm not the only person to like it!

 

Hogwarts Houses Divided by Inverarity
Rated: 3rd-5th Years [Reviews - 395]

Summary: Past Featured Story

Teddy Lupin's first year at Hogwarts. Canon-compliant. Nominated for a 2008 QSQ for best Post-Hogwarts story.

The war is over, and all is well, they say, but the wounds remain unhealed. Bitterness divides the Houses of Hogwarts. Can the first children born since the war's end begin a new era, or will the enmities of their parents be their permanent legacy?



Categories: Next Generation Genre: Warnings: Character Death, Violence

Word count: 203059 Chapters: 34 Completed: Yes
Published:
01/03/08 Updated: 11/25/08


Reviewer: lunalestrange Signed
Date: 07/13/08 Title: Chapter 15: Slipfang

This chapter was great and the suspense for the next one is killing me!

 

Summary: The final installment in the Potter’s Pentagon Trilogy. Read “The Five” and “The Truth” first, myess? Okay!

WARNING! Contains Muggle adventures in Diagon Alley, unusual eyebrows, cheesy clichés galore, psycho Ted, the not-so-lost years of Merlin, a school-wide singalong, the old potato joke, Tyrone’s Princess Bride obsession, Emma’s stubborn denial of the existence of Tyrone’s mustache, a graphic death, a joke shop product as a major plot device, hobo Jordan, Jordan hugging, Jordan pulling pranks, time travel, the Love Shack, angst, and worst of all, Professor Zabini.

It’s the sixth year for Potter’s Pentagon and company, and our heroes learn that in the wizarding world, coming of age has a somewhat weightier significance. Students are busy with an Inter-House Unity Project, Jordan is having weird dreams, Pansy and Ophidias Malfoy have been released from Azkaban, Professor Zabini has a mysterious project of his own, and almost everyone is acting strangely. Meanwhile, at the Ministry of Magic, a man with a vendetta against Ron Weasley is trying his hardest to get him in the biggest trouble possible. Is the only way to save him to travel into the past?

New talents are discovered, new friendships form and old ones change, pasts are dredged up, and, of course, there’s lots of good old-fashioned snogging. And one of the five kills for the first time… while another becomes a casualty of war.

Starring 2008 Quicksilver Quills Best Male Original Character runner-up Jordan Potter, Best Female Original Character nominees Ivy Potter, Haley Potter, Emma Weasley, and Giorgi Anderson, and Best Male Original Character nominee Ted Lupin! Nominated for 2008 Quicksilver Quills Best Post-Hogwarts Story.

Categories: Next Generation Genre: Warnings: Book 7 Disregarded

Word count: 183223 Chapters: 28 Completed: Yes
Published:
07/09/08 Updated: 03/15/10


Reviewer: lunalestrange Signed
Date: 08/05/11 Title: Chapter 28: Epilogue: There And Back Again

So I just want to start out by saying that I'm an absolutely HUGE Potter's Pentagon fan, it's my favorite fanfic ever. My favorite character is Anatoly. He's just fabulous and eccentric, and I've always been an idealist who loves Slytherins and thinks everybody has a good side, and I think Anatoly is adorable and everything he says is hilarious. But I pretty much love Haley and every character that she sees the good in, specifically Anatoly and Vladislav. I can't pinpoint a specific favorite part, because I just love everything so much and I've laughed and cried and happy danced and junk. The only two critiques I could possibly have are about Emma. I understand her character, but at times she was a bit annoying (Telling Jordan he was a freak, being a jerk to Tyrone). I felt the whole Imperius Curse thing was a bit dramatic. Whatever happens to Anatoly, like after the trilogy is over? Thank you so much for this trilogy, you should try writing non-fanfic sometime and getting something published.

 
Reviewer: lunalestrange Signed
Date: 09/16/08 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6: In Which Anatoly Matches Giorgi In Sheer Eccentricity

I'snt this exactly what Ted did when he first became a werewolf????? This is odd.... and strangley coincedental....

Author's Response: Wait, what do you mean? I'm confused. I didn't notice that coincidence. I know Haley passed out... and I know Ted got his forehead eaten... I'm trying to think, but I can't understand your review. Can you please humour a rather dimwitted fanfic writer and explain?

 

Remember Me Fondly by dragonwings
Rated: 3rd-5th Years [Reviews - 3]

Summary: James and Lily once kissed, planned, and dreamed in the clover fields of Ireland...until their luck ran out. Now James is alone and Lily detests him. When he stumbles upon one more lucky clover, he has but one wish left.

(Obviously AU or something... *winks*)

Categories: Poetry Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 372 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
07/23/08 Updated: 07/25/08


Reviewer: lunalestrange Signed
Date: 07/26/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

James doing poetry... interesting. A very lovely and touching piece of writing

Author's Response: Thank you!!! It's not JAMES doing the poetry though; it's more of me writing the poetry from James' point of view which kind of makes a difference...

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