Updated - July 17, 2008
City of Angels -
Chapter 2 (In Which We Meet Zelder Zallow)
Chapter 3 (In Which a Letter is Recieved)
[WIP] Chapter 4 (In Which the Past is Re-visited)
The WPP -
Chapter 3 ("Two Years On")
Chapter 4 ("A Golden Opportunity")
Chapter 5 ("A Long Awaited Return")
[WIP] Chapter 6 ("Beginnings")
As Shadows Fall -
Chapter 1 (1)
[WIP] Chapter 2 (2)
Sapphire Wings -
[WIP] Chapter 4 (Harry Potter)
Seven Thousand Sunsets (Gauntlet) NEW
Chapter 1 [Accepted]
Chapter 2 [Accepted]
Chapter 3 [Accepted]
Chapter 4 [Accepted]
Chapter 5 [Accepted]
Chapter 6 [Accepted]
Chapter 7 [Accepted]
Chapter 8 [Accepted]
Chapter 9 [Accepted]
Chapter 10 [Accepted]
I'm always starting new stories, despite the fact that I still have four, unfinished, full-length stories on this database. The plot-bunnies just never stop jumping!
Expected Title: EverAfter.
Characters: Draco Malfoy, Hermione Granger and others.
Category: Romance/Dramione [My first! Hope it works out.]
Inspired by: The Family Man [Movie].
Somehow, Remus reminds me of Harry during his first year - was that intentional? I'm pretty sure Frank Longbottom was quite a bit older than the Marauders - but it doesn't really matter. :) Again, good chapter.
Author's Response: No, I never really thought of him like that. I should go back and read it and see. Yeah, I never knew how much older Frank was than the Marauders. Thanks for reading!
That's so sad. Poor Remus. :( Professor Cane should be - killed... very painfully!
Author's Response: Poor Remus... Crane does deserve some horrible punishment... evil old bird. Thanks for reading!
Er - why did Crane let the go? *is confused - and apprehensive* I'm glad you haven't made the Marauders hate Lily of vice versa. She's just another girl. Great job again!
Author's Response: Crane\'s gone bipolar... don\'t worry, he\'s still the same hateable character. Lily doesn\'t hate the Marauders yet, she will have to eventually to stay in canon. Thanks for reading!
Short - but touching. Very sweet. :)
Ha! *looks triumphant* Yes! A very nice story, I loved the different points of view. And obviously, Harry WAS right. :D 10/10
Author's Response: Thanks! I appreciate that!
This is amazing. I'm so GLAD to see a Remus and Sirius fiction that focuses on their friendship... usually it's always slash. Thank you for a wonderful experience and a fic I'm not going to forget!
Author's Response: A wonderful experience? Aw, thankyou! It\'s lovely hearing such a great resopnce from my readers. Yes, I agree with you about the slash - that\'s one of the reasons I wrote this: Sirius and Remus\'s relationship is so complex (sound a bit dramatic I know, but it\'s true) and I wanted to try and give readers an insight into that. Thankyou so much for your review - I\'m really flattered that it had this effect for you! *hugs!*
Dear Lord, what the heck has Harry done!?
Author's Response: lol...thanks for R/Ring!
Oooo, a rat! :) Harry is a complete idiot, honestly (feels weird to say that about my favorite character!). I wish Ron and Hermione's reactions to Harry killing Snape had been... more... I don't know - erm - vivid, maybe. Like, they should have been more than appalled. But, you're the author! Great job, again!
Author's Response: I wouldn\'t be too surprised if I were Ron and Hermione. They\'d known all along that Harry wanted to change the past, so they were sort of...expecting it, don\'t you think? Anyway, thanks for R/Ring; ch. 12 coming soon!
A good chapter - just something I've got to say as a reviewer, though... I feel like Harry's getting pretty OOC... I mean, he's not insane, he should realize that if he gets together with Lily and James gives up on Lily, then he (Harry) won't be born. Anyway, I do really like this story, time-travel fics are favorites of mine... but that OOC thing sort of bugs me.
You said in reply to my last review that Ron and Hermione would sort of expect it - I really don't think they'd expect THAT... I mean, like I said, Harry's not that reckless...
Good chapter again! Update soon!
Author's Response: Harry has been known to be reckless in the past...storming into the Ministry of Magic to take on Death Eaters with only five students to help him...going into the Chamber of Secrets with no backup (Ron and Lockhart don\'t really count)...going through the trapdoor to protect the Sorcerer\'s Stone from a fully-trained wizard with only two other first-years to help...(see below response for more)
Author's Response: As I said in the above review by another person, I know what I\'m doing. Harry not being born could be an issue, true...(lol), but don\'t worry, I\'ve already considered that, and I have a good explanation in the last chapter. Okay, thanks for R/Ring!
I hope your plan is good - because as far as I can see, Harry's existance is already in jeopardy. I told you I love this story - can't get away from it (though, I admit those pictures of Harry and Lily in the album made me feel a little queasy). Just be careful - time-travel is a tricky thing to mess with. I liked Hermione's line, by the way. Something I've wondered for a long time too!
Author's Response: Thanks! And yes, I have a good plan laid out...or at least, I think so, and hopefully you\'ll all agree with me. But obviously can\'t tell you what happens, because telling you that the giant squid is mutated by a stray curse and swallows all of Hogwarts wouldn\'t be smart. (Oops!) Thanks for R/Ring! Glad you like it!
Great first chapter... smooth and swfit, can't wait to see what happens next!
Author's Response: Thank you!
“Harry, are you nuts?!” Hermione said. Good question! Another great chapter... I have this strange feeling that I've already reviewed this chappi, though. >_
Author's Response: Yeah, it is a good question, huh? Thanks for reviewing!
Hermione watched him carefully for a second, then slapped him hard across the cheek. Harry’s eyes watered with the blow, mostly from surprise.
“Coming, Dad,” Harry said without thinking. Ron kicked him in the shins, and Harry almost tripped. He walked over to greet James, and Ron walked over to join Hermione, who had sat down next to Lily.
“Did you just call me ‘Dad’?” James said, smirking, as Harry approached.
Made me laugh out loud. Excellent job.
Author's Response: I\'ve had times where I\'d write a line, read it over, and then burst out laughing. Other times, I\'ll have an evil chuckle to myself for something I\'ve written, such as what I have planned near the end of the fic... :)
Excuse me?!?!?! James is not from - WHAT?! Good chapter! Even better cliffhanger!
Author's Response: Another thing I wrote that made me chuckle evilly...mwahahaha!!!
Harry... and... Lily. That's disturbing. Even by modern standards that's disturbing. By any standards!!
Author's Response: You really think so? You can\'t say that for certain...ever seen \"Back to the Future\"?
Okay, so firstly, another smooth chapter. Everything flows very nicely. On a lower note (sorry, I hate to say it, but I have to) Harry seems slightly OOC to me. Especially since he's considering trying to murder Snape... so cheerfully. I don't know if Harry would so calmly head towards becoming a killer - I feel like if he killed someone, it would be in a moment of passionate rage. But then again, I could quite easily be wrong. But it is a nice twist to the story, Harry telling Sirius to lure Snape into the Whomping Willow... James is going to be furious though, isn't he? Anyway, enough rambling from me. Update soon! I'm addicted to this story!
Author's Response: You never know...Harry is always changing. He went from a small, innocent boy in SS/PS to attempting a Cruciatus Curse on Bellatrix Lestrange in fifth year...he could change any time.
Oh no! Update quickly! How can this story be only four chapters? It looks like its just beginning to get juicy. :) I love your writing, great job!
Author's Response: I only had it as a four-chapter fic! I might write more later - when I\'ve finished Fidelity though :) I\'m so pleased you like it enough to want more! thanks for reviewing :)
Aw, sweet. :) I'm glad you focused on Harry and Ron's friendship because I love fics like that. 10/10 The one bit I didn't like was Ginny saying she misses Ron more - somehow, I think they'd miss him equally... even though he was her brother. My two bits there. :D
Author's Response: If a fic has Harry and Ron in a deep relationship, they\'re gay. I\'m tired of that. You can have a deep relationship with a friend, too, you know! And I thinkthat Ginny misses Ron as much as Harry, not more, but she was just blowing off some steam. Glad you liked it! ~Servatis a pereculum. Servatis a maleficum.
You are possibly the meanest author ever to exist - or maybe not meanEST, considering JK Rowling has made it her business to kill off anyone who means anything to Harry - but you're definitely in the Mean-ness Top Ten. :) But that's a compliment.
Though Hermione and Sirius is not a ship that appeals to me – rather it’s sort of disturbing – you have done an excellent job with the story. Your writing technique is excellent, the story flows smoothly and I couldn’t stop myself from clicking the NEXT link until I had read all of four chapters. The cliffhangers are great and I can’t believe she had to marry Remus – poor both of them. How uncomfortable – even painful! Update soon!
Extraordinarily sweet. :) I don't know if I agree with Remus being in love with Lily (that was what he couldn't say, right?) but it still a well-written, swift and smooth story. My favorite line :
Author's Response: That\'s exactly what he couldn\'t say. And to be quite honest, I don\'t really think Remus loved Lily, but the line from the movie just gave me this idea that wouldn\'t leave me alone. Thanks for reviewing! =)