Aaah, so sweet!
And you did make me cry!
haha! This made me laugh!
I really enjoyed this, your characterisation was perfect and you kept me guessing all the way through.
Loved it, do another!
omg, you are so funny!
Love this x
Author's Response: Aww, thanks! I had so much fun writing this.
that was one of the funniest things I've ever read.
I love your work x
Author's Response: You just made my day, I think. Thank you!
haha... hilarious x
wow, you really get Bellatrix!
I love your story.
keep it up x
Loved it x
Author's Response: Why, thank you :)
Thirteen years after the Final Battle, all is well for Harry Potter.
But not for long. . . .
Lord Voldemort, with the help of Azkaban escapee Bellatrix Lestrange and a shunted Lucius Malfoy, is brought back to life using the Darkest magic ever attempted. But given this second chance, will he take control of the Wizarding World? Or will he be conquered once more by Harry Potter?
Hurry up and write another chapter lol x
Author's Response: Thanks! I'm taking a bit of a break from this to work on a fic about Tom Riddle's school years, but have no fear: I'm not abandoning it! =]
Lindsey Tonks appears to be a normal, almost invisible Hogwarts student, but underneath her is someone far from normal. What the world doesn't know is that Lindsey is the daughter of two well-known imprisoned Death Eaters, and has an identity she must hide from the world. Underneath Lindsey is a girl named Lyra Lestrange, a girl who is meant to be a secret forever. But will it last forever?
*Begins in GoF and follows the series through DH.
**Will appeal to fans of the Black family! Prominent characters are Bellatrix, Tonks, Andromeda, Sirius, and (to an extent) Narcissa.
Part Four Synopsis:
It's the summer after Albus Dumbledore's death, and the whole world is falling to Voldemort and the Death Eaters. Broken-hearted Lyra, unable to return to Hogwarts, must go into hiding with her family. It doesn't last long, and eventually Lyra is faced with a choice: join or die. Lyra's decision comes with many surprises, including a new ally who follows her to the final battle of good versus evil. While Lyra's path may seem clear, she finds herself torn between two sides for the final time, and in the end, despite tragedy and loss, Lyra accomplishes the impossible...which defies all of the agreements she and her family ever made.
Three years later, the fic has been completely finished! Enjoy reading it without having to wait for new chapters. Thanks to those who patiently waited and faithfully reviewed!
Didn't know you'd updated! I like this story... can't wait to see what happens when the DEs break out... update soon x
Thanks! That part is coming up within the next few chapters. I'll try to update as soon as I can.
The ending of this chapter is really good. I think in the next you should skim over all the other tasks in say, one paragraph and then go straight into Lyra's story.
The bit about the Cruciatus Curse was scary-- I guess she inherited some bad habits *coughs* from her mother, lol.
You did a good job showing the students reactions to Harry Potter becoming Triwizard champion.
Good so far!
Author's Response: Thanks so much! I do plan to skim over most parts of the tasks, or at least have Lyra doing something else, like communicating with another student during them so it's not the same stuff in GoF. I'm also glad you like seeing Harry become champion from another's perspective, because I was really worried about it being boring and simply repeating what every Potter fan has read in GoF.
Wow, Lyra's definately got a dark quality to her... I wonder how she'll react when she finds out Mad-Eye Moody is in fact Barty Crouch Jr!
Good start, I liked it, but I think you should start branching out from GOF- this is, after all, Lyra's story, not Harry's.
For your first fic it was pretty good...
Update soon, I'll drop you another review!
That will be playing a part in a future chapter! I've revised over and over and am really trying to branch away from the books, but it's a bit difficult because I feel like I can't just jump into the story without an introduction. The story breaks away from the books eventually.
Aw, the ending was so sweet!
Author's Response: Thank you, I\'m glad you liked it :)
Woah! Very action-filled!
I liked this.
Author's Response: Thank you!
It's been over thirty years since Harry defeated Lord Voldemort, yet a new threat hangs over the Wizarding World. The Exército de Leoa are a faceless organization who will stop at nothing to achieve their goals. The only problem is, no one knows what they are.
Draco and Astoria Malfoy crossed them, and they paid the price in Azkaban. Their son Scorpius wants them free, and revenge on The Exército de Leoa. There's only one way to achieve this, and that is to find Harry Potter. But the old hero has fled, for reasons no one can clarify.
Scorpius and his wife Lyra know that they have a limited amount of time in which to do this. What they don't know is what they're searching for might not be the solution...
This is really good... I'm hooked!
Thank you! I'm glad that you like it!