Hey, my name is Heather(ignore the username), and as you might've guessed, I like to write fanfiction. It's up to you to decide whether I suck or not. But I promise you, I will try to improve. I love to write, and I love to captivate people with my writing.
Okay, I suppose I should tell you a little bit about myself. I am a huge HP(and Snape)addict. I am a bookworm and music lover. I'd love to make a new friend here. And finally, I can be either very mature or completely and utterly insane.
Wishing Sev was alive,
LOL!It's true, though!Lord Moldy Shorts is indeed a wimp.
Author's Response: Not many people seem to get this point. Not many canon characters, at least. He could have died so much sooner if someone had had the guts to walk up to his house and shoot him through his window or something. A whole lot easier . . .
wow....short poem. But good!
He stared down at the drying pool of blood on the floor and thought with grim satisfaction, I am not so easy to kill.
Severus Snape leaves his old life behind, taking with him the hope that one day Nymphadora will follow.
Oh my gosh, that was so sad. But really good at the same time!This definetly going in my favorites!
Author's Response: I tried so hard to go AU, to have Tonks show up at the end, but I couldn't do it. She belongs with Remus, even if in this one dimension I wish it could have been different.
OMG! You can't imagine how excited I was when I decided to log into Mugglenet FF randomly(haven't been on in a long time), checked my favorites, and find that this has been updated! I had absolutely loved this story, and was so sad when it got put on hiatus, and had pretty much given up on it. It had actually inspired me to write a Snape-daughter fanfic of my own(not on here, on ff.net). Anyway, I'm so happy this is back! This review is going to be on the last few chapters because, like I said, I had kinda abandoned the story.
You are such a brilliant writer. The personality of Shiloh is amazing, so like Snape(my favorite character!). I hope he finds out that she's his daughter soon! You keep everyone in character very well, I'm impressed. I wish Snape had come to Shiloh's rescue when that hex hit her, but then I'm just sentimental like that. I wonder who did it? I'm thinking Marcus Flint, but that seems too obvious. Or maybe Annadel and her friends. Oh, I don't know, lol. I laughed when Shiloh accidently hit Snape with the snow ball. (: Finally, some more scenes with the two of them! If you choose to write it....
Oh, I would've been so pissed if I were Shiloh and Jacob had stolen that letter. I like him, but that was pretty jerkish.
Anyway, this review has gotten really rambly, so I'm going to stop. Fantastic job, and update soon, or you'll have a Howler sent your way! (:
Finally!A chapter that had Snapes POV in it!Anyways, this is my fave fanfic.This was another awesome chapter!But I don't think Shi being the smartest girl in school is the reason Malfoy is interested in him.Another job well done!
This is absolutely brilliant. One of my favorite fics I've ever read. Completely realistic, Severus is totally in character. Lily is such a refreshing character, as well, not totally perfect like Severus sees her as, but a very kind person all the same. You are a very talented writer, is this seriously your first fanfiction? I find that hard to believe. Again, I really love this fic and can't wait for the next chapter! I have a feeling though, if it keeps with canon, the Sev/Lily friendship will fall apart again. Sad, but....*sigh* Of course, I hope that doesn't happen, but still. Good job!
Author's Response: Thank you so much-- it's good to know that he still seems to be in character when I'm taking his character in such a different direction from the actual canon story. And Lily is a challenge also, but an enjoyable one. This is my first fanfiction-- I wrote "The Knick Knack" when I was two chapters into this one, so that is technically my second and this is my first-- but I've been at this one for ages now, so it hardly seems like I'm new at it anymore. :) I'm just waiting for my beta to look over the next chapter, and I hope to have it up shortly.
OMG, that was amazing!kinda short, though. But still amazing!poor Sev, he deserves someone!
Author's Response: Well, a sonnet is only supposed to be 14 lines.\r\nYou\'re right, he does deserve someone. I think he\'s in heaven right now with his beautiful new girlfriend Ashley who used to be a Muggle street performer and he is teaching her hwo to make potions and she is teacing him how to juggle.\r\nDON\'T RUIN MY DREAMS!
Too true, too true. This poem described Sev very well. I like it. You should try some more poetry.
Special thanks to my awesome beta, SometimeSelkie.
Usually I don't read Sev/Hermione fics, but I like this one. I'm actually glad he's not the DADA professor, i like him better as a Potions Master. and you portrayed Severus very well....a lot of authors make him as they'd like him to be than he really is.Great job!i'm going togo read the next chapter!
Author's Response: I\'ve always liked him better as the Potions Master too... I\'ve never written a story where he was doing the DADA... poor Severus, can\'t even get a break in fanfic, lol. \r\nThank you for the compliment on keeping him in character. I\'ve read some fics that do make him entirely too mushy. Severus is best when served snarky. \r\nStay tuned!
Wow. i can't believe hes going to allow her to see if the potion works!What will Lucius say?Dumbledore probably won't be surprised, he seems to know more or less of everything that goes on at Hogwarts. please update soon!
Author's Response: Thanks for the review... I\'ll try not to keep you in suspense for too long. \r\nStay tuned!
Finally, Severus caves in to his feelings!Yay!about time!I am interested in reading the unedited version!I wonder what's wrong with Lucius?Great chapter!
Author's Response: Thanks! I agree, its about freakin time Severus gets on the ball. You can see the un-edited version on fanfic.net or ashwinder - same penname, story name & chapter #. Hope you enjoy it!
Good plot idea!But when Cedric died, he was 17. So he's only 1 year older than Colin. If I were you, I wouldn't put so much emphasis on how he's a teenager and it's gonna be so hard to explain to him. But otherwise, good job!
Author's Response: Thanks! You\'ve got a point there...I\'ll work on it! Thanks a lot for your review...goodness knows Cedric is underloved. *huggles*
Nice. Good to see what happened in Cedrics POV.Except in GOF, Cedric asked harry how he entered the Tournament, and harry could tell he didn't believ him. But thats okay. Not everything has to be canon compliment!
Author's Response: *cringes* I sooo need to re-read GoF. It makes me feel really nice to see that you like thos story enough to review every chapter! Thanks! *squishee*
Wow....I loved this story!Finaly, a story thats not all about Severus being all alone without lily and blah blah blah.Not that i don't like that kind of story, but this story was better.at first it was the story we all know and loved and soon it turned AU and for a second i was like "What?"But then I figuered it out. Anyways, great story!
Author's Response: I believe your \"blah, blah\" is canon. Luckily, I have invented my own canon long ago where Harry does not exist and Lily Jr does.;) Though I have done my share of flangst, I
Okay, so I actually read this fic a long time ago, but never reviewed it for some strange reason. I found this again after reading your other, brilliant story(speaking of--I love how it was published & last updated on my birthday :D).
Very good. Believable, and well written. I grinned to myself, loving the irony. "right--about--HERE" I think I knew then that Severus was joking, because that was so exaggerated. But poor Lily remains oblivious, haha. The pillow fight was epic. Great job! And try to update your other fic soon, okay?:D
i don't think anyone has done this before.....it's really good. Thank God there was at least 1 person who liked Harry!
Author's Response: Well, I\'ve always imagined that there were at least some people who looked past the shyness and the baggy clothes (and the landing on the roof every once in a while).
I'm having some major boy problems right now, and was hoping you could help. You see, two of my best friends are guys and I think both of them have a crush on me. I can tell because they keep giving me unrequired presents, such as boquets of singing daisys. But I hve a crush on this kid in my year, but he doesn't even know I exist. He's really hot, and is in the same house as me(Slytherin), and his initials are B.Z. I want to ask him out, but I'm too nervous!How do I ask him out while avoiding total humiliation?And how do I tell my friends to stop trying to flirt with me without hurting their feelings?
Okay, that was the biggest cliff hanger of all time!But this chapter was awesome!We finally met Severus!I can't wait for the next chapter!How will they be able to keep it a secret?
Author's Response: Watch (or read!) and see! :)
Oh, no. Oh no no no no!!!!I....can't...... believe.....it!How could he die?This is so cruel!(I mean the story line, not you)he didn't even tell her he loved her!Is Rose going to commit suicide?if I was her, I would.he's my fave character, and I kinda had I crush on him(emphasis on kinda).. I'm sorry I haven't reveiwed the previous chapters, I've been busy. Great chapter, but it was the saddest thing i've ever read!*sobs into pillow*
Author's Response: :( Yes, I agree, it is cruel. And let's admit it, I am too. Rose didn't commit suicide, thankfully, but she's never going to be the same again. I'm glad you enjoyed it - and a bit of crying never hurt. I did it too. :p
Wow this was really good!I am definetly keeping an eye on this, it has great potential. I can tell this has a great chance of winning the challenge. And the title.......hmmm mysterious, can't wait to find out more. I wonder when Rose will meet Severus.....soon, I hope!
Author's Response: Wow, thanks. I\'m glad people actually like this. Keep reading!