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11/07/04




16yrs of age, living in the US (ha like I'd tell you where, hee hee). Luvs writing, writing is her life (oh and she's grl by the way, no surprise there). Sirius Black is her all time fav character out of all the bks, if he were a real person she'd kiss him, and did I forget to mention she likes to write in the 3rd person. I'm not writing much bcuz I don't think my bio is all that important. My fic is what u should be reading although I will add that I do enjoy playing piano and that Switchfoot is my fov band. Also I'm a big time Jesus Freak (though some may be as bold to venture to say that I am a hypocrite, not true. HP is a story, ficiton people, fiction!). So c'est moi, Amalynne in a nutshell. Oh et je parle francais aussi. Aurevoir mes amours. Sincerelement -Amalynne O'Hara

Oh and if any of you really like my fics and can't wait for an update (ha! I have yet to see that happen, anyhoo) you can check out additional chapters at Fanfiction.net under the name Amalynne O'hara. This site just takes so dang long to approve fics, so I've resorted to a more lenient site.

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Rated: Reviews
Summary:
Reviewer: Amalynne Signed
Date: 12/18/04 Title: None

Sorry to be critical, but Lily and Sirius weren't much of anything to even be considered a fling, Lily said too much, Sirius seemed too stupid and it lacked that certain sparkle that makes up a childhood romance. Oh, I don't know... it's just that at some points the dialogue is just perfect, at other times you skip light years and make Lily sound like McGonagall. This chap was dry... very sorry. I do like the whole idea, but you could use s'more creativity. Long chaps are good :),plz write more and I'm sorry if I was naggy, I just didn't think this was ur best chap. Luv ya. -Amalynne

Author's Response: *lets out a long,deep sigh*I know, at first, this whole Lily thing was so awesome!Then,I decided against it,and knew it was too late to go back.Well,now we know why Lily hates Sirius...Bye!Ill respond another time.



Reviewer: Amalynne Signed
Date: 11/28/04 Title: None

Interesting, very interesting. This is told in a sort of playwrite form... clever. Although... I do have some complaints. No offense, but did you even read the books? All the info from the bks contradicts this piece. Lily is green eyed, it states clearly in the book... I doubt she would ever in her life feel for Sirius Black, after all she didn't even like james (it just doesn't go, sorry), and the dialogue is so... I'm sorry again, sugary sweet. I'd like to see some emotion, some saucy words, some daring snippets of speech. I'm seeing the drab trend continue. ooh! but isn't it fun writing "author's responses", I just luv it. Tee hee hee. Any way, I'm sticking around bcuz I'm ever so intrigued by the narrator. If u have time, check out my fic, The Ever Secret Diary of Sirius Black. And yes silly, you do write lovely.

Author's Response: Clever is it now? Well, you seem to ever so enjoy it! Do I sense a fan? Ha ha. Yes, after getting many complaints about Sirius's hair and Lily's eyes and everything else with the looks, I have taken it upon myself to re-read EVERY Harry Potter book I own. I am just recently finishing the Philosphers Stone, (I live in America, but oh how I do love the UK!)So, yes, about three times it has mentioned Harry having his mother's eyes, not James. About the feeling for Sirius, this is just supposed to be a secret of the past. Something no one would ever think of. Obviously, YOU and some others do not think that Lily would EVER feel for Sirius. I however, think it makes a great Storyline. Saucy words you say? Well, define that my dear friend. Saucy, I do belive that's a new spice for me. Drab, eh? Well, I have YET to write James and the rest of the marauders, AND the Quidditch game! *smiles excitedly* Just wait my dear girl! Just wait and see, the magic that is held beneath the lines! And, yes, it is dreadfully fun typing these author responses! The narrator eh? Well, I have yet to actually think of a twist for him. He has yet to come and POP into my mind. Anyway, we will have to wait and see about this mysterious man...I read your story about James and the time-turner. BRAVO! I enjoyed it so much! Very sweet twist to it, I thought it was brilliant, and, well, it would have gone perfectly with the background to the series. I DO write lovely don't I? *bats eyes* Why thank-you ever so much! Anyways, I love hearing what EVERYONE thinks, whether it is bad OR good, it all matters and it makes me feel good. OH! And you have YET, to hear the break-up...Just keeping you all intrigued. I have some interesting ideas for some wicked plots!



Reviewer: Amalynne Signed
Date: 11/29/04 Title: None

Oh! Alright, I had to go back and reread this. Now I see. The idea is much used on fanfic, but if you write it right, I'm sure it'll be smashing! U live in the US too? Moi aussi (me too). I'm native american so I was here before you ever were hahaha (evil laugh), kiddin'. SO nice of you to review my fic. In the words of Tigger ttfn (ta ta for now). -Amalynne

Author's Response: What idea is that my dear Amalynne? BTW, I love your name. Smashing? Well, just wait. I hope it will. Yes, I live in the US, but I am EVER SO facinated with the UK. I refer to my mom as mum, the books to what they are reffered to over in England, and so on and so fourth. ANYWAYS! I hope you ALL continue to enjoy my story! -Author



Reviewer: Amalynne Signed
Date: 12/01/04 Title: None

haha! Thanx for "scaucing" it up a bit. This was all very sweet and innocent, yes slightly drawn out and a tad cliche, but very well written just the same. This probably wasn't intentionally funny, but this sentence made me lol, "certain black haired kid whom we know as Sirius Black" hee hee, I LOVE SIRIUS! I hate to point out another error, but Sirius' brother is younger and he wouldn't have been sorted into Slytherin yet if Sirius is a 1st yr. OY! Sirius' parents are old bitter evil mean hags, good job on the letter... had me foaming at the mouth in a rage at them. My sweet adoring Siri... he and I have had a thing going since the POA, it's been our secret little love affair... he's not really dead (just smile and nod... I know, I make little sense). Keep it up! -Ama

Author's Response: Thank-you again, and I am going to keep this response short. I also, LOVE Sirius, I wish I was having a love affair with him! LOL! Anyways, yes, I've twisted it, drawn it out, and gotten many things wrong, but hey, I'm not perfect! Anyways, yes I know he is not dead. He is just hiding behind the curtains, can't you hear the voices? And when I sit in the Shreiking Shack, in the depths of winter, my breath is not the only one in the room.....



Reviewer: Amalynne Signed
Date: 11/30/04 Title: None

*sigh*, hi, it's me again. Sorry, but I just had to clarify that the "idea" I mentioned in my previous review was concerning the Lily/Sirius luv affair. Saucy(my definition of saucy anyway), means add some sarcasm, some every day speech, some witty retorts, and good old British slang. I spent 2 summer abroad and it's a lovely country, Britain, but it's very crowded... my mum's Scottish. Anyhoo, simply clarifying. luv ya. -Amalynne P.S. And I'm so so flattered that you like my name... everyone tells me it's weird, heck.

Author's Response: British Slang? Well dear, I HAVEN'T MADE IT TO BRITAIN YET! Lol! ANyways, yea, I haven't been to Britain yet. I have just read tons about it online deary. Witty you say? Well, Lily doesn't get witty and sarcastic until later on, or at least I think so...Anyways, thank-you for clairifying what 'saucy' meant. I really like your name! -Author



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Rated: Reviews
Summary:
Reviewer: Amalynne Signed
Date: 01/09/05 Title: None

I'm a bit winded from all this passion... still good though.

Author's Response: If ya think that's passion you don't knwo what's gonna hit ya in the next few chapters....LOL! It's gonna go CRAZY!!!!!!!!! MWAHAHA!!! Thankies! xxx



Reviewer: Amalynne Signed
Date: 01/09/05 Title: None

My parents will be back any minute and I'm banned from all computer usage, but you have me hooked... I CANT STOP READING IT's TOO TOO GOOD! Kodos!

Author's Response: LOL! Thank you! I do hope you don't get in trouble though! -huggles- xxx



Reviewer: Amalynne Signed
Date: 01/08/05 Title: None

More than excellent, fantastic! I LUV YOU! Sirius is hot, Sirius is hot... just letting u know he's mine =). -Amalynne

Author's Response: Thank you LOADS!!!! Hehehehe, -snatches him- MINEMINEMINEMINEMINE!!! Mwahahahaha!!!! -huggles- xxx



Reviewer: Amalynne Signed
Date: 01/23/05 Title: None

Oh yes, oh yes, oh yes! I think you are greatly talented and deserve a big whapping hug *hugs author!* . This fic is fab, this fic is fab... Sirius is a SEXY beast... forgive me, like who could resist?

Author's Response: Thank you sooooooooooo much!!!! -Hugs back- I Know...-dribbles- MY sexy beast though...Lana: OIT! me: Don't "OIT!" me! You just slept with his brother!! Lana: -Looks innocent-



Reviewer: Amalynne Signed
Date: 01/10/05 Title: None

This fic is really good, but Lana is too much of a slut for my taste, Sirius is starting to make me sick... Lily would never in her life get drunk, and James is the only one who really seems to stay in character. I'd prefer if you gave Sirius at least a little bit of a conscience somewhere along the way, after all, he has to pick one up before he reaches Azkaban doesn't he? Well, like what you have going here... I just hate all the fooling around and the slutiness, bugs the heck out of me. I'm such a sucker for Siri though *sigh*. -Ama

Author's Response: Slut...Hehehehe...I like to consider her more of an "Over-Enthusiastic Flirt" HEHEHE!!! Why's Sirius making ya sick? He is a bit despie...Shall make him evil...MWAHAHA! I got drunk once...And I'm 13 and a goody two shoes! MWAHAHA! I think she was trying to drown her sorrows, as she's feeling very confused over her feelings for James and Sirius. That's cos I don't write about him much -grins- Hehehee! I love meh Jamesie! It's easier to write for him as we all have a greater understanding of Harry...And sicne Harry's so much like his father...Well that's just one of my theories -grins- He also is a LOT like one of my best boy mates! So he's basically easy... That's very interesting that you've said that, do you mind going into more detail? Sirius needs a conscience for what exactly? I think that Sirius is just going through some tough times (Best excuse ever) and is rather confused over the feelings he's having...Maybe he grew up in Azkaban, developing a conscience there instead of before. This story is based on many events in my life...Whoch is full of fooling around and slutiness...I'm just trying to show what life is like to a teenager. Hehehehe, I'll try and tone it down a bit for ya hun. Thanx for your review! It made me think about the direction my story's going in! xx



Reviewer: Amalynne Signed
Date: 02/10/05 Title: None

Grrr, gimme more! Lets hurry up and get to the seventh floor and have some truth or dare, I'm just dieing for it!! Don't mean to rush really, ahem. Lots going on in this fic, but I suggest you stick to something simple like two stories at a time, you've got the Sirius and Leora thing and the james thing and the truth of dare thing and maybe I'm mentally handicapped, but that's alot to swallow. Good chap though. -Ama

Author's Response: Thank you for the advice. Right now I can't really cut too much out though, as that would just look extrememly strange! I'll take your advcie for the future thoguh, and see what I can do to make it simpler...As a writer, writing about the same thing constantly, I don't think there's enough! LOL! Tahnkies again! -Huggles- xxx



Reviewer: Amalynne Signed
Date: 01/16/05 Title: None

Woohoo, a hot Regulus... yes, I always envisioned him as a kind of light and pretty version of Sirius, but whinnier. I thought this was your best chap yet, oddly, maybe bcuz I'm luving the tension. Keep it up and UPDATE ASAP! YOU MUST UPDATE... or... well I just might die. -amalynne

Author's Response: heheheh! Yesh...I have to thank mel for that, she gave me the mini Sirius idea! LOL!!! Thank you soooooooo much! As I said before, I though it was rather bad...LOL!! So thank you again! -huggles- xxx DON'T YOU DARE DIE!!!! There are thinsg to come!!! xxx



Reviewer: Amalynne Signed
Date: 01/10/05 Title: None

lalalal, hee hee hee, happy me, nice chap, I'm all aglow *giggles*, HURRY UP AND UPDATE WOMAN! Most sincerely, Amalynne

Author's Response: LOL! Hehehehe! I'm trying...It's REALLY hard to write this one! I don't know what to do...I had it all planned, then thoguht it wasn't really the most realistic option after much thought...The shame...Well, I think I must run off and write! Thank you for all your amazing reviews hun! -huggles- xxx



Reviewer: Amalynne Signed
Date: 03/03/05 Title: None

Luv how this is turning out. Tres bien, tres bien, j'adore cette fic, c'est parfait, trop parfait! Les XOXOXO a mon Padfoot. =).



Reviewer: Amalynne Signed
Date: 04/16/05 Title: None

Oh MY GOSH! I absolutely LOVED chapter 23 and 24! They were so surprising and refreshing to read. Such an awesome, cool idea!! Ooh I luv your ficcy! Aww, Siri and Lana 4ever, ick stupid Angelina ruins everything!! Character interviews? Sounds kewl! Can't wait!! By the way, I just noticed a few typos on your fic, fix those or have a beta reader clean things up for you and I'm sure mugglenet will let your fics on. I'm up for beta reading if you're interested *grins sheepishly*. Keep it up. ~Alwayz, Ama



Reviewer: Amalynne Signed
Date: 03/15/05 Title: None

Gee, that totally sux about the internet thing... I can sympathize, though not to such extremes. Anyhoo, GREAT chappy! So beautiful! WRITE WRITE! You must write more! -Ama



Reviewer: Amalynne Signed
Date: 01/04/05 Title: None

I just started reading this, and I have to say this is excellent! Extremely well written, clever, pure hearted and I love it! Adding you to favs and congratulating you on being such a wondrous writer, totally reading on! *Kisses* -Amalynne

Author's Response: THANK YOU SOOOOOOOOOOOO MUCH!!!!!!! -Huggles- That is one of the bestestestest reviews ever!! (Though I LOVE ALL REVIEWS! Hehehe) Thankyou! I was thinking about quitting because I'm losing inspiration...-bites nails- But you've really encouraged me! Thank you! -hugs- xxxx



Reviewer: Amalynne Signed
Date: 01/27/05 Title: None

YOWZA! SAUCY! I luv luv luv it! Ha, when don't I? Ooh, yes, I'd wager that Sirius is much better than ol' Reggie poo. Gotta luv the players though. Yikes, she doesn't love him? I'm so sad... or does she *ponders*. Hmm, well I'll just have to wait for next update. So yes, update or I will die... =). -Amalynne

Author's Response: LOL!!!! Of course!!! Now I don't know what to write -bites nails- AHHHH!!!! Hehehehe, sad huh? Well, it's a she loves him/she loves him not situation...We'll have to wait til the next chapter to see...If it ever gets written...Teeheehee! Thankies for all your lovely reviews!! -Huggles- xxx

Author's Response: LOL!!!! Of course!!! Now I don't know what to write -bites nails- AHHHH!!!! Hehehehe, sad huh? Well, it's a she loves him/she loves him not situation...We'll have to wait til the next chapter to see...If it ever gets written...Teeheehee! Thankies for all your lovely reviews!! -Huggles- xxx



Reviewer: Amalynne Signed
Date: 02/23/05 Title: None

Well, chaps 19 + 20 could have been together, but I liked the quick update just the same. C'mon and lets have some action babe! Although... I'm not sure if you can call "female" a species in itself, but well we do have mysteries and at least you've got that right =). Hope you update just as soon. Luv yas and am priveleged to be the 1st ol' reviewer. Tee hee hee. -Ama



Reviewer: Amalynne Signed
Date: 02/22/05 Title: None

Short, but totally builds the suspense, plz make Lana pregnant so she at least build a tad bit of compassion for others around her, not only but bind her to ol' Siri poo. *sigh* wouldn't it be "romantic" if a baby brought them together, but she mis-carries of something... heck, I'm making for a tragic ending. UPDATE I LUIV THIS!