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One Shots
Can You Hear Me Now - finished

Chaptered
Til the Last Moment - chapter 1 up, chapter 2 in progress
A Deadly Secret - prologue up, chapter 1 in progress

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Untitled Luna & Rolf - Feb I Challenge Thee, in progress
 

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"I love you, too!" by Afifa
Rated: 3rd-5th Years [Reviews - 19]

Summary: He had been lying down for a couple of minutes, not strong enough to get up just yet. When he had felt the spider’s icky eight legs on his skin, however, he sprang to his feet.

He regretted this action at once, as it had made him dizzy. His vision was hazy because he didn’t have his glasses on. James looked around the grass field and found his spectacles. They were cracked and needed to be fixed. For that, he needed his wand. Automatically, his hand went in his pocket. He fumbled around his pocket, but in vain; the wand was nowhere to be found. James was in the middle of nowhere and he didn’t have a wand. Perfect!
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James has to prove his love for Lily. For that, he has to pass a few tests. Read on what he has to do to win over Lily's heart.

I am Afifa of Hufflepuff participating for the Gauntlet Challenge- Round 5.


Categories: James/Lily Genre: Warnings: Sexual Situations

Word count: 3365 Chapters: 1 Completed: Yes
Published:
02/21/08 Updated: 02/21/08


Reviewer: Rachel_Marie Signed
Date: 05/14/08 Title: Chapter 1: I love you, too!

Aww! This was so cute! It was a great story line but it seemed kind of rushed. To me it felt as if you could have explained some parts a little more. But it was still good. The part about the Boggart was really sad. I almost cried for James, knowing how much he loved her. That must have sucked… I saw afterwards that this was for the Gauntlet, and I was amazed. I totally didn’t know this had been written for a challenge, and when I found out it was, it just made it better, lol. It was a great story, and it made me want to read more James/Lily stories. I, for one, and not a big James/Lily shipper, even though it’s like… a Duh! ship, but this story was cute and made me want to read more =] Keep up the good work, hun!!

xx
Rachel

Author's Response:

Yeah, I was rereading this the other day and I kinda felt that this one shot needs to be edited. I'll do it as soon as I get over with my O'Levels. =)

Thanks for the lovely review, and I'm glad that I sorta got you converted to James/Lily. =D 

 

 

Summary: In this spoof of Cinderella, Ginny is sent on Auror business to Draco's party in which he has to find a wife. He becomes entranced with the disguised Ginny, who finds she doesn't hate him as much as she thought she would… or at all?

Epilogue disregarded.

Categories: Draco/Ginny Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 6252 Chapters: 3 Completed: No
Published:
03/26/08 Updated: 08/10/08


Reviewer: Rachel_Marie Signed
Date: 04/05/08 Title: Chapter 1: Of Post-Breakup Stages, Hard-Wired Purebloods, and Annoying Freckles

This is an incredibly entrancing story! I found myself lost within the first paragraph. I can't wait until the next part is posted!! Keep up the good work!

Author's Response: Thanks so much! I\'m really glad you like it!

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