I've always enjoyed writing. I may not be a brilliant writer, but I do enjoy it.
That was very good. I really liked it. I liked the way you kept everyone in character and it had a good plot too. I've added it to my favourites. xxEricaxx
This one I found quite angsty, not like your other RL/SB fics which are a bit more fluffy and cute than this. I still liked it though. :)
This was quite good. Quite short too, but nevertheless had some quality writing in it. 8/10 from me.
that was REALLY good. I haven't read a ff like that in a while... you need to get the second chappie up soon, mate. Just one word of warning... most fan fics I've read with only about two or three chaps end up becoming boring after a really good first chap. PLEASE don't do that. I think this fan fic has a lot of potential so GET THAT SECOND CHAPTER UP ASAP!!!!
That was a really good poem, I liked it. I tried to write a poem a bit similar to it - it was about HBP coming out too but it turned out disastorous - yours is much better. Anyway, I liked it - i reacted a bit like that when HBP came out. I'd agree with Pepper in that it didn't flow that well in a couple of places but thats the tough bit about poetry...
That was very cute, how you had it from "Nymphie's" POV. It's also very clever. 9/10 from me.
I enjoyed reading your fic - it was very good. I'd agree with Diamond Quill here that the RL/SB is subtle. Um, I dunno what else to say ...
Author's Response: I am ESTATIC you enjoyed it! This was my first RL\SB fic and I wanted it to be subtle. I have written otherR\S fics since this one where tis much less subtle. lol
I like Luna - she's my favourite character. I think you summed her up pretty well. I liked your poem - it was short and I like short ones for some reason...
Thats a good fan fic - Its one of the best humour ones I've read. I liked it. I was really shocked too when Remus dropped to his knees on the couch but they were just strawberries so its all good. It was short and sweet too. (Your fan fic not the strawberries)
Author's Response: Thank you for reading and reviewing. I am glad you enjoyed the story.
That was really good. That was one of the best post Hogwarts one shots I've read. I liked the way you had the flash backs. Did the song 'Fields of Gold' inspire you with this story or was it just a random title?
That was very good ... you made me teary, which is pretty good because I don't normally cry reading fics. I hope you right more angsty sort of fics like this - I thorougly enjoyed this one.
That was really good Claire! I can't rhyme for peanuts so I do admire your work even more. And as someone before me said, the rhymes work really well. The way you put 'Avada Kedavra' at the end made it sound like a letter to someone (which i do like, i'm not sure why, but i do) Anyway. 10/10 from me and butterbeers all around. :)
Author's Response: Aww, thankyou very much. I decided I had been inactive on this site for too long and it was time to post something new, so I came up with this little poem. i am quite pleased with it. *takes butterbeer* Cheers!
I really liked that, it was very good. It had a nice pace to it and I liked the way we saw what Hermione was thinking, as well as Ron. I would have to agree with ravenclawslion17(sp.?) that it ended suddenly but it matched the pace nicely. It worked fine as a one shot but I'm sure if you wanted to you could turn it into a decent chapter fic. Anyway, I think I'll go have a look at your other fic now.
x acire x
Author's Response: I'm not sure what I was thinking with ending this one so quickly. I guess I wanted to give a view of what they were both thinking under the circumstances, and then just giving the whole thing a turn-around with Hermione's awakening. Well, actually, I'm not sure why. At the time, it just seemed the right place to leave off. Thanks for your review!
WARNING: SOME SWEAR WORDS... ABOUT 4-5 IN ALL ONE SHOT!!!!!!!!!! Thx SO much to lunadragonfly from harrypotterfanfiction.com for the AMAZING banner - view it on my authour page!!!
EXTRACT “Yeah, I have a question,” Harry said suddenly, still staring into the scarlet, hateful eyes even though his scar seared in pain, “why did you give my mother so many chances to live?” This question had been etched into Harry’s mind for as long as he could remember, and maybe, maybe he would get it answered…Voldemort grinned, “Ah, I you would really like to know, I will show you,” grinned Voldemort. Harry immediately knew nothing good would come of this… 620 READS BUT ONLY 3 REVIEWS??????? COME ON GUYS!!!!!!!!!! ONE-SHOT, R+R!!!!!!
You reviewed my poem, I'm returning the favour and reviewing your fic now. :D
This fic is not bad, you have some great ideas here but I'd agree with someone who mentioned before me that this is a bit too fast paced. If you, say, made it a chapter fic, it might flow better.
But apart from that, I did like it.
btw, thanks for reviewing my fic. :) I do appreciate it!
Author's Response: Yah! Another reviewer!!! Thx for your comments - I wanted to do a one shot and this just kinda flowed, I didn't think it was going that fast when I wrote it. I just kinda saw it in my mind playing from when Harry was cornered to when he talked to Dumbledore at that speed - but hey, we all have different opinions about different or the same things. Thanks for the kind review!!! xxxoooxxxoooprongs_potter_rulezxxxoooxxxooo
I hope you post the next chapter up soon because I want to know what's in that letter. This fan fic isn't too bad, maybe slightly predictable but generally a very good start to a hopefully high quality chapter fan fic.
Author's Response: Sorry it's so predictable, maybe the third chapter will throw you off! Thanx for the compliment though!
That was so sweet and lovely - I throughly enjoyed reading your fan fic. And the picture you drew with it is extremely good. Very fluffy and cute. 9/10 from me.
This is really good. I haven't seen too many fan fics about when the Weasleys were kids, so it's good to see someone thinking outside the square. It's very good.
Author's Response: Aye, it's unfortunate that this time has been left out of the spotlight. It's surprising, even - especially as we heard about Gideon and Fabian in OotP. However, at the same time, it was great to write characters into a fanfiction story, about whom I haven't read (at least at this time), and haven't had the influence of anyone else's opinion. Thank you for review!
Awww, that was another great poem, and another one with Draco getting beaten up. :( You've portrayed very well. 9/10
This poem is very sweet...I do like it. The way you put '2 the numeral' rather than 'two the word', shows that you like doing your own thing in writing poems, which is half the fun of writing poems.
Keep up the good work. :)
Author's Response: thanks, i'm glad you liked it!! i really appreciate your review
I really liked this, I don't know why you haven't got more reviews. The style of poem is very good. It's short and to the point. You've portrayed what would probably have happened in that sort of situation very well. 10/10. :)