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I am a total bookworm that stayed up ALL night just to get the 7th Harry Potter, then sat up till 10:00 a.m to finish it . HARRY POTTER RULES !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
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"Love is unexplainable. There are no words for it. You can’t express why you feel so. It just happens," James said. "“Don’t you think that if I had the choice I would have chosen to love someone who didn’t hate me in return?”

“No,” Sirius said simply.

“You’re right.” James said, sighing. “I’m so screwed up, Padfoot.”

The drama-filled romantic tale of Lily and James's mysterious but unfortunate tale. It started with love and ended with death. It makes you wonder about the things they tried to live for. Pre-HBP



Categories: James/Lily Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 94269 Chapters: 60 Completed: Yes
Published:
11/06/04 Updated: 12/15/06


Reviewer: whitefiredragoon Signed
Date: 06/22/08 Title: Chapter 54: She Speaks

Cole is an evil, lying, osessed, stalker, GIT !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

 
Reviewer: whitefiredragoon Signed
Date: 06/22/08 Title: Chapter 59: The Big News

When are Lily and James going to be married !?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!!?!?!?!?!??!!?!??!?!?!?!?!???!!??!?!?!?!??!?!?!?:!?!?!?!??!?!?!??!?!?!??!??!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!??!!?!!!!!?!?!?!?!?!?

 
Reviewer: whitefiredragoon Signed
Date: 06/21/08 Title: Chapter 2: Meeting with Dumbledore

I like the plot so far as well as where the story is headed

 
Reviewer: whitefiredragoon Signed
Date: 06/22/08 Title: Chapter 21: Picking Lilies

Nice Idea with the dance ....
I do feel bad for Sirius though. He probably wanted to cut his tounge out when he figured out that it was Bellatrix.
and that graveyard was the same one Harry was fought Voldemort in, in his fourth year.......

 
Reviewer: whitefiredragoon Signed
Date: 06/22/08 Title: Chapter 24: Spirit Broken

Whats up with the two girls that Lily was talking to ????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????????

 
Reviewer: whitefiredragoon Signed
Date: 06/22/08 Title: Chapter 26: Change of Heart

Jealous much ........

 
Reviewer: whitefiredragoon Signed
Date: 06/22/08 Title: Chapter 29: Sybll's Secret

These chapters aren't all that bad, but what did Lily do in her fourth year ?

 
Reviewer: whitefiredragoon Signed
Date: 06/22/08 Title: Chapter 33: Venus Adams

Who is Venus Adams and what does she have against James family ?!?!?!?!

 
Reviewer: whitefiredragoon Signed
Date: 06/22/08 Title: Chapter 34: Fall To Pieces

Venus Adams is the most EVIL, BIASED Teacher in this story !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
What is her issue !?!?!?!!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!?!

 
Reviewer: whitefiredragoon Signed
Date: 06/22/08 Title: Chapter 35: James is from Mars, Evil is from Venus

OH MY GOD !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
HOW DID SHE GET OFF!!!!!!!
AND WHY DID DUMBLEDORE DARE HIRE HER !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

 
Reviewer: whitefiredragoon Signed
Date: 06/22/08 Title: Chapter 37: Going Under

What is that crazy, bisaed, broad, going to do to them (please excuse the language, i just really don't want anything to happen to them...............)

 
Reviewer: whitefiredragoon Signed
Date: 06/22/08 Title: Chapter 38: She Smells Fear

THAT EVIL (and because i can't actully say it ) FEMALE DOG !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! (pardon my french)
SHE DESERVES TO ROT FOR ALL ETERNITY NOW !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

 
Reviewer: whitefiredragoon Signed
Date: 06/22/08 Title: Chapter 39: The Mirror

Thank god that shes finished ........

 
Reviewer: whitefiredragoon Signed
Date: 06/22/08 Title: Chapter 40: The Truth

I hope she is foced to rot in azkaban with nothing but the memory of James father turning her down for the rest of her life !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ( I really hope i didn't sound to heartless just now )

 
Reviewer: whitefiredragoon Signed
Date: 06/22/08 Title: Chapter 41: Bitter Heartache

PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE, PLEASE tell me Harry will be mentioned soon !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

 
Reviewer: whitefiredragoon Signed
Date: 06/22/08 Title: Chapter 46: Sweet Surprises

Its is majorly screwed up that Lily turned James down, but I know (hope) that they'll get back together. I mean if they didn't what would happen to Harry

 
Reviewer: whitefiredragoon Signed
Date: 06/22/08 Title: Chapter 49: Cockiness

Why can't he learn to shut his mouth....?????????????????????????????????????????????????????????

 
Reviewer: whitefiredragoon Signed
Date: 06/22/08 Title: Chapter 51: A New Friend

That stranger is that Cole kid right.
Or if your following the original storyline its Snape

 

Summary: This story starts during the summer between Harry's fifth and sixth year. It follows his journey from the skinny, guilt-ridden Boy Who Lived to the Man Who Would Defeat Voldemort. Some H/G and R/Hr romance. Chapter 50 is up!!!! STORY COMPLETE!!! Written pre-HBP. This story no longer follows cannon.

Categories: General Fics Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 140900 Chapters: 50 Completed: Yes
Published:
12/31/04 Updated: 10/18/05


Reviewer: whitefiredragoon Signed
Date: 07/04/08 Title: Chapter 25: Bump in the Night

!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! GO PERCY !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
MALFOY DESERVES TO BE CURSED TO SPACE AND BACK !!!!!!!!!!
THEY SHOULD OF LET HARRY KILL MALFOY FOR WHAT HE DID !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

 
Reviewer: whitefiredragoon Signed
Date: 07/04/08 Title: Chapter 29: In the Dungeons

Wonderful story so far !!! As for names I have absolutley no idea, however in the book's Ron's patronus is a dog, ( its the same in the movie..watch carefully ) and Ginny's is a Horse .

 
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