Summary: Sirius has loved Remus for a couple of years, and James is sick of watching his best friend suffer. So he gives him an ultimatum: Sirius has a few hours to tell Remus, or else James will. Fic also includes Peter, McGonagall, Andromeda, Tonks as a little kid, Regulus, and cameos from Filch and Lily.
That was very good. I really liked it. I liked the way you kept everyone in character and it had a good plot too. I've added it to my favourites. xxEricaxx
Summary: After Sirius's death, Remus becomes Harry's guardian. Sirius/Remus.
This one I found quite angsty, not like your other RL/SB fics which are a bit more fluffy and cute than this. I still liked it though. :)
Summary: I don’t regret what we’ve become, what these years have made us – not in the least. But I want a happy ending.
This was quite good. Quite short too, but nevertheless had some quality writing in it. 8/10 from me.
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that was REALLY good. I haven't read a ff like that in a while... you need to get the second chappie up soon, mate. Just one word of warning... most fan fics I've read with only about two or three chaps end up becoming boring after a really good first chap. PLEASE don't do that. I think this fan fic has a lot of potential so GET THAT SECOND CHAPTER UP ASAP!!!!
Summary: What will you be doing on the "Holy" day July 16th?
This piece is dedicated to all those HUGE Harry Potter fans who can't wait for the book no longer.
That was a really good poem, I liked it. I tried to write a poem a bit similar to it - it was about HBP coming out too but it turned out disastorous - yours is much better. Anyway, I liked it - i reacted a bit like that when HBP came out. I'd agree with Pepper in that it didn't flow that well in a couple of places but thats the tough bit about poetry...
Summary: Sirius has been causing trouble in school, and McGonagall asks Andromeda to come in for a meeting with her. A very young Nymphadora Tonks comes along, eager to see her favorite cousin. RL/SB.
That was very cute, how you had it from "Nymphie's" POV. It's also very clever. 9/10 from me.
Summary: What happened when Sirius told Snape to go to the Shrieking Shack during the full moon when they were at Hogwarts? Why did James save him? How did Remus react? ONESHOT I rewrote it to include 3000 more words worth of extra scenes and detailed description.
I enjoyed reading your fic - it was very good. I'd agree with Diamond Quill here that the RL/SB is subtle. Um, I dunno what else to say ...
Author's Response: I am ESTATIC you enjoyed it! This was my first RL\SB fic and I wanted it to be subtle. I have written otherR\S fics since this one where tis much less subtle. lol
Summary: A short poem about Luna Lovegood! Please R&R! It would mean a ton to me!!!
I like Luna - she's my favourite character. I think you summed her up pretty well. I liked your poem - it was short and I like short ones for some reason...
Summary: Sirius and James do a little comparing with the aid of one Remus Lupin. It is not how it seems at first.
Thats a good fan fic - Its one of the best humour ones I've read. I liked it. I was really shocked too when Remus dropped to his knees on the couch but they were just strawberries so its all good. It was short and sweet too. (Your fan fic not the strawberries)
Author's Response: Thank you for reading and reviewing. I am glad you enjoyed the story.
Summary: She could walk through the graveyard without blinking, bypassing the graves of fallen childhood friends. She could walk through the halls of Hogwarts without missing a step, tracing back a path to her first day as she rushed through the school. She could even make her way to the Forbidden Forest and trample through it, ignoring the splashes and stains that still marred the aged trees and wasted ground. But Hermione cannot make herself face the Great Lake, calm on this balmy summer day, where she had watched three people she had slowly grown to love fade from existence. Character Death within. Post-Hogwarts.
That was really good. That was one of the best post Hogwarts one shots I've read. I liked the way you had the flash backs. Did the song 'Fields of Gold' inspire you with this story or was it just a random title?
Summary: Harry, Ron, and Hermione make a trip to Godric's Hollow to visit the Potters' graves. There, Harry speaks to his parents for the first time, and in so doing, discovers that the dead are never truly lost. (One-shot. Bring your kleenex.)
That was very good ... you made me teary, which is pretty good because I don't normally cry reading fics. I hope you right more angsty sort of fics like this - I thorougly enjoyed this one.
Summary: A short (as always!) poem on the killing curse. My first poem for a long while so please r/r.
That was really good Claire! I can't rhyme for peanuts so I do admire your work even more. And as someone before me said, the rhymes work really well. The way you put 'Avada Kedavra' at the end made it sound like a letter to someone (which i do like, i'm not sure why, but i do) Anyway. 10/10 from me and butterbeers all around. :)
Author's Response: Aww, thankyou very much. I decided I had been inactive on this site for too long and it was time to post something new, so I came up with this little poem. i am quite pleased with it. *takes butterbeer* Cheers!
Summary: When all hope seems lost, there is always a light in the darkness. A hope that can change fate and overcome that darkness is a rare one, and can only be achieved when there is love behind that hope. The Final War has ended, and Ron has already lost his best friend. When he finds Hermione lying on her deathbed, will his love spark a hope that will overcome the darkness, and change fate? Post-HBP, Ron and Hermione's POV. Fluffy R/Hr shippy-ness.
I really liked that, it was very good. It had a nice pace to it and I liked the way we saw what Hermione was thinking, as well as Ron. I would have to agree with ravenclawslion17(sp.?) that it ended suddenly but it matched the pace nicely. It worked fine as a one shot but I'm sure if you wanted to you could turn it into a decent chapter fic. Anyway, I think I'll go have a look at your other fic now.
x acire x
Author's Response: I'm not sure what I was thinking with ending this one so quickly. I guess I wanted to give a view of what they were both thinking under the circumstances, and then just giving the whole thing a turn-around with Hermione's awakening. Well, actually, I'm not sure why. At the time, it just seemed the right place to leave off. Thanks for your review!
Summary: The Last Battle between Good and Evil… Harry is cornered, injured and wandless, lying defeated against Riddle's tombstone, Voldemort leering at him. Voldemort oddly gives him a chance to ask any one question, so Harry asks something which has been etched in his head for a very long time...
WARNING: SOME SWEAR WORDS... ABOUT 4-5 IN ALL ONE SHOT!!!!!!!!!! Thx SO much to lunadragonfly from harrypotterfanfiction.com for the AMAZING banner - view it on my authour page!!!
EXTRACT “Yeah, I have a question,” Harry said suddenly, still staring into the scarlet, hateful eyes even though his scar seared in pain, “why did you give my mother so many chances to live?” This question had been etched into Harry’s mind for as long as he could remember, and maybe, maybe he would get it answered…Voldemort grinned, “Ah, I you would really like to know, I will show you,” grinned Voldemort. Harry immediately knew nothing good would come of this… 620 READS BUT ONLY 3 REVIEWS??????? COME ON GUYS!!!!!!!!!! ONE-SHOT, R+R!!!!!!
You reviewed my poem, I'm returning the favour and reviewing your fic now. :D
This fic is not bad, you have some great ideas here but I'd agree with someone who mentioned before me that this is a bit too fast paced. If you, say, made it a chapter fic, it might flow better.
But apart from that, I did like it.
btw, thanks for reviewing my fic. :) I do appreciate it!
Author's Response: Yah! Another reviewer!!! Thx for your comments - I wanted to do a one shot and this just kinda flowed, I didn't think it was going that fast when I wrote it. I just kinda saw it in my mind playing from when Harry was cornered to when he talked to Dumbledore at that speed - but hey, we all have different opinions about different or the same things. Thanks for the kind review!!! xxxoooxxxoooprongs_potter_rulezxxxoooxxxooo
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I hope you post the next chapter up soon because I want to know what's in that letter. This fan fic isn't too bad, maybe slightly predictable but generally a very good start to a hopefully high quality chapter fan fic.
Author's Response: Sorry it's so predictable, maybe the third chapter will throw you off! Thanx for the compliment though!
Summary: There's no better Christmas gift than a first kiss. A special Ron/Hermione Christmas one-shot to keep you warm - no misteltoe required. Special Christmas Update 12/25/05: "Ron's Secret" - a special illustration by yours truly!
That was so sweet and lovely - I throughly enjoyed reading your fan fic. And the picture you drew with it is extremely good. Very fluffy and cute. 9/10 from me.
Summary: Christmas is fast approaching, and Molly Weasley has never been busier. Ginny is two, Ron is three, the twins are five, Percy is seven, Charlie just turned eleven and Bill turned thirteen in November, so there is no wonder poor Molly has her hands full.
To top it all off, as Christmas approaches so does the gathering Molly and Arthur are to host on Christmas day: the first ever family reunion since the first war, which ended only a couple of years ago, for either the Prewetts or the Weasleys… This Christmas is going to take a miracle to get through...
AND hearty thanks to HermyRox12 for her QsQ nimination. The twins send a toast-by-owl from the Christmas party.
This is really good. I haven't seen too many fan fics about when the Weasleys were kids, so it's good to see someone thinking outside the square. It's very good.
Author's Response: Aye, it's unfortunate that this time has been left out of the spotlight. It's surprising, even - especially as we heard about Gideon and Fabian in OotP. However, at the same time, it was great to write characters into a fanfiction story, about whom I haven't read (at least at this time), and haven't had the influence of anyone else's opinion. Thank you for review!
Summary: Draco's Routine
Awww, that was another great poem, and another one with Draco getting beaten up. :( You've portrayed very well. 9/10
Summary: This is a small poem I wrote on my free time at home. This is how I think Harry would feel when Ron and Hermione get together and started to forget about him. Please review.I'm going to make this only one chapter longbecause I can't come up with anything else.But thanks to all who reviewed! thanks for taking the time to read, too!!
This poem is very sweet...I do like it. The way you put '2 the numeral' rather than 'two the word', shows that you like doing your own thing in writing poems, which is half the fun of writing poems.
Keep up the good work. :)
Author's Response: thanks, i'm glad you liked it!! i really appreciate your review
Summary: An episode of little Draco Malfoy's life.
I really liked this, I don't know why you haven't got more reviews. The style of poem is very good. It's short and to the point. You've portrayed what would probably have happened in that sort of situation very well. 10/10. :)