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Somebody Beside Me by guiding ray of sunlight

Rated: 1st-2nd Years • 5 Reviews
Summary: When Kayla's father passes away, all she needs is a loving person beside her.



A One-shot submittion for the Gryffendor July Challenge- A Banner for Thee.
Reviewer: marauderteddylupin Signed
Date: 04/04/08 Title: Chapter 1: Somebody Beside Me

thats soooo sweeet. did you ever think to maybe cotinue it?

Author's Response: Heyy! This story is part of a larger universe. My stories Delicate Scent of a Flower and Make Me Better center around Kayla and Ben\'s child Iris. \r\n\r\nOther than that, I do not believe I will continue it, but perhaps one day, if sudden inspiration strikes.



The Weird Wedding by rawz

Rated: 1st-2nd Years • 79 Reviews
Summary: It is the Summer after Harry's sixth year and he plans to go after Voldemort and Voldemort's Horcruxes. But, first he must go to Bill and Fleur's wedding. While at the Burrow Harry makes new friends, visits with old ones, and receives an unexpected (but maybe not as unwelcome as it seems) surprise...
Reviewer: marauderteddylupin Signed
Date: 04/01/08 Title: Chapter 4: Madam Malkinís Robes for All Occasions

i am laughing so hard (like ron) i am almost crying. and at the same time i am feeling agony for harry and ginny..i think they just need to be locked in a broom cuboard and not let out till they work things out...and they don't have wands, if you do the math it could be very dangerous...harry+ginny+wands+needed revenge=dangerous

Author's Response: Haha. Thanks for the review, and I\'m glad you liked it!



Reviewer: marauderteddylupin Signed
Date: 04/01/08 Title: Chapter 5: The Wedding Rehearsal

aaaawwweee just two more seconds
*sniffles* keep the good writing coming

Author's Response: I\'m glad you liked it. Thanks for the review!



Reviewer: marauderteddylupin Signed
Date: 04/01/08 Title: Chapter 6: Wedding Day

ooooooo this is getting really good (not that it wasn't really good already. because it was)

Author's Response: Thank you, I\'m glad you think it\'s good. :)



Reviewer: marauderteddylupin Signed
Date: 04/01/08 Title: Chapter 7: Departure

the ending was perfect and emotional

absolutley

perfect

Author's Response: Thank you. I\'m so glad that you liked it.



Reviewer: marauderteddylupin Signed
Date: 04/01/08 Title: Chapter 1: The Weasleys Arrival

absolutly brilliant

Author's Response: Thank you!



Reviewer: marauderteddylupin Signed
Date: 04/01/08 Title: Chapter 3: Dinner at the Weasley's

hehehehehehehehe i am busting a gut here. this. is. absolutley brilliant.
hehehehehehehehehehehe

Author's Response: Thank you! I\'m glad you thought it was so funny.



The Marauders' Trademark by LexiGirl

Rated: 1st-2nd Years • 103 Reviews
Summary: Can anything make Harry and gang more famous? Can their children make them even more well-known? What can seven kids possibly manage at Hogwarts? And can anyone ever dub themselves as The Marauders' Trademark? Read and Find out what happens! I am currently redrafting this story. I don't want to give up on it but my writer's voice has changed drastically since sentence one, please bear with me and if you have any suggestions... I LOVE reviews!
Reviewer: marauderteddylupin Signed
Date: 04/02/08 Title: Chapter 6: Weasley Entertainment

if you need encouragement this is absolutly brilliant, i say that alot though, but anyway. i check on this fic every three days. i just wanted to say "keep the good writing coming"



Someone To Watch Over Me by MagEd

Rated: 6th-7th Years • 1667 Reviews Past Featured Story
Summary: 2009 QSQ Awards Winner for Best Chaptered Canon Romance

Before the chosen one was ever born, his parents had to meet, fall in love, and defy Voldemort three times. Easier said than done. Things were never easy for Harry Potter's parents, but it gets a whole lot harder when Death Eaters kidnap Lily. This is the story of Lily and James, the trials they face, and how James finally wins Lily's heart. (pre-Deathly Hallows)

*Completed*

“I’ll always protect you.”
Reviewer: marauderteddylupin Signed
Date: 04/15/08 Title: Chapter 9: Chapter 8: A Natural Phenomenon

wouldn't it be funny if you replaced the 'with cherries on top' to be 'with peanuts on top' get it. PEANUT.
hehehehe. your story is incredible ! ! ! ! ! !



Reviewer: marauderteddylupin Signed
Date: 04/15/08 Title: Chapter 10: Chapter 9: You Lose

i wish you had made ted survive. its so sad for emma.



Reviewer: marauderteddylupin Signed
Date: 04/15/08 Title: Chapter 12: Chapter 11: I'll Hold Your Hand

your really good at flashbacks.
your writing really rocks. Sorry about my comments they are kinda bland, but i have an equivelent to writers block, only in review form. hehehehehe have you ever heard of anything like it, it sounds wierd. Reviewers block.hehehehe



Reviewer: marauderteddylupin Signed
Date: 04/15/08 Title: Chapter 13: Chapter 12: Cats, Cards, and Corkers

nice, began with perfect, ended with anything but perfect. excellant



Reviewer: marauderteddylupin Signed
Date: 04/15/08 Title: Chapter 14: Chapter 13: What a Tangled Web We Weave

one word.
WOW.



Reviewer: marauderteddylupin Signed
Date: 04/15/08 Title: Chapter 16: Chapter 15: The Doubt That Brought Faith

cool. I like fluff

Author's Response: I like fluff, too . . . when in moderation, of course ;)



Reviewer: marauderteddylupin Signed
Date: 04/15/08 Title: Chapter 17: Chapter 16: Larson, Love, and Lemons

it's kinda confusing,but it can some times ce good, you know? because it wouldn't be an interesting story without a little bit of conffusion right? you're a good writer

Author's Response: I'm glad you think so! I agree -- confusion can be good :) Thanks for the review!



Reviewer: marauderteddylupin Signed
Date: 04/15/08 Title: Chapter 20: Chapter 19: Mr. Masselli

man, when your story turns, it TURNS.
again two words.
YOU ROCK

Author's Response: Haha, thanks very much! :)



Reviewer: marauderteddylupin Signed
Date: 04/15/08 Title: Chapter 21: Chapter 20: Where We Really Belong

i love your writing. so . "hurry up and update" she said in a hopefully
non-pushy but gentle vioce

Author's Response: Thanks, and I\'m working on it!



Reviewer: marauderteddylupin Signed
Date: 04/14/08 Title: Chapter 1: Prologue

this is a really nice set-up for the plot line



Reviewer: marauderteddylupin Signed
Date: 04/14/08 Title: Chapter 2: Chapter 1: A World Turned Upside Down

let me geuss. Madeline?

Author's Response: You'll see. . . .



When Darkness Did Surround Us by MagEd

Rated: 6th-7th Years • 764 Reviews
Summary: 2007 QSQ Awards Runner-up for Best Post-Hogwarts

Petunia Dursley is enjoying dinner with her family when someone starts pounding on the door. Ready to tell them off for being so rude and refusing to leave when they didn't answer at first, Petunia opens the door to have a baby shoved into her arms and told she is his only family. Years after the great Harry Potter defeated Voldemort, Death Eaters have risen to power and taken over Hogsmeade, Hogwarts, and even the Ministry of Magic. Their marriages announced invalid, their children in danger and their lives hanging by a thread, the heroes of the war with Voldemort must once again take a stand against evil.

H/G and R/Hr

(pre-Deathly Hallows)

*Completed*

*Quote from The Epilogue*

Suddenly Harry was kissing her as if he couldn’t resist the temptation. There was a kind of frenzy to the kiss at first, a kind of desperate need, but it melted into something soft and sweet and gentle, a promise of a future when kisses would never be limited. When they broke apart he rested his forehead on hers, sprinkling a few affectionate butterfly kisses across her face. “I love you,” he murmured.
Reviewer: marauderteddylupin Signed
Date: 04/23/08 Title: Chapter 2: The Way It Should Have Been

this is very confusing. but don't worry, i am blonde i am sure it will come clear to me soon. or at least i hope i am not stupid enough to not get it. these are the thoughts of a blondie.

Author's Response: It does start out very confusing -- hopefully you\'ll get it all soon!