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Ultimatum by Marauder

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: Sirius has loved Remus for a couple of years, and James is sick of watching his best friend suffer. So he gives him an ultimatum: Sirius has a few hours to tell Remus, or else James will. Fic also includes Peter, McGonagall, Andromeda, Tonks as a little kid, Regulus, and cameos from Filch and Lily.
Reviewer: MysticalMayhem Signed
Date: 08/21/08 Title: Chapter 1: Ultimatum

Remus/Sirius is one of my fave ships and you pulled it off amazingly. Loved it, great job :D

Could You ever Forgive Me? by phaedra

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: One day after class, he suddenly notices himself watching Harry in the quiety of his classroom. Will he get the courage to confront his feelings to Harry? Slash. One Shot
Reviewer: MysticalMayhem Signed
Date: 09/03/08 Title: Chapter 1: The Stalker

Gosh I'm depressed now, that was sad, but brilliant..I loved it. Great job :D

The Unseemly Proposal by sparx

Rated: 3rd-5th Years • Past Featured Story
Summary: The reign of Voldermort comes to an end, and with it ends the prestige and power Lucius Malfoy once had in the Wizarding World. In order to regain the respect of his fellow wizards and to make them believe that he has turned over a new leaf (which he actually hasn't) and has graciously accepted muggles and Mudbloods, Lucius asks Hermione, a Mudblood, to marry his son, Draco, a pure-blood. Obviously, they both refuse, but Lucius isn't going to give up easily. After all, he wants his status back. He still has a few tricks up his sleeve and is determined to play match-maker. What happens next is a series of events that serve only to bring Hermione and Draco closer, both literally and figuratively speaking. Read to find out how this one unseemly proposal causes absolute chaos in their lives! THIS STORY IS NOT HBP and DH COMPATIBLE! Hey all! Check out my personal info for the expected date of the next update. =)
Reviewer: MysticalMayhem Signed
Date: 06/08/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1- The Unexpected Visit

Pleeeeease, update! I don't mean to sound desperate but I pretty much am. Your story is so great and it just keeps playing on mind my, it's driving me insane. It's one of the best fanfic's I've ever read and although I understand you probably have a good reason for taking so long, just please dont leave us suspense much longer. Just give us some comfort that this isn't abandoned, :)

Reviewer: MysticalMayhem Signed
Date: 06/23/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1- The Unexpected Visit

Oh come on, this is just not fair, I must have read this fic a dozen times already! It must be about 2 years I've been waiting, although it feels longer. And each time I read it my stomach still does back flips and I still feel tears running down my cheeks. This fic turned me into a draco-hermione shipper. I was in an exam today, and honestly this story was all that was running through my head. Please update soon, before I go insane and lose my mind and lose myself so completely I can't bug you with my desperate messages! UPDATE!!!!

The Sweetest Sin by annie

Rated: Professors •
Summary: In the years following Voldemort's victory in the second war, Muggle-borns must become slaves and servants to pure-bloods in order to survive. Over time, Hermione Granger has learned to suppress her pride and independence in households where she is considered lower than dirt. She thought she would be prepared for this new family, just like she was for all the previous ones. What she didn't know was that this new family was none other than Draco Malfoy's. Will she manage hold up when she finds herself struggling to withhold her sharp tongue, returning hatred, and...something else?

The last chapter of this story has been posted! Thanks for reading :)

Thank you to everyone who voted "The Sweetest Sin" as the Best Tearjerker in round 4 of the Dramione Awards!

Thanks to some of my amazing readers, The Sweetest Sin has been/is being translated into seven languages: French, Italian, Russian, Portuguese, Czech, Latvian, and Chinese. If you would like the links to any of the translations, please e-mail me or leave a review :)
Reviewer: MysticalMayhem Signed
Date: 08/22/08 Title: Chapter 1: Meeting the Malfoys

You brought me to tears with this fic, it was so amazing. I really wish they could have stayed together..but i guess that's just how things are. You are very talented, I loved it. :D

Pound by witchwannaB

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: Pound, pound, pound. My head against the door. Locked inside a bathroom stall. Pound, pound. My black robes flutter. Pound. A girl struggles with her sexuality through self-injury.
Reviewer: MysticalMayhem Signed
Date: 08/02/08 Title: Chapter 1: Pound

Ooo...this is about Lavender, Parvati and Dean right? I love your writing style in this..it's very unique and effective. I really enjoyed this fic, great job. :D

Take My Heart Away by Hatusu

Rated: 6th-7th Years • Past Featured Story
Summary: Hermione goes back in time with one mission: to kill Tom Riddle before he ever comes to power. A difficult task, correct? An impossible one, she realizes, as a love between them grows stronger than anything she has ever known. Now Hermione has a choice to make. Will she condemn the Wizarding world to almost certain destruction, or will she take the life of the one boy she has ever loved?
Reviewer: MysticalMayhem Signed
Date: 08/17/08 Title: Chapter 1: The End

Well..what can I say? Currently I am crying...it is your fault..but I don't hate you. This is the most beautiful story I have ever read, absolutely heart-wrenching. It's just so tragically ironic. I never thought Voldemort capable of love..but you made it happen it one second. I honestly thought that she would save him...but at the same time knew it could never happen because too much would change...I mean Harry's parents would never even have died. And the rose...that just killed me...if I hadn't have been crying already..I was then. And you make it so believable it's scary...an absolutely amazing (enter word that doesn't exist) fic. :D

"Mum, Dad, It's Me... Harry." by Mudblood428

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: Harry, Ron, and Hermione make a trip to Godric's Hollow to visit the Potters' graves. There, Harry speaks to his parents for the first time, and in so doing, discovers that the dead are never truly lost. (One-shot. Bring your kleenex.)
Reviewer: MysticalMayhem Signed
Date: 08/21/08 Title: Chapter 1: One-Shot

Crying yet again, either I'm becoming more ridiculously emotional or that was bloody brilliant. I'm thinking the latter...or probably both. Loved it, great job :D

Clair De Lune by Astrid Skywalker

Rated: 6th-7th Years •

It was full moon when the Dark Lord sealed a part of his soul within a magical amulet, and then broke it in half. One half was left to the faithful werewolves to guard. The other half was tossed into the impenetrable depths of time where no one but him could get it. When the first half has been found, the Order of the Phoenix selects Hermione Granger to go back into the past to search for the missing piece. What is waiting for her is a brutal task that will test her beyond her limits, and an undying love that extends beyond the boundaries of time.


No werewolves were harmed in the making of this story.

Winner of 2007 Quicksilver Quills Awards - Best Non-Canon Romance

Update (9 May): Chapter 17, Burning, is up! Enjoy!

Reviewer: MysticalMayhem Signed
Date: 09/13/08 Title: Chapter 1: The Amulet

Well I've finally decided to read it...I've seen in a few times before but never read it..and now to be honest, I'm amazed. You really do have a fantastic story here, be sure to update soon. :D

Masters and Servants by HogwartsHoney

Rated: 6th-7th Years •
Summary: Several months after Dumbledore's death Harry tracks down Snape to even the score, but what transpires is far from expected, for either of them.

Winner of the 6th round of the Multifaceted Awards in category Desire
Reviewer: MysticalMayhem Signed
Date: 09/02/08 Title: Chapter 1: One

The idea of Snape/Harry definitely disturbs me..but you write it very well. Great job, I loved it. :D

Author's Response: Thanks for giving it a go despite the pairing ;o) And thanks for reviewing! ~H

A Sleepwalk to Remember by Lady Knightly

Rated: 6th-7th Years •
Summary: For once in her life, Hermione is faced with a problem she does not know how to solve...
Reviewer: MysticalMayhem Signed
Date: 08/20/08 Title: Chapter 1: Beginnings

Well after spending the day reading all 22 chapters of a fic containing a ship that I don't like, I have one thing to say: It was fantastic. What an awesome fic, great job :D Update soon

Author's Response: Ah! I am so so happy that you liked it even with a ship you don't normally sail xD and whooooa that's a lot of reading in one day! thanks for reading :)

Reviewer: MysticalMayhem Signed
Date: 10/15/08 Title: A Sleepwalk to Remember

Hey, it made my day to see an update for this, if you recall I spent an entire day reading all the other chapters, and this one was not a disappointment. I loved it. I can't believe you left it there, but I loved the ending anyway. Personally I think for someone who is not too comfortable writing steamy stuff you did a remarkably good job. You at least have me absolutely hooked on this fic.

Although there was a point where you said: 'and how likely he thought it that anyone would be able to produce something even mildly useful', I think, although I'm not entirely sure, that you have meant unlikely.

and 'check' I believe should be spelt cheque.

But apart from that it was perfect, every bit worth the wait, hope to see another update from you soon. You truly have made a Hermione/Severus shipper out of me. :D

Author's Response: lol, dangit, i hate it when i miss stupid stuff like that xD fixed! and i'm so happy that you enjoyed the update! as for that one sentence, actually "likely" was exactly what I meant to use, the sarcastic tone of the sentence is supposed to imply that he doesn't think anyone will be able to do anything correctly. "how likely" can go unanswered; because it's Snape, and because his character has been established, we can assume for ourselves just "how likely" (i.e. not very).

Blurting Out Something Horribly Stupid by loligo8me

Rated: 3rd-5th Years •
Summary: Katie Bell finally musters enough courage to ask a certain Quidditch Captain a question. The result? Definitely not what she expected!
Katie's POV. KB/OW fluff. Sigh...
Reviewer: MysticalMayhem Signed
Date: 08/17/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I'm a big Katie/Oliver shipper, your characterization was perfect, in my opinion u just don't see enough K/O fics, this one's brilliant though, I love your style of writing, great job :D

Author's Response: What a lovely review! Thank you!

Portrait of A Love Lost by Gmariam

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: Harry and Ginny find a portrait tucked away in the Room of Requirement. It is a painting of a beautiful witch with chocolate brown hair and grey eyes, standing next to a very familiar wizard with long auburn hair and twinkling blue eyes. It is a painting of a couple who were once in love, and who were married at Hogwarts many years past. But fate intervened, and a tragic loss separated them. This is their story, a portrait of love lost and found.

This story was written for the August Monthly Challenge - Weddings and was awarded first place.
Reviewer: MysticalMayhem Signed
Date: 08/17/08 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

I loved it...it made me cry...not that that's hard to do...but it was amazing anyway. The wedding was just so touching, with the vows and everything, I thought it was very well thought out. I'm so glad you gave Dumbledore his happy ending, I always thought that was something missing in the real HP series. I also love how you incorporated Fawkes and The Grey Lady. It really was a stunningly well-written fic, you obviously have talent. :D

Author's Response: Wow, thank you so much for the great review. This story is now two years old and I'm still very proud of it, and thrilled someone is still reading it! I have to admit I was sort of disappointed that the Grey Lady in DH wasn't actually Dumbledore's wife, lol. And I still want to know more about Fawkes, I love writing him! The vows were fun to write as well, I'm so glad you enjoyed them. Thanks so much for reading this story and taking the time to leave such a wonderful review!! ~Gina :)

Behind those Emerald Eyes by makinmagic323

Rated: 6th-7th Years •
Summary: Ten years have elapsed since Dumbledore's death and McGonagall has Hogwarts back on its feet again. Hermione and Malfoy both teach at the school. But when a new teacher is hired to teach Defense Against the Dark Arts, everyone seems to feel that they've met him before. A story of mystery, passion, friendship, and jealousy… not to mention that Harry Potter has been missing for ten years and Voldemort is dead. (All violence is mild).


There have been errors when this story gets submitted for validation, so the mods have to do it manually. Therefore it does not show when it has been validated -- but it has!!

Thank you to all my reviewers!!!

Disclaimer: I own my imagination, JK Rowling owns Harry Potter.
Reviewer: MysticalMayhem Signed
Date: 09/04/08 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 11: Frustrating Truth

Yay..an update..and I know how much you like reviews so here goes. It was amazing. I can't wait to find out whether he tells her or not..I have a feeling he's going to talk himself out of it. I love the way you're dragging it out just enough to make it exciting but not too much to make it boring. And Malfoy, I can't help feeling sorry for him, even if he is trying to kill Everett. I think that Hermione will be angry and upset when Everett tells her, but I still want him to do it soon. I'm really enjoying this story, thanks for trying so hard to get this chapter up, trust me, it was worth it, hope you had a great holiday. Can't wait to see the next update :D

Author's Response: That was a great reviews =) I'm so thrilled that you're enjoying my story and trying to guess/figure out what happens. And it's always good to hear what reviewers think will happen! Chapter 12 should be up any day now!

Reviewer: MysticalMayhem Signed
Date: 08/22/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Gingersnap Cookies

Well you asked for a review of each chapter so here goes: good characterization, I love the way Hermione seems pretty much the same..yet Draco so drastically altered. I also like the way you described what had happened in the past, but keeping the flow going and making it interesting. A great beginning, can't wait to see more.

Author's Response: Thank you so much for all of the feedback, I really appreciate it. All comments help a writer to improve!

Reviewer: MysticalMayhem Signed
Date: 08/22/08 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3: Black Cat

Loved the ending..i had a feeling it was going to be an animagus. Really good so far..love the notes from Draco. But what's with the Professor Skunk thing?

Author's Response: Haha, that's something my little cousin used to call someone we knew who was going gray, I just thought it would be fun to include. And I'm so glad you loved the chapter!

Reviewer: MysticalMayhem Signed
Date: 08/22/08 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4: Dangerous Liaison

Really good so far (I've probably said that already but it is) I love how you describe him as being 'an auror of sorts'.
Did he know that Ron had died or not? Can't wait to see what happens next.

Author's Response: No, he did not know that Ron had died. "Everett" basically extricated himself from the world he knew... but that backstory will be explained in due time.

Reviewer: MysticalMayhem Signed
Date: 08/22/08 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5: Deep Water

Aww poor Draco, i can't help but feel sorry for him..he seems so sweet and innocent. Good stuff :D

Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing! I really like getting feedback -- much appreciation!

Reviewer: MysticalMayhem Signed
Date: 08/23/08 Title: Chapter 8: Chapter 7: Part II: The Promise

Well so far I have to say it just keeps getting better, I loved this chapter..well part of chapter. I love the gifts from Harry: the card for Ron and the necklace with the stone for Hermione, that was a really nice touch.

Author's Response: I'm really glad you liked all the gifts I chose for him to give to them. Thanks for letting me know! I appreciate it.