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What can I say. I live in London and am obsessed with a teenage wizard and his friends. Am I mad? Probably Do I care? Hell no!
EDIT: Grown? Um, probably not

For my first foray into the realms of fanfiction I've chosen to write about the Marauders. I'll always stick fairly closely to canon as I think JK knows best. Although I've enjoyed reading about other ships I, personally, don't think I could write with conviction about Ginny/Crabbe or Hermione/Mclaggan relationships.

EDIT: ha ha ha ha ha - How I have changed! I'm now firmly in the rare-pair, SSP, and things that aren't quite conventional camp, although I still loves me some James/Lily.

My second chaptered fic (Apparently Asleep) has started a love affair with Tonks/Remus and confirmed my obsession for all things Sirius. *sigh*

I am indebted to Terri (mudbloodproud) for being a great beta and all round amazing person. If it hadn't been for her encouragement I would have thrown in the towel many months ago.

EDIT: I have made a lot of wonderful friends during my past three years on MNFF, including (in no particular order) Natalie, Kara, Hannah/Bob, Jess, Gina, Lea, Lori, Julia, Minna, Emmahhhh, and the fantabulous BB.

I hope Mugglenet and you enjoy reading my words as much as I've enjoyed writing them. Huge thank-you to my niece, Amanda, for being one of the first to catch the Harry Potter bug and nagging me into reading them.

I’ve written a variety of stories, so here is them arranged in categories. Some are cross- referenced. So a James/Lily may appear in Marauder or Canon Romance

EDIT: I haven't written much Harry Potter fanfiction for a while. It is unlikely I'll update the two chaptered fics I first started as they became a little too long and unwieldy. Sorry about that.

A Second Chance
Contemplating Lilies
Dancing Queen
First Date Disaster
Flying, Fair Play and the Need for a Firm Hand
It Takes a Wolf to Prank a Dog
Learning to Fly
March Madness
O.W.L.s, Quidditch and the Added Distraction of Sirius Black
Peace in Heaven
Ribbons, not Strings
Sixth Time's the Charm
Thank you for your time, Professor
The Lions of Gryffindor
The Lions of Gryffindor
The Sum of the Whole
Who's That Girl?
Wormtail on the Hogwarts Express

Canon Romance
'i'before 'e' (Percy/Audrey)
A Prize Above Rubies (Isla Black/Bob Hitchens)
Acorns (Bill/Fleur)
Apparently Asleep (Remus/Tonks)
Birthday Girl (George/Angelina)
Bound in the Beating of Each Other’s Hearts (Narcissa/Lucius)
Coup de Foudre (Bill/Fleur)
Dancing Queen (James/Lily)
First Date Disaster (James/Lily)
Five weeks (Remus/Tonks)
Forces of Nature (Ron/Hermione)
Forever Dancing (Alice/Frank)
In The Stars (Draco/Astoria)
Key of the Door (Ron/Hermione)
Kissing the Joy as it Flies (Seamus/Lavender)
March Madness (James/Lily)
Not Quite Perfect (Bill/Fleur)
Reconnaissance (Remus/Tonks)
Sixth Time’s the Charm (James/Lily)
Snowball Fights (Teddy/Victoire)
Until Death (Eaters) Do Us Part (Draco/Astoria)
Veils (James/Lily)
You Dance Divinely (George/Angelina)

Non (or rather tweaked) Canon (apart from one story, these don’t break any canon.)

Better than Chocolate (Charlie/Tonks)
Heat of Life (Harry/Katie)
Her Tomorrows (Harry/Parvati)
High (Scorpius/Lily)
Lavender, blue- A Gryffindor True (Lavender/Blaise)
Love At First Strike (Angelina/Terry)
Mirrors (Charlie/Penelope)
Misperception (Oliver/Cedric/Daphne)
Orphans of the Storm (Seamus/Parvati/Dean)
Passion Among the Primroses (Arthur/Mafalda)
Predictions of Love (Gilderoy/Sybil)
Ribbons, not Strings (Remus/Rosmerta)
Shrouds (Hermione/Draco)
Snapdragons (Charlie/OC)
Stars or Carousels (James/Dominique)
Summer’s Heat (Sirius/OC)
Swans (Mollyjnr/OC)
Teenage Witch (Charity/Myron Wagtail )
The Happy Couple (Harry/Ginny, Blaise/Lavender)
The Only One (Lavender/Blaise Teddy/Victoire)
The Untrodden Path (Draco/Hannah)
Where We Started From (Dean/Ginny)

Same sex Pairings
Apple-bobbing ( Lisa/Susan)
Close Your Eyes (Hermione/Lavender)
Drowning, not Waving (Oliver/Cedric)
Eyes That Know Me (Scorpius/Hugo)
Forbidden Colours (Tracey/Demelza)
Fracture (Theo/Justin)
Monochrome (Sirius/Remus)
The Dance We Do (Bellatrix/Amelia)
The Hat that Thinks it’s a Chair (Justin/Theo)
Truth Or Dare (Cormac/Zacharias)

Aberforth Dumbledore: A Love that Dare not Bleat its Name
Lockhart, Sprout and Two Smoking Goblets
Passion Among the Primroses
Predictions of Love
The Bacchus Book
Vampire - Ghost Child!

A Prize Above Rubies
Aberforth Dumbledore: A Love that Dare not Bleat its Name
An Outstretched Hand
Shadows Deep

Others (General, D/A, Post Hogwarts, Next Gen)
A Tangled Web (D/A)
All in the Genes (NG)
Chasing the Scoop! (Post Hogwarts)
Christmas on the Outside (General/Trio era)
Dean Thomas and the Reiver Curse (Post Hogwarts)
Diavol (Remus Trio Era)
Every Breath You Take (Post Hogwarts/Next Gen)
Forever Dancing (Alice/Frank)
Friends in Unlikely Places (Post Hog. Hermione)
Growing Old Disgracefully (Post Hog)
High (NG)
Lavender, blue (Trio Era)
Mere Wisps of Light (Post Hog. Draco fic)
Muggles, Magic and Misconceptions (Next Gen)
My Funny Valentine (Post Hogwarts)
Staring into the Fire (Trio Era)
The Waiting Game (D/A)
Whispers from the Past (Next Gen)

The Foolhardy Boys and Parvati, too
Who’s that Girl?
Xanthe Interrupted

As They Watch
Beyond Beseeching
Celestina's Songbook: Christmas Edition, Volume 1
Cold Dreams
Draco's Journey
Fairytale of Hogwarts
Flying High
Forever France
Frozen Silence
Hey, brother
I Believed in Lily Evans
Master Barty Regrets
Phoenix Flames
Queen of My Heart
Sirius, Baby
The Daydream Pedlar's Song
The Four
The Labyrinth Mind

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While He Leaves by Ginny Weasley Potter

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: Harry stood quite still and silent, listening to her sobbing and calling Ron’s name amongst the trees.— Harry Potter and the Deathly Hallows, by JK Rowling

We know everything about how Harry felt when Ron left him and Hermione in the forest after the huge fight with Harry on that fateful day. But what was the situation in Ron and Hermione’s minds? How could it be from their points of view?
Reviewer: Equinox Chick Signed
Date: 08/09/11 Title: Chapter 1: While He Leaves

Awwww, I like this. I haven't started my pantoum yet, so am impressed you've mastered it so well. This is a sweet poem and nicely encapsulates Ron and Hermione.

Repent does he but the chance is gone

This is worded a bit oddly and had me stumbling when I read it both times. 'Repent does he' is a bit too Shakespearean and doesn't quite fit with the wording of the rest of the poem. I think you should switch it to 'he does repent' or 'Repent he does' . Minor point, but thought I'd mention it.


Author's Response: Oh, once you start the pantoum, you'll realise that it isn't all that hard. ;) But yes, I thought such a poem would sound best for something emotional or deep. Oh, and about that line, I've been unsure with the words too. I thought something didn't fit quite well, but I wasn't able to point out the mistake. Thanks for pointing that out to me, I'll change it right away. *huggles* :) And thanks for the review too! :)

Reviewer: Equinox Chick Signed
Date: 02/16/12 Title: Chapter 1: While He Leaves

OOOOH, a Pantoum. Having just suffered the trauma of writing my own, and finding it sadly difficult and lacking, I was a bit hesitant about clicking on yours.

But this is really well done. The lines that need to be repeated don't sound at all forced and you have a very good flow and rhythm to the poem. I like the fact that you've kept some lines exactly the same (this is SO effective in the first two stanzas) but have twisted others around.

Unhurt, unscathed, pristine?

Even the punctuation here works well :)

The emotions in this poem are so very true to canon. I love the way you've shown both sides here because in the book we see Ron's anger and Hermione's tears from Harry's POV, but we don;t see Ron's sadness and enormous regret.

Knowing the remorse in her eyes and the lone tear

This was the only line I stumbled on (and then only mildly). I think it's too long, and I'm not sure about the word 'knowing' (perhaps 'seeing' instead?).

I really enjoyed this poem, though. It looks effortless and nothing about it is at all forced.

Well done. ~Carole~

Author's Response: Ooh, a second review from you for this poem! Again, sorry I'm a douche! I actually quite enjoyed writing this pantoum. I'm lazy and I like it when two likes of each verse are pre-determined and I just have to think of two more. I did try writing another pantoum and I hated it. It's at the back of my college notebook written in pencil and signed and everything and it never came into my laptop. To be fair, the lines were easy enough to twist around and the poem was so short in itself that it wasn't difficult at all.And I had some rhythm issues too which I wanted to sorted out and will sort out according to your suggestion. I think Ron is a largely underestimated character in the fanfiction world because no one ever seems to want to think that he may have genuine feeling and that he's not stupid. It so annoys me when people do that. And I'm glad I didn't make a mistake in characterising him. Sometimes I doubt my own characterisation so much... Thank you for the review, Carole and orry again! *huggles*

Storm and Stress by Merlynne

Rated: 6th-7th Years • Past Featured Story
Summary: Meleia Varias, a fourth year student at Durmstrang Institute knows that reason often has little to do with anything in life, and justice is an abstract concept. Under Headmaster Karkaroff’s watchful eye, Meleia explores the frightening implications of her past as she works to un-fog the future in a world that refuses to be made sense of.
Reviewer: Equinox Chick Signed
Date: 02/18/12 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: The Littlest One

This will be fairly short and sweet. Although this isn;t my usual type of fic, I was steered this way by a friend (and saw this in Featured) so decided to give it a whirl.

From this evidence of this opening chapter, I think you have a great story here. Your plot is original, your characters fully formed and the writing is good. It's a shame this hasn't had many reviews (apart from the last surge from aforementioned friend - ha ha) but that's probably because it's an OC story set in Durmstrang. Very unfair because this deserves more attention.
,br> Intriguing start and rather spine-chilling. Well done - Carole-

Author's Response: Thank you for reading and thank you for reviewing!

Moving Ginny by WeasleyMom

Rated: 3rd-5th Years •
Summary: After her brother's Potter-assisting activities are discovered by Death Eaters, Ginny's Easter holiday take a bit of a sour turn.

A missing moment from Deathly Hallows

I'm not J.K. Rowling, which should be obvious as soon as you being reading. Haha.
Reviewer: Equinox Chick Signed
Date: 03/30/12 Title: Chapter 1: one-shot

Awww, sorry, I missed this first time around, and that's a shame because it's a little gem, Lori. You captured a missing moment perfectly. I sometimes think the best stories are the ones that we know happened, but weren't written for us by JK. *sigh*

You captured Ginny's fears very well here. She wasnts her family to be safe, but is so desperate not to let her friends down because what she's doing is important, and being stuck in a house with Aunt Muriel will be ... frustrating .

Well done. ~Carole~

Author's Response: Aw, you sweet thing! I was just joking about the reviews, and here you've left me a real one! Well, it's down to you really, since this is one of those that came out of your fabulous Missing Moments class. I think ever since then, that is one of my favorite time frames to write. I used to loathe the idea of writing Ginny, but now I've come to see her a little differently. I'm glad that came across. Thanks for reading and reviewing, friend. I appreciate it! <3

I Always Knew by Dragon_Lily

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: Snape reflects on losing his one true love.
Reviewer: Equinox Chick Signed
Date: 11/05/11 Title: Chapter 1: I Always Knew

Hi there, I thought I should return the favour and leave you a review for your poem.

I like the structure here, and am thinking this is a pantoum (?).Tthe near repetition of certain lines reminds me of that form and it works well here. You've done well to convey Snape's thoughts in relatively few words. His love/obsession tends to define him in the books and in fanfiction and this is no different, but at the same time you show a reflectiveness about him that isn't seen.

I liked the flow of this poem and the rhyming certainly assisted that as well as the repetition of key lines. ~Carole~

Author's Response: Oh thank you so much for your review! It was my first ever... :D -Emma

Ambition's Downfall by goldensnidget92

Rated: 3rd-5th Years •
Summary: Draco Malfoy's sixth year at Hogwarts is as infamous as Dolores Umbridge's detentions, but what really motivated him to attempt to kill the great Albus Dumbledore?

After his father's imprisonment in Azkaban, Draco is left feeling humiliated and alone. Coming from a family where reputation means everything, he jumps at the chance to prove himself to the Dark Lord; but will he be able to go through with the momentous task of murdering the greatest wizard known to man, or will he learn to value just how precious life can be?
Reviewer: Equinox Chick Signed
Date: 10/27/13 Title: Chapter 1: Temptation

I’m always interested in Draco stories, especially those concerning his motivations during that sixth year and onwards. He’s such an intriguing and well-rounded character because we do see in the sixth and seventh books that he does have a spark of humanity about him that could lead to his redemption.

I very much liked the connections you made in the story, like Pansy’s letter reminding him of the Vanishing Cabinet, which led him to Bourgin and Burkes. It felt very natural and the plot flowed pretty well.

I’m in two minds about the opening chapter. There were a couple of moments in his characterisation which didn’t ring true to me, although it’s very possible that you’ve written this in a way that also shows he’s self-deluded.

Draco wondered where his voice had gone. He was never scared by anyone, so why had his throat closed up, not allowing any sound out except a strangled grunt?

The thing is, Draco in the books is scared of quite a lot. He’s scared of the Forbidden Forest, he’s scared of Hermione when she hits him, he’s scared of Moody, so perhaps a line in the story where it’s obvious he’d refusing to think about the times when he’s been terrified would aid the characterisation.

The other part in chapter one is here:

That he could be so foolish to have both been beaten by Potter (whom Draco had beaten several times before) and to let himself be caught by the Ministry was disgusting.

Again, Draco is deluded. He hasn’t beaten Harry several times before. Usually Harry beats him. The only time Draco did really get what he wanted was when he got Harry thrown off the Quidditch team. So, it could be good to show Draco’s ascendency in this sixth year if his besting of Harry in the carriage is seen as a newer experience for Draco.

They’re both minor points, but they did niggle at me a little in the opening chapter.

The final point is that I’d have liked to have seen him get his Dark Mark. I can only imagine what a huge thing it was for him, and with Bellatrix alongside urging him on, and Narcissa in constant fear, it would have made a powerful scene.

Having said that, it’s obviously your story, and I did enjoy reading it. ~Carole~

Wine Untasted by Black Rapture

Rated: 6th-7th Years •
Summary: He emerged from seclusion to find acceptance - what he found was her. /post-DH/Draco/Hermione/
Reviewer: Equinox Chick Signed
Date: 09/02/11 Title: Chapter 1: The Sky is Laced with Fitful Red

I'm interested in Draco redemption fics having written a few myself, and like the premise of this. Draco as a Potions master should be interesting and not totally unlikely given that he was good at the subject. I admit to finding hagrid's change of a heart a little too quick. It's not that I think he'd bear a grudge, but I don't think he'd extend the hand of friendship unprompted quite so easily. Hagrid is quite diffident so this seemed a little OOC for him to make the first move.

Am intrigued to see where Hermione fits in. ~Carole~

Author's Response: Just wanted to let you know that I agree completely and I didn't expect anyone to assume it was unprompted. You can be sure that he was given a little push by McGonagall, although I didn't blatantly write it.

Whispers in the Night by lucca4

Rated: 6th-7th Years • Past Featured Story

"Swear to me, Cissy. Swear you won't tell."

It's a secret, and it haunts you but you won't tell.

You promised.

This is lucca4 of Gryffindor writing for The Great Bannermakers' Hall Challenge.

It won …and I am still shocked!

Thank you, thank you, to my beta Alex/welshdevondragon, who has beta-ed this in the blink of an eye. She is amazing.

Also, thank you to Julia/the opaleye for the gorgeous, eye-dropping banner that inspired the story.

Nominated for a 2012 Quicksilver Quill Award - Best Dark/Angsty Story.
Reviewer: Equinox Chick Signed
Date: 09/15/11 Title: Chapter 1: (Whispers)


Ariana this is brilliant. Absolutely friglootingly brilliant. I'm totally amazed, except I shouldn;t be because it's you. Uhm, dumbstruck. And it's second person which I hate - except I obviously don;t when you write it.

Sorry, incoherence reigns in this review. It's fab. ~Carole~

Author's Response: Caroleeeeee! I'm so incredibly glad that you actually liked it, even though it was second person :). I was really worried about that, actually, and you made me feel so much better. Thank you! xx Ariana

Undeniably Awkward by ron lover

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: It was just an ordinary day for Albus before Scorpius changed that with one question.

Slight Al/Scorpius.

Reviewer: Equinox Chick Signed
Date: 09/15/11 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Ha ha ha - I'm giggling at this. Although I was going 'wtf?' at the beginning (in a confused way, not an angry way) by the middle I was really interested. I love the description of the kiss, and their discomfort at not knowing what to do with their hands etc. By the end I was giggling at the word 'fingery' ha ha.

I liked this ~Carole~

Author's Response: Hello Carole! I intended it that way, for the beginning. I was hoping it would show Al's confusion better that way. And thank you very much! I was a bit worried that the kiss wouldn't be accurate. And I was giggleing there too. =P Thank you so much for reviewing!

Up in the Air by ToBeOrNotToBeAGryffindor

Rated: 6th-7th Years •

To Harry Potter, his life's destiny was to save the world, become an Auror, and be with Ginny Weasley forever. He did all right on the first. The second wasn't turning out to be all he thought it would, and the third... well, that's a story for a different day. 

Where does that leave the Chosen One so soon after his twenty-fourth birthday? And will a past acquaintance show him what or even who he wanted for his future?

This story has been nominated for a 2012 Quicksilver Quill Award: Best Non-Canon Romance Story.

Reviewer: Equinox Chick Signed
Date: 09/24/11 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4

OHHH, you can't leave it there ... impossible! Well, not really, I actually think that's a great ending to a fine story. Harry in a crisis at work and meeting someone in equal turmoil. Brilliant.

I liked Katie a lot in this. It's sad that she became so hard and cynical because she was always the sweet girl on the team. I believe she and Harry will heal each other (and have a cracking good time) so YAY for telling their story.

I was a bit puzzled that Kingsley took the resignation so well, but when you added the line about how Harry had been fighting since he was 15 that made sense. Kingsley isn't the coolest guy in the history of the Ministry for nothing. Seriously, someone needs to give that man a sex life - ha ha ha.

Really enjoyed this, Jess, so well done. ~Croll~

Author's Response:

Lol, I stopped the story where I did to make sure I didn't give them an unhappy ending, as I'm wont to do. This way, there is a promise of flying and smut and a relationship that may or may not work out but one hopes it does.

I actually considered Kingsley's reaction carefully. See, he isn't a BAMF for nothing. There are few things about the people who work under him that he doesn't know, and I would think he would keep an especially close eye on the MLE. He would've noticed the gradual decline in Harry's work performance, which no one would've said directly, given that he's Harry. And I believe Kingsley to be very shrewd about people, and I think he realised long before Harry did that this wasn't what he wanted to do anymore. It was something he'd actually expected to happen eventually, or, if not, something he might've even suggested.

Hmm, Kingsley smut...I might have to cook something up one of these days.

Anyway, *hugs Croll*


Reviewer: Equinox Chick Signed
Date: 09/16/11 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

No no no. I'm far more upset about the wand breaking than Harry breaking up with Ginny - ha ha. But I VIOLENTLY disagree with him getting a new one. He should have broken into Dumbledore's coffin, nicked the Elder wand to mend his own. That's not at all creepy and OOC *snigger*

Interesting story, Jess. I do like your characterisation of everyone. Ollivander stuck out for me, not really sure why, but I loved that scene in the wand shop. Why did you decide on those combinations?

O have some foreknowledge of this story, but can't wait to read it all on here (inbetween all the qsq and brawl thingies).

Great, original story - reminds me a little of Wild Card .... heh heh heh.


Author's Response:

When I was foraging in my brain for a premise for a Harry/Katie, the idea of a broken wand stuck as a motif for broken dreams and changed perspectives. I felt bad for his wand, as it had already bit it once in its lifetime, but it was a part of Harry's past that he could use as a signpost to move on and go in a different direction. 

I decided on this new wand combo for Harry because of the change in him as a person. Larch, according to the Pottermore wand info, instills confidence in the carrier and taps into things hidden deep within. This is what the story is all about: Harry having the confidence to see that his life isn't what he truly wants and seeing within himself enough to know that things change and so do people, and who might've been his soulmate at seventeen might not be the right one at all years later. The length is still relatively close to that of his phoenix and holly wand, so that's not much different, and the core was meant to be a steadfast friend, the one thing that would stand by him no matter what when he knew it was time to turn his world upside down. I think Ollivander suspected as much when he picked this wand out for Harry to try.

Actually, out of all the characters, the one I was worried about the most was Katie. But I think a bad marriage and an introduction of harsh reality to a girl who needed something and someone after the war could warp Katie into what she was in the story. I'm sure someone was annoyed somewhere about me breaking up Harry and Ginny in the umpteenth different way, but he's so shippable when you get her out of the way, hehe.

Ooh, does this remind you of Wild Card? Well, I am planning a shower scene for the benefit of a particular LJ community, so maybe...


MC Pansy by Astoria Greengrass

Rated: 3rd-5th Years •
Summary: A rap written for the MC Kreacher Challenge in Poetry Anyone. Slytherin's queen dishes it out. Loosely based around Swish and Flick Wrock and Tik Tok's beat by Ke$ha.
Reviewer: Equinox Chick Signed
Date: 11/21/11 Title: Chapter 1: MC Pansy

Can't believe you don;t have any reviews for this because it's a fun poem that made me giggle a lot when I read it in Poetry Anyone. You really managed to catch the rhythm and beat of the original rap and you also managed to excapsulate the very b1tchiness of Pansy withing the rap.

Conjure up a bridge and get over it I’m much better than you! I think that's my favourite set of lines - ha ha ha. BTW, when I was writing my rap, I kept reading/singing it in an American accent (I'm British), did you? Of course, if you're American then that makes no sense - heh heh. Well done. ~Carole~

Waiting by hestiajones

Rated: 6th-7th Years •
Summary: There was something beautiful about the sight in front of her: the pink and orange splashed on the sky, the tall trees fighting for prominence against the lavish background, and the gentle swaying of curtains that were being teased by the zephyr. Dorea thought, this is the perfect moment to die.

This story was written for the Great Bannermakers' Hall Challenge. Thanks to lullaby BANG for her amazing banner, which may be found here: http://i55.tinypic.com/mbk6eu.jpg.

Thanks to Croll/Equinox Chick for beta-reading this, helping me with historical facts, and giving me encouragement and support! I don't think I could have done this without you.

Disclaimer: I am not JKRowling. Also, a word about canon: Charlus Potter and Dorea Black married and had a son, but it is not known if it was James (and various other canon info actually suggest it was not him.)
Reviewer: Equinox Chick Signed
Date: 09/20/11 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

I only dared you because I didn't think you could claim a banner. And thus, as always, you proved me wrong. Sigh. In three hours you produced something lovely and heart-rending. How how how do you do this? You've taken the very few facts we know about Dorea and Charlus Potter and weaved something wonderful.

I am not worthy.

What I really liked on reading this was the lovely description of simple things like her red cloak, and Isaac tipping his hat to her. Later scenes - like the bathroom - were so warm and funny, yet passionate, too. The poetry and his letter to her made me want to weep. I really wanted this to end happily for them, even though Charlus seemed like a decent man.

When you're famous, I will set up your fan club.


Author's Response: Hahaha! I am mad. >.< I didn't think I'd be able to pull it off. Thank you for your lovely comments! If I had the time, and if I had done some more planning, this would have been a better, bigger story. Even as I was typing it out feverishly, Isaac and Dorea were growing into full characters in my head, and I could picture lazy afternoons spent drowning in poems and cigarettes and whatnot! There is so much I imagined but didn't put down on the WordDoc because I hadn't the time nor the energy. :/

Thanks again for the wonderful review!

I wonder what the name of my fan club would be...

Lonely Remorse by Hullachan

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: Petunia sits at her husband's funeral pondering how her family has fallen apart. The last thing she expects is for her nephew to slide into the back pew of the village church to pay his respects.
Reviewer: Equinox Chick Signed
Date: 09/24/11 Title: Chapter 1: Lonely Remorse

Hi there, I think this is well written and your characterisation of Petunia is good. The story is interesting and flows well. Harry and Petunia's conversation is interesting and comes across as a very 'real' conversation. I like the awkwardness that Petunia feels throughout the story.

However, I find it somewhat implausible that no one would have told them that the battle was over and that they were safe, especially as Diggle lived in the next village.

Nice story otherwise. ~Carole~

Author's Response: Hey Carole, thanks for reading and reviewing. I totally see your point there - as it says throughout the books, even the Muggles notice when things aren't quite right in the wizarding world. I think it was more the specifics that I imagined Petunia to be looking for, particularly as the war with Voldemort has taken most of her family, albeit in an indirect way. Great to think about these things though!

Doubts by WeasleyMom

Rated: 3rd-5th Years •


I've never felt this way before.


Fleur struggles with life and war. A missing moment from Harry Potter and the Deathly Hallows.


This is WeasleyMom of Hufflepuff writing for the Great Hall Bannermaker's Challenge. The banner used was Doubts by TM_WandStick. I chose this banner immediately Toni--so gorgeous!

Yay! Those lovely SBBC people have added this story to the SBBC Hall of Fame! I knew there was a reason I joined that group. Hehe. Thanks, you guys!


Thanks so much to Natalie/hestiajones for beta reading this so close to the submission deadline. She is everything she is cracked up to be.


I'm not JK Rowling.
Reviewer: Equinox Chick Signed
Date: 03/30/12 Title: Chapter 1: one-shot

You may have read my review of this in SBBC. So, what can I POSSIBLY add to this masterpiece except ...



Author's Response: I can feel the love, Carole. :D Thanks for throwing me a bone... more than two months of no reviews, and I start to get the shakes. hugs!!

A Game of Fire by lucca4

Rated: Professors •

There is no love between them; there is only passion and burning desire.

But for Susan, this is enough. She has loved and lost before, and she can’t handle losing again.

The lust is much easier to deal with.

* Originally written for the What a Pair SPEW Drabble Challenge.

Nominated for a 2012 Quicksilver Quill Award - Best Same Sex Pairing.
Reviewer: Equinox Chick Signed
Date: 10/18/11 Title: Chapter 1: A Game of Fire

whoaaaa! Amazing! Your writing is so sensual and exciting, Ariana. You just make the characters come alive in your stories. I can see the setting so clearly in my head and the small details, down to the hole in the black slip. WONDERFUL

The twist at the end completely blindsided me (and I'd read the drabble as well!). Fantastic twist that they were caught in this triangle and I loved the fact that Susan wasn't a Hufflepuff goody goody because she'd set this trap that she no longer wishes to sprin or to leave.

Just wonderful. Please, please,. never stop writing. You're far too good not to. ~Carole~

Author's Response: *squish*

Thank you so, so much for this review, Carole! It made me incredibly happy, especially as I wasn't expecting to get any more reviews for this story :). Ooh, and I'm so excited you read the drabble too. I'm glad someone outside of SPEW read it and liked it. I feel like Susan used to be a Puff goody-goody, but Theo's betrayal would have cracked that aspect of her a little. <3 Thank you so much again! xx Ariana

Drive Your Car On by hestiajones

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: When Vernon Dursley starts acting like a prat, Hestia Jones begins rapping on him, Missy Elliot style.

Winner of the MC Kreacher Challenge at Poetry Anyone (MNFF Boards). Rap inspired by and written to the beat of Missy Elliot's Get Ur Freak On, which I love to bits.

DISCLAIMER: Do you really think J.K.Rowling would write this, though?
Reviewer: Equinox Chick Signed
Date: 09/26/11 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

UNF! That HJ is just HAWT!

Ha ha ha - you have managed to dispel the fluffy-haired old sweetie obsessed with potato peelers that seems to come to mind whenever we see Hestia Jones in the books, and replaced her with this somokin' b1tch. Mind you, my perception of Hestia had been altered a while before this rap ... no idea why.

Very funny. This is such a good idea and I've had this rap thumping through my brain now. ~Croll~

Author's Response: Thank youuuu! Yes, this particular HJ is a somokin' b1tch heeheehee.<3

Violets by armagod679

Rated: 6th-7th Years •
Summary: Quirinus Quirrel is obsessed with flowers, Defense Against the Dark Arts, and the girl with the violet-blue eyes.
Reviewer: Equinox Chick Signed
Date: 01/27/12 Title: Chapter 1: The Girl with the Violet-Blue Eyes

This is an interesting story. I don’t think I’ve ever read anything about Quirrell on the boards, and this was a compelling look at his life before he became possessed by Voldemort.

What particularly impressed me was that you took what little we knew from the book and fleshed out his character. I don’t just mean the stutter, but Voldemort’s words about meeting the idealistic wizard were so in tune with this story. He was actively seeking out Voldemort “ that was an original twist on the wizard being ‘caught’.

I felt very sorry for him here, and angry with Lester who knew how he felt about Violet and yet still went out with her (and, I assume, treated her badly). The images of the violets, Quirrell’s flower pressing, filling three books with only violets had me sighing for the poor boy. Beautiful images and yet she couldn’t see his worth. Although, perhaps Violet sensed his obsession with her and knew it wasn’t healthy. It can’t be healthy, can it, so desperate for a girl that years later you’re still seeking the Dark Lord?

The one part of the story I didn’t think as successful as the rest was Violet’s speech about herself “ and girls like her.

“I know what I said,” Violet snapped. “But girls like me don’t take what they want, not really. We go for what we know will make us unhappy because if everything works out perfectly, we feel like we haven’t challenged ourselves. We might try to rebound on boys like you, but we always go back to the boys like Lester, the ones who will hurt us and make us cry. Don’t ask why. It’s just what will always happen.”

This just struck me as remarkably wise of her, and all-knowing about herself, when I think in reality this girl of seventeen is so pre-occupied with herself and her own feelings, that she wouldn’t be able to be this self-evaluating and logical about her motives. I think it would have been better if it had been Quirrell who’d recognised this about her after she’d given him the brush of, or if these thoughts had come to her years later when she was looking at the scrapbooks. Her conversation with Professor Flitwick seems a little off as well. he’s an old wizard and her former head of house, so I’m not sure she’d use phrases like ‘one-night-stand’ to him, but rather say ‘we had one date’ or something.

A minor quibble is that you’ve written Hogshead: it’s The Hog’s Head.

The ending was so sad. As she looked through the boxes at the scrapbooks and discovered the three books of violets and the photograph, I felt a lump in my throat. She realised, far too late, the worth of the man. But then again, could they really have been happy?

Interesting pairing and a good story. Well done. ~Carole~

Author's Response: Thank you very much. I'm glad you like the story. Violet's realization of her character just came into it too much to rewrite. Julie

Brother Mine by ToBeOrNotToBeAGryffindor

Rated: 3rd-5th Years •

When Regulus steps into the cave by the sea, he knows it is a mission that could very well be the end of him, but it is in something he has lost that he finds the strength to do what is right and not what is easy.

This story was nominated for a 2012 Quicksilver Quill Award: Best Dark/Angst.

Reviewer: Equinox Chick Signed
Date: 10/19/11 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

Adore, naturally. Wonderful expansion of the drabble and I'm glad you resisted the urge to pad because this is the perfect length.

Hmm, if I had the choice of who should write this character, it would be you hands down. You grasp characters very well. In your hands, Regulus becomes multi-dimensional and not the 1D Slyth that other people write.

Great story, Jess. ~Carole~

Author's Response:

I knew once I tried to add things to this that I shouldn't, and then I started removing things. I suppose that this would've been emotionally taxing if it were any longer.

And yay that dark and angsty characters make you think of me. :) That makes my day.



Bleed by hestiajones

Rated: 6th-7th Years •
Summary: Say you were in love with somebody for years, somebody who just left without telling you why. Say she turned up unexpectedly. What would you do?

This is a sequel to Cut


1) This is not J.K.Rowling.

2) I chose Turner's first name after a villain from Eoin Colfer's Artemis Fowl series, but the character is not entirely based on her.

3) One of Gimli's lines from Return of the King will appear in the last chapter. No, it is not "There's plenty enough for the both of us. May the best dwarf win." Yes, it means I have finished writing the whole story. :)
Reviewer: Equinox Chick Signed
Date: 11/13/11 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3

I know you worried about this, but honestly, this is wonderful. I loved so much about this chapter, but I think my favourite bit has to be when it's raining. Gaaaaaahd, I was so torn. I hated Lakshmi in the previous chapters because of the threat to Maudie (who I love more than life itself), but when Dominique was kissing her and aching for the warmth from the past that had never quite been resolved, I started to like her again remembering her from Cut. Then I went all teary when Dominique said 'Maudie'. You write so well. The emotions were so real and I got completely caught up in the whole story.

You also surprised me because I thought Lakshmi was going to be evil and tell Maudie before Dominique said anything, but she didn;t and I'm pretty sure she wouldn;t have done. Would I have to'ld Maudie? Hmm, not sure. Dominique has far more courage than me, but also more confidence in her relationship, I guess. Perfect characterisation of all three girls. They stood out as real characters and not paperthin fanfiction extras. Infact, all of your characters were done well.

Um, I don't know LOTR that well. Is the Gimli line -'my goodbye-and-good luck kiss'? (hides from elves)

She had loved this girl hard; she had loved her with all her might. She had loved her for being so free, so full of laughter and brightness. She had wanted her so badly, to have her to hold and kiss and make love to every single hour of the day. She was here now with her, and for a moment, everything else seemed so perfunctory, so devoid of life.

My favourite set of lines. I read and reread and my jaw dropped. You're so fricking talented. Gahhhh, I worship you. *ends review in wibbling heap*


Author's Response: Yes! The thing is Dominique is confident of her relationship and even though she falters with Lakshmi (which, I would too, I think, if I were faced with that great a temptation), she knows what is important to her. The LOTR line was "A merry hunt you've led me on" LOL. The original is "A merry hunt you have led us on" heehee. I am happppyy that you loved it. :) Thanks for reading and reviewing! <3