31, female harry potter fan . . hmm dont know much else about what to write in here.
lets see, i havent written any fan fiction yet, mainly i read it. im a bit intimidated to write any, especially since i only own the last two books, the other volumes i didnt own. plan on possibly buying a complete collectors set now that DH is out! so research would be a bit more difficult without my TEXTBOOKS. :)
hobbies: reading fanfic [new], reading in general, knitting, camping, dancing at the club, coffeeshops, writing poetry, singing especially along to the radio and even more especially while driving. if you spot someone in the car next to you with a radio blaring happily singing along just might be me! LoL.
is this enough?
will update more later!!
EXCELLENT! *although maybe ron's attempts at conversation with hermione felt forced. i feel like the dialogue would have had an attempt with humor* .. now on to yr next chappie! (i just found yr fic.)
i know ron is thick but THAT thick??
i really loved it! it was quite hilarious. you did a good job and i think their personalities and witty one liners came right on cue! :)
Excellent romantic moment! Your story was recommended by cjbaggins... and I couldnt agree more that this is a great account of that missing hour in HBP. I love chapter fics but these one-shots are golden too! :)
this is such a masterpiece. it wasnt about action or about an incredible plot. it was just a moment in a family and a person's life. it was extremely poignant and had me in tears the entire time. extremely touching and brings to mind everyone i've ever lost. keep up the good work. i also love your other story and am anxiously awaiting your return from your hitaus.
Author's Response: Thank you so much! For me, it's very nice to hear that my stories have touched someone. :)
excellent poem! im a poet myself .. although ive never really enjoyed free verse but i love the sarcasm and wit in yours. also unlike some other readers, i could see the sarcasm in draco's "romantic" stanza and knew he didnt mean it. i was blindsided when u said they were married bcuz id assumed it was pre-relationship until the end. (however i had just read yr fairytale fic the day bfore so i wasnt completely shocked.) keep up the good work!
Author's Response: Thanks for the kind words. I'm afraid life has made me rather cynical, so I'm glad to see that the sarcasm was still recognizable. I just love Draco's attitude.
i just want to say FINALLY! and THANX FOR NOT ABANDONING US! now on with the story.
Author's Response: I would never! :D
Are you still writing this story?? Please please please! -Your Fangirl
Author's Response: Still here, I promise! Writing right now, in fact.
im really glad you decided to keep up with this story. it makes me so sad when i invest a lot of time and infatuation in a story and the author is too busy or uninterested in the story to complete it! i know everyone has busy lives but i so appreciate it when authors continue to work on my favorite stories!! keep up the good work.
Author's Response: I'm so sorry I'm so slow, but I do promise to keep on writing. Thanks for writing a review and I hope to update in the near future. :)
i knew he was having an affair with susan! why else would rebecca always need to take over? but hermione is wrong. patricia must have sent susan away not michael. she probably threatened susan about knowing and susan didnt realize patricia's motive. at least thats my theory. poor jane. i want ron and hermione together but i dont want janes parents to divorce. well jane is a baby who is still very young but i guess ill have to wait and see. very very good chapter. i thought patricia was out of the picture. who knew she was vindictive enough to have photographers trail herself?! evil mastermind . . . the flashback is lovely. michael decided to change but it may be too late. this really showed the complexity of relationships. the age old debate of do you forgive someone for repenting and changing or do you hold their actions against them . . . you cant see the future so do you trust they will cheat again or do you trust that they vow never to any longer?
Author's Response: OMG, I don\'t want Jane\'s parents to divorce, either! Finally someone agrees with me! [...] I loved what you said about relationships. You are right.
before i read this chapter, i just wanted to say YAY and thanx!! ok im going now.. *shuffling away*
wow. that was a shock. i didnt see that coming. i didnt think you would kill him off. in patricia's office i thought u did, then u fooled me. after that i thought he would survive but that she would ultimately leave him. because i thought she would be too hung up on ron to stay. i suppose though that this makes more sense, hermione seems the devoted type that would honor her vows. im still not sure how michael died though? internal bleeding? suicide when it seemed unlikely his wife would forgive him??
Author's Response: Michael's death was NOT suicide. You'll learn more in the upcoming chapter. I'm glad you were surprised, though...
im truly hoping you arent crazy and killed him off in a drunk driving accident. im hoping the accident is referring to his mental breakdown incident or something happening when his father disarmed his wand.
Author's Response: LMAO. Why would that make me crazy?!?!?! o_O It's not drunk driving. I think. Now I don't remember. I actually never considered something happening when his father disarmed him! That's good!
oh and another comment because another reviewer reminded me, im not convinced it was a car accident, but if it is then those were my theories about his death. i think he cast a spell on patricia and his dad disarmed him and maybe the spell hit the glass and rebounded on him. anyways anxiously awaiting your next chapter and review responses.
Author's Response: Lol that would have been awesome, now that I think about it. But sadly, it was just a normal car accident.
i wanted to say thank you first! writing a story is a lot of work!
signed your devoted fangirl,
rosemerta (aka rOsE)
Author's Response: Thanks :) And I hope Ron is making an appearance on the next one.
i was hoping ron would make an appearance.
Despite the implications of the act, the most horrible part wasnt the act itself. The saddest part was seeing a man like Severus, who could never redeem himself in the eyes of others, as much as he deserved it.
and the plot thickens...
hmm. you were so vague im not entirely sure where she touched him. although i can hazard a guess... im not positive. on to the next chapter... :)
Hilarious. Maybe you didnt intention it to be but the tension in that room just made me chuckle. GOOD JOB. Im loving yr fic.