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Behind those Emerald Eyes by makinmagic323
Rated: 6th-7th Years [Reviews - 2008]

Summary: Ten years have elapsed since Dumbledore's death and McGonagall has Hogwarts back on its feet again. Hermione and Malfoy both teach at the school. But when a new teacher is hired to teach Defense Against the Dark Arts, everyone seems to feel that they've met him before. A story of mystery, passion, friendship, and jealousy… not to mention that Harry Potter has been missing for ten years and Voldemort is dead. (All violence is mild).

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Disclaimer: I own my imagination, JK Rowling owns Harry Potter.

Categories: Harry/Hermione Genre: Warnings: Book 7 Disregarded, Sexual Situations, Violence

Word count: 40191 Chapters: 15 Completed: No
Published:
09/20/06 Updated: 01/16/09


Reviewer: jaret Signed
Date: 09/20/08 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 11: Frustrating Truth

thanks for the chapter
tis good
keep it up

Author's Response: will do :]

 
Reviewer: jaret Signed
Date: 08/06/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Gingersnap Cookies

its a good start
but i thought ron had a phobia of spiders
that was a bit unoriginal
but the rest it quite good
and i will continue reading

Author's Response: thanks for reviewing!

 
Reviewer: jaret Signed
Date: 08/06/08 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2: Emerald Eyes

nice ending

Author's Response: glad you liked it!

 
Reviewer: jaret Signed
Date: 08/06/08 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 5: Deep Water

pretty good
but im finding draco like neville used to be in the first few books
ill have to wait and see if i think it works for him
its a good idea
nonetheless

Author's Response: Thank you =) I hope you enjoy it!

 
Reviewer: jaret Signed
Date: 08/07/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1: Gingersnap Cookies

good

Author's Response: =)

 
Reviewer: jaret Signed
Date: 08/07/08 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 10: Rampant Behavior

awww
suspenseful right to the end
quick
write some more so i can finish it a right a positive review about it

Author's Response: Haha, Chapter 11 is in-process. I had to start it later than planned because of summer travel. It should be up in a month or so.

 

Summary: After fighting the biggest battle of his life, Harry Potter finds himself in new, uncharted territory. Beginning a week after the final battle at Hogwarts, Harry finds himself with many choices before him. He spent the summer trying to sort out his future with Ginny and the Ministry, but now must find a way to balance both. Ginny has left for Hogwarts to complete her final year, with Hermione, and Harry is starting work as a full-fledged Auror. They both must find a way to make their long-distance relationship work. Ginny hopes to find peace at school and Harry hopes to build his life around the expectation that Ginny will be with him forever. Despite all of this, there is more to the work that Harry is doing with the Ministry then he realises. Will Gaunt prove trustworthy in these new endeavours? Will Ginny and Hermione have a horror-free year at Hogwarts?

Categories: Harry/Ginny Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 165906 Chapters: 52 Completed: No
Published:
11/15/07 Updated: 09/13/10


Reviewer: jaret Signed
Date: 09/18/08 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22 - Stolen Moments

im still reading
its a friggin sweet fan fic
i keep checking every night to see if theres a new chapter
i just love it how you have really captured the love between ginny and harry
keep going
10 out of 10

Author's Response: glad you're still reading - it'll be awhile until the next update...the mods here are taking a break for three weeks...I'm glad you're enjoying the story so much!

 
Reviewer: jaret Signed
Date: 09/08/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - Back to the Beginning

wow
thats really good
really feels like a real writer
ill be reading more
thats for sure

Author's Response: I'm glad to read you're enjoying the story :) and thank you for the high praise, I'm trying very hard to make this a cohesive overall story :)

 
Reviewer: jaret Signed
Date: 09/08/08 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 - Happy Reunions

again
its better than i expected

Author's Response: and to think you're only at chapter two! Just wait till you get to the later chapters :)

 
Reviewer: jaret Signed
Date: 10/30/08 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27 - Hoping for the Best, Expecting the Worst

man
you are excellent
and the rate you upload these things is incredible
i will definitely be keeping an eye out for an other of your works
10/10
again

Author's Response: I promise I'm going as fast as I can - I give credit to the one mod that's actually pushing these through *cheers* I'm glad you're enjoying the story, I don't have any others in the works, I need to finish this one ;)

 
Reviewer: jaret Signed
Date: 10/17/08 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 24 - Coming to Terms

again
great writing
perfect balance
and no cliffhanger
well done
lol

Author's Response: thank you so much! I'm so glad you're enjoying it!

 
Reviewer: jaret Signed
Date: 10/22/08 Title: Chapter 25: Chapter 25 - A Family Affair

awwww
poor ginny
i want to read more now
ooooo
your really good

Author's Response: thank you so much - I'm glad you're enjoying the story!

 
Reviewer: jaret Signed
Date: 09/16/08 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21 - Healing Hurts

wow
you are really capturing some nice moments
im liking this story the more i read it
lulz on the undressing part

Author's Response: I'm so glad you're enjoying the story and I hope you keep reading and commenting :) I felt like I had to throw that in ;)

 
Reviewer: jaret Signed
Date: 10/13/08 Title: Chapter 23: Chapter 23 - Twisted Paths Cross

oo
cliffhanger
cnt wait for the next chapter
this is my fav fan fic
i hope it will be updated more regularly
because im bursting from excitetement to read more
10/10

Author's Response: I'm updating as fast as I can - but there's only so much I can do ;) thanks for commenting!

 
Reviewer: jaret Signed
Date: 09/10/08 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 20 - The Truth Will Not Set You Free

wow
so far has been really good and absorbing
9.5/10
excellent story
i just hope its not over

Author's Response: I'm glad you're enjoying it - and no, not for a while. I'm writing chapter sixty-seven or sixty-eight right now...I don't have it in front of me ;) It'll be weighing in on quite a few chapters. I just don't know how many I have the patience to post here. Thanks for commenting!

 
Reviewer: jaret Signed
Date: 11/25/08 Title: Chapter 33: Chapter 33 - Places to Go

aww
how sad
:(
keep going please
this is awsome material

Author's Response: I'm trying, but there's been hardly any comments lately, so I'm kinda bummed about that...thanks for taking the time to comment!

 

True War Stories by dashofmagic
Rated: 6th-7th Years [Reviews - 23]

Summary: That night defined him.
For Harry Potter, the battle never ended. It haunts his dreams, it haunts his waking hours. Drowning his sorrows in the intoxicating warmth of firewhiskey, his engagement to a girl he thought he loved but no longer knows is falling apart.

I know, I know...I'm the most wondeful person you've ever met.
Hermione Granger's life wasn't going according to plan. The boy she thought she loved can't seem to catch onto the fact that they are more than simple friends; her best friend is lost to darkness and depression.

What do you do when life keeps throwing you curves? Follow two people who attempt to dance around them...and wind up in each other's embrace.

Categories: Harry/Hermione Genre: Warnings: Alternate Universe, Sexual Situations, Substance Abuse

Word count: 11956 Chapters: 5 Completed: No
Published:
01/13/08 Updated: 08/25/08


Reviewer: jaret Signed
Date: 08/06/08 Title: Chapter 1: Hermione

its a good start
ill be reading on

 
Reviewer: jaret Signed
Date: 08/06/08 Title: Chapter 4: George's Distress

ooo
the plot thickens
keep writing
i might actually finish this fan fic

 

A Wounded Beginning by inspireme101
Rated: 6th-7th Years [Reviews - 38]

Summary: This is a story of great restoration. This is a story that is of how the Wizarding World is to recover after the horrendous reign of Lord Voldemort. This is a story of how the families torn apart, are reunited. This is a story of how Harry Potter and Ginny Weasley truly learn to laugh, love, grieve, hate, long, desire, feel, ache, trust, and most importantly live. This story contains various pairings throughout its chapters, but I try to keep it centered on Harry and Ginny. Second, the Language can heat up at quite sometimes, so be warned. Third, the suicide warning is there just as a notice, I do not describe it graphically in anyway, it is only mentioned/discussed briefly

Categories: Harry/Ginny Genre: Warnings: Character Death, Sexual Situations, Suicide, Violence

Word count: 1756 Chapters: 2 Completed: No
Published:
08/07/08 Updated: 09/15/08


Reviewer: jaret Signed
Date: 09/19/08 Title: Chapter 1: It's a Start

its pretty good
i am a sucker for good ginny/harry fan fic
but so far its good

Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing, I really appreciate it! Umm, I can't really detect the tone of your review so I am a littlew confused! Much peace-inspireme101 :3)

 
Reviewer: jaret Signed
Date: 09/19/08 Title: Chapter 2: Confrontation, kind of......

cliffys are wat make ppl read on
and so far so good

Author's Response: Thanks, you rock my socks off for reviewing :3)!

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