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Hunters and Prey by Northumbrian
Rated: 6th-7th Years [Reviews - 191]

Summary:
February 2000 Newly Qualified (in record time) Auror Harry Potter remains obsessed with “The List.” The ten people still wanted for their part in the Battle of Hogwarts. Their capture is essential. It will bring closure to the events of the past few years. Harry has set himself a target. He wants to see “The Last Death Eater” and the other nine captured before the second Anniversary of the battle. His attempts to meet his target will bring heartbreak, danger, pain, and a lifechanging injury for one former DA member.

Nominated for: Best Post-Hogwarts (Chaptered) story - Quicksilver Quills 2012


Categories: Ron/Hermione AND Harry/Ginny Genre: Warnings: Character Death, Sexual Situations, Violence

Word count: 124760 Chapters: 21 Completed: Yes
Published:
10/25/11 Updated: 01/04/14


Reviewer: minervassister Signed
Date: 12/07/11 Title: Chapter 4: The Snare: Tidings of Magpies

Oh dear what has brought Ginny to this?
Hope we find out in the next chapter.
Keep up the good work.

Author's Response: Thanks for the review.
You won't find out in the next chapter (sorry) because we rejoin Harry on his journey to find the werewolf village.
You will, however, get a few more clues.
-N-

 
Reviewer: minervassister Signed
Date: 07/04/12 Title: Chapter 14: The Snare: Beater Grouses

Gosh further complications, is Linny not a baddie after all?
Great work as always.

Author's Response: Now that's a very good question. More answers in the next chapter which, in the traditions of this story, does not actually follow directly from this one. -N-

 
Reviewer: minervassister Signed
Date: 01/04/14 Title: Chapter 21: Finale: Friends and Foes

Great end to the story and nice to see Terry and Fenella getting together.
Looking forward to the follow up, there are still some nasties out there to be rounded up.

Author's Response: Thanks
I knew that Lavender and Mark were doomed (for the moment) so Terry and Fenella were the alternative. :-D Expect the sequel soon.
-N-

 
Reviewer: minervassister Signed
Date: 01/05/12 Title: Chapter 7: The Hunt: Den of Wolves

Another great chapter, wonderful descriptions of the forest and landscape, it felt so wet.
Poor Harry what will happen now?
Poor Ginny will we hear soon why she is behaving so badly?

Author's Response: Thanks for the review.
Wet is a reasonable description of the Cheviots in March (in my not so recent experience).
Next - The Foolish Pride of Lions featuring Harry, Ron, Hermione and Neville. More answers, and more questions.
-N-

 
Reviewer: minervassister Signed
Date: 12/10/11 Title: Chapter 5: The Hunt: Nice Weather for Fish

Oh what a place to stop!
Love the way your characters keep cropping up - Jackie's parents running a B&B.
What is Ginny up to?
Looking forward to the next chapter.

Author's Response: And the thing with the way I'm wriring this is that you won't get any answers until the chapter after next!
There will be an appearrance by another character from "Strangers" soon.
Good question. ;-D
She's in the gaol-house now.
-N-

 
Reviewer: minervassister Signed
Date: 04/08/12 Title: Chapter 9: The Hunt: She-Wolf and Cubs

Wow!!
That chapter had everything, scary, touching, Harry in danger, some very nasty old enemies turning up and then a terrifying ending.
More, more please!

Author's Response: Thanks.
I've just submitted the next chapter of Strangers, but once that's approved, the next chapter of this is ready to go.
-N-

 
Reviewer: minervassister Signed
Date: 03/23/13 Title: Chapter 17: Prey: Lioness Snarls, Badger Baited

That was a tour de force, another wonderful chapter.
Phoenix patronuses, dementor spit, dark magic what more can you ask for in a story and Harry and Ginny friends again.
Keep up the good work.

Author's Response:
Thanks, there was certainly a lot happening.
Only a couple of chapters left (unless it's ends up being three). More soon, I hope.
-N-

 

What Luna Sees by Northumbrian
Rated: 3rd-5th Years [Reviews - 15]

Summary: Does Ginny have a serious rival?
Who is the most fancied bloke in the DA?
What Lunacies happen at Christmas?
This is Northumbrian of Ravenclaw House realising that this long planned story scrapes into prompt 3 (Operation Mistletoe) of the Great Hall-iday challenge, and that my story title is an even worse pun than the challenge title.

Categories: Humor Fics Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 8143 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
11/27/11 Updated: 12/08/11


Reviewer: minervassister Signed
Date: 12/09/11 Title: Chapter 1: What Luna sees

Lovely, so Luna!
Of course Nev is everyone's favourite, thanks for a bit of pre-Christmas cheer.

Author's Response: Thanks, she's exhausting to write!
Of course he is, and you're welcome.
-N-

 

Summary: Past Featured StoryYuletide: ‘tis the season to be jolly! Unfortunately, for four and two-thirds Potters, jolliness is in short supply. Perhaps it is the season of:
Monkeys; fish and chip suppers; shopping in Knockturn Alley; a werewolf wearing glitter lipstick; a Moon in an eccentric orbit; Dung; snow; and a jolly fat man with a white beard.
Hopefully everything will work out.
Consumer Warning: Like many Christmas gifts, this may contain nuts/nut traces.
No Father Christmases were harmed during the writing of this story.

Categories: Harry/Ginny Genre: Warnings: Mild Profanity

Word count: 18960 Chapters: 4 Completed: Yes
Published:
12/08/11 Updated: 12/29/13


Reviewer: minervassister Signed
Date: 01/01/12 Title: Chapter 3: The Big Store

Lovely, lovely lovely.
Happy New Year Neil thanks for all the pleasure you give with your wonderful stories.

Author's Response: Thank you.
I'm glad you enjoyed this Christmas tale.
Happy New Year
-N-

 
Reviewer: minervassister Signed
Date: 12/14/11 Title: Chapter 0: Monkey Business

A great Christmas treat!
I want to visit Side Way!
Edinburgh is my birth place so loved the descriptions.
If they had gone this week they could have seen the Pandas!

Author's Response: Thanks.
So do I!
Edinburgh is my closest capital city (London is three times the distance).
There were no pandas in 2007 :-D
-N-

 
Reviewer: minervassister Signed
Date: 01/02/14 Title: Chapter 3: The Big Store

Lovely end to a great story.
Dung does keep turning up!
Happy New Year! Please keep writing your wonderful tales.

Author's Response: Thank you. More soon, not sure what: Strangers? A&S? A one shot featuring Ginny and 12-year-old Lily? -N-

 

The Badly Fitting Coat by Northumbrian
Rated: 3rd-5th Years [Reviews - 22]

Summary: Two letters from Gringotts send Harry, Ginny and Ron on a mission to discover the truth behind the why the Blacks were a "Noble and Most Ancient House".

Categories: Harry/Ginny Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 10927 Chapters: 2 Completed: Yes
Published:
02/07/12 Updated: 03/23/12


Reviewer: minervassister Signed
Date: 03/25/12 Title: Chapter 2: Shield

Lovely!
Ron's right I do like a happy ending too.
Draco was so in character, not a happy ferret.

Author's Response: Thank you.
Ron was rather worried, but it all turned out well in the end.
-N-

 
Reviewer: minervassister Signed
Date: 02/11/12 Title: Chapter 1: Mail

Great story, Ginny and Harry spot on, good to see their relationship develop through your different stories.
Love the grandparents, such a creative idea.
Have two possible candidates for heir will have to wait and see.

Author's Response: Thanks for the review.
Most of my recent H/G stories have been "Harry and Ginny Potter - parents of young children" and it was a lot of fun to return to their teenage snogging days :-D
The idea for the Potter grandparents came to me in a flash, and I thought, surely someone has done this before. It may be original, but in fanfic, I doubt it.
You'll find out soon.
-N-

 

Dennis by Northumbrian
Rated: 3rd-5th Years [Reviews - 6]

Summary: Keeping secrets from your girlfriend can cause all sorts of problems. Revealing those secrets will never be easy.

Another story for the Great Hall Cotillion.

Categories: Other Pairing Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 3279 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
02/20/12 Updated: 02/23/12


Reviewer: minervassister Signed
Date: 02/25/12 Title: Chapter 1: and Lesley

Wee Dennis getting married-lovely!
Super idea for a story, would love to hear George's bestman speach.

Author's Response: Thanks fr the review.
I'd like to hear George's speech, too, but it would take a lot of writing.
-N-

 

Vituperation by Northumbrian
Rated: 6th-7th Years [Reviews - 9]

Summary:
Villains? Voldemort's virulent verbiage preaches vigorous vendetta against those inferior. Are these two M's merely victims, or are they venal violators of the innocent. Is violence in vain?

Marcus and Millicent make their mark on Muggles, and each other.

My final Cotillion tale.


Categories: Dark/Angsty Fics Genre: Warnings: Abuse, Self Injury, Sexual Situations, Strong Profanity, Violence

Word count: 3408 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
02/26/12 Updated: 02/29/12


Reviewer: minervassister Signed
Date: 02/29/12 Title: Chapter 1: When Marcus met Millicent

Interesting, fill out the chapter in Tales of the Battle when Marcus is injured and she tries to get him to safety.

Author's Response: Thanks for the review. It certainly does that. –N-

 

Molly and her Daughter by Northumbrian
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 20]

Summary: A story about Ginny's school days, and the relationship between a mother and her daughter.

Categories: General Fics Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 3527 Chapters: 2 Completed: No
Published:
03/22/12 Updated: 01/24/13


Reviewer: minervassister Signed
Date: 04/04/12 Title: Chapter 1: Ron Writes

Lovely! so good to hear about Molly and Ginny together.
Look forward to hearing more.

Author's Response: Thanks
There will be more, but I'm not sure when.
-N-

 
Reviewer: minervassister Signed
Date: 01/24/13 Title: Chapter 2: Harry Who?

Good to hear more about Molly, Ginny and Arthur.
Characterisation spot on as usual.

Author's Response: Thank you.
The next chapter will add Professor Dumbledore to the mix.
-N-

 

Brown by Northumbrian
Rated: 3rd-5th Years [Reviews - 17]

Summary: Lavender Brown is not the easiest of people to get along with. Mark has managed to overcome the first hurdle, she has finally agreed that they are going out together. Now Mark faces another challenge.

Categories: Other Pairing Genre: Warnings: Mild Profanity

Word count: 12287 Chapters: 3 Completed: Yes
Published:
05/23/12 Updated: 06/14/12


Reviewer: minervassister Signed
Date: 06/07/12 Title: Chapter 1: York

How could any future parent-in-law not love Mark?
This is another great chapter.
The English Tourist board should sponsor you the way you describe Rye it sounds a lovely place to visit.
the dreich rain is spot on too!

Author's Response: Thanks for the review.
You'll find out how Mark survives his day in the third and final chapter.
Rye is a beautiful little town, and that's from someone who doesn't like the south coast much.
Dreich, I'm told, is probably a Scandinavian word, but a lot of northern slang is.
-N-

 
Reviewer: minervassister Signed
Date: 05/23/12 Title: Chapter 1: York

Love this!
Mark is so nice and Laveder is such a complex character, thay are great together.
Hope to hear more soon.
Well done on revealing another facet of the story.

Author's Response: Thanks.
I wanted to write a first-person Mark story (Lavender's already had one in Bare). It was supposed to be a one shot, like Bare. It grew to over 11,000 words so it will be three chapters of Mark doing what he's best at, worrying.
-N-

 

Conversations by Northumbrian
Rated: 3rd-5th Years [Reviews - 15]

Summary: Ron and Hermione have some news.

Categories: Ron/Hermione Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 2281 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
07/15/12 Updated: 07/15/12


Reviewer: minervassister Signed
Date: 07/18/12 Title: Chapter 1: Conversations

Lovely! You got it just right as always.

Author's Response: Thank you. -N-

 
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