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Someone To Watch Over Me by MagEd
Rated: 6th-7th Years [Reviews - 1663]

Summary: Past Featured Story2009 QSQ Awards Winner for Best Chaptered Canon Romance

Before the chosen one was ever born, his parents had to meet, fall in love, and defy Voldemort three times. Easier said than done. Things were never easy for Harry Potter's parents, but it gets a whole lot harder when Death Eaters kidnap Lily. This is the story of Lily and James, the trials they face, and how James finally wins Lily's heart. (pre-Deathly Hallows)

*Completed*

“I’ll always protect you.”

Categories: James/Lily Genre: Warnings: Book 7 Disregarded

Word count: 185106 Chapters: 34 Completed: Yes
Published:
09/17/06 Updated: 01/16/09


Reviewer: marauderteddylupin Signed
Date: 04/15/08 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 13: What a Tangled Web We Weave

one word.
WOW.

 
Reviewer: marauderteddylupin Signed
Date: 04/15/08 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 15: The Doubt That Brought Faith

cool. I like fluff

Author's Response: I like fluff, too . . . when in moderation, of course ;)

 
Reviewer: marauderteddylupin Signed
Date: 04/15/08 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 16: Larson, Love, and Lemons

it's kinda confusing,but it can some times ce good, you know? because it wouldn't be an interesting story without a little bit of conffusion right? you're a good writer

Author's Response: I'm glad you think so! I agree -- confusion can be good :) Thanks for the review!

 
Reviewer: marauderteddylupin Signed
Date: 04/15/08 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 19: Mr. Masselli

man, when your story turns, it TURNS.
again two words.
YOU ROCK

Author's Response: Haha, thanks very much! :)

 
Reviewer: marauderteddylupin Signed
Date: 04/15/08 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 20: Where We Really Belong

i love your writing. so . "hurry up and update" she said in a hopefully
non-pushy but gentle vioce

Author's Response: Thanks, and I\'m working on it!

 
Reviewer: marauderteddylupin Signed
Date: 04/14/08 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

this is a really nice set-up for the plot line

 
Reviewer: marauderteddylupin Signed
Date: 04/14/08 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1: A World Turned Upside Down

let me geuss. Madeline?

Author's Response: You'll see. . . .

 

When Darkness Did Surround Us by MagEd
Rated: 6th-7th Years [Reviews - 764]

Summary: 2007 QSQ Awards Runner-up for Best Post-Hogwarts

Petunia Dursley is enjoying dinner with her family when someone starts pounding on the door. Ready to tell them off for being so rude and refusing to leave when they didn't answer at first, Petunia opens the door to have a baby shoved into her arms and told she is his only family. Years after the great Harry Potter defeated Voldemort, Death Eaters have risen to power and taken over Hogsmeade, Hogwarts, and even the Ministry of Magic. Their marriages announced invalid, their children in danger and their lives hanging by a thread, the heroes of the war with Voldemort must once again take a stand against evil.

H/G and R/Hr

(pre-Deathly Hallows)

*Completed*

*Quote from The Epilogue*

Suddenly Harry was kissing her as if he couldn’t resist the temptation. There was a kind of frenzy to the kiss at first, a kind of desperate need, but it melted into something soft and sweet and gentle, a promise of a future when kisses would never be limited. When they broke apart he rested his forehead on hers, sprinkling a few affectionate butterfly kisses across her face. “I love you,” he murmured.

Categories: Post-Hogwarts Genre: Warnings: Book 7 Disregarded

Word count: 115228 Chapters: 23 Completed: Yes
Published:
10/08/06 Updated: 06/10/09


Reviewer: marauderteddylupin Signed
Date: 04/23/08 Title: Chapter 2: The Way It Should Have Been

this is very confusing. but don't worry, i am blonde i am sure it will come clear to me soon. or at least i hope i am not stupid enough to not get it. these are the thoughts of a blondie.

Author's Response: It does start out very confusing -- hopefully you\'ll get it all soon!

 
Reviewer: marauderteddylupin Signed
Date: 04/23/08 Title: Chapter 3: The Then and The Now

ooooooooooooo. WOW. what a cliffie. this is great.

Author's Response: I am big on cliffhangers ;)

 
Reviewer: marauderteddylupin Signed
Date: 04/23/08 Title: Chapter 4: The Sins of the Father

wow. that was heart felt. you are good at putting emotion into words

Author's Response: Thanks! I\'m glad you think so.

 
Reviewer: marauderteddylupin Signed
Date: 04/23/08 Title: Chapter 7: The Weasley Brothers

not to short at all

Author's Response: Good!

 
Reviewer: marauderteddylupin Signed
Date: 04/23/08 Title: Chapter 8: The Last Chance

malfoy, marriage,ginny,good. man your good,.

Author's Response: ;)

 
Reviewer: marauderteddylupin Signed
Date: 04/23/08 Title: Chapter 9: The Hope To Cling To

oooooo. again with the cliff hangers. wow

Author's Response: I know, I know, I can be a bit excessive with cliffhangers . . . I can\'t help it -- I\'m addicted!

 
Reviewer: marauderteddylupin Signed
Date: 04/23/08 Title: Chapter 10: The End of The World as We Know It

i really don't know how to make a decent long review. and yeah tonks lupin really does sound kinda wierd, i mean you know you are always used to hearing 'Nymphadora tonks, or just tonks'
so would she want to be called 'Lupin' or still Tonks. well that was prety decent sized review, your story is awe inspiring. you definitely leave jaw dropping cliffies

Author's Response: I appreciate all reviews -- but thanks for the effort of a very long review! Maybe she would just want to keep the name Tonks, but I like the idea that there\'s another Lupin out there! :)

 
Reviewer: marauderteddylupin Signed
Date: 04/23/08 Title: Chapter 11: The Schemes We Dream

oh gosh, are you trying to kill me, all (insert gender) could think of was (insert soul mate) and then (insert gender again) couldn't think of anything. great cliffie though or should i say
cliff-IES.

Author's Response: I really like writing this chapter -- I must confess I had a lot of fun with all the cliffhangers. Lucky for you the next chapter is already posted!

 
Reviewer: marauderteddylupin Signed
Date: 04/23/08 Title: Chapter 12: The Devil's in the Details

HAHAHAHAHAHAHAHA*grabs you around the neck to add hight to jump* * jumps up and down laghing and thanking you hystericly* I LOVE YOU FOR NOT KILLING RON, and that is so ron always thinking about FOOD. you got his character so well, and you had him be around hermione so much, she rubbed off on him, that is so BRILLIANT, I ABSOLUTELY LOVE YOU.

Author's Response: When I first started writing Harry Potter fanfiction I stayed away from Ron in general, as was unsure how well I could portray his character. But now that I\'ve started to write him more and more, I really like doing it -- and it\'s good to know you think I do it well! Thanks very much for the review!

 
Reviewer: marauderteddylupin Signed
Date: 04/23/08 Title: Chapter 13: The Words You Never Want To Hear

wow. you really know how to turn a story around.

Author's Response: Thanks!

 
Reviewer: marauderteddylupin Signed
Date: 04/23/08 Title: Chapter 14: The Start of the End

oh gosh. i have so much to say but now i am speechless. geezloueeze your awesome

Author's Response: Speechless is good -- I\'ll take that! ;) I\'m glad you think so!

 
Reviewer: marauderteddylupin Signed
Date: 04/23/08 Title: Chapter 15: The Great Escape

i have given you all the complements i can think of so i only have three more words to tell you. GOSH, UPDATE QUICKLY. I LOVE YOUR WRITING

Author's Response: I\'ll try! Thanks so much for all the reviews; I really appreciate it!

 

525,600 Minutes by MarauderWannabe
Rated: 6th-7th Years [Reviews - 129]

Summary: A fear of commitement drives Lily away. Circumstance gives them another chance, but old friends could be there end. This is the story of James Potter and Lily Evans, the year after Hogwarts. Excerpt from the new chapter:

He doesn’t want you to kiss him, she told herself rationally.
“No p-,” she started
Guess not.

Categories: James/Lily Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 8864 Chapters: 6 Completed: No
Published:
10/09/06 Updated: 12/29/08


Reviewer: marauderteddylupin Signed
Date: 04/01/08 Title: Chapter 5: Chapter 4: More Wizards In Our Midst

this is an awesome story and i am absolutely dying to figure out who puched james in the face

is it Jordan? huh huh huh, sorry about that but this is an awesome story, i absolutley love it i am definitly going to add this story to my favorites
have a good... errr....story writing session

mischief managed
marauder Teddy Lupin
p.m.(past mischief)
yeah i am a girl

Author's Response: Thanks, but I\'m not telling who it was. By the way, I really like your penname/screename/whatever you want to call it. It\'s awesome! As always thanks for reviewing!\r\n\r\n~~~~~kel~~~~~

 
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