What can I say? I'm just another Potter fan, and wishing to be a real author. I'm not even *really* a teenager yet, but I think I write better then my age's disposition...(I hope). I love writing, and usually don't do fan fics, because I like making up my own ideas, but Harry Potter is possibly the best series out there, so I'll give it a good, honest try. Thank you!
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EXTRACT “Yeah, I have a question,” Harry said suddenly, still staring into the scarlet, hateful eyes even though his scar seared in pain, “why did you give my mother so many chances to live?” This question had been etched into Harry’s mind for as long as he could remember, and maybe, maybe he would get it answered…Voldemort grinned, “Ah, I you would really like to know, I will show you,” grinned Voldemort. Harry immediately knew nothing good would come of this… 620 READS BUT ONLY 3 REVIEWS??????? COME ON GUYS!!!!!!!!!! ONE-SHOT, R+R!!!!!!
that was really, really good. was it book 7 disregarded, though?
wow. a story i did is sort of like this, and its in the queue yours is great!
Very, very cool.
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All is not well.
George uses work and Firewhisky to cope with Fred's death until a drink with a friend leads to something that dulls pain better than alcohol. Emotionally torn by grief, he struggles to allow Alicia into his life...and then comes baby....
*Winner of the 2008 Quicksilver Quill Award for Best Dark/Angsty Story*
wow really really good. its like the best i've read. great idea, too! cheers!
Author's Response: Ta, thanks! Jo gave it to me by leaving George out of the epilogue. I'm so glad she did! :)
I love your story.
the idea was good to do george, but i didnt know how far you could take it
you proved me wrong =)
Author's Response: Thank you for giving the story a chance! *hugs*
nice to have a well-written humor fic with a good idea! i love it! you portray the characters perfectly! in a way angela reminds me of Hermione, because she is constantly trying to get harry and ron to learn a lesson, or do their homework by themselves. but remus also reminds me of her, when he gives the other 3 all his help, when they end up needing it. lol hermione lives in everyone!
Author's Response: Yeah, Hermione rules! I don\'t know which one was more cruel, Ron\'s birds or Sirius\' bolis. Only, Angela was not so concerned about James and Peter learning a lesson, she just conveniently thought it, so she would not feel guilty that they would get in trouble because of her revenge against Sirius.
wowwwww coool! right now i just started working on a harry/luna relationship, and its really, really fun to write. personally, i always thought that THEY should have gotten together!
wow how old are you? i mean you dont have to say of course. but i mean thats like my style writing but its really awesome good job!
Author's Response: Thanks for your review! I am about the same age as J.K. Rowlings. Thats a pretty good age for a storyteller, judging from her success.
His fears? Flying...his own wand...fitting in...sticking out! His best friends? A passionate fire-breathing cousin, and a cool, aloof Death Eater's son. His destiny? Anything but ordinary!
Join Albus as he experiances his first year at Hogwarts and begins the journey out from under his father's collosal shadow, if he can survive it of course!
Meet the new Tenacious Trio, Albus Potter, Scorpius Malfoy, and Rose Weasley
wow i wrote a story just like this. rewriting it...it also has a chapter in the beginning about albus on the train. wow really scary!!!!
Getting cold chills! Glad you're reading!
omg. if i didnt kno better, i would have thought u copied my story. its better written, cuz i wrote that story in like 4th grade, but. jeez. only thing is that i didnt have scorpius as a friend. interesting twist....
Thanks! I'm glad you are enjoying this! Keep reading.
wow. just wow.
Author's Response: thanks for the review - I hope that means you liked it!
hmm like or hate...
LOVE! good job :)
Author's Response: Thank you so much for your kind review! I am always happy when people like my work. I will try my best to increase my output so that you can hopefully enjoy more poetry! ~*BOO*~
coolio! the only thing i would say for constructive critisizm is to make it "flow" a little more. but its great the way it is anyway! good job!!!!
Author's Response: Definitely! Thank you! Next time, I will try my best to make it *flow* a bit more. Thanks for the review!
that was INCREDIBLE
it flowed so well
and the writing was fabulous
and the idea is so cute and awesome
yes you did.
I like slytherins. i mean i would never want to BE one, but for some reason they are sort of like fasinating, because you never know what goes on with them. sort of the same with ravenclaw. hugglefluff (dif. name lol) is just not really mysterious. idk maybe its the name, or their disposition. ;] grate job, anywhoo
Author's Response: Yeah, I am quite interseted in Slytherins myself... Thanks for reviewing!
Oh, people just so you know, I was joking about the "beady eyes" part. its an inside joke.
Just so you all know...
I have 6 pages done on the second chapter. it's not close to finished yet, and I have to really work on the beginning of the chapter, because its a little slow, but it will definatly be up by the end of this week (that is if it's approved!)
Thanks for reading!!!
~Renny Shire :]
YAY ITS ACCEPTED!!!
it wont let me read it! it says there are no chapters! but the title is very good...
Author's Response: I\'ve contacted a moderator and the problem has since been fixed. Thanks so much for bringing this to my attention! And I\'m glad you liked the title. :)
cool i like it a lot .