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Wednesday Morning Three AM by Bellatrix Lovegood

Summary: A little songfic about love that is fated to end. Based on the song "Wednesday Morning Three AM" by Simon and Garfunkel. Warning: may bring tears (it did to the author!) One shot.
Reviewer: Lola-Louisa Signed
Date: 06/19/08 Title: Chapter 1: One-Shot

Aaah, so sweet!
And you did make me cry!
Lola x

Dear Mrs. Potter... by DaisyMaeEvans

Rated: 1st-2nd Years • Past Featured Story
Summary: Professor Granger deals with a pair of students who have inherited a knack for trouble...
Reviewer: Lola-Louisa Signed
Date: 07/08/08 Title: Chapter 1: One Shot

haha! This made me laugh!

Lola x

Fatal Remorse by Periwinkle

Rated: 3rd-5th Years •
Summary: Rodolphus has fled into the safety of a secluded hut in the edge of the forest, to escape the Death Eaters, but all in vain. Bella finds him and has been ordered by Voldemort to kill him. Will she do it?

How does Rodolphus feel about all this?
Reviewer: Lola-Louisa Signed
Date: 06/20/08 Title: Chapter 1: 1

I really enjoyed this, your characterisation was perfect and you kept me guessing all the way through.
Loved it, do another!

Lola x

The Dark Lord's Blog by Schmerg_The_Impaler

Rated: 1st-2nd Years • Past Featured Story
Summary: What does Lord Voldemort do in his spare time? Well, that's an excellent question. Who would have known that the Dark Lord has a blog? (He also has a loyal following of readers, most of whom are Death Eaters and who post their comments.) Voldemort dispenses advice on everything from murder methods to germ protection to Power Rangers to shoes, and gives an account of the life of an evil overlord. But is he posting too much personal information online? And will Harry read it and find out more about the Dark Lord than Voldemort ever intended? Read and see.

WARNING: Extremely OOC behaviour from almost all.

RUNNER-UP in the 2007 Quicksilver Quills Awards for Best Humour fic! Also nominated like 21 times, because apparently my readers are as insane as I am!

Reviewer: Lola-Louisa Signed
Date: 06/06/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Don't Try This At Home

omg, you are so funny!
Love this x

Author's Response: Aww, thanks! I had so much fun writing this.

Reviewer: Lola-Louisa Signed
Date: 06/06/08 Title: Chapter 6: Chapter 6: I Sold My Soul on eBay

that was one of the funniest things I've ever read.
I love your work x

Author's Response: You just made my day, I think. Thank you!

England's Got Evil by Just Tink

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: Now that the Wizarding world is safe, Fudge needs a job. So when he's offered the opportunity to host the new Wizarding reality show, 'England's Got Evil', he realizes that it is a chance he can't miss. But will he be able to keep it together during the final episode where Bellatrix Lestrange, Amycus Carrow, and Fenrir Greyback compete to add a hot tub to their Azkaban cell? And who in the name of reality shows everywhere are the Stage Handz?
Reviewer: Lola-Louisa Signed
Date: 06/06/08 Title: Chapter 1: England's Got Evil

haha... hilarious x

His Most Faithful Servant by R_Ravenclaw

Rated: 6th-7th Years •
Summary: After the Dark Lord tries to murder Harry Potter, he disappears and is assumed to be dead. His four most loyal servants are alone in trying to find him. And Bellatrix will do anything she can to bring her Master back.
Reviewer: Lola-Louisa Signed
Date: 05/31/08 Title: Chapter 1: His Most Faithful Servant

wow, you really get Bellatrix!
I love your story.
keep it up x

The Last Black With Her Sanity Intact by cassie123

Rated: 3rd-5th Years •
Summary: Andromeda Tonks thought she had finally got her favourite cousin back.
So when he is taken from her once again by the person she least expects, it is enough to break her.

Post-OoTP one-shot.

Reviewer: Lola-Louisa Signed
Date: 06/21/08 Title: Chapter 1: The Last Black With Her Sanity Intact

Loved it x

Author's Response: Why, thank you :)

Evil Ignorance by harrypotterfangirl21

Rated: Professors •

Thirteen years after the Final Battle, all is well for Harry Potter.

But not for long. . . .

Lord Voldemort, with the help of Azkaban escapee Bellatrix Lestrange and a shunted Lucius Malfoy, is brought back to life using the Darkest magic ever attempted. But given this second chance, will he take control of the Wizarding World? Or will he be conquered once more by Harry Potter?

Reviewer: Lola-Louisa Signed
Date: 05/29/08 Title: Chapter 1: Beginning of the End

Really good!
Hurry up and write another chapter lol x

Author's Response: Thanks! I'm taking a bit of a break from this to work on a fic about Tom Riddle's school years, but have no fear: I'm not abandoning it! =]

Daughter of the Dark Side by Lyra Lestrange

Rated: 3rd-5th Years • Past Featured Story

Lindsey Tonks appears to be a normal, almost invisible Hogwarts student, but underneath her is someone far from normal. What the world doesn't know is that Lindsey is the daughter of two well-known imprisoned Death Eaters, and has an identity she must hide from the world. Underneath Lindsey is a girl named Lyra Lestrange, a girl who is meant to be a secret forever. But will it last forever?

*Begins in GoF and follows the series through DH.

**Will appeal to fans of the Black family! Prominent characters are Bellatrix, Tonks, Andromeda, Sirius, and (to an extent) Narcissa.

Part Four Synopsis:

It's the summer after Albus Dumbledore's death, and the whole world is falling to Voldemort and the Death Eaters. Broken-hearted Lyra, unable to return to Hogwarts, must go into hiding with her family. It doesn't last long, and eventually Lyra is faced with a choice: join or die. Lyra's decision comes with many surprises, including a new ally who follows her to the final battle of good versus evil. While Lyra's path may seem clear, she finds herself torn between two sides for the final time, and in the end, despite tragedy and loss, Lyra accomplishes the impossible...which defies all of the agreements she and her family ever made.

Three years later, the fic has been completely finished! Enjoy reading it without having to wait for new chapters. Thanks to those who patiently waited and faithfully reviewed!

Reviewer: Lola-Louisa Signed
Date: 01/18/09 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 14- Fifth Year Begins

Didn't know you'd updated! I like this story... can't wait to see what happens when the DEs break out... update soon x

Author's Response:

Thanks! That part is coming up within the next few chapters. I'll try to update as soon as I can.

Reviewer: Lola-Louisa Signed
Date: 07/22/08 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 6- Arrival of the Rivals

The ending of this chapter is really good. I think in the next you should skim over all the other tasks in say, one paragraph and then go straight into Lyra's story.

The bit about the Cruciatus Curse was scary-- I guess she inherited some bad habits *coughs* from her mother, lol.

You did a good job showing the students reactions to Harry Potter becoming Triwizard champion.

Good so far!

Lola x

Author's Response: Thanks so much! I do plan to skim over most parts of the tasks, or at least have Lyra doing something else, like communicating with another student during them so it's not the same stuff in GoF. I'm also glad you like seeing Harry become champion from another's perspective, because I was really worried about it being boring and simply repeating what every Potter fan has read in GoF.

Reviewer: Lola-Louisa Signed
Date: 07/10/08 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 4- Return to Hogwarts

Wow, Lyra's definately got a dark quality to her... I wonder how she'll react when she finds out Mad-Eye Moody is in fact Barty Crouch Jr!

Good start, I liked it, but I think you should start branching out from GOF- this is, after all, Lyra's story, not Harry's.

For your first fic it was pretty good...

Update soon, I'll drop you another review!

Lola x

Author's Response:

That will be playing a part in a future chapter! I've revised over and over and am really trying to branch away from the books, but it's a bit difficult because I feel like I can't just jump into the story without an introduction. The story breaks away from the books eventually.

Don't Apologise by cassie123

Rated: 6th-7th Years •
Andromeda Black wants desperately to take control of her life, but she has never been given the motivation to do so... until now.

‘You won’t have to marry him,’ Ted said surely. ‘Not after this, I can’t let it happen. If it comes down to it, I’ll marry you before he gets the chance.’

Note: the non-consensual sex warning is for a minor part and the act is prevented.
Reviewer: Lola-Louisa Signed
Date: 07/04/08 Title: Chapter 1: Don't Apologise

Aw, the ending was so sweet!
Really good
Lola x

Author's Response: Thank you, I\'m glad you liked it :)

Enchanted Slumber by Lyratearsx

Rated: 3rd-5th Years •
Summary: When Evie wakes up one morning, she knows there is something seriously wrong. Why is she so weak? Why has her appearance changed drastically?

When she finds out the truth, she runs away. She meets Ben, a Supernatural Creatures Hunter for the Ministry. Thrown into a world of vampires and other dangerous creatures, Evie excells and begins to fall in love with her new found freedom.

But there are people who don't want Evie to be free, people who will do anything to keep her quiet. Evie must escape, but it won't be easy...
Reviewer: Lola-Louisa Signed
Date: 07/16/08 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1- Ben and Vampires

Woah! Very action-filled!

I liked this.

More please!

Lola x

Author's Response: Thank you!

The Exército de Leoa by Kristen Floss

Rated: 3rd-5th Years •

It's been over thirty years since Harry defeated Lord Voldemort, yet a new threat hangs over the Wizarding World. The Exército de Leoa are a faceless organization who will stop at nothing to achieve their goals. The only problem is, no one knows what they are.

Draco and Astoria Malfoy crossed them, and they paid the price in Azkaban. Their son Scorpius wants them free, and revenge on The Exército de Leoa. There's only one way to achieve this, and that is to find Harry Potter. But the old hero has fled, for reasons no one can clarify.

Scorpius and his wife Lyra know that they have a limited amount of time in which to do this. What they don't know is what they're searching for might not be the solution...

Reviewer: Lola-Louisa Signed
Date: 07/24/08 Title: Chapter 1: The Escape

This is really good... I'm hooked!

Lola x

Author's Response:

Thank you! I'm glad that you like it!

Kristen x