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Real name: Holly + Kaya
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This is an account shared by Kaya and Holly. Also known as SilverWhispers and KayaRose on the forums.
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Summary: As Andrea Benning starts her fifth year at Hogwarts alongside The Trio, she has her own daily things to deal with, like a life-altering secret, studying, orchestrating Operation Sophie-Roderick Romance and a crush of her own. When one attends Hogwarts, one can hardly expect things to go as planned.

Fred and George Weasley are really only returning to Hogwarts for the priceless market research, but will there be time for other things as well?

As friendships and romances develop, the students at Hogwarts will also have to deal with the second rise of the evil Lord Voldemort and the terrible toad of a Defense professor - Umbridge.

Categories: Other Pairing Genre: Warnings: Alternate Universe

Word count: 75952 Chapters: 21 Completed: No
03/22/05 Updated: 10/07/06

Reviewer: rayasunshine Signed
Date: 04/16/08 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 21

i think i know wat happens!!
yay me!!
awesome story!!


Summary: After taking different paths a couple of years ago, Ron and Hermione find each other again, both of them wondering if their separation was a mistake. This applies especially to Hermione, who is leading an empty, unhappy life next to her fiance.

UPDATE (12/7/11): Newest chapter posted. Let us hope next one doesn't take me a year.

Categories: Ron/Hermione AND Harry/Ginny Genre: Warnings: Book 7 Disregarded, Character Death, Sexual Situations

Word count: 84935 Chapters: 19 Completed: No
08/06/06 Updated: 12/07/11

Reviewer: rayasunshine Signed
Date: 06/30/08 Title: Chapter 15: A Picture Is Worth More Than A Thousand Words

hmmn-Its my favorite chapter too, finally Hermione stood up to him.
How many more chapters??

Author's Response: I think that EVERY TIME I finish a chapter, I change the number of chapters to go. Right now, the number is standing at (at least) six more chapters.

Reviewer: rayasunshine Signed
Date: 05/30/08 Title: Chapter 14: Everything She Needs

I'm lovin the story btw!!

Author's Response: Thanks so much!!

Reviewer: rayasunshine Signed
Date: 01/21/09 Title: Chapter 16: Failure

Oh my gosh! That was an amazing chapter!! I loved the conversation between Ginny and Hermione there at the end, it was so amazing, so in character. And I hate you for leaving such a cliffie!!

Author's Response: Thank you! That conversation took me a loooooooooooooong time. Haha, you must know by now how much I love cliffhangers.


Alone by BeautyInTheBreakdown
Rated: Professors [Reviews - 184]

Summary: How could one night change a life so drastically? Something as simple as choosing to take a walk could ruin a life forever.

Nell is a fifth year at Hogwarts, but she's not like the rest. She's been through more than most could even dream up.

Categories: Dark/Angsty Fics Genre: Warnings: Abuse, Non-Consensual Sex, Sexual Situations, Violence

Word count: 29878 Chapters: 13 Completed: Yes
08/27/06 Updated: 11/10/08

Reviewer: rayasunshine Signed
Date: 07/26/08 Title: Chapter 11: The Talk

Omg! Was she imperiused? sorry, I know I spelt it wrong! Snape is in the room-isn't he!!
Od my gosh! Cliffie!!! Please update ASAP!!!

Author's Response: I'm doing my best to. :)

Reviewer: rayasunshine Signed
Date: 11/10/08 Title: Chapter 13: In the Strength of Your Arms

It was amazing! You described the way she felt, and it was fabulous. But so sad, I can't wait for the sequel, are there really five?
I loved this fic, its my favorite D/A fic!

Author's Response: Well, there is a plan for five installments in the story, I hope they all don't take two years, like Alone did. Thank you for reading, and I am glad you liked it.

Reviewer: rayasunshine Signed
Date: 10/24/08 Title: Chapter 12: Never Alone

Wow, that was so good! She is actually getting over Snape *mutters unsuitable word* Is she going back to face Snape?
Please update soon!!!

Author's Response: The update will come soon. I am giving this chapter a week or so before I submit the last one. Thank you for reading!


Someone To Watch Over Me by MagEd
Rated: 6th-7th Years [Reviews - 1664]

Summary: Past Featured Story2009 QSQ Awards Winner for Best Chaptered Canon Romance

Before the chosen one was ever born, his parents had to meet, fall in love, and defy Voldemort three times. Easier said than done. Things were never easy for Harry Potter's parents, but it gets a whole lot harder when Death Eaters kidnap Lily. This is the story of Lily and James, the trials they face, and how James finally wins Lily's heart. (pre-Deathly Hallows)


“I’ll always protect you.”

Categories: James/Lily Genre: Warnings: Book 7 Disregarded

Word count: 185106 Chapters: 34 Completed: Yes
09/17/06 Updated: 01/16/09

Reviewer: rayasunshine Signed
Date: 08/18/08 Title: Chapter 24: Chapter 23: What Happened?

I just found this story, and I totally love it!
WTF? Teds alive? How long has he been out,PLEASE update soon!!!!!!

Author's Response: I'm glad you love it! Yes, I dropped a bit of a bomb shell there -- but I will certainly try and update quickly!

Reviewer: rayasunshine Signed
Date: 11/17/08 Title: Chapter 26: Chapter 25: It's Over

I didn't see the last chapter of this one updated, and now I'm so glad I did!
Its amazing, please update soon, you need to explain so, so much!

Author's Response: I'm glad you caught it! I always hate when I miss updates on my favorite stories. As for updating quickly -- I do have a lot to explain! -- the next chapter is already in queue. And it is over 8,000 words! Thanks for the review.


Behind those Emerald Eyes by makinmagic323
Rated: 6th-7th Years [Reviews - 2008]

Summary: Ten years have elapsed since Dumbledore's death and McGonagall has Hogwarts back on its feet again. Hermione and Malfoy both teach at the school. But when a new teacher is hired to teach Defense Against the Dark Arts, everyone seems to feel that they've met him before. A story of mystery, passion, friendship, and jealousy… not to mention that Harry Potter has been missing for ten years and Voldemort is dead. (All violence is mild).


There have been errors when this story gets submitted for validation, so the mods have to do it manually. Therefore it does not show when it has been validated -- but it has!!

Thank you to all my reviewers!!!

Disclaimer: I own my imagination, JK Rowling owns Harry Potter.

Categories: Harry/Hermione Genre: Warnings: Book 7 Disregarded, Sexual Situations, Violence

Word count: 40191 Chapters: 15 Completed: No
09/20/06 Updated: 01/16/09

Reviewer: rayasunshine Signed
Date: 09/03/08 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 11: Frustrating Truth

Why'd Harry leave in the first place??!
I'm loving the story, and thanks for working so hard to get it up here! Hope you enjoyed Africa!

Author's Response: That answer will be explained in a bit! And thanks for the lovely review by the way =)


The Curtain Call by Amelia Bedelia
Rated: 3rd-5th Years [Reviews - 421]

Summary: James and Lily spend their summers together producing plays, though neither are happy about the presence of the other. With James, as the set designer, and Lily, as the actress, tensions run high.

Categories: James/Lily Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 101551 Chapters: 14 Completed: Yes
11/29/06 Updated: 07/02/10

Reviewer: rayasunshine Signed
Date: 05/16/08 Title: Chapter 12: The Confession

love this story!!



2009 QSQs: Runner-up: Best Romance - Other Character Story

Add together one ladies' man, one Quidditch player, one werewolf, and one soon-to-be traitor. Then, mix in one imaginative idiot, one fiery redhead, one clever Ravenclaw, and one blonde artist. Stir counterclockwise until trouble occurs, and you are dealing with one of the best-loved group of friends in Hogwarts history. Follow the story of the four Marauders and four equally troublesome girls. See them deal with their first encounters of love, sorrow, heartache… and Death Eaters. How will these future Order members cope with the ordeals that life throws at them? Will love blossom in what was once thought a highly unlikely place? What do you do when the person you care about most in the world doesn’t seem to notice you at all? Will a well-kept secret shatter the foundations of a seven-year friendship? Follow the lives of these friends through their last year at school to the dramatic final battle with Lord Voldemort two decades later.

Warnings are for later chapters, and any sexual situations are very minor.

Chapter Twenty Two: "The Snakes Strike" is in the queue. Excerpt:

Perfume filled his nostrils as Emma walked passed and Rosier’s gaze lingered on her bare, pale legs as the group headed outdoors. “Don’t you just love summer?” he inquired of Regulus, a hungry sneer lighting his face.

“This is ridiculous,” Regulus announced in a furious whisper, “we’re never going to get them alone!”

“Have faith, Black,” commanded Rosier smoothly. “Girls are well renowned for their desire for girly chats. I’m sure they’ll slip off the shackles of their chaperones soon enough.”

Categories: Marauder Era Genre: Warnings: Character Death, Sexual Situations, Substance Abuse, Violence

Word count: 175402 Chapters: 28 Completed: No
02/03/07 Updated: 01/16/10

Reviewer: rayasunshine Signed
Date: 12/20/08 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 16 - Proof!

Finally! A plan is in action for Sirius/Kirsty!
I love the kiss with James and Wormtail at the end! LOL!
Thanks for the early Christmas present!

Author's Response: Yes finally lol. Oh you just know that with James and Peter that it's true love :p lol. You're very welcome, Sady :).

Reviewer: rayasunshine Signed
Date: 10/29/08 Title: Chapter 15: Chapter 12 - In the Dark

Oh my gosh! Poor Sirius, awesome chapter, please update soon!!

Author's Response: I know, bless him! Don't you just want to give him a great big hug? Thank you :D!

Reviewer: rayasunshine Signed
Date: 11/27/08 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 13 - Yuletide

Poor Remus! I really thought they were gonna kiss!
Sirius was so sweet! And he and Kirsty interacted perfectly!
Update soon!!!

Author's Response: I know, bless him :(. He doesn't have a good time of it, does he? Aww glad you liked the Sirius/Kirsty bits. Thanks for reviewing :)

Reviewer: rayasunshine Signed
Date: 08/22/08 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 10 - The Air of Slytherin

Sirius gay?
That was the best part, I couldn't stop laughing! When will he and Kirsty get together????
Please update as soon as you can!

Author's Response: Hehe, I know bless him, glad it made you laugh! Ah, now where would be the fun in telling you that? Thanks for the review, chapter 11 in the queue!

Reviewer: rayasunshine Signed
Date: 07/01/08 Title: Chapter 11: Chapter 9 - Gryffindor versus Slytherin

OMG!!!Loved it!
Please update soon, love the sparks between Sirius and Kirsty!!

Author's Response: Yay, thank you, I\'m glad! Woot Snoopy! Yes sparks are definitely flying between the two of them! Watch out for Part Two!

Reviewer: rayasunshine Signed
Date: 06/02/08 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 8 - A Chocolate Induced Revelation

I love it SO much!!
I love Sirius-so much!
Sam and Emma-she has to figure it out-but why arent here friends telling her??
Aw!! lily and james!!
Please update soon!!

Author's Response: Aww thank you! I\'m glad you like it! And thank you for being my 100th reviewer!!! *throws confetti everywhere and blares garishly loud music*. Yeah, poor Em not the brightest of sparks, believe me her friends have tried, but she won\'t believe it/let it settle in. Chapter Nine should hopefully be validated any day now *crosses fingers*. Thanks again for giving me review 100!! *is soooo happy*

Reviewer: rayasunshine Signed
Date: 11/17/08 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 12 - In the Dark: Part Two

Aw! I love the reunion scene!
Sirius/Kirsty is perfect! If only they'd get there act together....

Author's Response: Glad to hear it. It's great that you love Sirius/Kirsty I do too :).

Reviewer: rayasunshine Signed
Date: 11/17/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1 - The Gathering

Lol, this is great! It reminds me of me and my friends at the beginnin gof the school year!

Author's Response: Aw thanks!

Reviewer: rayasunshine Signed
Date: 11/17/08 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 2 - Genius Meet Lunacy

I like how you describe everything very well. Especially the way they were tangled togeter. Also the flying scotsman bit was so original it was great!

Author's Response: Thank you, description's fun :). Yay for the flying scotsman lol.

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