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What can I say? I'm just another Potter fan, and wishing to be a real author. I'm not even *really* a teenager yet, but I think I write better then my age's disposition...(I hope). I love writing, and usually don't do fan fics, because I like making up my own ideas, but Harry Potter is possibly the best series out there, so I'll give it a good, honest try. Thank you!
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Summary: The Last Battle between Good and Evil… Harry is cornered, injured and wandless, lying defeated against Riddle's tombstone, Voldemort leering at him. Voldemort oddly gives him a chance to ask any one question, so Harry asks something which has been etched in his head for a very long time...

WARNING: SOME SWEAR WORDS... ABOUT 4-5 IN ALL ONE SHOT!!!!!!!!!! Thx SO much to lunadragonfly from harrypotterfanfiction.com for the AMAZING banner - view it on my authour page!!!

EXTRACT “Yeah, I have a question,” Harry said suddenly, still staring into the scarlet, hateful eyes even though his scar seared in pain, “why did you give my mother so many chances to live?” This question had been etched into Harry’s mind for as long as he could remember, and maybe, maybe he would get it answered…

Voldemort grinned, “Ah, I you would really like to know, I will show you,” grinned Voldemort. Harry immediately knew nothing good would come of this…

620 READS BUT ONLY 3 REVIEWS??????? COME ON GUYS!!!!!!!!!! ONE-SHOT, R+R!!!!!!

Categories: Dark/Angsty Fics Genre: Warnings: Abuse, Violence, Character Death

Word count: 3029 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
11/11/05 Updated: 11/11/05


Reviewer: Ren Shire Signed
Date: 06/20/08 Title: Chapter 1: Love Is A Remarkable Thing

that was really, really good. was it book 7 disregarded, though?

 

Halloween, 1981 by PuppetPal
Rated: 6th-7th Years [Reviews - 11]

Summary: This is the story of the fateful night that decided Harry's position and fame in the wizarding world. But what REALLY happened that night?

Categories: Marauder Era Genre: Warnings: Abuse, Character Death, Violence

Word count: 1646 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
06/10/06 Updated: 06/11/06


Reviewer: Ren Shire Signed
Date: 06/26/08 Title: Chapter 1: Halloween, 1981

wow. a story i did is sort of like this, and its in the queue yours is great!

 

Ballad of the Marauders by remus R us
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 4]

Summary: After the final war, one story held a fascination for everyone: a story that talked of love and hate, trust and betrayal, courage and cowardice, fulfilment and loss, victory and defeat, life and death – the story of the Marauders. And, wherever wizarding folk gathered, the Ballad of the Marauders was sung; sung as a reminder of times past, that had shaped their future.

Categories: Poetry Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 403 Chapters: 1 Completed: No
Published:
11/15/06 Updated: 11/17/06


Reviewer: Ren Shire Signed
Date: 06/22/08 Title: Chapter 1: Introduction and Oration 1

Very, very cool.
As of today, we are neighbors!!!

(Check the author's page!)

 

For Bitter or for Worse by Kerichi
Rated: 6th-7th Years [Reviews - 1016]

Summary:

All is not well.

George uses work and Firewhisky to cope with Fred's death until a drink with a friend leads to something that dulls pain better than alcohol. Emotionally torn by grief, he struggles to allow Alicia into his life...and then comes baby....

*Winner of the 2008 Quicksilver Quill Award for Best Dark/Angsty Story*



Categories: Dark/Angsty Fics Genre: Warnings: Mild Profanity, Sexual Situations, Substance Abuse, Violence

Word count: 112887 Chapters: 40 Completed: Yes
Published:
08/01/07 Updated: 07/12/08


Reviewer: Ren Shire Signed
Date: 06/13/08 Title: Chapter 1: Pain and Comfort

wow really really good. its like the best i've read. great idea, too! cheers!

Author's Response: Ta, thanks! Jo gave it to me by leaving George out of the epilogue. I'm so glad she did! :)

 
Reviewer: Ren Shire Signed
Date: 06/17/08 Title: Chapter 6: Motherly Love

I love your story.
the idea was good to do george, but i didnt know how far you could take it
you proved me wrong =)

Author's Response: Thank you for giving the story a chance! *hugs*

 

A Matter of Property by anath
Rated: 3rd-5th Years [Reviews - 17]

Summary: When Sirius Black dumps a girl, she cries and begs him to come back. When he humiliates her in front of the whole school, she does not seek revenge. Never. Too bad that no one ever said that to Angela Peters.

Categories: Humor Fics Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 2284 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
01/02/08 Updated: 01/12/08


Reviewer: Ren Shire Signed
Date: 06/27/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

nice to have a well-written humor fic with a good idea! i love it! you portray the characters perfectly! in a way angela reminds me of Hermione, because she is constantly trying to get harry and ron to learn a lesson, or do their homework by themselves. but remus also reminds me of her, when he gives the other 3 all his help, when they end up needing it. lol hermione lives in everyone!

Author's Response: Yeah, Hermione rules! I don\'t know which one was more cruel, Ron\'s birds or Sirius\' bolis. Only, Angela was not so concerned about James and Peter learning a lesson, she just conveniently thought it, so she would not feel guilty that they would get in trouble because of her revenge against Sirius.

 

The Song of the Stars by Pondering
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 15]

Summary: On one starry night, Luna tries to help Harry listen to the stars.

Categories: Harry/Other Character Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 1564 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
01/02/08 Updated: 01/12/08


Reviewer: Ren Shire Signed
Date: 06/26/08 Title: Chapter 1: The Song of the Stars

wowwwww coool! right now i just started working on a harry/luna relationship, and its really, really fun to write. personally, i always thought that THEY should have gotten together!

 

A Raven's Song by indigo_mouse
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 17]

Summary: Muggles and Wizards alike have legends of Faerie, some grim and shadowed, some bright and beautiful. It is a twilight land between light and dark, where love and sorrow intertwine with enchantment. Twenty one years after the fall of the Dark Lord, a girl walks out of the legend and brings a very old magic to Hogwarts.

Winner of the 2008 Quicksilver Quills Best Romance Between Other Characters.



Categories: Other Pairing Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 15113 Chapters: 7 Completed: Yes
Published:
04/17/08 Updated: 06/29/08


Reviewer: Ren Shire Signed
Date: 06/17/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - Wands Out

wow how old are you? i mean you dont have to say of course. but i mean thats like my style writing but its really awesome good job!

Author's Response: Thanks for your review! I am about the same age as J.K. Rowlings. Thats a pretty good age for a storyteller, judging from her success.

 

Summary:

His fears? Flying...his own wand...fitting in...sticking out! His best friends? A passionate fire-breathing cousin, and a cool, aloof Death Eater's son. His destiny? Anything but ordinary!

Join Albus as he experiances his first year at Hogwarts and begins the journey out from under his father's collosal shadow, if he can survive it of course!

Meet the new Tenacious Trio, Albus Potter, Scorpius Malfoy, and Rose Weasley



Categories: Post-Hogwarts Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 61027 Chapters: 19 Completed: No
Published:
05/23/08 Updated: 09/08/09


Reviewer: Ren Shire Signed
Date: 06/20/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 Compartmentalized

wow i wrote a story just like this. rewriting it...it also has a chapter in the beginning about albus on the train. wow really scary!!!!

Author's Response:

Getting cold chills! Glad you're reading!

SLy 

 
Reviewer: Ren Shire Signed
Date: 06/20/08 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 Boats, Brothers and other Decisions

omg. if i didnt kno better, i would have thought u copied my story. its better written, cuz i wrote that story in like 4th grade, but. jeez. only thing is that i didnt have scorpius as a friend. interesting twist....

Author's Response:

Thanks! I'm glad you are enjoying this! Keep reading.

SLy

 

Wake Up by coolh5000
Rated: 6th-7th Years [Reviews - 32]

Summary: Every morning Ron arrives at the shop and wakes up George with a cup of tea. One morning, however, George doesn't wake up.

This started as a 500 word drabble for my DADA class and turned into a 2000 word one-shot instead, before becoming two chapters. The prompt for my drabble was to use an overdose so be warned that this fic is not a happy one. It is actually I lot darker than I really imagine the Weasley family being after the war, but this is what came out when I started writing and I think it is possible.

please note that the warning is for attempted suicide only

An epilogue has arrived and I promise that I have now finished, though I have found this interesting to write so I may carry on with this version of the Weasley family at some point

Categories: Dark/Angsty Fics Genre: Warnings: Self Injury, Suicide

Word count: 5747 Chapters: 3 Completed: Yes
Published:
06/03/08 Updated: 06/19/08


Reviewer: Ren Shire Signed
Date: 06/18/08 Title: Chapter 2: George

wow. just wow.

Author's Response: thanks for the review - I hope that means you liked it!

 

Why? by x0BOO0x
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 2]

Summary: Harry wants to know.

Why?

Categories: Poetry Genre: Warnings: Character Death

Word count: 126 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
06/12/08 Updated: 06/20/08


Reviewer: Ren Shire Signed
Date: 06/23/08 Title: Chapter 1: Why?

hmm like or hate...

LOVE! good job :)

Author's Response: Thank you so much for your kind review! I am always happy when people like my work. I will try my best to increase my output so that you can hopefully enjoy more poetry! ~*BOO*~

 

A Tribute To Severus by quibblequill
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 8]

Summary: The least I can do for the man after all he went through. Now I can go back to disliking his memory in peace.

Categories: Poetry Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 109 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
06/16/08 Updated: 06/20/08


Reviewer: Ren Shire Signed
Date: 06/21/08 Title: Chapter 1: A Tribute To Severus

coolio! the only thing i would say for constructive critisizm is to make it "flow" a little more. but its great the way it is anyway! good job!!!!

Author's Response: Definitely! Thank you! Next time, I will try my best to make it *flow* a bit more. Thanks for the review!

 

He Wasn't All Bad by Amelia Bedelia
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 38]

Summary: COMPLETE. When trying to decide who might be worse - the Weasley twins or James and Sirius - the Fat Lady retells a story about overhearing James' confession to Lily. One-shot.

Categories: James/Lily Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 3433 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
06/16/08 Updated: 06/23/08


Reviewer: Ren Shire Signed
Date: 06/23/08 Title: Chapter 1: He Wasn't All Bad

that was INCREDIBLE
it flowed so well
and the writing was fabulous
and the idea is so cute and awesome

A+++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++

 

Not Quite Hatred by anath
Rated: 6th-7th Years [Reviews - 6]

Summary: Looking back years later, he could see that it was that night that had first made him start paying attention to Astoria Greengrass.

Categories: Draco/Other Character Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 3038 Chapters: 2 Completed: No
Published:
06/20/08 Updated: 01/16/09


Reviewer: Ren Shire Signed
Date: 06/27/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

yes you did.
b29;good job!!!
I like slytherins. i mean i would never want to BE one, but for some reason they are sort of like fasinating, because you never know what goes on with them. sort of the same with ravenclaw. hugglefluff (dif. name lol) is just not really mysterious. idk maybe its the name, or their disposition. ;] grate job, anywhoo

Author's Response: Yeah, I am quite interseted in Slytherins myself... Thanks for reviewing!

 

Playing With Fire by Ren Shire
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 7]

Summary: Harry Potter defeated the dark Lord Voldemort, so everything's fine, right? No, nothing is ever perfect in the wizarding world. Now that Harry's finished school, and got on with his life, his two sons, James and Albus, are attending school at Hogwarts, and a curious happening causes a frantic uproar at the school.

Meanwhile, what Lily thinks is going to be an uneventful two years leading up to her experience at Hogwarts are full of anxiety and fear for what her brothers are facing at the place she most long to be...

Lily had yet again been playing with fire…

Categories: General Fics Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 1123 Chapters: 1 Completed: No
Published:
06/21/08 Updated: 06/22/08


Reviewer: Ren Shire Signed
Date: 06/22/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Playing With Fire

Oh, people just so you know, I was joking about the "beady eyes" part. its an inside joke.
=)
Sorry,

Renny Shire

 
Reviewer: Ren Shire Signed
Date: 06/23/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Playing With Fire

Just so you all know...
I have 6 pages done on the second chapter. it's not close to finished yet, and I have to really work on the beginning of the chapter, because its a little slow, but it will definatly be up by the end of this week (that is if it's approved!)
Thanks for reading!!!
~Renny Shire :]

 
Reviewer: Ren Shire Signed
Date: 06/22/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Playing With Fire

YAY ITS ACCEPTED!!!

 

Summary: A bruised cheek, a lost dog, and a little brother who's changed. Sirius stares at a streetlight just beyond his bedroom window and considers all the reasons he has for running away from Number Twelve.

Categories: Dark/Angsty Fics Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 1137 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
06/23/08 Updated: 06/23/08


Reviewer: Ren Shire Signed
Date: 06/23/08 Title: Chapter 1: He Leaves His Legacy On Marble Floors

it wont let me read it! it says there are no chapters! but the title is very good...

Author's Response: I\'ve contacted a moderator and the problem has since been fixed. Thanks so much for bringing this to my attention! And I\'m glad you liked the title. :)

 
Reviewer: Ren Shire Signed
Date: 06/24/08 Title: Chapter 1: He Leaves His Legacy On Marble Floors

cool i like it a lot .

 
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