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Summary: Itís the summer after the battle at the Ministry of Magic and Harry has returned to Privet Drive, where he awaits the time when he can rejoin his friends. A certain redhead has begun to occupy his mind and awaken emotions he never knew he had. As he continues to mourn the loss of his godfather, Harry slowly begins to heal and may have discovered a way to communicate with Sirius. Can it be too good to be true? Takes place directly following OOTP. Primarily a H/G romance, with some R/Hr as well. Rated R for adult content in future chapters.


Categories: Ron/Hermione AND Harry/Ginny Genre: Warnings: Alternate Universe

Word count: 126594 Chapters: 29 Completed: No
Published:
06/04/05 Updated: 11/06/08


Reviewer: marauderteddylupin Signed
Date: 04/08/08 Title: Chapter 27: Chapter 27 - The Approaching Storm

oooooooooooooo let me guess, they end up at grimalaude (i spelled that wrong) place. the only reason i have not left a commented on every chapter is because i am new and whenever i go to the next chapter it kicks me off my login so all-in-all its one of the best stories yet. i think you worked really hard on it and i can tell. can't wait till the next chapter comes out. i currently am figuring everything out so my bio isn't up yet....so...yeah...i am a girl, i just incorperated everything i love in the potter world into a penname

Author's Response: Thanks for reviewing! I\'m glad you like the story enough to comment on it. I am still stuck on the next chapter, but I am trying to wrap it up so I can post it. Everyone has been so patient waiting for me and I appreciate it. Anyway, thanks again for taking the time to review. I love your penname BTW!\r\n\r\n

 

MOMENTS OF BLISS by moonymaniac
Rated: 6th-7th Years [Reviews - 1200]

Summary: Remus Lupin is a man with a tragic past, filled with pain, suffering and sorrow. But it is also a past filled with great adventure, true friendship and…love? Even though the odds were against him, Remus found happiness at Hogwarts School of Witchcraft and Wizardry. He had the Marauders, he was a prefect and his transformations were less horrible, thanks to his Animagi friends. What more could a teenage werewolf want? And how long could his happiness last? Remus and the Marauders prove that in the saddest of lives and darkest of times, there can still be moments of bliss.

Remus centric but with a lot of the other Marauders. This story is a romance, but has almost as much general Marauder era background and side story as romance.
Pre-HBP and DH, so some things from DH will be disregarded, as the warning indicates, but some Spoilers will be incorporated.

Categories: Marauder Era Genre: Warnings: Book 7 Disregarded, Character Death

Word count: 435441 Chapters: 71 Completed: No
Published:
06/08/05 Updated: 02/25/14


Reviewer: marauderteddylupin Signed
Date: 04/17/08 Title: Chapter 26: Thanks to the Slytherins

thats so sad that a reviewer died *sniffles* but isn't hagrid's wand an umbrella. overall this is a 'smack'n good one'

 
Reviewer: marauderteddylupin Signed
Date: 04/17/08 Title: Chapter 33: When It Rains

nice cliffie

 

Summary: James Potter and Lily Evans weren't exactly buddies at first sight. They began virtually as enemies. Gradually, however, they came to respect each other and like each other at Hogwarts. Somehow, that like turned to an eternal love.





Described through the memories of all who knew them, this is the story that follows them through the seven years in Hogwarts, as their rocky relationship develops into a bond that becomes the envy everyone. This is the story that describes the difficulties that they encounter during the terrible years of You-Know-Who's reign. This is the story of the parents of The Boy who Lived. This is the story of the love between Lily Evans and James Potter.





Chapter Five (Friends?) posted - Lily walks into the world she never knew.


Sorry for the (very long) delay.

Categories: James/Lily Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 9306 Chapters: 5 Completed: No
Published:
08/04/05 Updated: 06/24/06


Reviewer: marauderteddylupin Signed
Date: 04/05/08 Title: Chapter 1: Discovery

i loved that, Lilly meeting james, and yes she's got spunk, i can't wait until they meet at Hogwarts, man you are good

 

Summary: James Potter: Marauder. Lily Evans: Prefect. They're both seventh years at Hogwarts. They're also about to have a pretty interesting year--complete with a few detentions, pranks, confusion, and laughter--in which they get through school, make some trouble and maybe, just maybe, sort out their feelings for each other.

Thanks to all you who have made it possible for this story to be in the Top Tens. It was a very happy moment when I first saw my story on the list, and I love being able to go back and see it there now. Still. Yay!

Throughout the latter half of 2010, and the first half of 2011, I re-edited this story. The changes were mostly to fix stray (and annoying) grammar and spelling errors, but also to rework some plot points in an effort to stay truer to canon. I also updated the style; having written this story so long ago, my writing has definitely developed (and I would say gotten better), so I edited to reflect that. (I apologize for the errors that were in the story before all this editing. I found them immensely distressing when I reread my chapters. Heartbreaking, really.)


Big “thank yous” go to the three people who helped edit/nitpick the first edition of this novel: violagirl, fairiesandcream, and Omagus.
And yes, this story is up on Fanficition.net under the penname: Io.Sono.Emilia.
Of course, as a disclaimer, I’m not JK Rowling. The Potterverse does not belong to me, but I am in it and love it.

Categories: James/Lily Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 158315 Chapters: 50 Completed: Yes
Published:
10/28/05 Updated: 07/23/07


Reviewer: marauderteddylupin Signed
Date: 04/11/08 Title: Chapter 30: I Hereby Dub Thee

i don't think you got carried away, it turned out perfect, i think the scene with
Nikeia was needed, sirius needed a little true happieness for christmas, right?

Author's Response: Aww... thank you! I\'m glad. :D

 
Reviewer: marauderteddylupin Signed
Date: 04/11/08 Title: Chapter 32: Christmas Tidings

i love wool socks, mine don't slip but they are nice to slide on wood.

Author's Response: Ooooh.... I don\'t have nice hardwood floors in my house... but my gramma does.. I\'ll have to try that one day. :-D

 
Reviewer: marauderteddylupin Signed
Date: 04/11/08 Title: Chapter 33: Nikeia's Story

that was nicely written, it also shows when snape made the spell, i also think the more appropriate turm is *snuffles* not *sniffles* get it?
hehehehehehhehehehehehehehehehehe

Author's Response: *laugh* NIce..... *shakes head*

 
Reviewer: marauderteddylupin Signed
Date: 04/11/08 Title: Chapter 35: Quidditch

i just saw cats yesterday, isn't that funny how you learn something and then all of the sudden you see it somewhere? it happens to me all the time

Author's Response: DUDE! That happens ALLL THE TIME... So crazy. Whoa. I love Cats... *sigh*

 
Reviewer: marauderteddylupin Signed
Date: 04/11/08 Title: Chapter 41: Necessary Reunion

i liked the third one (pirates) but my favorite was second. my favorites are in this order; second as first, first as second, and third as third. Did that make any since?

Author's Response: Yeah, it makes sense.. But, I\'m not sure the second would be my first... I think : Third as first, First as second and second as third, for me.... But, eh- It\'s all good.

 
Reviewer: marauderteddylupin Signed
Date: 04/11/08 Title: Chapter 46: Getting Back at the Boys

hehehehehehe "siriusly*sniggers*sirius" "prank-*giggles*joke-*laughs*dumbledore *rolls in laughter*

Author's Response: *laugh* You goof. :-D Glad to see that you liked it. ;D

 
Reviewer: marauderteddylupin Signed
Date: 04/11/08 Title: Chapter 48: It's Nearly Over

love the house elves.
have you ever thought that there are two places Jk could get the name bellatrix, one is the star bellatrix (there are also stars sirius and arcturus)) and also beatrice potter, put a 'L' between 'e' and 'a' and change the 'c' to an 'x' and erase the 'e' it's a stretch but it IS jk's mind.

Author's Response: I think that, due to the origin of \"Sirius\" and \"Regulus\", I think that the name of the star would be more likely.

 
Reviewer: marauderteddylupin Signed
Date: 04/10/08 Title: Chapter 9: The American

finnally someone else that knows about Al Capone, please say i am correct, Al Capone was the one who ran a bit of 'the underworld' under a pub and got millions of dollars and escaped the police for years until getting captured and died in prison?

Author's Response: Yeah... that\'s Capone. Valentine Day Massacre- got away with ALOT, and then went to prison b/c he falsified he tax returns, or something like that... Crazy guy.

 
Reviewer: marauderteddylupin Signed
Date: 04/10/08 Title: Chapter 16: Bad News

no i think that james's parents dieing was perfect because if it was stacey then she would get 'extra credit' for getting james's and lily's parents if it was not assigned to her in the first place. So all-in-all it made perfect scince to me

Author's Response: Ahh, thank you so much!

 
Reviewer: marauderteddylupin Signed
Date: 04/10/08 Title: Chapter 17: Talks with Friends

i think the chapter turned out brilliant

Author's Response: Thank you SOOO much!

 
Reviewer: marauderteddylupin Signed
Date: 04/10/08 Title: Chapter 18: Goodbye

yes i know what your are talking about, but it's nice snivellis (i spelled that wrong) get's some love

Author's Response: Yup= he\'s got some love!

 
Reviewer: marauderteddylupin Signed
Date: 04/10/08 Title: Chapter 19: Aftermath

i like the scene with snape it shows that he actually is human and he *sniffles* has feelings too.

 
Reviewer: marauderteddylupin Signed
Date: 04/10/08 Title: Chapter 20: In Which Lily and James Have a Conversation

yes, it is fluffy enough, even though you hae already completed the fic, i just wanted to say, i think sirius should end up with an ice cold bath

Author's Response: Um... he does.... Oh that\'s right! I\'m reading reviews backwards. Whoops. :D

 
Reviewer: marauderteddylupin Signed
Date: 04/10/08 Title: Chapter 22: More Bad News

i love the name moldy-shorts thats just great, bu Lily is a bit cocky but she could be doing it for james to be more comforatalble. does that make sence?

Author's Response: Um... not really.... Eh?

 
Reviewer: marauderteddylupin Signed
Date: 04/11/08 Title: Chapter 26: Coming Out of It

bwaaahahahahaha, i like cold water too

Author's Response: *giggle*

 

Summary: After the trauma of his sixth year Harry and his friends enter into their last year of magical education at Hogwarts School of Witchcraft and Wizardry. The trio try to balance passing their exams with fighting Voldemort and planning their futures. Despite all that, romance will fill the air with wedding bells ringing out. This year Harry is in more danger than ever when his enemy finds new ways to try and get the Boy Who Lived. Voldemort’s presence will be felt more than ever as he steals more lives; can Harry find himself before its too late? And what adventures will he have along the way?

If you haven’t read Harry Potter and The Girl Who Lived then I would strongly urge you to do so because if you don’t then this story probably won’t make any sense to you. Be helpful to writers by Reading and Reviewing!

The very last chapter of this fic has been reworked. Please re-read there's more about the kids in there! Also my author's notes on the final chapter have also been added. Ten part fic related to this going up shortly!!

Categories: Ron/Hermione AND Harry/Ginny Genre: Warnings: None

Word count: 130989 Chapters: 38 Completed: Yes
Published:
11/01/05 Updated: 03/31/09


Reviewer: marauderteddylupin Signed
Date: 04/03/08 Title: Chapter 37: When We Grew Up

i love your writing. did you ever think of writing something about the kids lifes? i would defenitly look for it and read it. i can't think of anything 'plot' wise that you did wrong you have the perfect combo of war,romance,fights, i can totally see Neville with Susan. and the family is just how i pictured it. in other words, really really really large. what i go by is "if you have a plot bunny in your head, work with it till t works, unless you just absolutly hate it or it can't be adjusted to your needs. CHEERS ! ! ! ! !

 
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