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Behind those Emerald Eyes by makinmagic323
Rated: 6th-7th Years [Reviews - 2008]

Summary: Ten years have elapsed since Dumbledore's death and McGonagall has Hogwarts back on its feet again. Hermione and Malfoy both teach at the school. But when a new teacher is hired to teach Defense Against the Dark Arts, everyone seems to feel that they've met him before. A story of mystery, passion, friendship, and jealousy… not to mention that Harry Potter has been missing for ten years and Voldemort is dead. (All violence is mild).

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Disclaimer: I own my imagination, JK Rowling owns Harry Potter.

Categories: Harry/Hermione Genre: Warnings: Book 7 Disregarded, Sexual Situations, Violence

Word count: 40191 Chapters: 15 Completed: No
Published:
09/20/06 Updated: 01/16/09


Reviewer: Tariel Signed
Date: 07/09/08 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 10: Rampant Behavior

Grr. I hate cliffhangers. What happens next?

Author's Response: You'll have to read and find out once the next chapter is up!

 

Summary:

2009 QSQs: Runner-up: Best Romance - Other Character Story


Add together one ladies' man, one Quidditch player, one werewolf, and one soon-to-be traitor. Then, mix in one imaginative idiot, one fiery redhead, one clever Ravenclaw, and one blonde artist. Stir counterclockwise until trouble occurs, and you are dealing with one of the best-loved group of friends in Hogwarts history. Follow the story of the four Marauders and four equally troublesome girls. See them deal with their first encounters of love, sorrow, heartache… and Death Eaters. How will these future Order members cope with the ordeals that life throws at them? Will love blossom in what was once thought a highly unlikely place? What do you do when the person you care about most in the world doesn’t seem to notice you at all? Will a well-kept secret shatter the foundations of a seven-year friendship? Follow the lives of these friends through their last year at school to the dramatic final battle with Lord Voldemort two decades later.

Warnings are for later chapters, and any sexual situations are very minor.

Chapter Twenty Two: "The Snakes Strike" is in the queue. Excerpt:

Perfume filled his nostrils as Emma walked passed and Rosier’s gaze lingered on her bare, pale legs as the group headed outdoors. “Don’t you just love summer?” he inquired of Regulus, a hungry sneer lighting his face.

“This is ridiculous,” Regulus announced in a furious whisper, “we’re never going to get them alone!”

“Have faith, Black,” commanded Rosier smoothly. “Girls are well renowned for their desire for girly chats. I’m sure they’ll slip off the shackles of their chaperones soon enough.”


Categories: Marauder Era Genre: Warnings: Character Death, Sexual Situations, Substance Abuse, Violence

Word count: 175402 Chapters: 28 Completed: No
Published:
02/03/07 Updated: 01/16/10


Reviewer: Tariel Signed
Date: 01/16/09 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 17 - Roses are Red, Violets are Blue, Here's a Pair of Hole-Ridden Boxer Shorts, Just for You! Part Two

This is getting very frustrating. Didn't anticipate Debby Swain though, nice touch. She actually really did get on my nerves, which, no doubt is what you were trying to achieve. ;D

Author's Response: Teehee! Thanks, and glad to hear that Debbie annoys you, and yeah your right, that was indeed my intention :D.

 
Reviewer: Tariel Signed
Date: 11/23/08 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 12 - In the Dark: Part Two

"Awwww!"
Please write more soon. :D

Author's Response: Will do! :D

 
Reviewer: Tariel Signed
Date: 12/12/08 Title: Chapter 19: Chapter 15 - Words (and not nice ones!)

Eeeep! Ohhh...please write more soon! :)
And what about Sirius and Kirsty :(

Author's Response: Don't worry, they'll be back! With avengeance lol

 

The Cause by Pussycat123
Rated: 3rd-5th Years [Reviews - 276]

Summary: Marty Price works for The Cause, which involves several campaigns and petitions on a weekly basis. It has become common knowledge within Hogwarts that if you see her coming towards you with a clipboard, you should turn and walk the other way. Or perhaps deny all grasp of the English language. And if this isn’t eccentric enough, there’s also her obsessive written observations of four boys in her year, which will one day make a rather interesting book ...

Remus Lupin, meanwhile, has always been a little different, too. Poor, sweet Remus Lupin is, to the casual observer, the picture of a sensible, hard working student. However, he has three friends who have done more for him than anyone knows and they have done this because of his troubled past, troubled present and troubled future. Why the gloominess? Because Remus Lupin just so happens to be a werewolf.

So what could these two possibly have in common? And how can their stories possibly connect?

Runner-up for the 2008 Best Marauder Era QSQ.

Categories: Marauder Era Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 85857 Chapters: 20 Completed: Yes
Published:
09/06/07 Updated: 10/28/08


Reviewer: Tariel Signed
Date: 07/19/08 Title: Chapter 16: Fainty McPassOut

This is frustrating. I wish Remus and Marty would just exept that they like each other. Please write more soon.
What happens next?

Author's Response: Well, if I told you now, how would I make sure you came back? =P Unfortunately they're both suffering from extreme teenagey-ness and unbelievable denial ... frustrating indeed.

 
Reviewer: Tariel Signed
Date: 05/23/08 Title: Chapter 13: Paginate

What happens next?

Author's Response: I guess you\'ll have to wait and see ... right?

 

Seventh Sense by roisin_dubh
Rated: 3rd-5th Years [Reviews - 19]

Summary: A blind Muggle girl shows up at Hogwarts after a run-in with Death Eaters, looking for a solution to her mess and a place to recuperate.
I do not own any of Dante's work, nor do I want to. The former also holds true for Jeff Smith; sadly, the latter does not. I wish I owned his ideas. As it is, I just messed around with them. Please approach this fic with a very open mind; while nothing is particularly controversial, some of the concepts are very, very abstract and possibly arbitrary.

Categories: Marauder Era Genre: Warnings: Violence

Word count: 10125 Chapters: 7 Completed: No
Published:
09/07/07 Updated: 06/28/08


Reviewer: Tariel Signed
Date: 06/29/08 Title: Chapter 7: Chapter 7

Professor Trellawny was not employed at Hogwarts until after Harry was born.

Author's Response: Oops. My bad. Thanks for pointing that out, though :)

 

A Fresh Start by Hypatia
Rated: 1st-2nd Years [Reviews - 314]

Summary: Scorpius Malfoy was brought up in the knowledge that he came from an old pure-blood family. Hogwarts is going to teach him a great deal more. Will he be able to rise above his family’s tainted past, or will history repeat itself?

First place in the 2007 Autumn Challenge’s New Beginnings prompt.

Nominated for Best History/Mystery in the 2008 QSQs!

Canon compliant with all seven books, however, not compliant with all interviews given by JKR.

Categories: Mystery Genre: Warnings: Abuse, Mental Disorders

Word count: 56993 Chapters: 18 Completed: Yes
Published:
10/04/07 Updated: 12/31/08


Reviewer: Tariel Signed
Date: 01/03/09 Title: Chapter 17: Guess Who's Coming To Dinner

“NO! I needed that mushroom!” Aaah LOL!!!!

 

Summary: My take on the first of those 'nineteen years' between the 36th chapter of DH and the epilogue.

Warnings: contains an unusually-shaped ring, a nosy neighbour, a rude shop assistant, shaving mishaps, thoughtful gestures, threatening goblins, and, unexplained appearances of Romantic!Ron and Romantic!Harry. You have been warned.

Rating is for *mild* innuendo and *mostly* innocent interactions but I wouldn't let my 9 year old read it.

Categories: Ron/Hermione AND Harry/Ginny Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 65868 Chapters: 21 Completed: No
Published:
11/23/07 Updated: 11/18/12


Reviewer: Tariel Signed
Date: 06/25/09 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 - Home Again, Home Again

I'm an aussie and we don't say "aye". There are upper-class and lower class Australian accents. Doctors are part of the upper-class, and don't really have the broad out-back accent, so you know. Watch House. Chase has an average Aussie accent. Other than that, BRILLIANT! I love this story!

Author's Response: I'm thrilled you are enjoying it. Thanks for the tip about 'Aye'. I don't have access to a channel that plays 'House', so unfortunately can't check that out. Note, I did not have any doctor characters in my story, but my nurse, who would be educated and therefore is upper class, doesn't have a broad out-back accent at all. It is only the security guards, who I have written as being less educated, who have any accents. Keep reading! cj

 

Torn Between Ice and Emeralds by CrystalM
Rated: 6th-7th Years [Reviews - 105]

Summary: COMPLETED -- A broken-hearted Ginny Weasley lets go of Harry Potter to let him fight the good fight and starts her sixth year at Hogwarts. Draco Malfoy follows Snape back to Death Eater headquarters after Dumbledore's death to even more danger than he had just left, realising too late that he has made his greatest mistake yet. Is anyone likely to forgive him? Finding himself a refugee within the walls he had conspired against, he witnesses a scene that alters his perception of a concept he had previously found to be a waste of time: Love. This change allows him to grow away from the model Death Eater his father had been sculpting him into in an effort to find out what he really believes in with the help of his new friendship found in the youngest Weasley. Meanwhile, Ginny struggles with her harboured feelings for the man destined to save the Wizarding world, unknowingly losing her affections with every passing day to his childhood enemy.

Compliant with HBP and below.

25,000 reads!!! ::claps for readers:: Please, please leave me a review!!

Categories: Draco/Ginny Genre: Warnings: Book 7 Disregarded, Character Death, Mild Profanity, Violence

Word count: 54733 Chapters: 20 Completed: Yes
Published:
12/17/07 Updated: 11/03/08


Reviewer: Tariel Signed
Date: 05/21/08 Title: Chapter 4: Fire Meets Ice

Very interestin. What happens next?

 
Reviewer: Tariel Signed
Date: 05/25/08 Title: Chapter 5: No Longer the Enemy

Wow.
What happens next?

Author's Response: Thank you for reading! You shall see! :-)

 

Hogwarts Houses Divided by Inverarity
Rated: 3rd-5th Years [Reviews - 395]

Summary: Past Featured Story

Teddy Lupin's first year at Hogwarts. Canon-compliant. Nominated for a 2008 QSQ for best Post-Hogwarts story.

The war is over, and all is well, they say, but the wounds remain unhealed. Bitterness divides the Houses of Hogwarts. Can the first children born since the war's end begin a new era, or will the enmities of their parents be their permanent legacy?



Categories: Next Generation Genre: Warnings: Character Death, Violence

Word count: 203059 Chapters: 34 Completed: Yes
Published:
01/03/08 Updated: 11/25/08


Reviewer: Tariel Signed
Date: 05/22/08 Title: Chapter 4: War Wounds

I was always under the impression that both Gryffindor dorms led upstairs.
The sculpture is certainly an interesting idea.

 
Reviewer: Tariel Signed
Date: 05/22/08 Title: Chapter 8: Violet's Birthday

This is soooo interesting! Can't think of any criticisms, it's so good!
So, what happens next?

 
Reviewer: Tariel Signed
Date: 05/26/08 Title: Chapter 8: Violet's Birthday

Please write more soon. Please?

 

Great Expectations by Cassandras Cross
Rated: 6th-7th Years [Reviews - 505]

Summary: A weekend trip to the mysterious Rose Cottage leads to Ginny's second pregnancy and Hermione's first. The Potters and Weasleys take on “The Next Great Adventure” as they anticipate the births of Albus Potter and Rose Weasley.

NOW COMPLETE!


Categories: General Fics Genre: Warnings: Sexual Situations

Word count: 107864 Chapters: 26 Completed: Yes
Published:
01/13/08 Updated: 07/25/08


Reviewer: Tariel Signed
Date: 05/19/08 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 13: Fireworks

I have been logging on and off this website all day just to see if there was another chapter yet. I was not disappointed.
So, What comes next?

Author's Response: I had a huge backlog of chapters that I wrote while MNFF was getting all their problems straightened out, so hopefully now they are straightened out you\'ll be getting regular updates for awhile. I\'m nearly finished writing this story, but I won\'t tell you what comes next. You\'ll just have to wait and see!

 
Reviewer: Tariel Signed
Date: 05/22/08 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 15: Puzzles, Plans, and Portents

Aaaarrrgh! How? HOW??!! can you leave it there??
Please, PLEASE put up the next chapter soon!
Also, is Harry Malfoy? I kept drinking from a flask...
Also, it would be the perfect disguise, but how would he get the hairs?

Author's Response: I can\'t answer your first question I\'m afraid because it would give away too much, but your second question is certainly a good one: how would he get the hairs? H\'m. You\'ll know the answers eventually, I promise, but there are a few chapters to go before that happens. Have to let the mystery build a bit, doncha know. The next chapter is posted and the mods have been validating pretty quickly here the past few days, so hopefully you won\'t have to wait very long. Thanks for your reviews.

 
Reviewer: Tariel Signed
Date: 05/17/08 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 11: Nargles in the Mistletoe

I didn't know Ginny's full name was "Ginevra"! Nice detail. It's all the little details that make it so believable. I also didn't know Sirius' mother's name was "Wallburga".

Author's Response: Yep. Her full name is Ginevra Molly. And Sirius\'s parents were Orion and Wallburga Black. You can find those little details on Jo\'s website, as well as fansites such as the HP Lexicon and Wikipedia.

 
Reviewer: Tariel Signed
Date: 05/17/08 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 12: Rumors

"Oozlums"! ingenious!

Author's Response: Yes, doesn\'t that sound like something Luna would be chasing? There actually is a creature from magical folklore. It\'s a bird that\'s supposed to fly backwards, so naturally Luna would be fascinated.

 
Reviewer: Tariel Signed
Date: 06/02/08 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23: Albus

I'm waiting for that "happily ever after".
What about the births of Rose Weasley and Scorpius Malfoy?
Well, What happens next? :D

Author's Response: Rose\'s birth is coming up soon. It\'s not quite time for that yet (Hermione still has two months to go). As for Scorpius, we\'ll see a bit of him later on.

 
Reviewer: Tariel Signed
Date: 05/23/08 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 16: Broken Places

Interesting.
But what's happening with Harry?

Author's Response: You\'ll find out a bit more about what\'s going on with Harry in the next chapter, and a lot more in the chapter after that. Thanks for reviewing.

 
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