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The Unseemly Proposal by sparx
Rated: 3rd-5th Years [Reviews - 5423]

Summary: Past Featured StoryThe reign of Voldermort comes to an end, and with it ends the prestige and power Lucius Malfoy once had in the Wizarding World. In order to regain the respect of his fellow wizards and to make them believe that he has turned over a new leaf (which he actually hasn't) and has graciously accepted muggles and Mudbloods, Lucius asks Hermione, a Mudblood, to marry his son, Draco, a pure-blood. Obviously, they both refuse, but Lucius isn't going to give up easily. After all, he wants his status back. He still has a few tricks up his sleeve and is determined to play match-maker. What happens next is a series of events that serve only to bring Hermione and Draco closer, both literally and figuratively speaking. Read to find out how this one unseemly proposal causes absolute chaos in their lives! THIS STORY IS NOT HBP and DH COMPATIBLE! Hey all! Check out my personal info for the expected date of the next update. =)

Categories: Hermione/Draco Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 154682 Chapters: 38 Completed: No
Published:
01/17/05 Updated: 05/22/06


Reviewer: SareBabe Signed
Date: 06/08/05 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14- Meeting At Midnight

Very amusing! Please update SOON!

Author's Response: Thanks! Will update ASAP!

 

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Rated: [Reviews - ]

Summary:

Categories: Orphan Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 0 Chapters: 0 Completed: No
Published:
12/31/69 Updated: 12/31/69


Reviewer: SareBabe Signed
Date: 06/03/05 Title: None

I really like this story! I do think that it's puishing it to rate it a PG-13, though, for this entry. :) Can't wait for more!

Author's Response: Yeah, after re-reading it I realized that.

 

The Hardest Choice by Jenova
Rated: Professors [Reviews - 41]

Summary: Harry has just returned to Hogwarts to start his 6th year. But this year is destined to be his most difficult yet, and things may never be the same again...

Categories: Harry/Hermione Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 14723 Chapters: 6 Completed: No
Published:
04/28/05 Updated: 06/03/05


Reviewer: SareBabe Signed
Date: 06/05/05 Title: Chapter 6: Snape's Story

This story is terrific! I am curious to see how the romance develops. At first I thought that Voldemort was anticipating Harry's child. *heehee* Please update soon!!! *10*

Author's Response: Harry's child... hmmm interesting prospect which if I'd thought of it sooner, my story may have taken a completely different twist. But maybe it's better this way because I want Harry's feelings to be very much focused on Hermione and bringing their child into it would have changed all that. It would have been challenging though. Do you want a job as a plotline consultant?! lol

 
Reviewer: SareBabe Signed
Date: 06/03/05 Title: Chapter 1: Silence Is Golden

This looks like an interesting story! I will keep reading, but before I go to the next entry, I just wanted to give you some advice. Unless you are doing if for effect, the reading would flow better if you organize similar ideas into longer paragraphs. For example, you wrote: "He held his breath, listening. His heart pounding in his head almost drowned it out. It was impossible to tell from which direction it had originated, it seemed to come from everywhere at once." This could be condensed to: "He held his breath, listening. His heart pounding in his head almost drowned it out. It was impossible to tell from which direction it had originated, it seemed to come from everywhere at once." The second sentense flows naturally from the first, and it makes the writing less choppy. Hope this helps, and great job!

 
Reviewer: SareBabe Signed
Date: 06/03/05 Title: Chapter 1: Silence Is Golden

Sorry, I am new reviewer and I didn't know that the breaks are eliminated. I hope you got the idea, though! :)

 
Reviewer: SareBabe Signed
Date: 06/03/05 Title: Chapter 2: Not Like Hermione

OMG, this is good! I just wanna say that before I dash over to the next chapter. :D

 
Reviewer: SareBabe Signed
Date: 06/03/05 Title: Chapter 5: Confrontation

Aaaaaah! How cruel to leave us with such a cliffhanger! >:( Great great great writing!

Author's Response: Lol Yes, I understood what you were meaning regarding the formatting of paragraphs. A few others have mentioned it too so as of chapter 6, I've changed my style of writing. Hopefully it flows more easily?

 

Prophecy's Child by Katastrophe
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 454]

Summary: Harry's Aunt and Cousin have drastically changed. He notices that Ginny is no longer a little girl, and see his two best friends finally admit thier feelings for eachother. And the summer is just beginning!!! Chapter 18 is up, 19 is in the Queue!!!

Categories: Ron/Hermione AND Harry/Ginny Genre: Warnings: Alternate Universe

Word count: 56645 Chapters: 19 Completed: Yes
Published:
05/10/05 Updated: 07/20/06


Reviewer: SareBabe Signed
Date: 06/03/05 Title: Chapter 1: Revelations

When I saw that Petunia and Dudley were suddenly on Harry's side, I just had to read! Nice idea for a story. On to the next chapters... :)

Author's Response: Glad you like it! Thanks for reading and reviewing!

 
Reviewer: SareBabe Signed
Date: 06/12/05 Title: Chapter 12: Potter Manor

I like it how Harry's family was good to their house elves. Keep up the good work!

Author's Response: Thank you for reading and reviewing. Glad you are enjoying it!

 
Reviewer: SareBabe Signed
Date: 06/04/05 Title: Chapter 5: Let Me Go

Yikes, I feel bad for Petunia. I think the way Ginny blurted out her love was terrific! Keep it up. :)

Author's Response: Thanks for reading and reviewing! Love to see new readers!!

 
Reviewer: SareBabe Signed
Date: 06/04/05 Title: Chapter 7: Collide

Hahahahaha! That last part about Petunia kicking him cracked me up! =D

Author's Response: I just honestly couldn't resist....

 
Reviewer: SareBabe Signed
Date: 06/04/05 Title: Chapter 10: Confessions and Lessons

Things are really going great for Harry at this point, aren't they? :) Can't wait for more!

Author's Response: I submitted a chapter yesterday, let's see how it goes! Thanks again for reading adn reviewing!

 
Reviewer: SareBabe Signed
Date: 06/09/05 Title: Chapter 11: Perceptions

Looks like Harry's still in his volatile adolescent stage. Poor Dumbledore! Nice twist with the Tonks/Remus love.

Author's Response: Dumbledore has made his own mistakes, so in my twisted mind Harry has reason not to be fully trusting. As for Remus/Tonks, I think they balance each other so very well.

 

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Rated: [Reviews - ]

Summary:

Categories: Orphan Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 0 Chapters: 0 Completed: No
Published:
12/31/69 Updated: 12/31/69


Reviewer: SareBabe Signed
Date: 06/12/05 Title: None

Lol...of course I have to review this: terrific!

 
Reviewer: SareBabe Signed
Date: 06/03/05 Title: None

I am intrigued by Lily's past. I shall keep reading!

 
Reviewer: SareBabe Signed
Date: 06/02/05 Title: None

I love stories with children of heroes! Great job!

 
Reviewer: SareBabe Signed
Date: 06/03/05 Title: None

This is a great story! I started reading it yesterday, and got caught up today. I hope you update soon! The way you protray our favorite characters as adults is so much fun. I wonder if Harry was doing something other than just going into hiding...? ;)

 

Just Married....Kinda by ColorOfAngels
Rated: 6th-7th Years [Reviews - 973]

Summary: The dust has settled and the final battle is over now that Harry has defeated Voldemort for the last time......Harry is eager to get on with the rest of his life and is feeling kind of spontaneous, so why not get married?.... Tomorrow....... Mainly Harry/Ginny with some Ron/Hermione Rated for sexual references

Categories: Ron/Hermione AND Harry/Ginny Genre: Warnings: Sexual Situations

Word count: 33767 Chapters: 12 Completed: No
Published:
05/18/05 Updated: 08/02/06


Reviewer: SareBabe Signed
Date: 06/10/05 Title: Chapter 7: Caught

Fun chapter! I like it how smart Hermione figured it out. The way you portray the characters is just the way JK writes them. Good job!

Author's Response: thanks so much, that is such a complement!!!!

 
Reviewer: SareBabe Signed
Date: 06/05/05 Title: Chapter 2: Honeymoon

Hahaha! I couldn't quite believe that Harry would want to go snorkeling instead of *ahem* you know. :D Fun story!

Author's Response: well in the end he did find *ahem* you know to be much more enjoyable and put off snorkeling for another day..... hehehe

 
Reviewer: SareBabe Signed
Date: 06/05/05 Title: Chapter 3: Big Announcements

This chapter had me laughing out loud! Keep up the good work!

Author's Response: yay...thanks!!

 
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