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Behind those Emerald Eyes by makinmagic323
Rated: 6th-7th Years [Reviews - 2008]

Summary: Ten years have elapsed since Dumbledore's death and McGonagall has Hogwarts back on its feet again. Hermione and Malfoy both teach at the school. But when a new teacher is hired to teach Defense Against the Dark Arts, everyone seems to feel that they've met him before. A story of mystery, passion, friendship, and jealousy… not to mention that Harry Potter has been missing for ten years and Voldemort is dead. (All violence is mild).

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Thank you to all my reviewers!!!

Disclaimer: I own my imagination, JK Rowling owns Harry Potter.

Categories: Harry/Hermione Genre: Warnings: Book 7 Disregarded, Sexual Situations, Violence

Word count: 40191 Chapters: 15 Completed: No
Published:
09/20/06 Updated: 01/16/09


Reviewer: sujita Signed
Date: 05/22/08 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 9: Part II: Heated Blood

I really liked this chapter! :)
I'm not much for looking for what could be improved in other people's writing... But any who, I thought that your word choice was wonderful and I liked how you have developed new traits for some of our favorite Harry Potter characters.
But one thing I didn't like was some of your sentence structure. It just didn't sound right to me in some places.

That's it! Well, I hope you update soon!

Author's Response: Thank you so much for the informative review! Yeah, I\'ve been told that I can have rather unique sentence structure, haha. Anyway, I\'m thrilled you liked the chapter and I hope you enjoy the next one as well =)

 
Reviewer: sujita Signed
Date: 07/08/08 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 10: Rampant Behavior

Very good!!!!

Please update as soon as you can!!!

Author's Response: I'm working on it I promise!

 

My Constant by MoRoCcAnAnDpRoUd
Rated: 6th-7th Years [Reviews - 487]

Summary: The first war with Lord Voldemort is constantly getting worse; people are dying left and right, dementors are attacking people on the Death Eaters' orders, and nobody knows who is trustworthy anymore. Lily Evans, in her seventh year at Howarts, does not want to be a part of the war -- but some things are unavoidable.

Categories: James/Lily Genre: Warnings: Book 7 Disregarded, Character Death, Mild Profanity, Sexual Situations, Violence

Word count: 147617 Chapters: 36 Completed: Yes
Published:
03/16/07 Updated: 05/01/14


Reviewer: sujita Signed
Date: 07/27/08 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter Twenty

Very good!!!!!!!!!!

Please update soon!!!! :-)

Author's Response: :]

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