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The Cause by Pussycat123

Rated: 3rd-5th Years • Past Featured Story
Summary: Marty Price works for The Cause, which involves several campaigns and petitions on a weekly basis. It has become common knowledge within Hogwarts that if you see her coming towards you with a clipboard, you should turn and walk the other way. Or perhaps deny all grasp of the English language. And if this isn’t eccentric enough, there’s also her obsessive written observations of four boys in her year, which will one day make a rather interesting book ...

Remus Lupin, meanwhile, has always been a little different, too. Poor, sweet Remus Lupin is, to the casual observer, the picture of a sensible, hard working student. However, he has three friends who have done more for him than anyone knows and they have done this because of his troubled past, troubled present and troubled future. Why the gloominess? Because Remus Lupin just so happens to be a werewolf.

So what could these two possibly have in common? And how can their stories possibly connect?

Runner-up for the 2008 Best Marauder Era QSQ.
Reviewer: ravenclawgirl93 Signed
Date: 06/10/08 Title: Chapter 9: The King of Diamonds

another great chapter!!! i wanna read that 'lord of the rings' wizarding series!!! you should write it!!

Author's Response: Hmm ... I might be a little busy to write an entire series to rival Lord of the Rings! Also, I don\'t even like Lord of the Rings that much *looks around shiftily then hides*. I just thought Remus and Marty would. But thanks for your faith in my writing abilities! =D

Reviewer: ravenclawgirl93 Signed
Date: 06/10/08 Title: Chapter 10: Hapless Slytherins

again, a superbly written chapter.... hmmm you asked me in your reply to my comment that Marty could be Luna's mother if i could see her hooking up with xneophilius, honestly... i cant see anyone hooking up with xneophilius (i think that's spelt wrong) but apparently some poor misguided woman did, or else Luna would not exist. hmmmm.....

Author's Response: Maybe he used to be more normal or something. *Tries to imagine this but can\'t*. I think Marty would definitely be friends with him if they met, but ... not in that way. That\'s just a bit creepy actually. Also, we know that Luna\'s Mum dies in some sort of experiment gone wrong, and why would I want that to be poor Marty\'s fate?

Reviewer: ravenclawgirl93 Signed
Date: 06/09/08 Title: Chapter 7: Hide-And-Seek

you know what? i think Marty might be the perfect candidate for Luna's mother. Yep i said it, Luna Lovegood's mother. Her mother is never named in the books, as far as i can remember. So maybe thats something to think about... hmmmm great chapter!!!

Author's Response: Actually, quite a lot of people have said that before now, but it\'s not true I\'m afraid. Can you really see her hooking up with Xenophilius? She does have some similarities to Luna, but that doesn\'t mean they\'re related, unfortunately. Thanks for your ideas though, I\'m glad you\'re enjoying the fic!

Reviewer: ravenclawgirl93 Signed
Date: 06/09/08 Title: Chapter 8: Pastimes

ooooooo akward..... hehe cute!! another great chapter!! I feel suddenly inspired to make some fan arts based on your fic, so if you dont mind, could you give me a bit of a discription as to what marty is supposed to look like? thanks.

Author's Response: Sure. Well, I never really thought too much about it ... Dark hair, not blonde, but not black either. Brown eyes. She\'s not very vain, or that interested in boys, she\'s much more practical, so she\'d probably have her hair up most of the time. Just sort of normal looking really, maybe on the small side. If you scan your drawings in or something, be sure to send me a link, I\'d love to see them! You can contact me through my author page.

Reviewer: ravenclawgirl93 Signed
Date: 06/08/08 Title: Chapter 1: The Plight of the Pixie

ROFL!!!! funniest fic i have ever read!!! I am reading it while sitting with my laptop in bed and I have literally had to stuff my fist in my mouth so that i don't wake my parents, I'm laughing that hard!! awsum work!!!

Author's Response: Thank you! I\'m glad you\'re enjoying it! I love making people laugh. =D

Reviewer: ravenclawgirl93 Signed
Date: 06/08/08 Title: Chapter 3: A Victim

once again i have had to go to extreme measures to prevent myself from laughing too loudly, including shoving most of my pillow case in my mouth. I really like this fic! But i find the Marty sections annoying, i think it would be better if it were just from Remus' point of view, but that would change the entire storyline so... its very very good as it is!!

Author's Response: You find Marty annoying? I love Marty! That\'s a shame. But you kind of need her perspective for it to work properly. There are two sides to every story, right? Anyway, despite that, I\'m glad you still like it anyway, and I hope I don\'t keep the rest of your family awake or anything ... =D

Reviewer: ravenclawgirl93 Signed
Date: 06/08/08 Title: Chapter 4: The Bullies

Dooky the house-elf hey? lol
Classic lines:

“You can’t beat tiramisu. Tiramisu is the kind of dessert that looks innocent and inviting, then kicks you in the balls and runs off with your wallet."


“Comedy,” Peter comments.


great stuff, just great!!!!!

Author's Response: Ha, that second one is actually what me and my friends really do sound like ... not that first one, though. That one\'s just weird. =D Thanks ever so much for reviewing, I\'m glad you\'re enjoying yourself!

As Happily Ever After As They're Gonna Get by cjbaggins

Rated: 3rd-5th Years •
Summary: My take on the first of those 'nineteen years' between the 36th chapter of DH and the epilogue.

Warnings: contains an unusually-shaped ring, a nosy neighbour, a rude shop assistant, shaving mishaps, thoughtful gestures, threatening goblins, and, unexplained appearances of Romantic!Ron and Romantic!Harry. You have been warned.

Rating is for *mild* innuendo and *mostly* innocent interactions but I wouldn't let my 9 year old read it.
Reviewer: ravenclawgirl93 Signed
Date: 05/19/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - Summer That Year

Both this fan fic and your other 'Aftermath' are the best ones I have every read! Please keep writing because I need to keep reading!

Author's Response: Thank you very much Helen! Of course, part of me is whining *but what about the other ones?*. I am definitely continuing to write, so no worries. Thanks for reading and reviewing. Go Ravenclaw! cj

Reviewer: ravenclawgirl93 Signed
Date: 06/23/08 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7 - Two Gifts and a Quarrel

aghhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh!!!!!!! please hurry with the next chapter!!!!! this ending is so.... well im dying of anticipation!!! hurry!!!!

Author's Response: I\'m hurrying, I\'m hurrying! Just trying to finish up the last week at work before I can concentrate on my writing. The ideas are almost all cemented in my brain, just fleshing it all out now. I hope to post in about a week or so. Hang in there! cj

Tears Of Innocence by Siriusly Mr Black

Rated: 3rd-5th Years •
Summary: An external monologue, from Narcissa Malfoy to Voldemort, in which she talks about her daughter Rose.
Reviewer: ravenclawgirl93 Signed
Date: 07/02/08 Title: Chapter 1: Innocence Is Always The First Casualty Of War

OMG this is absolutely AMAZING!!!! you are such a gifted author!!!!!! I cried throughout the entire thing. absolutely beautiful work! Mere words cannot describe how this has made me feel.

Author's Response: Thank you so much! I\'m so glad you enjoyed reading it =D

Great Expectations by Cassandras Cross

Rated: 6th-7th Years •
Summary: A weekend trip to the mysterious Rose Cottage leads to Ginny's second pregnancy and Hermione's first. The Potters and Weasleys take on “The Next Great Adventure” as they anticipate the births of Albus Potter and Rose Weasley.


Reviewer: ravenclawgirl93 Signed
Date: 05/28/08 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 19: House-Elves and Hormones

great chapters!!!! another cliffhanger! please hurry with the next one!!

Author's Response: I\'ve hurried. The next one\'s up already. Thanks!

Reviewer: ravenclawgirl93 Signed
Date: 05/24/08 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16: Broken Places

omg please upload the next chapter soon, im addicted to this fic, it rocks!

Author's Response: Next one is already up. You\'re addicted, are you? Ah, I see my evil plan is working. . . Lol!

Reviewer: ravenclawgirl93 Signed
Date: 06/23/08 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25: There Be Dragons

Another fantastc chapter!!! when Hermione said that she had left Ron I was like NO NO NO NO NO you cant do THAT! but it all worked out so *phew* hope the next chapter comes soon!!!!

Author's Response: Ah, no, I\'d never break Ron & Hermione up permanently. That would be wrong on so many levels. I\'ll try to get the last chapter up soon. Thanks!

Reviewer: ravenclawgirl93 Signed
Date: 06/02/08 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23: Albus

another great chapter!! once again we find a classic line:
“Find your own damn focal point!”
classic! hurry with the next chapter!!

Author's Response: My personal favorite was when Ginny told Harry to do something obscene and anatomically impossible. I\'ll leave it to your imagination to determine what she actually said. The next chapter should be up soon. Thanks for reviewing.

Reviewer: ravenclawgirl93 Signed
Date: 05/21/08 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 14: All is Well

do you have to end in a cliffhanger???? please hurry with the next chapter!!!!

Author's Response: I still have quite a few chapters in reserve, so hopefully you won\'t have to wait long. Thanks for taking the time to leave your comments.

Reviewer: ravenclawgirl93 Signed
Date: 05/30/08 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22: Meet the Parents

Once again fantastic chapters!!!
classic lines:
"Honestly!" Lily rolled her eyes. “Can’t you even make a compliment without flattering yourself?”


“That’s Potter calling Black a kettle."

lol, absolutely great!

Author's Response: Glad you liked it. Couldn\'t resist the \'Potter calling Black a kettle\' line. It was almost too easy. Thanks so much.

Reviewer: ravenclawgirl93 Signed
Date: 06/06/08 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24: All Through the Night

yet another great chapter!!!! please hurry in finishing the next one, i barely made it between the last one and this one, so for my own health i hope u upload again soon. honestly, i think im addicted to this fic :)

Author's Response: My goodness! You barely made it? I\'ll write as fast as I can, but it may be awhile yet. Because of other obligations it generally takes me a week or two to get through one chapter, but so far this one is coming pretty quickly so hopefully it won\'t be too long.

Reviewer: ravenclawgirl93 Signed
Date: 05/29/08 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20: The Meeting

omg again with the cliffhanger! please upload the next chapter soon!!!!!!

Author's Response: It\'s in the queue and ought to be up soon.

Reviewer: ravenclawgirl93 Signed
Date: 05/25/08 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 17: Keeping the Faith

once again a flawless masterpiece! keep 'em coming!

Author's Response: A masterpiece, no less? Thank you very much! I\'ll keep \'em coming.

A Many Splendoured Thing by cjbaggins

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: Harry, Ron, and Hermione have found and destroyed all the Horcruxes, Harry has subsequently defeated Voldemort, and now there is but one concern on his mind.
Reviewer: ravenclawgirl93 Signed
Date: 05/24/08 Title: Chapter 1: A Many Splendoured Thing

great story!

Author's Response: Thanks Helen! cj