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Behind those Emerald Eyes by makinmagic323
Rated: 6th-7th Years [Reviews - 2008]

Summary: Ten years have elapsed since Dumbledore's death and McGonagall has Hogwarts back on its feet again. Hermione and Malfoy both teach at the school. But when a new teacher is hired to teach Defense Against the Dark Arts, everyone seems to feel that they've met him before. A story of mystery, passion, friendship, and jealousy… not to mention that Harry Potter has been missing for ten years and Voldemort is dead. (All violence is mild).

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Thank you to all my reviewers!!!

Disclaimer: I own my imagination, JK Rowling owns Harry Potter.

Categories: Harry/Hermione Genre: Warnings: Book 7 Disregarded, Sexual Situations, Violence

Word count: 40191 Chapters: 15 Completed: No
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09/20/06 Updated: 01/16/09


Reviewer: sujita Signed
Date: 05/22/08 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 9: Part II: Heated Blood

I really liked this chapter! :)
I'm not much for looking for what could be improved in other people's writing... But any who, I thought that your word choice was wonderful and I liked how you have developed new traits for some of our favorite Harry Potter characters.
But one thing I didn't like was some of your sentence structure. It just didn't sound right to me in some places.

That's it! Well, I hope you update soon!

Author's Response: Thank you so much for the informative review! Yeah, I\'ve been told that I can have rather unique sentence structure, haha. Anyway, I\'m thrilled you liked the chapter and I hope you enjoy the next one as well =)

 
Reviewer: sujita Signed
Date: 07/08/08 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 10: Rampant Behavior

Very good!!!!

Please update as soon as you can!!!

Author's Response: I'm working on it I promise!

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