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Summary: James Potter: Marauder. Lily Evans: Prefect. They're both seventh years at Hogwarts. They're also about to have a pretty interesting year--complete with a few detentions, pranks, confusion, and laughter--in which they get through school, make some trouble and maybe, just maybe, sort out their feelings for each other.

Thanks to all you who have made it possible for this story to be in the Top Tens. It was a very happy moment when I first saw my story on the list, and I love being able to go back and see it there now. Still. Yay!

Throughout the latter half of 2010, and the first half of 2011, I re-edited this story. The changes were mostly to fix stray (and annoying) grammar and spelling errors, but also to rework some plot points in an effort to stay truer to canon. I also updated the style; having written this story so long ago, my writing has definitely developed (and I would say gotten better), so I edited to reflect that. (I apologize for the errors that were in the story before all this editing. I found them immensely distressing when I reread my chapters. Heartbreaking, really.)


Big “thank yous” go to the three people who helped edit/nitpick the first edition of this novel: violagirl, fairiesandcream, and Omagus.
And yes, this story is up on Fanficition.net under the penname: Io.Sono.Emilia.
Of course, as a disclaimer, I’m not JK Rowling. The Potterverse does not belong to me, but I am in it and love it.

Categories: James/Lily Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 158315 Chapters: 50 Completed: Yes
Published:
10/28/05 Updated: 07/23/07


Reviewer: marauderteddylupin Signed
Date: 04/11/08 Title: Chapter 35: Quidditch

i just saw cats yesterday, isn't that funny how you learn something and then all of the sudden you see it somewhere? it happens to me all the time

Author's Response: DUDE! That happens ALLL THE TIME... So crazy. Whoa. I love Cats... *sigh*

 
Reviewer: marauderteddylupin Signed
Date: 04/11/08 Title: Chapter 41: Necessary Reunion

i liked the third one (pirates) but my favorite was second. my favorites are in this order; second as first, first as second, and third as third. Did that make any since?

Author's Response: Yeah, it makes sense.. But, I\'m not sure the second would be my first... I think : Third as first, First as second and second as third, for me.... But, eh- It\'s all good.

 
Reviewer: marauderteddylupin Signed
Date: 04/11/08 Title: Chapter 46: Getting Back at the Boys

hehehehehehe "siriusly*sniggers*sirius" "prank-*giggles*joke-*laughs*dumbledore *rolls in laughter*

Author's Response: *laugh* You goof. :-D Glad to see that you liked it. ;D

 
Reviewer: marauderteddylupin Signed
Date: 04/11/08 Title: Chapter 48: It's Nearly Over

love the house elves.
have you ever thought that there are two places Jk could get the name bellatrix, one is the star bellatrix (there are also stars sirius and arcturus)) and also beatrice potter, put a 'L' between 'e' and 'a' and change the 'c' to an 'x' and erase the 'e' it's a stretch but it IS jk's mind.

Author's Response: I think that, due to the origin of \"Sirius\" and \"Regulus\", I think that the name of the star would be more likely.

 
Reviewer: marauderteddylupin Signed
Date: 04/10/08 Title: Chapter 9: The American

finnally someone else that knows about Al Capone, please say i am correct, Al Capone was the one who ran a bit of 'the underworld' under a pub and got millions of dollars and escaped the police for years until getting captured and died in prison?

Author's Response: Yeah... that\'s Capone. Valentine Day Massacre- got away with ALOT, and then went to prison b/c he falsified he tax returns, or something like that... Crazy guy.

 
Reviewer: marauderteddylupin Signed
Date: 04/10/08 Title: Chapter 16: Bad News

no i think that james's parents dieing was perfect because if it was stacey then she would get 'extra credit' for getting james's and lily's parents if it was not assigned to her in the first place. So all-in-all it made perfect scince to me

Author's Response: Ahh, thank you so much!

 
Reviewer: marauderteddylupin Signed
Date: 04/10/08 Title: Chapter 17: Talks with Friends

i think the chapter turned out brilliant

Author's Response: Thank you SOOO much!

 
Reviewer: marauderteddylupin Signed
Date: 04/10/08 Title: Chapter 18: Goodbye

yes i know what your are talking about, but it's nice snivellis (i spelled that wrong) get's some love

Author's Response: Yup= he\'s got some love!

 
Reviewer: marauderteddylupin Signed
Date: 04/10/08 Title: Chapter 19: Aftermath

i like the scene with snape it shows that he actually is human and he *sniffles* has feelings too.

 
Reviewer: marauderteddylupin Signed
Date: 04/10/08 Title: Chapter 20: In Which Lily and James Have a Conversation

yes, it is fluffy enough, even though you hae already completed the fic, i just wanted to say, i think sirius should end up with an ice cold bath

Author's Response: Um... he does.... Oh that\'s right! I\'m reading reviews backwards. Whoops. :D

 
Reviewer: marauderteddylupin Signed
Date: 04/10/08 Title: Chapter 22: More Bad News

i love the name moldy-shorts thats just great, bu Lily is a bit cocky but she could be doing it for james to be more comforatalble. does that make sence?

Author's Response: Um... not really.... Eh?

 
Reviewer: marauderteddylupin Signed
Date: 04/11/08 Title: Chapter 26: Coming Out of It

bwaaahahahahaha, i like cold water too

Author's Response: *giggle*

 

Summary: After the trauma of his sixth year Harry and his friends enter into their last year of magical education at Hogwarts School of Witchcraft and Wizardry. The trio try to balance passing their exams with fighting Voldemort and planning their futures. Despite all that, romance will fill the air with wedding bells ringing out. This year Harry is in more danger than ever when his enemy finds new ways to try and get the Boy Who Lived. Voldemort’s presence will be felt more than ever as he steals more lives; can Harry find himself before its too late? And what adventures will he have along the way?

If you haven’t read Harry Potter and The Girl Who Lived then I would strongly urge you to do so because if you don’t then this story probably won’t make any sense to you. Be helpful to writers by Reading and Reviewing!

The very last chapter of this fic has been reworked. Please re-read there's more about the kids in there! Also my author's notes on the final chapter have also been added. Ten part fic related to this going up shortly!!

Categories: Ron/Hermione AND Harry/Ginny Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 130989 Chapters: 38 Completed: Yes
Published:
11/01/05 Updated: 03/31/09


Reviewer: marauderteddylupin Signed
Date: 04/03/08 Title: Chapter 37: When We Grew Up

i love your writing. did you ever think of writing something about the kids lifes? i would defenitly look for it and read it. i can't think of anything 'plot' wise that you did wrong you have the perfect combo of war,romance,fights, i can totally see Neville with Susan. and the family is just how i pictured it. in other words, really really really large. what i go by is "if you have a plot bunny in your head, work with it till t works, unless you just absolutly hate it or it can't be adjusted to your needs. CHEERS ! ! ! ! !

 
Reviewer: marauderteddylupin Signed
Date: 04/02/08 Title: Chapter 4: The Second Return

you should totally do another fic that has some of the marauders tales, don't forget to mention the twins reactions to each one. that would totally be cool

 
Reviewer: marauderteddylupin Signed
Date: 04/02/08 Title: Chapter 8: Graves

hehehehehe hillarious(i am pretty sure i spelled that wrong)

 

Head Over Feet by Liisa
Rated: 3rd-5th Years [Reviews - 208]

Summary: Over ten years after Hogwarts, Harry, Ron, Hermione and Ginny find that they can't escape from all their problems just yet. Loosly based on Oscar Wilde's "An Ideal Husband". RHr HG

Categories: Post-Hogwarts Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 68512 Chapters: 20 Completed: Yes
Published:
01/25/06 Updated: 07/13/07


Reviewer: marauderteddylupin Signed
Date: 04/27/08 Title: Chapter 5: How Could I Trust You?

they make perfect sence to me,your a great writer. give yourself some props

 
Reviewer: marauderteddylupin Signed
Date: 04/28/08 Title: Chapter 16: I Donít Get Much Sleep

heeellllllooooo
i really like the encounter with tonks.

 
Reviewer: marauderteddylupin Signed
Date: 04/28/08 Title: Chapter 17: You Seem to Be Confused

mwaahahahahaheheheheheheheh

 
Reviewer: marauderteddylupin Signed
Date: 04/28/08 Title: Chapter 18: Don't Stop Here

uhhhh, i am going to have to look.

 
Reviewer: marauderteddylupin Signed
Date: 04/28/08 Title: Chapter 20: I Am Aware Now

love it ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! keep the good writing coming ! ! ! ! ! ! ! ! !

 
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