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The Thoughts of Tabitha by mugglegurl

Rated: 1st-2nd Years • 334 Reviews
Summary: Meet Tabitha, the fourteen year-old daughter of Harry and Ginny Potter. What happens when she finds herself attracted to the son of her father's worst enemy? Along with a set of new characters, and the return of some old ones, this teen will find the meaning of friendship and family.
Reviewer: marauderteddylupin Signed
Date: 04/26/08 Title: Chapter 8: Bloodthirsty

sweet!

Author's Response: Thank you!



Reviewer: marauderteddylupin Signed
Date: 04/26/08 Title: Chapter 9: A Fight to Remember

i agree a very important thing that they have at least friendship first, i am glad you thought of that

Author's Response: Friendship is important for me. Or else the relationship is too rushed. Thanks for reviewing!



Reviewer: marauderteddylupin Signed
Date: 04/26/08 Title: Chapter 10: Quidditch Tryouts

i would put that on my list of favorite ships if i could figure the stupid bio out, it keeps erasing it for crying out loud.

Author's Response: MNFF has been having issues lately. Be patient. The mods do the very best they can. And thanks for reviewing (again). ;]



Reviewer: marauderteddylupin Signed
Date: 04/26/08 Title: Chapter 11: Getting Personal

duh
duh
duunnn. i like the encounter at the astronomy tower. sweet and to the point, you can almost see him stuggling not to kiss her.hehe

Author's Response: Thank you! I love writing romance scenes.



Reviewer: marauderteddylupin Signed
Date: 04/26/08 Title: Chapter 12: New Developments

uggg. darn. it goes one way then it does this hairpin turn. sorry i get really caught up in the stories i read

Author's Response: Muahaha. I like being evil. ;DD



Reviewer: marauderteddylupin Signed
Date: 04/26/08 Title: Chapter 13: A Better Term

wow. what . *turns speechless*. wow. your good. *thinking of a comprehensable
short enough sentance to say without growing speechless again*. good words. awesome.

Author's Response: I do believe my writing gets better every chapter. Thanks for reviewing!



Reviewer: marauderteddylupin Signed
Date: 04/26/08 Title: Chapter 15: Conversations

what is marcus's last name? your story is awesome. Marcus's resoning reminded me of the way remus's consiounse (i splelled that wrong) works

Author's Response: Marcus\' last name is Longbottom.

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Green Is the Color of Rage by MoonysMistress

Rated: 1st-2nd Years • 5 Reviews
Summary: Watch how James Potter's relationship with Lily Evans changes when he employs a little bit of maturity. Response from Moony of Ravenclaw to Poem Challenge #2: "Rebirth, the phoenix dies and is reborn again. Isn't it amazing how beauty can blossom from something that begins so ugly."
Reviewer: marauderteddylupin Signed
Date: 04/01/08 Title: Chapter 1: Chapter 1

this is a really nice poem, i can tell you worked on it. You can tell potter has matured but he still is a marauder at heart.



Is it Pride or Prejudice? by Stormbringer

Rated: 3rd-5th Years • 339 Reviews
Summary: Lily Evans is confident yet unsure of her future. Who needs a boyfriend anyway when you've got awesome friends? But when James Potter finds a way into her mind and heart, slowly but surely, Lily finds what she missed in life. Love, loathing, friendships, and hardships are all components of this epic tale.
Reviewer: marauderteddylupin Signed
Date: 04/04/08 Title: Chapter 1: Total Bliss and Happiness-Right?

i love it when authors do that "at least that's how she precieved it" it's sort of like a mini cliff hanger without the overdose of danger



Reviewer: marauderteddylupin Signed
Date: 04/04/08 Title: Chapter 3: Yet Another Potter Problem

thats the scene from snape's pensive, right? it kindof looked like it and then you continued it. i looooovvvveeee iiiiittttttt.



Reviewer: marauderteddylupin Signed
Date: 04/04/08 Title: Chapter 4: Before-the-Ball Worries

there you go again with the awesome cliffies



Reviewer: marauderteddylupin Signed
Date: 04/04/08 Title: Chapter 20: Is It Pride Or Prejudice?

that. was. an. awesome. story. my favorite chapter was 19 when james kissed lily it was so perfect. it kinda reminds me of another one of my favorite fics called stolen kisses by joybelle423 with the missing COS moment between penelope clearwater and percy weasley when ginny finds them snogging in as empty classroom



Legacy of Sacrifice by GhostCoon

Rated: 3rd-5th Years • 422 Reviews
Summary: Sequel to Harry Potter and the Mind's Eye. A new generation of Potters is in Hogwarts, trying to live up to their family name. Sirius, Harry's second son and third child, has to deal with incredible powers he doesn't understand and keeps hidden from those around him, while still wanting desperately to prove himself to be as great as his father. Children and Grandchildren of Death Eaters abound, and they seem to be following a new Dark Lord; can a new generation of Potters face a new generation of evil?
Reviewer: marauderteddylupin Signed
Date: 04/13/08 Title: Chapter 1: Back to Hogwarts

tha's cool with the Archaeology (i think i spelled that wrong) that's what i am going to head for, the story is awesome so far, but you know it's the first chapter



Reviewer: marauderteddylupin Signed
Date: 04/13/08 Title: Chapter 2: Consequences

huzah ! ! ! ! ! ! i also love the idea of the quadruplits, can't wiat to see the trouble they get into.
hehehehehehehehehehehehehehehe



Reviewer: marauderteddylupin Signed
Date: 04/13/08 Title: Chapter 4: Reactions, Expected and Unexpected

i completely understand



Reviewer: marauderteddylupin Signed
Date: 04/13/08 Title: Chapter 5: A First Glimpse of Evil

n n n n n i i i i i i i i i c c c c c e e e e e



Reviewer: marauderteddylupin Signed
Date: 04/13/08 Title: Chapter 7: Anguis

eeerrrrr...... i don't mean to nitpick but when lupin takes 20 points from slytherin you spelled throw wrong, no offense, otherwise the chapter straight out rocked



Reviewer: marauderteddylupin Signed
Date: 04/13/08 Title: Chapter 8: Rebirth of the Phoenix

the whole pheonix thing is SWEET ! ! ! ! ! ! !



Reviewer: marauderteddylupin Signed
Date: 04/13/08 Title: Chapter 10: Attacks and Plots

sweet.
DUN
DUN
DUH



Reviewer: marauderteddylupin Signed
Date: 04/14/08 Title: Chapter 23: Back to Normal

huzah! that was great. errrr... i'm running out of things to say ummmmm........oh yeah i love the pheonix thing were he is still a pheonix.....yeah i really do

Author's Response: Thanks for reading! I'm really glad people are still enjoying my work.