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Something to Keep You Warm by Slian Martreb
Rated: 6th-7th Years [Reviews - 52]

Summary: Different version of my ideal 'first kiss' scenario, which is part of the 'Legion of LSPM's joint fic. The puppies are out of school at this point, and living in Sirius's flat. And Sirius HATES to be cold. A/N: This was written as a gift for someone on LJ for being a faithful reader/reviewer. First chapter is the original version, no prose or narrative. Second chapter will be exactly the same, but with prose. I'll be curious to see which is preferred....

Categories: Remus/Sirius Genre: Warnings: Slash, Sexual Situations

Word count: 3369 Chapters: 2 Completed: Yes
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03/02/06 Updated: 03/09/06


Reviewer: make-me-forget Signed
Date: 06/17/08 Title: Chapter 2: ...and prose

awww its so cute. you are a brilliant writer. but i like the first version better, its best to avoid unnessisary words in short stories.

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