This was the first Lilly/James fic that I have actually completed reading and I have to say I loved it.
I loved the way you started at Hogwarts and brought it up to the end, it just makes me sad to know that although James will love Lilly 'till the day he dies, that won't be very far off.
Thank you for entertaining me, that isn't easy to do!
This is one of my all time favorite stories. I read it when I need a laugh or just a good kiss scene. Brilliant.
i was wondering if Ginny actually did die... it was an excellent story. you are so creative to think up all of that! you are amazing!
Author's Response: oh we couldn't kill of Ginny! what would harry do! :) thank you for your kind words they are very much appriciated, and thank you for the review!
I find it amazing how you turned a boy who we all know and love into a monster. That is not an easy thing to do. I felt it was a tad (okay a lot) out of character but if you can't pull someone out of character on a fan fiction site then when can you? Amazingly written. Not something I have seen before, and I like that.
Author's Response: Thank you. I\'m a little too fond of doing that I think. But, the reason I write fanfic is to take familiar surroundings and characters and challenge our views of them.
WONDERFUL!!!! you must must MUST add on!!!! please? i cant stress that enough! it was so not too fluffy! i love fluffy stories, it was awesome, great job!!!!
I read this story because the title and summary captivated me. It drew me into it in a way that few stories ever do and your writing amazing. I have never ever seen anything like this before and I commend your creativity in coming up with this. It makes me wonder a tad about you though... =^.^=
You are a wonderful writer. I have only seen one other person write the way you do and although the story is not sad, when I read her writing I want to cry- thats how I feel when I read your writing. You truly do have a future as an author, just like her.
Good. Clever. I loved it and related to it in many ways.
Author's Response: LOL. Thank you very much!
(I have never had convos with someone like this.) I do have some things I could say that I think you should do, or that I would do, but why take my advice? I don't even have a story on here currently. You do what you think is best, another cahpter or not, one of my favorite stories of all time.
Author's Response: Well, I\'m always open to suggestion--in fact, this was originally a single-chapter story until someone prompted me to write Ch. 2. Send me your suggestions and if they inspire me, who knows? :)
(in response to what you said about my review)
It seems that this story could use a tad bit of fluff to pull it together, I mean, you have everything else and you have lain the ground work for no nonsense fluff perfectly. I am not asking you to take my advice, but it seems as though many people would enjoy one last chapter.
Author's Response: That\'s just it, though, I don\'t know what I would say, even fluff-wise. Have them wake up the next morning and go for walkies? Sirius has put the no-no on smooches, so pr0n\'s not an option...I don\'t know what I would write ABOUT if I wrote another chapter.
This was a great idea. I actually have never seen a 'theory' like this before. You came up with some AMAZING explanations for things that I had to read over again to truly comprehend. It was wonderful. I do think though, that it could use another chapter just one more. Amazing really. I read it over and over again.
Author's Response: Another chapter? Ack! I had to think about it for months before coming up with a second chapter! I don\'t have anything left to say about the topic at this point, so any further chapters would be pure fluff/ PWP, and slash fluff is not my forte...
I hadn't ever read a Bella story until I read one a few months ago, and it was then that I found I rather enjoyed taking a one way trip into her twisted mind. This was exceptionally well written. When you had Rabastan first open the door, I felt as if it were me on the bed, not her. That is a mark of a true writer. Amazing.
Author's Response: Thank you so much. I\'m glad you enjoyed my twisted little tale.
Wow. You got this so correct. Not James, I actually thought he was a bit out of character, but the emotions that Althea feels. I wonder if even you know how well you hit it... I am sure you do. Perhaps you have been there, but... just...
Great, great job.
Author's Response: Thank you so much! I have sort of been there, at least as far as the self-harm and all is concerned. I\'m so glad you enjoyed this story, thanks for reviewing!
Amazing. I really liked the ending... a bit morbid... not at all cliched though.
Author's Response: Thanks for your review! I\'m glad you liked it. And I\'m very happy it didn\'t seem clichéd! :)