Very amusing! Please update SOON!
Author's Response: Thanks! Will update ASAP!
I really like this story! I do think that it's puishing it to rate it a PG-13, though, for this entry. :) Can't wait for more!
Author's Response: Yeah, after re-reading it I realized that.
This story is terrific! I am curious to see how the romance develops. At first I thought that Voldemort was anticipating Harry's child. *heehee* Please update soon!!! *10*
Author's Response: Harry's child... hmmm interesting prospect which if I'd thought of it sooner, my story may have taken a completely different twist. But maybe it's better this way because I want Harry's feelings to be very much focused on Hermione and bringing their child into it would have changed all that. It would have been challenging though. Do you want a job as a plotline consultant?! lol
This looks like an interesting story! I will keep reading, but before I go to the next entry, I just wanted to give you some advice. Unless you are doing if for effect, the reading would flow better if you organize similar ideas into longer paragraphs. For example, you wrote: "He held his breath, listening. His heart pounding in his head almost drowned it out. It was impossible to tell from which direction it had originated, it seemed to come from everywhere at once." This could be condensed to: "He held his breath, listening. His heart pounding in his head almost drowned it out. It was impossible to tell from which direction it had originated, it seemed to come from everywhere at once." The second sentense flows naturally from the first, and it makes the writing less choppy. Hope this helps, and great job!
Sorry, I am new reviewer and I didn't know that the breaks are eliminated. I hope you got the idea, though! :)
OMG, this is good! I just wanna say that before I dash over to the next chapter. :D
Aaaaaah! How cruel to leave us with such a cliffhanger! >:( Great great great writing!
Author's Response: Lol Yes, I understood what you were meaning regarding the formatting of paragraphs. A few others have mentioned it too so as of chapter 6, I've changed my style of writing. Hopefully it flows more easily?
When I saw that Petunia and Dudley were suddenly on Harry's side, I just had to read! Nice idea for a story. On to the next chapters... :)
Author's Response: Glad you like it! Thanks for reading and reviewing!
I like it how Harry's family was good to their house elves. Keep up the good work!
Author's Response: Thank you for reading and reviewing. Glad you are enjoying it!
Yikes, I feel bad for Petunia. I think the way Ginny blurted out her love was terrific! Keep it up. :)
Author's Response: Thanks for reading and reviewing! Love to see new readers!!
Hahahahaha! That last part about Petunia kicking him cracked me up! =D
Author's Response: I just honestly couldn't resist....
Things are really going great for Harry at this point, aren't they? :) Can't wait for more!
Author's Response: I submitted a chapter yesterday, let's see how it goes! Thanks again for reading adn reviewing!
Looks like Harry's still in his volatile adolescent stage. Poor Dumbledore! Nice twist with the Tonks/Remus love.
Author's Response: Dumbledore has made his own mistakes, so in my twisted mind Harry has reason not to be fully trusting. As for Remus/Tonks, I think they balance each other so very well.
Lol...of course I have to review this: terrific!
I am intrigued by Lily's past. I shall keep reading!
I love stories with children of heroes! Great job!
This is a great story! I started reading it yesterday, and got caught up today. I hope you update soon! The way you protray our favorite characters as adults is so much fun. I wonder if Harry was doing something other than just going into hiding...? ;)
Fun chapter! I like it how smart Hermione figured it out. The way you portray the characters is just the way JK writes them. Good job!
Author's Response: thanks so much, that is such a complement!!!!
Hahaha! I couldn't quite believe that Harry would want to go snorkeling instead of *ahem* you know. :D Fun story!
Author's Response: well in the end he did find *ahem* you know to be much more enjoyable and put off snorkeling for another day..... hehehe
This chapter had me laughing out loud! Keep up the good work!
Author's Response: yay...thanks!!