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Hi. This account is shared between the two beaters. Of course, me being the one writing this, is beaternumber1. My sister being the one sitting beside me, is beaternumber2.


Hi! I am a crazy, hyper, 15 year old girl who adores Harry Potter, and writing, and drawing, and swimming, and is OBVIOUSLY the number 1 beater on this account.


Is a lot calmer and more practical than my younger and annoyinger sister.  I am 18 and started reading this site because my sister left it open on the computer. I must say, that i like many of these stories almost as much as the actual books.

First the worst, second the best! HAHAHA so there, beaternumber1.

Thanks to Bine for the awesome banner, that can be seen on the beta forum!!

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Potter's Pentagon: The Past (Book Three) by Schmerg_The_Impaler

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: The final installment in the Potter’s Pentagon Trilogy. Read “The Five” and “The Truth” first, myess? Okay!

WARNING! Contains Muggle adventures in Diagon Alley, unusual eyebrows, cheesy clichés galore, psycho Ted, the not-so-lost years of Merlin, a school-wide singalong, the old potato joke, Tyrone’s Princess Bride obsession, Emma’s stubborn denial of the existence of Tyrone’s mustache, a graphic death, a joke shop product as a major plot device, hobo Jordan, Jordan hugging, Jordan pulling pranks, time travel, the Love Shack, angst, and worst of all, Professor Zabini.

It’s the sixth year for Potter’s Pentagon and company, and our heroes learn that in the wizarding world, coming of age has a somewhat weightier significance. Students are busy with an Inter-House Unity Project, Jordan is having weird dreams, Pansy and Ophidias Malfoy have been released from Azkaban, Professor Zabini has a mysterious project of his own, and almost everyone is acting strangely. Meanwhile, at the Ministry of Magic, a man with a vendetta against Ron Weasley is trying his hardest to get him in the biggest trouble possible. Is the only way to save him to travel into the past?

New talents are discovered, new friendships form and old ones change, pasts are dredged up, and, of course, there’s lots of good old-fashioned snogging. And one of the five kills for the first time… while another becomes a casualty of war.

Starring 2008 Quicksilver Quills Best Male Original Character runner-up Jordan Potter, Best Female Original Character nominees Ivy Potter, Haley Potter, Emma Weasley, and Giorgi Anderson, and Best Male Original Character nominee Ted Lupin! Nominated for 2008 Quicksilver Quills Best Post-Hogwarts Story.
Reviewer: beaternumber1 Signed
Date: 12/08/08 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 10: In Which Ivy Has A Very Malfoy Christmas

Great Job. I love how you characterized Pansy, she's a complete doorknob. I hate her. I love Ted though! :)


Author's Response: I love the word 'doorknob' used as an insult... and I am glad I created a character that you 'love to hate!'

Reviewer: beaternumber1 Signed
Date: 09/14/09 Title: Chapter 22: Chapter 22: In Which Our Heroes Suffer Boo-Boos


Amazing amazing amazing! Please update soon!

Author's Response: You betta believe it!

The Deer Woman by OliveOil_Med

Rated: 6th-7th Years •
Summary: In New Orleans, wizards, vampires, and all men of races magical and non can be found. And in 1893, a non-discriminating serial killer begins picking off men on the streets, one by one, barely leaving any traces of the victims, let alone the killer themself. But when a British Auror becomes the latest victim, his partner joins the American Ministry in the investigation, only to find one conclusive possibilty in the form of a creature previously only known to Plains Indians that shows no compassion and no desire to stop killing...

The Deer Woman
Reviewer: beaternumber1 Signed
Date: 12/21/10 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 3 Heritage

Yay! Annie's back and not evil. :)

Author's Response: Yeh, I'm just started to begin writing this story again!

Family by DontCallMeNymphadora

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
His skin is soft
To my gentle touch,
His hair a mop of dark brown,
His eyes a brilliant blue.

Remus' PoV on Teddy
Reviewer: beaternumber1 Signed
Date: 01/09/09 Title: Chapter 1: Family

This is so good! I love it!

Author's Response: Thanks so much!

Our Little Secret by Kerichi

Rated: 6th-7th Years • Past Featured Story

It was like a wizard tale. The clever Slytherin helps a hag who later repays the debt. Except that Rose Weasley wasn't a hag, and Scorpius didn't expect to call in the favour.

*Winner of the 2010 Next Generation QSQ award*

Reviewer: beaternumber1 Signed
Date: 12/16/10 Title: Chapter 3: Questions

ahah. Miley Siren. Made my day.

Author's Response: I'm so glad you laughed at that! There's a Britney Sparkles mentioned, too. I couldn't resist. Sorta "Oops, I did it again." :D

Harry Potter and the Eccentricities of Death by LuckyFelixFelicis

Rated: 6th-7th Years •
Summary: Death. It is usually a simple thing, but when Harry Potter gets involved things have a tendency to get a whole lot more complicated. Death himself must get involved and he hasn't had this much fun in years.
Reviewer: beaternumber1 Signed
Date: 07/14/09 Title: Chapter 1: A Timely Death

Really great story!! Death is hilarious. I can't wait for the next chapter!

Dawes & Carlise by OliveOil_Med

Rated: 3rd-5th Years •
Summary: A companion story to The Deer Woman.

Corina Payton and her father, Connor, are recruiters for the Bell Academy of Witchcraft and Wizardry. Their job entails them traveling all across the country, inviting Muggle-born and raised children to attend their school. When they arrive at an Indian boarding school, though, on what seems like a routein visit, they learn all about what can happen behind closed doors when no one bothers to look.

Suddenly, a simple invitation becomes so much more. It becomes a mission...

I am OliveOil_Med of Ravenclaw, and this is my entry for the Chronicle of Despair Forestalled.
Reviewer: beaternumber1 Signed
Date: 12/21/10 Title: Chapter 5: Epilogue Afterthought

That was really good. Not really a story to read alone late at night though...

Author's Response: No, it is a story you want to read in the daylight, possibly in a church.

It Must Be Love by jenny b

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
There are many great and wonderful things in the world, but the greatest of all is perhaps love. And there is certainly no shortage of it within the Wizarding World.

For Elle.

Reviewer: beaternumber1 Signed
Date: 11/21/09 Title: Chapter 1: It Must Be Love

That was really good!! :)

Our Little Secret: Lost by Kerichi

Rated: 6th-7th Years •


Scorpius had never looked forward to anything the way he looked forward to leaving Hogwarts with Rose. He planned a holiday with no friends, no family, and nothing to do but be together—until a tampered Portkey changed their destination.



Reviewer: beaternumber1 Signed
Date: 12/19/10 Title: Chapter 10: Waiting

I can't wait to read the rest. :)

Author's Response: If I tell you I won't be able to update until January will you come after me with a bat and Bludger? :D

The Arcane ScoRA and the Blood Pact by OliveOil_Med

Rated: 1st-2nd Years •
Summary: Albus, Rose, and Scorpius about to return Hogwarts when the Daily Prophet is splattered with headlines of Alarice Dugan, Maddox's mother, proclaiming the exhistance of the Arcane ScoRA and tell the world about the Blood Pact she has made with her son to find justice for her son. Now, all the wizarding world is focused on these three second-years' and their every waking moment.

Staying under the radar should prove simple enough, but between receiving strange gifts of great magical power followed by perfect oppurtunities to use them, it is proving quite difficult. Now it seems like just a matter of time before the Arcane ScoRA first and most important rule is broken, and the secret organization comes crumbling down.
Reviewer: beaternumber1 Signed
Date: 12/21/10 Title: Chapter 3: Chapter 3 The Front Page

I can't wait to hear what happens this year for the Arcane ScoRA!
Update soon! :)
By the way what happened "Once, on one of those rare occasions when a reporter did manage to get through"?

Author's Response: The next chapter is in the queue, and as for what happens to the other reporters, I might have to include that in a later chapter.

Reviewer: beaternumber1 Signed
Date: 01/14/11 Title: Chapter 4: Chapter 4 The Weasley Quidditch Training Gauntlet

Haha! I loved this! I kind of wish I was a Weasley just so I could see what the training consists of. :)

Author's Response: Yeah, it's always a lot more fun when you aren't the one it's happening to.

Through The Veil by the opaleye

Rated: 3rd-5th Years •

It didn’t seem possible. He had been standing before her merely five minutes ago, but now he was gone. She stared up at the empty archway. He had mentioned voices, but there was no sound. Someone was holding her, pulling her arm, calling for her to run, but she couldn’t move. Where had he gone? Where had Sirius gone? Why weren’t they coming back?

Ginny thinks back to that fateful night in the Department of Mysteries—the night she lost Harry Potter.

Reviewer: beaternumber1 Signed
Date: 06/14/10 Title: Chapter 1: That night seemed so long ago.

Very good! It's hard to imagine Ginny being so bitter, but you wrote it really well! :)

Author's Response: Thank you!

Stars Apart by Willow Rosenberg

Rated: 3rd-5th Years •
Summary: The sequel to “Trickster”: The Marauders return to Hogwarts for their seventh and final year. Lily and James juggle more responsibility than ever, and James learns that convincing Lily to go on an actual date with him is harder than he would have imagined. Remus frets about post-Hogwarts life while Peter drifts even further from his friends. But when Sirius discovers a group of fourth-years who are bound and determined to steal the Marauders’ title of Greatest Hogwarts Troublemakers he wages war, rallying his friends so they can maintain their legacy. Meanwhile, outside the castle grounds, Voldemort is gathering supporters in unending preparation for a much darker battle…

and this is the wonder that's keeping the stars apart
i carry your heart(i carry it in my heart)

-E. E. Cummings

September 2012: HEY guess what I couldn't wait, and the third installment, "World Enough," is UP NOW under James/Lily. Or just under my name. Or at this link: http://fanfiction.mugglenet.com/viewstory.php?sid=92131. Yay! :D

Reviewer: beaternumber1 Signed
Date: 12/23/10 Title: Chapter 9: Frankly, My Dear

I have read both of your Lily/James stories in less than a day and I am really impressed. You're a great writer, and I can't wait for the rest of this story! Update soon! :)

Author's Response: oh thanks! i'll have it up asap. probably not til after christmas, but asap :)

Reviewer: beaternumber1 Signed
Date: 12/29/10 Title: Chapter 10: Better than Revenge

Awe! Awesome chapter. :)
I can't wait for more!

Reviewer: beaternumber1 Signed
Date: 01/04/11 Title: Chapter 11: Subterfuge

Ohh! Excited! I can't wait for the next update, I'm glad James got his sense knocked back into him. :D

Reviewer: beaternumber1 Signed
Date: 01/11/11 Title: Chapter 12: Bare

Awe! This chapter was awesome. :P I love that Sirius and James are finally getting more friendly and the ending was awesome! :)
Yay James.