Very clever! And very funny!
But.. Albus Dumbledore? Can't wait to see what happens next. Well done!
Author's Response: Thans for reading! There really will be an explanation-- and I promise that it will be as logical as the rest of the story! :)
Is it a bad thing that I rather like Lily cheating on James with Remus? Yeah, I thought so.
I loved that she takes care of him, though. He needs that. Love how they know so much about each other that it's almost like they're married--and I am a little bummed that the baby wasn't Remus'. (I know, he wouldn't have been Harry otherwise!)
Liked this very much!
Author's Response: Thank you for your comments. It was a rather strange pairing to write, but I am a slave to my ebil muses who insisted on writing this one. Thanks again.
You know, I rather hope it is the start of something good. There was so much regret and bitterness in the lives of the Marauders and Snape. It would be nice to think there was something better waiting for them.
Loved this! Thanks for the resolutions--and the hope!
Author's Response: Thank you, Di. I'm pleased you enjoyed the story. Sometimes I can't believe JK wiped out a generation like that ... still upsets me. ~Carole~
I just found your story and am enjoying it very much. It is a little confusing (I find myself going back over things to see what I missed) but I'm realising there are some things that you don't explain right away--the explanations come later.
I love the relationship that Remus has with his family, and I'm looking forward to seeing how the entire horrible story about Remus' conception will play out for him and his family.
The first meeting between Jonathan and Charlotte was... interesting (and humorous, in a sick way--no pun intended). The second meeting--who couldn't fall in love with a guy like Jonathan?
I like how you've created a backstory to what's happening in OotP, and I liked the little glimpse you gave us into what's happening at Grimmauld Place (but Remus fell asleep at the table? Poor guy!) And I chuckled at the thought of an over-caffeinated Tonks.
Looking forward to the next chapter!
Author's Response: Somebody gets it! Well, other people got it, too, but this reaction surprised me. Yeah\, I tend to not spell things out, but I'm realising the downside to that: I'm forgetting to mention things that should have been explained a while ago. I am so glad that you actually read it, and you didn't give the expected response of 'Okay, yeah, moving on now.' Personally, I think Jon's my favourite character, seeing that he pops up in every draft, and he only goes through these slight changes. You got the first chapter...that floors me. I'm not very good with letting go with me writing, for most of it tends to be horrible drafts full of words. Hopefully I keep this interesting, for I tend to go through draft and draft before I'm satisfied with anything. I think it still needs revision. Thanks for reading. Jen