16yrs of age, living in the US (ha like I'd tell you where, hee hee). Luvs writing, writing is her life (oh and she's grl by the way, no surprise there). Sirius Black is her all time fav character out of all the bks, if he were a real person she'd kiss him, and did I forget to mention she likes to write in the 3rd person. I'm not writing much bcuz I don't think my bio is all that important. My fic is what u should be reading although I will add that I do enjoy playing piano and that Switchfoot is my fov band. Also I'm a big time Jesus Freak (though some may be as bold to venture to say that I am a hypocrite, not true. HP is a story, ficiton people, fiction!). So c'est moi, Amalynne in a nutshell. Oh et je parle francais aussi. Aurevoir mes amours. Sincerelement -Amalynne O'Hara
Oh and if any of you really like my fics and can't wait for an update (ha! I have yet to see that happen, anyhoo) you can check out additional chapters at Fanfiction.net under the name Amalynne O'hara. This site just takes so dang long to approve fics, so I've resorted to a more lenient site.
Here's the lovely banner that was removed from THE EVER SECRET DIARY OF SIRIUS BLACK.... drn mods, anyway... I love it. It was done by Tinka4Ever, brilliant...
And my own personal work in progress... *sigh* someday...
ALSO, visit http://www.toujourspur.com/ for some of the best Sirius fics out there ;).
Which Harry Potter Marauder Are You?
Okay, I meant to review for chap 4, but instead I clicked chap1, oopsies, anyway... Leggo my Legolas... aurevoir mon blonde amour *sniffs and blows nose loudly*. heee heee. Hope you feel better and blessed X-mas.
Author's Response: Haha, Leggo my Legolas! "Aurevoir mon blonde amor"? Is that French? If so, what does it mean? I don't speak anything but English and some Elvish. Thank you! Merry Christmas, and God bless!
VERY GOOD! VERY GOOD INDEED! Ooh, look at me, the first to review. This was brilliantly written and you have the characters down very well. James, apologize to Snape? Ooh, can't wait for next chap! Loved your dialogue, and though your plot is simple, it seems realistic and your scenerios are quite catching. Write more! *kisses* plopping you in my favs. -Amalynne O'hara
Author's Response: Thanks so much! This is the first fanfic i've ever submitted, so that means a lot!
Hmm, can't seem to get chapter 2, strange, but I'll check back later.
Oh my gosh! you evil Goy (*winks*) they just banned you and now your back? Well, I don't suppose they could get rid of Peeves either.
P.S. Stick a rhino up your nose, hee hee, guess who?
Sorry, I just had to insult that nutcase, I really like your fic and can't wait till the next chap.
Author's Response: Yeah, I wonder why that's happened - other people have been able to read it...I went to see if it had been updated in Historical Fics, but it hadn't...hmm....oh well, maybe they're still approving it??
hahahahah! BRILLIANT! So clever and random, but so awesome, you must write more! Oh, and sorry about the delay on Sirius' Diary, the mods are taking their merry old time approving it *sheesh*
Author's Response: I AM IN LOVE WITH YOUR STORY. Thank you so much for taking the time to read mine, I'm so glad you like it - YAY!!!
Oh that was the sweetest! So clever and I can't wait for more! =) -Amalynne
WOO HOO! MOST AMAZING, MOST EXCELLENT! Clever, bright and well written. I've had this fic in favorites, bcuz the subject sounded interesting, but I never got around to reading it, now I see what a moron I was. Anyhoo, great. Some grammatical errors, and awkward wording, but all around brilliant. I like how you write Hermione, in fact all the characters are "in character". Tis wondrous m'dear. -Ama
Hey! you wrote something else, this is great! Kind of quirky in a way, but I really like it!! Please update asap. -Amalynne O'hara
Author's Response: Ah, I remember you...
Anyways just submitted an update, but my other story chapter took 11 days to be validated, so I have a feeling you'll have to wait for a bit...thanks for reviewing! (by the way, I read chapters 15 and 16 of The Ever Secret Diary of Sirius Black on fanfiction.net - awesome-ness!)
Again, this was excellent! You build suspense really well... ooh I must know what happens next, with Lily and James especially. People are crazy not to review this! Please update, even if it's for little old me, you did very well :). -Ama
Captivating and alluring, your writing is amazing and catches me right at the start... you are so gifted in so many ways, that chapter was utterly... AMAZING! I love how you describe everything, how you lead into things in such an artful way and ensnare the reader with an even better plot... plz plz write more, this instant, I INSIST... you must update, and I am disappointed in my fellow HP fans for not reviewing this, it really is a brilliant work of art!! Have you written anything else? I LOVE your style. - Amalynne O'hara
p.s: Long live the MARAUDERS!!
Author's Response: Thank you very much.Unfortunately, i have not written anything else...I will try and update as soon as i can, but school just has its ways of interrupting almost everything i like to do, writing for instance...Anyway,thanks for leaving a review...You're right, Long live the MARAUDERS! :P
Well, yes... a bit more exciting, though I don't know where you can really go with this fic and still keep it original. It seems you are simply following the events of the POA... perhaps if you could add more side details, more of Sirius' background it would add a bit more color.
Your writing is excellent, it's simply your plot that I feel is lacking. I really liked the flash backs!! Good job! -Ama
Author's Response: Thanks for the advice. I have my ideas, the next chapter will see more of Sirius' childhood and a plot begins to form . . .
Very well written I must say, but yes... sort of a bland beginning, very good just the same. Eagerly awaiting your next update... I LOVE Sirius fics, he has such an allure and I think this will be quite original, update asap! Read some of my fics if you have time, they're not nearly as well written as this, but they all pertain to Sirius in some way ;). Laterz -amalynne
Author's Response: When I get a free moment i'll read your stories, kinda busy at the moment. I agree with what you said about Sirius fics though.
LOVED IT!! Your descriptions are lovely and the flow in your writing makes this so enjoyable to read. Wonderful job, I really felt the emotion, the tension and hidden compassion between brothers. I'm adding this to favorites :)
And no, contrary to beliefs very likely impressed upon you by this summary, I'm not a gormless prat.
Well... not entirely.
Okay, I so totally love your writing style, I admire it to the nth degree, you are amazing and I bow to the queen. You have mastered the Marauders like I’ve never seen before… I certainly hope to see more of this in later chapters. Again, you are AWSUM! And I love Sirius too, so you’ve hit my soft spot ;).-Ama
Oooh! Spiffy! I loved it, very cute and clever. :)
I rather enjoyed it.
We all know how this tale ends, but how does it begin? Did Lily hate James from Day One? Did James fall head over heels the moment he first laid eyes on Lily? How did Remus feel about the whole thing? Who let Peter slip through the cracks? And what exactly happens when Sirius gets hold of some Time-Release Dungbombs?
The Marauders' years at Hogwarts were marked by internal demons, external tensions, and whispers from the shadows growing steadily louder. By intertwining lives in the midst of danger. By powerful love and a whole lot of laughter. This is their story, a tale of cauldrons and comrades.
Amazing, I greatly admire your writing style... this really is brilliant what you have so far. I commend you on a job very well done :)
Author's Response: Thank you so much for the review! I\'m incredibly glad you like the story. There\'s a lot more around the bend, so keep reading! :)