22 year old Brit. 5' 9, bright red hair and scary green eyes.
Err... rather unnaturally attracted to Remus Lupin.
Err... when writing a ooc fic you have to be very careful to get it just right or it can go quite wrong.
This fic has gone more than a little wrong.
It's not very funny and there are a lot of Americanisms in there such as "mommy" instead of "mummy".
I'm not flaming, but perhaps a slight re-think is in order.
Author's Response: have you done this to more than one person? because i remember reading someone else's review that sounded just like this...i think americanisms make it MORE funny, personally...