Summary: Lily Evans and James Potter agreed on only one thing since they first met: they'll always hate each other. But after five years, James begins to see things, to see her, differently, and wants another chance. But Lily is one stubborn girl. Can he convince her that his feelings are real? Meanwhile, the pair is thrust into many different dangerous and humorous situations with their friends. Will it take a disaster to help Lily believe in true love? Or will a tragedy just push her farther away? How many times does James have to try before he stops messing up? Follows with the information provided by JKR, with some fun along the way.
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“That arrogant…arrogant…ARG! That toerag is Head Boy! HEAD BOY! How did he make HEAD BOY! What is Dumbledore on? I mean, he struts around, pranking, pranking, PRANKING, and then Dumbledore says, ‘Gee, this kid really is an irresponsible bad influence, prankster, and all around jerk. Yes! He’d make a fine Head Boy!’”
you guys are doing an awesome job on this story!!!!! This story is totally worth reading and I loved it!! GOOD JOB!!!!!!!!! Keep up the good work. This story is sweet, romantic, and hilarious and totally cute!!!! can't wait for more!
Author's Response: Thanks! We're so glad that you like it!
WOW!!!!! I loved it!!!!!!!!!!! I am so looking forward to the sequel whenever you write it! lol This story totally deserves a 100!!! lol I loved it so much! I enjoyed it so much, I've gotten all of my friends to read it and they have all replied the same......They loved it!! Keep writing you two! You guys are FABULOUS WRITERS!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
Author's Response: Thank you so much! Your review just put me in such a good mood! We're so glad that you liked our story, and thank you for getting your friends to read our story too!
Summary: I'm sorry guys but this story will no longer be updated. See my profiel for reasons etc.
me and my friend really enjoy this story. We think that it is really sweet and romantic. Keep up the good work and post more. James and Lily are two awesome characters in your story and you do a really good job of putting them together! GOOD JOB!!!
Summary: Hope, loyalty, love, despair, and tragedy. Through it all, Lily discovers the truth about the Marauders, the affable troublemakers who hide behind smokescreens but still glitter in shattered light. They aren't the glorious, graceful men they are often perceived as, but stumbling, awkward boys who are still trying to find their way out of darkness.
Wow that was just............just AMAZING! You are a fabulous writer! There aren't many words to describe that but i know a couple; Wonderful, Terrific, and so on... Not many people can write like that and you are one of the terrific people who have that talent to write! Keep up the good work!
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Yeah it's up! you know you are a terrrific writer and you know i love you and so you also know im only saying this for that specific reason......just kidding keep writing i know youll be a fabulous writer! love kk
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I really enjoy your story! It is very interesting! Keep writing!!!!!!!!!! I really od like your interpretation of what happened to James and Lily!!!!
Author's Response: Thanks a lot :D