i love the hp series and i LUV harry potter... i am an aspiring author so plz give me any critique that you have on ym writing so that i can improve... also the beach..
Summary: Harry calls after her. "Cho!" But she doesn't stop. Good, that'll teach him to go on dates with Cho Chang.
He throws a galleon on the table and runs after her. I sneeze. Everyone in the tearoom turns their eyes from the still tinkling door to me hiding under the table.
Ginny ditches Quidditch practice to spy on Harry's first (and only) date with Cho. Written from Ginny's POV
Song fic to "Invisible" by Taylor Swift First part in my "Little Ginny Weasley" series, but it can stand alone.
oh he's an awful jerk! not to mention incredibly blind, no matter how often he wears his glasses!
Author's Response: yes, boys can be quite blind sometimes, especially Harry Potter. At least he comes to his senses eventually. and thank you for commenting on my fic! :)
Summary: Amongst the despair and sorrow of the wizarding world, James Potter, resident trouble-maker and Lily Evans, bookworm find that after a bit of work, several detentions, fights, parties and sneaky veela they can have a Typical Day in Paradise.
really good actually! i liked it! nice take on what petunia is like. but can she have SOME kindness in th enext chapter? i am the oldest in my family and we aren't ALL bad.
Author's Response: hiya!! ill see what i can do.... no promises alright?? thx for Reviewing, tell all ur friends.p.s. the second chapter has been denied like 5 times!! dang it lol gg of griffindor
dang! my stories are never accepted.
Summary: Lily and James Potter were the victims of one of the most famous tragedies in the wizarding world. But what about their lives before them? What happened in the adolescence of two not-so-ordinary teenagers, living not-so-ordinary lives? This is a story of good, of evil, and of everything in between. But mostly, this is a story of love, and how James Potter, in the middle of a tumultuous war, won the heart of the reluctant Lily Evans.
OH MYGOD!!!!!!!!!!!! WHAT HAPPENS!!!??? this is better than when harry used youknowhos name in DH and half a dozen DEs showed up!!!!!!